New FF on RG! pt5/pg3 - Page 2

awsome update!

continue aguain. Cant wait to read more!

-Love esha

Recap: Radhika comes back after the exam and amma insults her and maa, babuji don't talk to her and walk away. Vishaka shows her the reason which is a stack of pics with her and kanhaiya, radz cant believe it and starts crying.

R: vishaka yeh sach nahi hai!

V: radz agar tu kanhaiya se pyar karti thi to bataya kyun nahi?

R: vishaka yeh sach nahi hai! Main kanhaiya se pyar nahi karti!

V: radhika ab sab saaf hai jhoot bolne ki kya zaroorat hai? Maa babuji bohot gusse mein hain, yeh tune acha nahi kiya radhika. [she walks away]

R: [breaks down, she sits on the floor] humne kuch nahi kiya, please humara bharosa karo! Humne kuch nahi kiya! [she cries all night]

In the morning babuji leaves early and doesn't let her enter the temple.

R: [tears in her eyes] babuji, humara yakeen kijiy? [before she can complete her sentence he puts his hand in front of her face]

B: tum aaj se mandir mein kadam nahi rakho gi! Tum apavitra ho! [he walks away]

Radhika cries, devki also doesn't talk to her, doesn't let her cook the food, she also washes the clothes herself. Radhika goes in her room and cries to kanha. Few days pass and radhika tries to stay in the room. She cant bear it if maa and babuji do that to her.

Kanhaiya comes to there house to ask for radhika's hand, at first brij gets very angry but then kanhaiya explains to him that radhika loves him and her happiness only lies with him! Anyway dev hasn't even written a letter to her, he's found someone else he isn't coming back! Devki thinks that was the reason radhika didn't want to get married. They all agree. And fix the wedding in a weeks time. They tell dev's family that dev hasn't written or anything and they think that he doesn't want to continue with this relation, they break the rishta and the purohit family is very angry with them.

Brij and devki speak to radhika about it, radhika tries to deny but no one listens to her.

Br: radhika, tumne hamesha humari khushi ke liye bohot kuch kiya hai, aaj hum tumhari khushi keliye tumhari shaadi kanhaiya se karne ke liye tayar hain!

R: nahi babuji [tears in her eyes] hum kanhaiya se pyar nahi karte!

D: radhika darne ki koi baat nahi!

R: nahi maa, aap samajh nahi rahe, hum?

D: ab kuch mat bol, bas teri nayi zindagi ki tayari kar! Tujhe humari kasam!

R: lekin maa [tears in her eyes]

Brij and devki don't listen and go away. Shes happy that atleast there talking to her now but she cant ruin her life marrying a guy like kanhaiya. What must she do? On the mehendi night everyone is excited, vish, riya and amber dance on a song and all the other girls also dance. Radz cant understand what she must do. They put mehendi on her hand and write kanhaiya's name on it. Soon after that radz goes in her room and washes it out.

Amber and riya who had gone to the city to visit there mamaji come back and meet radz. They all have a moment. They hug and cry.

RI: radz tu apni zindagi barbad nahi kar sakti, tu bhag jaa!

AM: tu pagal to nahi hogayi, radhika apni parivar ki izzat mitti mein kaise mila sakti hai? Amber and riya keep arguing on this and radz just hears both of them and cant decide whos right. She tells them to leave.

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Ganga is all set to go, she looks at herself the 20h time in the mirror.

G: hmmm, I look soo damn beautiful, im sure dev's gonna get bowled over me. [she smiles] she takes the locket dev gave her and puts it in her purse and leaves.

Sonia, ganga and ridzi meet up at the club. They are like [kareena and her friends in K3g, with attitude beauty and arrogance, they walk and talk like them]

The club is almost full everyone is there, Three of them meet everyone and make remarks on there dressing. But the person ganga was waiting for wasn't there yet.

G: dev ab tak kyun nahi aaya?

R: hmmm, why are you sooo bothered about someone? Anything special?

