SITUATION - 2 part FF concluded

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i am all 😆😆 that I wrote an FF and that too NOW? all because of Mayu!!!😡

this is my very first and i wrote this all at once without any prior thought or idea ! infact i have no clue what to write for the next update. i wanted it to be one shot but me being me it got dragged!
so, it might suck so read at your own risk as i am not good at writing. but i wanted to give it a go and see where i stand.
the Like button is great. do click it if u like it. but if u could let me know how i fared, that would be great.
thsi FF is based on one situation.
thanks.
part 1

She is scared. She is breathing heavily she felt as if her heart is wildly beating out of her chest. Her voice got stuck somewhere in her dry throat and it is having a hard time to find its way out. She looked around for help but found none! Am I the only one at this hour on this beach? This is too strange. RIDICULOUS! Yes it was ridiculous of me indeed to come out of the house this late at night. All because of that arrogant man! Oh I hate him. I HATE HIM. She wanted to scream out loud but no she felt that option isn't wise. What else can I do what else can I do she kept chanting, ah! The mobile. Mobile, yes! she hurriedly ransacked through her bag. She wanted to wail out loud as she remembered that she slashed it hard on the wall causing it to break it into pieces just before she changed herself into something decent, took her bag and walked out of the house. Tu nahi sudhregi kabhi nahi sudhregi. You should watch your temper level. Her eyes started to fill up as her papa's voice boomed in the frontal lobe of her brain. Daym it! Wish my temporal lobe payed more attention to his words. she thought and a lone warm tear slid down her soft milky cheek. She wiped it off harshly as an act of wanting to be harsh on herself for the height of stupidity. Ever since I met the man..... meri akal ki toh vaat lag gayi she cursed herself and started to moved faster

He too moved faster and came much closer to her. she wanted to turn around and get a glimpse of the moron. Negative she thought.

OK so the faster I move, the faster he moves she thought and she slowed down her pace. But if I move slow when would I get out of this isolated place to safety? Where is my car? I even forgot where I parked it!!!! Which way do I go? How could I forget the way? Her mind was drowning in a sea of questions and was unable to answer them given the situation she was in. Would I live after this? What will happen to my parents? How would they take it? Would it be in the news that Prachi Shah, daughter of the millionaire Inder Shah was killed at the beach. Her body was found .......

"no" she let out a sharp whisper.

she was relieved that she had found her voice. Should I scream? but if I scream that might make him all the more angry. where is the use of it now anyways? I cannot see anybody around. Everyone must be sleeping in the homes away from this chilly night and here I am desperately finding my way away from this stranger who has been following me!!! Left she moved, left he moved. She moved right, he did the same. She had no clue where she was going. she was only moving ahead and it seemed only more isolated which had her trembling with step she took

She saw herself perspiring on a cold night. The chilled breeze wasn't helping her at all as she could feel her body letting out hot fumes. Her body felt strange that she felt like puking. Fixing her dupatta over her chest she continued walking desperately looking around for help. Should I turn around and tell the man that I am Inder Shah's daughter and that I could shower him with money if that is what he is after?

But that would give him a great plan and a reason to kidnap me! May be he already knows that I am Inder's daughter, my picture was in the news paper very recently
. Damn the paparazzi.

She tripped over a stone but quickly composed herself. All she could hear was the sea. Beaches give one a calming effect but look at my plight GOD!!!

God! Yes, why haven't I thought about God until now? feeling ashamed she prayed fervently Hey bhagvan meri raksha kijiye. Please save me Lord. Please show me a way mujhe toh aaje kuch nahi dikh rahi hai. She pleaded with tears.
Its final! The guy is not going to leave me until he gets something from me.
Yes. I could give him my jewellery she decided and she quickly started to check herself but her fingers found nothing. it then hit her that she had removed all her jewellery before getting into bed with her mobile dailing his number and that disturbing fight to happen soon after.

All because of you Milind! I hate u Milind I hate you! she started whimpering.

God please send someone for my aid. please. Itne saare log hai iss duniya mein aur koi bhi mere madad ke nahi hai!!!??? She pitied herself.

Milind where are you? Milind please come to me, where are you Milind? Someone is trying to harm your Prachi, Milind. Please find your way here, please Milind I need you! Don't be mad at me for my stupid fight. I forgive you. So now please come here and save your love. woh... woh...movies mein hota hai na? Heroine ko bachane time pe pounch tha hai hero aur kaya fighting karta hai!! he will beat up the very well muscled mean guy black and blue.

