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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
wow, u too joined the ff team! good job ish, yr very talented, everything was described very well.👏
loved this prachi so much, trying to think of all the things that might happen to her in that lonely beach at night!😆
i knew the person who was following her was milind!😳
i actaully thought her reaction might be like her being relieved when she would have seen that it was milind and might have hugged him😍
but that was so funny, he mustn't have been really hurt!😆
now are they husband and wife and they had a fight?🤔
do update next part soon...loved this part!👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
Welcome to the club Ishaara. So, the FF bug bit you too 😆. Great start. Prachi says I love you one minute and I hate you the other. Poor confused girl and scared out of her wits. Waiting to see what happens next. Pls continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: siya..

so ishara! u too have joined the FF league huh?! hehe

YEs because of Mayu's freaky story! we planned to make it a group FF. i even wrote an update for that but after sending it to mayu i had other thoughts and i gave her another pm not to use my update! i was still in teh FF mood so i ended up writing another one!
well coming to the update! really great start! Thank you poor prachi thinking about all the negetive things that might happening to her! ...lol she sure gave a good kick to him...that too THERE?! ouch that must hurt real bad huh?😆
yes so much that he put her down thenext moment. cant risk anymore to carry her. who knows, she might give him more
cant wait to see whats gonna happen next! cont soon

have written the next part! but could be boring. hence im hesitating to update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehanandita

hi ishaara😛hello Meha!
seems ff virus affected u too😉yes!!! bad timing though
welcome dear🤗🤗🤗
thank you. and thanks for the hugs
great start, u really made prachi scare to hell,
well written, 👏👏thanks. im glad i did ok
👏loved a lot, thanks again!
so its milind, trying to console her?(poor guy made worse by scaring her and got a nice kick and slap too)

(wait and see what he was trying to do!)
cant wait for misi's side reaction
continue soon
keep on going

will do Meha. this is just a 2 part FF
😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: may268

She kicked Papa in that place...ouch I did that to my primary school teacher 🤣 u serious? i dont think you are serious! lol i too hurt someone there! when i was young. but not intentionally. my cousins were fighting on the bed and i got on the bed too and started yelling out "stop fighting, stop fighting u two" and my heel accidentally went thre! oh yes teh fighting stopped after that!

he was a PIG
I hated him
anyways I knew it was papa following her...obvious..LOL really??? too filmy i guess. but i made sure that she didnt recognise him even after getting a glimpse
Wonderful update!! Thank you
You have so much talent...well done!!

Thanks Bacchi😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: azam12neelab

wow, u too joined the ff team! good job ish, yr very talented, everything was described very well.👏 thanks for your sweet comments!

loved this prachi so much, trying to think of all the things that might happen to her in that lonely beach at night!😆i am so glad!
i knew the person who was following her was milind!😳DAMN IT!!! i tried my best for it to be shocking! lol i guess i failed there!! too filmy may be?
i actaully thought her reaction might be like her being relieved when she would have seen that it was milind and might have hugged him😍NO WAY!!! he scared teh hell out of her! poor gal was thinking about her milind but her milind was the reason of her fright!!
but that was so funny, he mustn't have been really hurt!😆yes. see he didnt carry her any longer. he cant risk getting more from her, she might as well give him more!!
now are they husband and wife and they had a fight?🤔
all will be explained in the next update! the last update😆
do update next part soon...loved this part!👍🏼
thanks Neelab!!im happy u loved it!

Edited by _ishaara_ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ambul30

Welcome to the club Ishaara.

thank you Divya. but im not sure how long ill stay in it though! lets see.So, the FF bug bit you too 😆Yes! bad timing dear
Great start. Prachi says I love you one minute and I hate you the other. Poor confused girl and scared out of her wits.
not that she was confused. she was scared to teh core. i must say that i am somewhat like prachi! Waiting to see what happens next. Pls continue soon

oh divya i have already written part 2 yesterday itself. but it might be boring!😆 hence i am hesitating to post it!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Last part
He stood still with his palm over his cheek, looking into the open dark space ahead of him.

that was pretty hard. I am sure my beard had reduced a little bit of friction otherwise it would've been harder he thought.

