My first fanfic - It's all about love

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funky n crazy

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Posted: 19 years ago

#11

wow.....i luv this......pls pls pls continue asap 👏

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Shriya Chadha

@HarshuKiDeewani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: remixx_love
cool ya
is that cute guy raj singh arora ????? 😆 😆

No, the cute guy isn't him, though he is very cute too😉

The cute guy's Raj, Uv's cousin

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vanu

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Posted: 19 years ago

#13

dammmmmm goooooood.....plzzzz continue.... 👏 👏

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Charu

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Posted: 19 years ago

#14

nice one 😆 😆
continue plz plz 😃 😃

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Ankita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#15

hey a good attempt continue fast!!!!

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Shriya Chadha

@HarshuKiDeewani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#16

Part 3

Ashi has taken Raj to the shed.

Raj: Yeh mujhe boys' hostel to nahi lagta.

Ashi: Uh, actually…
Thinking
… actually, main wahan nahi ja sakti, girls ko wahaan jaana allowed nahi hai. Aur waise bhi Uv uthte hi yahaan pe hi aayega.

Raj: Oh, OK.

Ashi: Waise, tum yahaan kyun aaye the?

Raj: Woh mujhe usse kuch zaroori kaam tha.

They start talking & even Raj starts liking Ashi.

Suddenly, Uv comes in the shed.

Uv: Oh, Raj!!! Tum yahaan?
He goes & hugs him.
Hi! How r u?
(To Ashi) Wacko, tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?

Ashi: He bhaggu, aaj kal help karne pe koi thank u bhi nahi kehta

Raj: Uv, Ashi mujhe tumhe dhoondhne mein help kar rahi thi.

Uv: Ye wacko kabhi kisi ki help nahi karti, bas trouble hi create karti hai.

Raj: Oh, Uv! Neways, Ashi, tum aaj shyam ko free ho?

Ashi: I think so.

Raj: So, tum aaj mere saath chalogi?

Ashi: Um, sure.

Raj: Great, I'll pick u up at 7 today.

Ashi: Great. But dhyaan se aana, varna humaara khadoos Vice-Principal ya phir wo stupid Prefect Arjun (guys, Arjun is still there in my fic, just imagine there is a University in Maurya) tumhe pakad lega. Aur waise bhi, un dono to kisi ki bhi khushi dekhi nahi jaati na.
Oh, wow. This is soooo cool.- Ashi thinks

Raj: Anyways, Uv…

That was Part 3, guys. Plz post ur comments.

Precap for part 4: How will Ashi & Raj's first date turn out to be? Will be posting Part 4 asap.