Hum Ho Gaye Aap Ke - Part 1/Pg 1 - 06/26/09

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Sorry in advance – I don't know much about Maharashtra lifestyle so please bear with me and help me out through out my fan fiction "Hum Ho Gaye Aap Ke".



Hum Ho Gaye Aap Ke is story of a young girl Archana… a dutiful daughter, a loving sister, beautiful and idealistic... She epitomizes the ideal 'Indian girl'. Her world is her small family with their middle class lifestyle and idiosyncrasies and their moments of joys, togetherness, turmoil and sorrows.

Archana's marriage is arranged with powerful industry Satish Kapadia (same guy who plays Satish role in the show) but unfortunately her Aai's wish turns out a biggest nightmare for her… and the day of her wedding day she runs away with Manav under her father's pressure…
Will Manav and Archana's relationship be accepted by both families other than Archana's father? Stay tune to read - Hum Ho Gaye Aap Ke…

Main Leads

Manav: A very responsible hardworking Marathi guy who has always lived for his family, he always thought that he would marry to girl that his parents would choose for him but ends up falling in love with a girl. He is the oldest in his family and the one who takes care of everyone's needs, he is very close to his father than anyone else in his life which changes after he gets married to Archana under her father's pressure on the day of her wedding day even though he secret admires her….

Archana: A dutiful daughter, a loving sister, beautiful and idealistic... She epitomizes the ideal 'Indian girl'. Her world is her small family with their middle class lifestyle and idiosyncrasies and their moments of joys, togetherness, turmoil and sorrows. Archana ends up running away on the day of her wedding with a guy name Manav under her father's pressure.

Finally ...comments and criticisms are most welcome...

Love
Mickey P
PS: Part 1 will be posted late...









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Posted: 16 years ago
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please add me to pm if u have one cant wait
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Lovelyyyy Intro..waiting for the first part:)
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Originally posted by: _angel_

beautiful and thank u.



Thanks for the support...

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Originally posted by: jamune

please add me to pm if u have one cant wait



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Originally posted by: GHT_ArMan

Lovelyyyy Intro..waiting for the first part:)



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Part 1

Everyone is gathered at Archana's place for her engagement celebration with Satish Kapadia…
Archana's sisters are happily getting Archana ready… Vindo silently admires his sister who is finally getting married to the guy who matches his mother's desire.
Archana's mother is attending the guests with cheerful smile… Archana's father is also happy with his wife, but also afraid that an educated guy would take advantage of his innocent daughter who isn't highly educated but pure of innocent which he adores the most as a father.
Archana looked happy and nervous as well…
Archana's sisters were teasing her while Aai walks into their room. Aai admires her daughter by placing a black dot behind her ear.
Archana smiles…
Aai: I'm so happy that my Archana is getting married into a good family who are millionaires. My Archana won't have to do any single housework once she is married.
Archana smiles with fear hidden behind her expression…
Aai continues to express her happiness before the groom side of the family arrived. Archana's bhabhi looked unhappy because of Archana her brother's marriage was broken in the middle of the ceremony.
Manjusha gave Archana a dirty look when she passed by her which was caught by Vindo himself but didn't say anything at the moment.
Varsha brought Archana toward the area where Satish was sitting with his family and friends.
"So Juju" Satish looked at Vaishali
"Yes Vaishali" Satish replied while staring at Varsha…
"Can I get you something?" Varsha asked him
"Nothing" Satish replied back with a weird kind of smile…
Aai called Vaishali which leaves Varsha with Archana but suddenly Varsha got an idea and snapped her fingers.
Varsha excused herself…
"Varsha, where are you going?" Archana asked her sister feeling a-little nervous sitting beside Satish alone.
"Tai I'll be right back" Varsha left before Archana could question her anymore…
Varsha gathered her friends and Archana's friends… whispered something into their ears which brought a smile on their face… even they disliked Satish for a reason and decided to teach him and his family a mini lesson… only if Archana agrees to help them out.
Swati rushes toward Archana's side and whispers something into her ear which she couldn't say "no" to her request.
Varsha: main sasuraal nahiin jaaungii
dolii rakh do kahaaron
saal do saal nahiin jaaungii
main sasuraal nahiin...
Aai stares at Varsha…
Varsha winks at Archana…
Archana gave a weird expression…
Swati gave a puppy eyes to Archana…
Archana gets up and walks toward Varsha…
Archana: main sasuraal nahiin jaaungii
dolii rakh do kahaaron
saal do saal nahiin jaaungii
main sasuraal nahiin...
Aai smiles at Archana…
Archana touches Aai's feet before continuing with the next set of lyrics… and whispers sorry into her mother's ear.
Archana: pehla sandesaa sasur jii kaa aayaa
achchhaa bahaanaa yah maine banaayaa
Archana's father-in-law smile…
Archana: buddhe sasur ke sang nahiin jaauungii
main sasuraal nahiin...
Archana's father-in-law's expression changes…
Varsha gave a smile to her juju…
Purnima comes running toward Archana with a letter…
Archana: duujaa sandesaa saasuu jii kaa aayaa
Archana's mother-in-law smiles and touches her daughter and son's forehead…
Archana: budhiyaa ne haay raam kitanaa sataayaa
us budhiyaa ko main ab sataauungii
main sasuraal nahiin...
Also her mother-in-law's expression change…
Satish's sister gave her brother puppy eyes…
Archana: tiijaa sandesaa nandaniyaa aa aayaa
jisane ishaaron mein mujhako nachaayaa
use ghungharuu main ab pahanaauungii
main sasuraal nahiin...
Satish's sister looks at her husband… Varsha gave a smile with her friends along with Archana's friends.
Archana: chauthaa sandesaa nanadoii kaa aayaa
main chal padii thii magar yaad aayaa
itanii jaldii main kaise maan jaauungii
main sasuraal nahiin...

Everyone's wondering what is going on… Varsha looked happy… Aai was ready to kill someone near her which was Vaishali.
Archana's father smiled at her daughter's innocent…
Varsha and Swati join along with Archana while everyone keeps on starring at her. Archana closed her eyes and begin visioning her prince charming…
"Chotu check the car ignition" shouted by a hardworking guy…
Archana smiles at the vision of her prince charming: paanchavaa sandesaa piyaa jii kaa aayaa
"Manav bhai" his eyes are showed… along with his lips.
Manav: Why are you shouting Chotu?
Chotu: I don't know
Archana enjoys dancing with Varsha: koii bahaanaa na phir yaad aayaa
nange paanv main daudii chalii jaauungii (Manav's entire face is showed)

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Please do comment... I know its not the best but I'm giving this a try - if its about Premeer I could write nonstop anyways next part will be posted Sunday...

Love
Mickey P
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww sweet update cant wait for next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aw chow cuteee..loved the first part n can't wait for the nest part:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
i have just read part 1
it's awesum
loved it
tooo goood

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