Wow my first slap ever from my girlfriend he said to himself, girlfriend, yes my girlfriend, where is she? He looked around and as he turned back he saw her walking hurriedly away from him.

Prachi ruk! Ruko na Prachi where are you going?

SHUT THE HELL UP. I just don't want to hear your voice, just leave me alone. You have followed me enough!!! she yelled back.

He went forward and held her hand but she jerked it off harshly. GO AWAY!!! She rudely told him off and continued walking. She found her sandals thrown in two different directions and she moved towards them. As she bent down to pick them up she heard him say

Prachi, you know that I won't leave just because you said it. Look I am sorry sweetheart, though I think you deserved it.

What did I just hear?

he said that you deserved it.

Something snapped in her. She started throwing sand against him with so much effort even grunting in the process. Prachi stop it its going into my eyes?pfft pfft he spat. now? in my mouth.

yeh kya bachpana hai?

Excuse me? YOU acted so immaturely! You scared me to death Milind and you are saying that I deserved it? She retorted quite disgusted at his comment. Milind, we should think about us once again saying so she sternly stood up and tried to walk away but instead her body crashed towards his solid chest.

His hold was strong. Say that again I will..

You will do what Milind? Aur kya karoge tum jis se mein naraaz nahin hongi. You have done it all now leave me she said gritting her teeth. We can talk about this tomorrow IF I have the mood to talk to you

she tried hard to move out of his hold but he held her tight to him his eyes boring deep into her senses. She didn't understand what has been going on in his mind today. Why had he hugged Ayesha, why he was so childish and utterly senseless to me earlier and now why is he looking at me this way???. I know this look. This is his "I want to kiss you" look. And why am I melting in his arms now? she quickly tried to extradicate herself but before that she heard him say "I want to kiss you"

NO she said it quick and loud, she knew that this was going to come. If she had made through this night the first thing she wanted to do is fly into his arms and shower him with kisses but no, forget about kissing all she wants to do now is to get out of his sight. She shook her head in the negative.

I didn't ask for an answer came a coarse answer. He leaned forward and took her lips in his and began to savor the sweetness.

Neither did she move away nor did she kiss him back but he continued. It was only when he tasted salty tears that he moved away to look at them flowing down the pretty face he adores.

He knelt down before not once casting his eyes away from her and softly said

"forgive me Prachi"

No need. I liked the kiss she said bluntly for which he gave her back a sweet smile.

I have to go Milind and the moment she took a step away he caught hold of her hand in his and softly pressed it, his eyes still didn't waver even for a second. he looked at her only at her, with so much love.

She too knelt down on the cold sand before him her eyes still mirroring anger. In a very soft tone he started speaking again. I shouldn't have said that you deserved it. I was only kidding, partially, you must know it. Prachi that was only for 10 or may be 15 minutes and I truly am sorry for what I did to you sweetheart, but you tortured me for about 1 hour ........and before he finished

So what tit for tat?

That wasn't even a tit for a tat. You suck at it Milind! I fought with you for sometime ok for 1 a freggin hour and so you come here in the middle of the night looking so haggard and so....pathetic to scare the hell of me? she shot back at him, her eyes giving him fiery glares.

Prachi, fight with me. No one else has more right than you.

But this is about what you had said to me over the phone.

You, doubted my love for you, you accused me of falling for Ayesha's charms and wanting her. Yes Prachi that is exactly what you had said. Hurt was so obvious in his voice.

Prachi, what not have we been through? First it was Ayesha, then came Neev, then Mallika and Ishaara tried to butt in too but STILL, still, we stood strong in our love and we surpassed all of them.

Prachi's eyes started to well up as he reminded her of their struggle in their beautiful but a challenging love story.

