MAYUR ONE SHOT- THE LAST TIME

Taniya09 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#1
Hi guys,
i'm starting a MAYUR ONESHOT. It's called- THE LAST TIME.]
It starts like this-

Mayank was standing on the shore of the beach. Waves were clashing against the rocks. Mayank had tears in his eyes, pain in his heart mixed with feeling of regret and guilt. His eyes fell upon a stone. He picked it and Nupur's words came to his mind,"Jab bhi tumhe mujhpar gussa aaye, toh yaaha aana, in pattharo {stones} ko utthakar, yuun {demonstrating him how to throw it}, full force main samundar main phenkana. Theekh hain. Aur jab gussa thanda ho jaaye, toh.... aise paani main khelna [splashing water on him]. Ha ha.OK." and threw the stone with full force in the water. He looked up in the sky and shouted in an angry manner, "KYUN? KYUN KIYA TUMNE MERE SAATH AISA? KYUN? KYA MILA TUMKO YEH SAB KUCH KARKE? MUJHSE MERI NUPUR KO KYUN CHCHEENA? KYUN? KYUN? KYUN? KYA TUMSE MERI KHUSHI DEKHI NAHIIN JAATI? TUM BAHUT BURE HO. SUNNA TUMNE. TUM BAHUT BURE HO." 😡 "MAYANK. MAYANK. Calm down!!!" Samrat went towards Mayu and tried to stop him. Mayank turned 2wrds Sammy and they hugged. He said, "Aao. Let's go." When mayank and samrat reachd m's house, m's mom asked sammy, "Samrat beta, mayu ke yeh haalat kissne ki? Mein 2 mahine kya door chali gayii, tum log mere bete ka theekh se dhyaan bhi nahiin rakh paaye?", to which Samrat replies, "Auntie, I think..... mujhe , or rather than, hume, as in ,poore group ko, aapko sach bata dena chahiye. Aap.. kya kal humare adde aayengi?

Hum aapko, saari sachayii wahii bata denge." "Theekh hain. Mein kal free hoon. Toh mein tum sabse kal shyaam ko 6 baje miloongi. Fine?" "Fine auntie. Aap kal 6 baje adde aajeeyega. Aapko sab sach pata lag jaayega. I hope auntie, u know na ki apna adda kahan pe hain?" "Haan haan. Mein jaanti hoon tum logo ka adda kidhar hain." "OK auntie. Mein chalta hoon.

Aggar kissi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho, toh mujhe call kar deegeyaaga." "Theekh Samrat. Thanks a lot.".


That's for now. I hope u all will like it. I'll update the rest 2mmrw.

Do PM me.

Take Care.

TANIYA.

Created

Last reply

Replies

34

Views

3.7k

Users

22

Likes

5

Frequent Posters

shinella thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#2
do update and pm me yaar
and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
let mayur unite somehow
how abt a punarjanam
*~*riddhima*~* thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#3
update soon i want the next part
Vrindz thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#4
also lemme know weneva u update
adi_gupta thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#5
hey update soon or plz pm me
iwantitall thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 16 years ago
#6
hayee yaarrr....
dnt tell me nups is deaddd!!
pplzzz pm me sweettyyyyy...
w8ng for itt!
meluvsrk thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#7
omg!!! don't tell that nupur's dead!!!
please update the next part soon...
and do PM me please!!!
Taniya09 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#8
OK GUYS,
KHULASA OF THIS ONESHIT-
NUPUR IS DEAD!!!!!!😭😭
But... a gud news 2 dat after I finish this oneshot, i'll post
the prequel to this one. THE CONFESSION SCENE!!!!
Do PM me and take care.
TANIYA.




😭
Taniya09 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#9
Hey guys,
Ok. Now here is the next part.
Recap:
Mayank was standing on the shore of the beach. Waves were clashing against the rocks. Mayank had tears in his eyes, pain in his heart mixed with feeling of regret and guilt. Aggar kissi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho, toh mujhe call kar deegeyaaga." "Theekh Samrat. Thanks a lot.".

The next part:

She goes to Mayank's room and finds Mayank is holding a frame of Nupur's photo. He has tears in his eyes. M's mom goes and sits next to Mayank. She gently takes out the photo from Mayank's hands and keeps it on his bed. He looks at his mother with red, swollen eyes full of pain, hugs her tightly and begins to cry.😭😭😭 He can't do anything else except for crying. His mother tells him to lie down for a while. He does what his mother says. He remembers those times which he had spent with Nupur and cries a lot. Slowly, he closes his eyes and goes to sleep. The next day when he wakes up, it is 8 a.m. "Good morning Mayu!" his mother greets him. "Good morning ma." he greets his mother with a tone which has no zest in it. 'Achcha Mayu beta, I have to go somewhere in the evening and will be late. OK. Khaana khaa lena aur aggar kissi bhi cheez ki zarrorat pade, toh just call me. Fine. Bye."

M: "Fine Ma. You take care."

M's Mom: "Yeh tu keh raha hain, Mayu? Teri haalat mujhse bahut buri hain. Aur tu mujhe keh raha hain ki mein apna khayal rakhoon?" After a while, she decides something and says, "Achcha theekh hain. Aaj, tum aur mein movie dekhne chalte hain. Theekh hain?"

M:"Nahiin Ma. Mera mann kar raha hain kahiin jaane ka. If you want 2 go, you go."

M's Mom: "Akele? Chal na mayu. Pl? Meri khatir?"

M {reluctantly}: "OK. Fine. Aggar tum itna zor de rahi ho, toh theekh hain. Kaunsi movie ki tickets book kaaraon?"

M's mom: "Ek new picture lagi hain. Haan. 'KAL KISSNE DEKHA'. Usske liye chalni hain."

M: "Fine. Toh 3 baje ki ticket book karoon?"

M's mom: "Fine. Tab tak mein aa jaaongi."

That's for now. I hope u all will like it. I'll update the rest 2mmrw.

Do PM me.

Take Care.

TANIYA.


heena.damor thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#10
hey gr8 part......plzz do continue.......

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".