||Koi Aur?|| Premeer One Shot - Page 3

Meeraaaaa.. r u ok now????I hope so coz it needs a happy mind to write a happy shot like this.. I loved it a lot..Heer being pregnant, missing Prem and Meher and Ash teasing it was so sweet and the dialogue were Heer says he understood its Prem from his breath was really amazing I loved it a lot....

Chota sa Premie ya Heerie. ☺️

Meeraaaaaaaa that was just squishable. I LOVED it! So sweet, right from the beginning to the end, and wow, they way you incorporated Ash's part, the transitions were fantastic.

Prem. has. his. arms. around. her. waist. 😍 WHY IS THE WORLD SO CRUEL??!!!???!!

The ending was fantastic! =]

--shabz

Thanks everyone! 😃 Will comment back! 😛

Originally posted by: Bul3

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aw..it is such an awesome one-shot..loved it sooooooooooooooo much..beautiful...Amazing,mind-blowing Premeer scene👏👏👏

Thank you so much Bul! 😃😳 Glad you liked it! 😛

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

meera excellent one shot plz continue with premeer scenes.

Thanks a lot hun! 😛 I'll def write more! 😛

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

WOW!!! it was cute,,,, I loved it...

Thanks a lot! 😃😳

Originally posted by: sourpuss

I totally squealed when Prem put his hands around Heer. This one was so sweet! I'm sorry I'm not gonne be of much help today, but I shall try! Teehee, I'm glad you liked that part! 😛 Awww it's okay you commenting is enough for me! 😃

The Ash part was really sad, especially 'cause it was lodged between happy parts (my brain's not functioning well right now, I'm sorry!) and it was just so heartbreaking. I liked how you showed how heartbroken Ash had been, and that was kinda the highlight, together of course with the part where I squealed. Ahhh okie! 😊 I'm sorry it was sad, but I just HAD to show what I feel Ash has been through! 😳 Awww yeah thanks for liking it! 😃

It would've been nice if this had been a little more...bouncy...if you get what I mean (like I said, kinda brain-dead...Heh...), but maybe it's just me. I feel so...sober right now, and it sucks because I like being all high and happy. I do get what you mean Bhav, and thank you for that! 😳 I'll do my best! 😛

Hope that helped! Definitely did! 😃

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: shanu333

Meera, this was he cutest! 😳 Me loves it! 😃

And I loved the way you put Ash's sad part between the happy ones.. Awesome! 👏

Keep writing more! 😃

-Shivani

Thank you soo soo much Shivani! 😃 Glad you liked it! 😛 Aww I'm glad you liked the way I did that! 😛😳

@Zaibun: thanks! 😃

@Sabrina: thanks a lot! 😊

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

You had a breakdown!!!!!! I'll interogate you later!!!!!! Awww thanks Maddy! 😳

For now, salsa!!!!!

OMG, i hope you are feeling better now, whatever it is!!!!! Just don't forget that i'm here for you no matter what!!!!!! *hug* 😊 I definitely am and thanks Maddy that means a lot to me! *hugs back*

Awwww, Heer pregnant!!!! How cute!!!!! That was adorable..................... but i dunno why i didn't feel the usual woah jhatka you give me everytime i read your one-shots................. this one was really nice too....... but that was it........... *peaks from underneath her bed scared* 😭 Aww I'm glad you find it adorable, and aww there wasn't a jhatka, probably cus I wasn't sure what the main concept of this whole thing was going to be...don't be scared Maddy! 😳

I really like how you sowed Ash's side of the story realistically and how it was!!!!!! Not the, "oh i'm so happy for you" mahanta straight away!!!!! *thumbs up* 👏 Thanks a lot for that Maddy! 😳😃

I wonder if Premeer have a kid, what would they name it!?!?!?!?!? 😊 Hmmm I've thought of that too ....😆😆😆

Nice on Meeru, but i hope your next one is even better........... actually i know it will be!!!!! 😉😆 Thanks hun, we'll see! 😛

Love you, *hug* *hugs*

Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

Heyla Meeru...(i noe i should be studying but i'm taking a BREAK!)😆

Mental breakdown??? WHA?! how? why...nooo!!!! u recovered right?..of course u did...ah darn, wish i was there to help..i dunno how i would've done that, but i would have tried!😲 Breaks are good, and yeah I'm okie now....it was just something weird that happened....you would have helped hun1 *hugs*

Anyways, cute one-shot, i liked the way Meher and Ash were teasing Heer and everybody saying thanks to Heer was just like "Finally!" Those thank you's were waaaayyy overdue, prem should have said it too😉 Awww I'm glad you liked it, and yes Prem shud have said it too! 😆

BUT! I can't beleive i'm saying this,*hides* this time, your one-shot didn't do much for me...u noe usually ur one-shots are like WOW, but this one was just cute, thats it. I think something is wrong with me because everybody else is loving it, but i felt that some things were kind of just stated, gosh i dunno. 😭😕 I'm sorry!!! Don't hate me! I love you!!! *hugs!!!* Avi....you don't need to hide, and I won't hate you!! 😆 just because one person loves it doesn't mean you have to love it as well, this one had no real story I think that's why....and I think my Meet ones can be fluffly, and my Premeer ones have to be depressing in order for them to work...😆

I just know that for the next one-shot, you won't let me complain, cause ur THAT good..its gonna totallly blow me away and its gonna be fantastically fablulous! I'll try not to let you complain!😳

I was debating with myself to post a comment or not but i was like NO! i have to tell the truth!

byes...goes to press 'post repply' button with shaky fingers.😒 Exactly, I'm really proud you were honest hun! 😃 Thanks! *hugs*

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
that was so cute. wish everything was this happy in the serial. anyways....it was awesome.....loved all the cute scenes of the family members with heer....keep up the good work. 😊

Thanks a lot hun! 😃 I'm happy you enjoyed the positivity there! 😛

Originally posted by: munam_13

Meeraaaaa.. r u ok now????I hope so coz it needs a happy mind to write a happy shot like this.. I loved it a lot..Heer being pregnant, missing Prem and Meher and Ash teasing it was so sweet and the dialogue were Heer says he understood its Prem from his breath was really amazing I loved it a lot....

Thanks Priyo! 😃😳 Glad you liked it, and yes I'm doing a lot better now...And thanks for liking the premeer part! 😊

Originally posted by: shabo24

Chota sa Premie ya Heerie. ☺️ *cringes* You liked?😳😳

Meeraaaaaaaa that was just squishable. I LOVED it! So sweet, right from the beginning to the end, and wow, they way you incorporated Ash's part, the transitions were fantastic. Awww thanks really? The transitions worked? cus that's usually where I screw up....COMPLETELY!!!😆😆

Prem. has. his. arms. around. her. waist. 😍 WHY IS THE WORLD SO CRUEL??!!!???!! I'm sorry?😆

The ending was fantastic! =] Thank you! 😃😳

--shabz

omg! da premeer scene was soo romantic☺️
it was awesome!!
keep writin👍🏼
i hope da creatives show us somethin like this when heer gets pregnant😍

Originally posted by: cameroon16

omg! da premeer scene was soo romantic☺️
it was awesome!!
keep writin👍🏼
i hope da creatives show us somethin like this when heer gets pregnant😍

Thanks soooo much hun! 😳 I'm really glad you liked it! 😛