Few days are left for our wedding and you doubt my love for you. you say that I have feelings for Ayesha? How could you say that Prachi? You have let me down. I feel defeated thinking that I was not able to gain your faith in me. Your accusations have stabbed my heart I don't know how many times, why Prachi why did you behave that way? His teary eyes glistened in the moonlight.

She didn't say a word. She could see that he was deeply hurt. She questioned herself how she accused him into doing such a thing. It was a terrible mistake on her part but she didn't utter a word. She still looked at him only now a bit softer.

Milind continued, "you never let me explain this to you but you need to know this honey.Yes. I myself hugged her. I went to meet her to tell her about our marriage. Prachi, she loves me. She has been since her childhood. When you deeply love someone and they reject your feelings, it deeply hurts Prachi. He said in a hushed tone, his palm lying on his heart. Haven't I been through that 2 years ago when you had rejected my love?

and now Prachi was almost on the verge of tears

Together we have dreamt about a future and we are so blest that we are going to make our dreams come true.

Ayesha too dreamt her future with me, but all alone.

Back in our chawl days we were called the inseperable sweethearts and all used to plan and dream about how our wedding should be. And now, I am on my way to wed my true love but my friend is all alone, unhealthily stuck to her past which has no future. So I went to talk to my friend to console her to give her hope about true love's existence. She is slowly coming to accept that Milind Mishra's heart body and soul belongs only to Prachi Shah but she is still very vulnerable Prachi?.

In love she had done some unacceptable things to you, I apologize to you on her behalf but I respect her love and she will always be in my prayers. Itna toh main kar sakta hoon na?"

She flung her arms around him the force pushing him back and she wept asking him to forgive her for her accusations.

main jaanthi hoon aap Ayesha se bohoth pyaar karte hai, aur uss ki dukh aap se dekha nahi jataa hai after all you both have been best friends for more than 2 decades. But Milind, aap ko pata haina, Ayesha ne mujhe bohot tang ki thi, issliye mein bohot naraaz hui jab maine aap ko usey gale laagathe hue dekhi. I think it was more about my anger towards Ayesha than towards you Milind. I donot think I would've reacted this adversely if I had seen you hugging someone else, she said quite ashamed of what she had done. I too will speak to Ayesha. I will fix things with her Milind, I will forgive her. She continued, I am so proud of you Milind I really am and I am so lucky for being the one! she spoke with so much adoration

Do you think we should post pone our wedding for sometime until Ayesha is in good terms with it? she asked with concern so evident

He smile lovingly, hushed her up and gently kissed her eyes. Your fianc has troubled you enough for today now no more crying. Thank you my sweetheart but no, I don't think Ayesha will come to good terms with our wedding anytime soon. I wanted to make her understand that for ever she will hold a special place in my life and that my life is YOU and today I think I succeeded in making her understand that.

The couple very much in love hugged once again thanking God for giving eachother. after rocking her for a while he said Prachi, I don't think we will ever forget this night.

W oh toh hai Milind now tell me, she gathered herself as he wiped away her tears, why did you have to do this milind, you could've punished me some other way. He quickly placed his forefinger on her lips silencing her, chup! kaise baathey kar rahi tu! He took her sandals that she was still holding and helped her put them on while he began explaining to her how he had taken a wild guess and came to that beach looking for her after Inder informed him about her stupid act late at night.

Prachi smacked herself on her head what has gotten into me today Milind. I disappointed you, I didn't care about mama papa, they must be so worried about me mujhe jaldi jaana hai and both of them finally stood up.

Don't worry, I had already let them know that I have spotted you. You know Prachi, Milind sounded quite serious, teri himmat kaisi hui aisey akele itni raat ko aisey beach par aneka? Thank God I had come at right on time before those 2 drunkards came near you! A shiver went down her spine which made her throw herself onto him and hug him tight. Actually I think there were three. I remember seeing another guy in the opposite direction..and it only made Prachi cling to him even more tighter. Milind let out a chuckle and said "actually there were four" and she whacked him on the head still clung to him.

