ff Ek Nari Aur Ek Brahmachari L/P on pg39

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Pooja

@pooja.walia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#301

Hi Kamy,

I just read the story and it was awesome 😊

I loved how JB relationship blossomed... 😳 and wow...u handled Pia so well... it was nice that she did not get to interfere in their relationship...

You are a fantastic writer 👏

Please do write an epilogue for the story... may be with a chunnu of their own 😊

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Kashish

@..kashish..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#302

hey kamy just read this story...and its mindblowing...wow is all i can say..the chemistry between JB n RR...it was just great! hope u write more!

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Yoga4life

@Yoga4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#303

Hey Kamy,

Tumne sach main story khatam kar di 😔. I wish you post the epilogue soon.

Now coming to the story. Though I liked the whole story but the best part was Bani's crush for Jai while she was preparing for her PMT. It brought so many memories of my old times during the last year of school. There used to be so many love stories blossoming around, some turning into life time love and commitment and some leaving sour hearts.

I am happy for Bani that she got Jai as her life partner on whom she had a crush as a teenager, it seldom happens. As for Nishikant, you reap as you sow. I don't even feel pity for him. Somehow, the best character I like in this whole story is Uday Walia. Such a wicked man, setting up a trap for the idiot brahamchari who could not realise his love for Bani rani. All in all, a very beautiful story.

By the way, when are you starting a new one. Jaldi karo, jaldi jaldi jaldi.........

cheers

Shweta

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

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Posted: 16 years ago

#304

hey kamy, great ending yaar. But i'm sad that this FF is over now. It was a very good story and I enjoyed it throughout. I loved the bit about Jai finding out about Bani--it was too sweet how he felt about her back then!😳 I'm glad they are happy together and safely married thanks to no Cobra business. Thank God she listened to her aunt. 😆 i loved how you handled the situation about nishikant. He should live in regret of what he let go from his hands--if there had been a reunion i think it would have been unfair considering what he put Bani's family through. it's best this way and i like the way you dealt with it. i'm going to miss this ff--it was one of my favs. but you can make it up to me by writing another. 😆😉

love,
Dil

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