G: he is very special! [The song lattoo lattoo starts playing and dev enters ganga goes over to him]

Nachayenge? Nachayenge?
Latoo?Latoo?Latoo
Main Us Pe Latoo?
Latoo?Latoo?Latoo
Main Aye lala?aye lala?aye la..la

Palak Kyun Phadke Re?
Dil Kyun Dhadke Re?
Thirak Si Jaoon Re?
Kyun Main Sharmaoon Re?[D: you look beautiful, G blushes]
Aaj ye Kaun Aaya?
Khushbuwon Sa Chhaya?
Chaal mein ghungroo hai,
mausam hai?

Oh Oh Oh Oho
Yaar Yaar Yaar
Yaara Mera Yaar Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar Yaar
Yaara Mera Yaar Yaar Yaar

Latoo Latoo Latoo
Main Uspe Latoo?
Latoo?Latoo?Latoo
Main Uspe Latoo

Uske Aane Se Bus Jaaye?[dev starts talking to some people he knows and ganga just looks at him and thinks about him]
Soone soone mann ka ilaka?
Nachayenge?
Woh bus kar de ishaara?.
Aur mein boloon jo hukm ho aaqa?.
Nachayenge? [they start dancing and ganga just looks lost in him while he just dances and looks around]

Mastee mein tee woh hai?.
Jeene mein Jee woh hai?.
Seene mein See woh hai?
Dhak dhak dhak har dhadkan mein
woh?

Pani mein Pa woh hai?
Dhani mein Dha woh hai?
Maani mein maa woh hai?
Saazon mein hai har sargam mein woh?

Luft kya?.
uski ashiqui mein hai?
Usko ghoonth ghoonth?
main pee loon?
ZindagI.chayen chayen Main jee loon?

Latoo Latoo Latoo
Main Uspe Latoo
Latoo latoo latoon Main?
Uspe latoo

Yaar Yaar Yaar
Yaar Yaar Yaar Mera Yaar (2)
Yaar Yaar

Ganga cuts the cake and feeds dev, ridzi and sonia.

D: Okay, ganga I'll leave now!

G: so quickly? Come on dev the party hasn't even started! You haven't even had anything!

D: sorry, but you know I've got work tomorrow morning, and I still have to study the file!

G: okay, but jo gift chupke se kamre mein rakha tha, woh pehna bhi do!

D: did u like it?

G: it was the best! [she hands him the locket and he makes her wear it]

Dev leaves the party, They play games and switch partner dances. The party is rocking and suddenly ganga sees a cockroach and starts screaming she calls a waiter and screams at him and insults him just then the guy managing the food and waiters comes in. its rishi.

R: madam, its just a cockroach aur India mein aapko kahin cockroaches dhikhenge! Isme chilane ki kya baat hai?

G: hey you whoever you are! Mujhe mat sikhao you don't know who I am! Agar main chahoon to tumhe iss naukari se nikaal sakhti hoon!

Ri: aur agar mere bosses mujhe aap jaisi nakchari, selfish, silly, aur batameez ladki keliye nikaal de, to main bhi yeh naukari hi nahi karna chahoonga! Aapko jo karna hai karlijiye, lekin usse pehle d'souza uncle se maafi maango! Itne bari umar ke aadmi se baat karne bhi nahi aata?

G: just shut up you idiot! Tumne mujhe "Ganga walia" ko nakchari, selfish, silly aur batameez kaha?? Tumhe to main nahi chodoongi! Yeh meri party hai, just get out of here!

R: well that would be a pleasure! He calls all his colleagues and tells them to take all the cutlery and food and leave.

G: what the hell? Maine khane keliye paise bhare hain!

R: oh really? Agar main yahan se jaata hoon to mera staff bhi saath chalega! Good luck in cleaning up and enjoy the party without food! BYE!

He leaves and ganga gets really frustrated, he ruined her whole party, she starts drinking and everyone starts leaving!

G: [drunk] My party was a disaster! Main uss idiot ko nahi chodoongi! I'll kill him!