She cried at her own thoughts.

What am I thinking? Am I trying to find humour in this situation????

What else can I do?

Don't panic prachi don't panic. Tumhe kuch nahi hoga.

Yea right!!!July 25th 2008, Prachi Shah gets kidnapped. July 25th 2008, Prachi shah gets raped and by now tears started to flow uncontrolled. July 25th 2008, Prachi Shah gets killed!!!!!. Her heart and mind are fighting are against each other and she started sobbing heavily.

The man stopped. That relived her to some extent. May be he has a soft corner somewhere in heart she thought. I will speak to him after all he has been giving me company for the past 10 minutes. I will ask him what he needs.

"YOU"

what if the answer comes as that? She started panicking again. She tightened her fist around her bag and the other clutching both the ends of her dupatta as if wanting to be cautious just incase he might pull it. She pitied her plight. She had never dreamed that she would be in such a situation. She remembered the recent news that few days ago where a teenage girl was raped. I might go through the same today... I love you Milind. I love you mama papa she said it with such devotion and longing in her heart. She gathered herself and stood stiff. She convinced her mind that she was brave and feigning anger she turned around to face her torturer.

3 seconds for max! In those 3 seconds her mind processed his worn out jumper hooding his unruly long hair, black sunnies covered half of his face and the other half was covered with beard, he was a tall haggard looking man who seemed to have gazillion joules of energy all that could well be used to pounce on her. she felt as if a high voltage current passed down to her heels and the next second she found herself running away from this ruthless stranger.

Her sandals came off as she desperately proceeded to run away from him and the sand was only making it difficult for her to move.

But he was too quick. As expected! He caught her around the waist and swiftly slung her across his shoulder. She wriggled, she punched and kicked but he didn't flinch.

She started screaming.

CHUP his voice shrieked its way through her ears.

Milind- was the first word she thought about. She again tried hard to wriggle out of his grip all the while punching him.
PUT ME DOWN PUT ME DOWN YOU MORON PUT ME DOWN. Her long hair tousled in the air roughly as she kept wriggling punching and kicking him.

I will kill you I swear! I will kill you and she finally managed to kick his sensitive area. He yelped in pain but he composed himself the very next moment.

What did u think Miss, that I wont take my revenge? He said coolly with a wicked smile spread across his face and he put her down.

She looked at him with hurt in her eyes. She didn't know whether she should be relieved that her torturer finally let go of her or whether she should just give him a tight slap across his face.
She chose the latter and gave him one. A resounding one.

I hate you Mishra. I hate you Milind Mishra!
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Edited by _ishaara_ - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the nice update poor prachi she was thinking all the negtive thing can happen to her in lonely night she try to be brave it was milind following her thanks for the update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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good begining.only your prachi can think soooo much in this kind of situation,in the night,in the beach. nice part.continue soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was awesome.
poor prachi thinking all bad things will happen to her.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreenithiks

good begining.only your prachi can think soooo much in this kind of situation,in the night,in the beach. nice part.continue soon.

yes only my Prachi can think so much!!!😆
oh well atleast i made her think only what she thinks might happen to her.
thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosie111

thanks for the nice update poor prachi she was thinking all the negtive thing can happen to her in lonely night she try to be brave it was milind following her thanks for the update

yes it was Milind!😡 bad boy!!!! thanks Rosie. first one to comment so double thanks😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam78

it was awesome.

poor prachi thinking all bad things will happen to her.

thank you Sam. 😊
yes i made Prachi go thru hell. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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so ishara! u too have joined the FF league huh?! hehe

well coming to the update! really great start! poor prachi thinking about all the negetive things that might happening to her! ...lol she sure gave a good kick to him...that too THERE?! ouch that must hurt real bad huh?😆
cant wait to see whats gonna happen next! cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi ishaara😛
seems ff virus affected u too😉
welcome dear🤗🤗🤗

great start, u really made prachi scare to hell,
well written, 👏👏
👏loved a lot,
so its milind, trying to console her?(poor guy made worse by scaring her and got a nice kick and slap too)
cant wait for misi's side reaction
continue soon

keep on going
Edited by mehanandita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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She kicked Papa in that place...ouch I did that to my primary school teacher
he was a PIG
I hated him
anyways I knew it was papa following her...obvious..LOL
Wonderful update!!
You have so much talent...well done!!

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