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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was a very good read šŸ‘šŸ¼
Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimmu

Just a lil meera *glares* cheater
*shakes head* no comment...this time
*edited*
*mutters* Finally šŸ˜†
First of all, I just totally loved this Rinkz. It had all the perfect emotions needed in it, and it was something I don't think many people think about. So I loved it. I think it made me tear up at some time too. *sigh* And second of all, I'm going to slap you if you think "it could've been better" cuz I think it was just perfect.
Aha, thank you. Did ya now? šŸ˜† Aye...u think so? *twirls* Aww u cried? Shoot, were the boys arnd? šŸ˜† Okay okay, chill. dont kill me yet...gosh woman! Patience.
Anyywayy. Getting to my awesome lamba comment. 😃 I loved your descriptions on everyone. Specially nicky, bet he was looking smexy in that. ā˜ŗļø And tehehee... his breath caught up when he saw me. My wedding dress sounds so-so smexy. 😳 I loved how Nicky noticed that I might have taken my heel's off. ā˜ŗļø He should've carried me everywhere, thats prolly why i was complaining. šŸ˜†
Yayyy! Me loves lamba comments *giggles* Arre, they all look smexy all the time...lmao Yep it did. Now dont u faint too. Aw u think so? Hehe He wudve but he had to sing too lmao
When the song kick's on. OMG! It was used everywhere, like perfectly! From the flashbacks to the real thing. The flashbacks of me and daddy on a horsey, and the flashback of me and vikki with the cake. Oh, and i want horsey! You know I've ridden a horsey before, except I was actually very scared when I was riding the horsey. I was all "Mister, make the horsey go slower!" And hahaha... i talked like such a kiddie there. šŸ˜† Oh and I love my daddy. ā˜ŗļø
*roflmao* thts the purpose of a songfic šŸ˜‰ Aww im glad u liked em kid. *roflmao* i can picture that lmao, but..i didnt know šŸ˜† aww so cute kimz. Heh. I know u do, i knw u do. i Tried to show That. 😳
Vikki would've totally gotten like a full on me throwing plates at him if he didn't stop eating the frosting! I never bake things and he was ruining it for me. *crosses arms* But really, my mom always makes the cake, and me and vikki eat the batter... the frosting, if we touch, my mom threatens to kill us. 😳
*roflmao* i know, but no violence in wedding fic...this time šŸ˜‰šŸ˜† aye haye, 'cept for the saad-sasur rite? LMAO I love ur mom. šŸ˜†
Both the flashback scene's were really cute. Especially the cake one, cuz daddy said it was th ebest cake ever and it wasn't even that good. *sigh* Gotta love daddy.
Aww im glad u think do. Yep, daddy loves it even thou it tastes like crap...hehe though it didnt, it jst looked bad. Lmao
OMG! Thats why you were asking for a guys name? Coulda just told me. *mumbles* I would've said Akki instead. 🤣 Now if only my dad really was that sweet and let me go on dates instead of me having to sneak out all the time. šŸ˜† I actually felt worse for daddy here then I did for Stephan. Cuz you put in daddy's emotions of having to wait up all night... restless and all. *sigh* How sweet. 😳 My dad is like totally awesome in this. 😃
I didnt feel like telling u, u were getting all curious abt it. I wud've used that, but ppl wud be getting curious abt me alwys mentioning Akki with u. Then outta nowhere u get these mssgs asking where ur boy's at. šŸ˜† Aw Yah, i did this all in daddy's pov...so yeah hehe. He is awesome. šŸ˜†
The part where I was tearing up in the shot, was the part where I teared up in real. It made me think about it all... will you believe I'm tearing up right imagining it? And I say I won't cry at my wedding. Watch me the only one bawling. šŸ˜³šŸ˜†
Aww...i didnt think u'd tear up...*hugs* I know u said that, i didnt trust ya kid, and i still dnt. U gnna cry, im gnna cry, Akki's gnna cry, Vikz gnna cry, and Hell even Farid's gnna cry, cuz i said so. *proud muh* Lmao.
Young love had me thinking about something else. 🤣 Ahem, right so... I think this was the scene filled with the most emotions. Tehe, daddy was nervous and I was being all hyper about it. You showed the relationship nicely, like how I was trying to make him feel better about all this. But then i went all weak at the last moment. I hate you for making me tear up there too. 🄱
.....u temme wht later on, lmao Thank thee, glad u think so. Aha, ily2 🤣
OH OH OH! KIAN! *yelps* He's at my wedding! I can just totally see all of westlife there taking there pants off and flashing. 🤣
I KNOW!! I had to mention him! ā˜ŗļø Oy, not in this one. ur dad wud totally chase em off the stage then šŸ˜†
Aww... daddy and Nicky meet. I loved the interaction. I think it was awkward for Nicky and my daddy was like still a lil stern about it. But I loved it! It was awesome.
Yep they did. Lmao Duhh it was meant to be awkward. šŸ˜† Thanks, = ]
*hides in blanky refusing to come out*
*coos* keep hiding bachi, im still gnna make ya blush. 🤣
Kiss. ā˜ŗļø
No! I thought it was a cuddle. šŸ˜† Ur expressions are too cute. šŸ˜†

Do I even have to say more to how much I loved that part? And not just that part. The whole thing. It was brillantly amazing. I loved-loved-loved it! I want more. 😊🤣
Nah u dnt. I can picture ur happiness. 🤣 Im glad u do. I already told u wht i thought at u wanting more. šŸ˜†
Luv ya
kimz
Course u do. *smirks*
Ily2 heh
Riki
P.S. Vampie jaanie is going to kill you!
Ahem...i talked to Vampie Jaan. He knows he loves it. 🤣🤣

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