R: relax ganga! Chalo, let me drop you home!
G: no, I want to kill him!

Manager of the club: ma'am woh actually, humare paas itna staff nahi hai ke who yeh mess saaf karein, deal yeh thi ke aapki catering company yeh sab saaf kardegi lekin who to chalegaye!

R: okay, I'll arrange something!

They leave ridzi drops ganga home.

Jai walia sees how drunk she is and gets worried for her, he goes to her room, but shes not in her senses, he thanks ridzi and she leaves. [Jai and family wished her last night at 12am but she didn't even open there gifts as yet]

Walia mansion

Ganga wakes up with a heavy head.

"Oh god, mera sar" she says holding her head and feeling nauseaus. Just then Krishna enters her room dressed in a smart faded jean and a Guess t-shirt. "di, kya hua aapko? Aap theekh to ho na?" asked krishna looking tensed. "haan krish" Ganga answered still holding her head, "I think it's the Hangover!"

"oh" Krishna signs "di aap bhi na, why did you have to drink so much?" she questions her but in return just gets a 'whatever' kinda look. "Anyways aaj raat ko dad ne ghar pe party rakhi hai" she tells her all excited, "from all of us, kal to aapki zidd ki wajah se hum mein se koi bhi aapki party pe nahi aaya, lekin aaj we'll rock the party with our family!" she tells her smiling, ganga smiles back. Just then Vicky enters her room. "haan di, we all wanna celebrate your 21^st birthday with a bang!" he says while sitting on her bed and ganga just smiles at both of them and hugs them. "Kya hua di" Vicky asks getting tensed, Krishna is equally tensed "did they say something wrong?" she thinks. "Mujhe mom ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai, Im missing her soo much" she says starting to cry. "Di, mom is watching us from up there and she wont be happy seeing you like this will she?" Vicky asks her with tears in his eyes aswell, she just nodds her head "haan di" Krishna says starting to cry as well, three of them hug and have a moment. Just then Jai walia comes in the room and sees them "Ganga we want to make this the best birthday of your life" Jai says looking at ganga, "cool, bohot maza ayega! Ab main shower karke aati hoon!" She says looking away from her dad and quickly runs in her bathroom to ignore jai. Jai looks around at ganga's childish room and feels really bad because he misses her too much, he has tears in his eyes thinking of the times when he would play with ganga in this very same room. Vicky and Krishna notice the sadness on there dad's face. "dad, sab theekh ho jayega!" Vicky assured him with a smile. Krishna gets up from the bed and goes to her dad "haan dad, uska gussa bas dikhane keliye hai, andar se woh aapko bohot miss karti hai" Jai smiles at both of them and hugs them.

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I know this one wasn't all that exciting but I hope you liked it!

Nadz

Originally posted by: jeenal20

hey najz

that was agood part

god really hate kanhayia

hope radhika dose something and dose not marry the creepo

and what ganag likes dev,

fir radhika ka kya hoga?

and rshi ka entry ho gaya yipeeeeeeee

cool han ganga ki party kharab ho gayi

me loving it

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

Hey Everyone!

I've decided to remove AR track from this FF as I haven't been able to introduce them properly or anything so I've decided to use the story on a new FF on DMG cast rahul, muskaan and armaan riddhima. I hope it turns out as I've thought will post the link here, if you like DMG please read it!

Thank you for your comments!

This FF will only continue with RG and Radev now, riddhima will be a minor character and ganga's friend.

Nadz

Vrindhavan

Radhika cries.

"kyun kanha? Kyun? Kyun kiya tumne aisa? Mujhe kaisi dhuvida mein daldiya? Tum jaante ho ke main kanhaiya se pyar nahi karti, tum yeh bhi jaante ho ke babuji aur maa ne humare liye kya kuch kiya hai, main unki bezati kaise hone doon? Isse to main dev se hi shaadi karle ti lekin aapne woh bhi nahi hone diya? Aaj tak jo atyachar sehti ayi hoon kya woh kaafi nahi tha? Kis janam ka badla le rahe tum? Ya sachme mere maa baba ne kuch paap kiye the jiska hisab main de rahi hoon? Batao mujhe! Batao!" she trails her questions to kanha.

