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Bulbul

@Bul3

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

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aw..it is such an awesome one-shot..loved it sooooooooooooooo much..beautiful...Amazing,mind-blowing Premeer scene👏👏👏

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

meera excellent one shot plz continue with premeer scenes.

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Nitty

@Nitty2910

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

WOW!!! it was cute,,,, I loved it...

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

I totally squealed when Prem put his hands around Heer. This one was so sweet! I'm sorry I'm not gonne be of much help today, but I shall try!

The Ash part was really sad, especially 'cause it was lodged between happy parts (my brain's not functioning well right now, I'm sorry!) and it was just so heartbreaking. I liked how you showed how heartbroken Ash had been, and that was kinda the highlight, together of course with the part where I squealed.

It would've been nice if this had been a little more...bouncy...if you get what I mean (like I said, kinda brain-dead...Heh...), but maybe it's just me. I feel so...sober right now, and it sucks because I like being all high and happy.

Hope that helped!

Love,

Bhav (:

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

@BittuJi.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Meera, this was he cutest! 😳 Me loves it! 😃

And I loved the way you put Ash's sad part between the happy ones.. Awesome! 👏

Keep writing more! 😃

-Shivani

Edited by shanu333 - 16 years ago

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

very cute great one shot

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

You had a breakdown!!!!!! I'll interogate you later!!!!!!

For now, salsa!!!!!

OMG, i hope you are feeling better now, whatever it is!!!!! Just don't forget that i'm here for you no matter what!!!!!! *hug* 😊

Awwww, Heer pregnant!!!! How cute!!!!! That was adorable..................... but i dunno why i didn't feel the usual woah jhatka you give me everytime i read your one-shots................. this one was really nice too....... but that was it........... *peaks from underneath her bed scared* 😭

I really like how you sowed Ash's side of the story realistically and how it was!!!!!! Not the, "oh i'm so happy for you" mahanta straight away!!!!! *thumbs up* 👏

I wonder if Premeer have a kid, what would they name it!?!?!?!?!? 😊

Nice on Meeru, but i hope your next one is even better........... actually i know it will be!!!!! 😉😆

Love you, *hug*

Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Thanks guys! 😃 I'll comment back asap!

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urworstnitemare

@urworstnitemare

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Heyla Meeru...(i noe i should be studying but i'm taking a BREAK!)😆

Mental breakdown??? WHA?! how? why...nooo!!!! u recovered right?..of course u did...ah darn, wish i was there to help..i dunno how i would've done that, but i would have tried!😲

Anyways, cute one-shot, i liked the way Meher and Ash were teasing Heer and everybody saying thanks to Heer was just like "Finally!" Those thank you's were waaaayyy overdue, prem should have said it too😉

BUT! I can't beleive i'm saying this,*hides* this time, your one-shot didn't do much for me...u noe usually ur one-shots are like WOW, but this one was just cute, thats it. I think something is wrong with me because everybody else is loving it, but i felt that some things were kind of just stated, gosh i dunno. 😭😕 I'm sorry!!! Don't hate me! I love you!!! *hugs!!!*

I just know that for the next one-shot, you won't let me complain, cause ur THAT good..its gonna totallly blow me away and its gonna be fantastically fablulous!

I was debating with myself to post a comment or not but i was like NO! i have to tell the truth!

byes...goes to press 'post repply' button with shaky fingers.😒

Edited by urworstnitemare - 16 years ago

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Afreen

@asyasahil928

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

hey
that was so cute. wish everything was this happy in the serial. anyways....it was awesome.....loved all the cute scenes of the family members with heer....keep up the good work. 😊

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