" Ouch! Including me babes"

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They started walking hand in hand and Milind started to narrate his side of the story. I came closer to you to give you a nice lecture about responsibilities and take you back home, but you moved away from me. I thought you were doing nakhras with me so I tried again but you moved even further and only after a while that it dawned onto me that you were mistaking me for a stranger, toh?maine socha, fine, let her think that way, she will very well understand ki raat ko bhooth ki tarah ghoomna tikh nahi hai he said laughing while Prachi just stood looking down embarressed, playing with sand under her feet. After apologizing for the umpteenth time she defended saying that she had never seen him wear such clothes and hence couldn't recognize him. Well sweetheart, this is how your fianc dresses up at night! Don't worry, you will get to know much more of Milind Mishra, very soon baby. Much much more he said huskily, bending down wanting to kiss her lips but Prachi being Prachi shyed away.

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Now the pretty lady was really enjoying the beach. She kept running, jumping now and then showing a child-like exuberance while Milind kept grinning thinking about how contrast her behavior was just a few minutes ago. He had seen a whole new side of her, one that he was never exposed to. Though he felt sorry, somewhere deep in his heart he knew that he had enjoyed his little stunt.
He rushed to her when he heard her scream out his name only to see her pointing her finger at an old man selling roasted peanuts. I swear Milind! she sounded shocked, I didn't see him before. I looked around for help but he wasn't there. Milind laughed at her fuss and convinced her that the man was indeed there and the weak elderly man wouldn't have been of any help anyways. Agreeing with him she went up to the old man who sat on the cold sand shivering and all bundled up. The weak man was asleep but his grip on his basket of peanuts had not become loose. She shook up the man who now woke up startled at the sudden movement. Do palli dijiye. He was only glad to have customers even at that time of the hour. Prachi put a 100 Rupee note in his palm and said "chillar rakhiye ga dada. aaj keliye bas. Ab aap ghar jayiye aur aaraam se sojayiye. Bohoth thand hai na? aapki tabiyat kharab hojayegi" and both waved off the elderly man. After giving Milind his share of peanuts, Prachi began to play one of her most favourite games. thanks to Milind's training, she had mastered it. Quite.

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Oiy Prachi, you are not doing it right. Instead of going into your mouth, they are landing on my head. Ab dekh, aise? aise karna hai and he threw one nut in the air which landed perfectly in his mouth.

They continued playing until they reached Prachi's car, now that she was chilled out to remember where she had parked it. Milind let her win the game and before he left for his own car she caught hold of his hand "Milind, I am sorry " she said quite embaressed. When she realized that he still didn't fathom the reason of her apology she slowly said
" for.. kicking you....THERE!"

It's ok.

That's all he said.

By the look on his face Prachi understood that what she did wasn't OK at all. She stood on her toes and kissed his bearded cheek. Puhleez, is THIS the compensation Prachi? pfft as he mocked, Prachi went around him to the other side, stood on her toes and kissed his other cheek too. As she rubbed her lips for his beard pricked them, he brought down his forehead for her. She pushed back his thick curly locks and once done with that part she came down to chin on insistance.

She knew that he would now pucker his lips for this is not new to her. She went closer to him her lips inches away from his', her warm breath enticing him like always but that night Milind Mishra did not get any luckier.

For all she did was whisper against his lips..

"Better luck next time 'curly hair dude'"

Mayu im sure you wouldnt mind. 😆 i really like it.
Ok so this was a drag. so my apologies😳. if u have reached until the end, thanks for reading. i have a soft corner for Ayesha. may be coz i havent seen her being 🤬 😆. by the time i started watching KYT she was dead!!! anyways thanks to all those who read it. now i shuld really get back to my books.🤗 tata
Edited by _ishaara_ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
GOSH i hope the size of my update with scare the few readers i have.😆
sorry people.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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superb update 👏👏👏
loved a lot😛
michi conversation is really great
u've nice talent in writing
try to start a new one dear

thnks a lot for sharing
expecting more from u hun🤗🤗🤗




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