"Nahi hum apni zindagi barbad nahi hone denge! Hum yeh shaadi nahi karenge" she decides rubbing her tears. "Tum jo chahte ho karlo, Hum yeh nahi hone denge, samjhe tum! Uss kanhaiya ko jeetne nahi denge hum!" she shouts facing the sky saying this she walks away and reaches kanhaiya's house, it's a dirty plot with broken windows, faded colour on the wall and broken bottles of alcohol on the floor. She goes in "Kanhaiya, Kanhaiya" she screams at the top of her voice for attention. After a lengthy 2 minutes wait she sees he's shadow coming down from the terrace "arre Radhe rani, itna zor se kahe chila rahi ho?" he says coming down and standing by her side, "tum janti ho na saadi se pehle dulha dulhan nahi milte?" he says winking at her. Before she can say anything he interrupts her "itni yaad aa rahi thi to Hume dil se pukar ti to hum khud hai chale ate" he told her flirticiously.

"bakwas band karo, samjhe, kabse sunti aa rahi hoon tumhari bakwas!" she demanded, "tang agaye hain hum, ab hum apni khushi chahte hain, Aur tumse to hum shaadi kabhi nahi karenge samjhe tum!" she told him insultingly.

"saadi to karni hi hogi, samjhi tum" he told her angrily, twisting his neck.

"Kyun karein hum tumse shaadi? tumhare unn nakli tasweeron ki wajah se?" she questions him.

He nodds his head with a grin forming on his lips "nakli" he asks grinning. "Yeh tum janti ho, Hum jaante hain lekin aur koi nahi jaanta!" he told her laughing as loudly as he could.

Radhika looks at him and starts smiling, he gets confused. "has kahe rahi ho?" he asks with a confused expression and before he could understand anything he feels a hard slap on his cheek. Brij Mohan and the whole gaon is there.

"batameez, meri beti ke bare jhoot bolta hai, behuda!" he says giving him another slap. All the panchayat members and brij hit him and then leave. They apologize for doubting radhika. Ammaji is angry and doesn't want that abhagan back in the house, she makes all the efforts to make radhika's life miserable, she blames her for all there misfortune, vishaka's marriage broke, her own marriage broke they got humiliated in front of the whole gaon. One night she makes radhika get 100 garhas of water from the well and wash herself to remove the misfortune so she can get purified. A shattered Radhika does what shes told, maa and baba cant do anything as ammaji gives them her kassam. For maa and baba she does it with tears in her eyes and things running on her mind "why did I come in this world? To make everyones life miserable? To only get second grade treatment and torture all my life? What wrong have I done to deserve this kanha? Why don't you do something for your sachi bakht?" suddenly radhika feels the presence of kanha "Radhika, humne tumhare liye sirf dukh nahi chuna hai, tumhari zindagi mein aur bohot si khushiyan aana baaki hain, bas un khushiyon ka raasta tumhe chunna hai" he tells her. "lekin kanha mujhe kaise pata chalega ke meri khushiyan kahan hai" she asks. "jo tumhara dil kahe, wohi karo, kisi ke bare mein mat socho, na maa, na baba, aur nahi vishaka, sirf apne bare mein socho radhika aur dekhna tumhari khushiyan tumhe mil jayengi!" he tells her and disappears when radhika's eyes open and she realizes she was dreaming, after those buckets she pulled it was already midnight and soon as she finished she fell of to sleep on the corner crying. She looks at her hands which have sores from pulling that string, tears fall from her eyes due to the pain. She goes inside and makes an ointment for her self to soothe the pain. After that she cant sleep so she sits and thinks about her life till date, Finally radhika decides she's had enough and now she will think about herself and maybe in this lies the happiness of her family, maybe when her manhoos kadam leaves this house there destiny will change.

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Walia Mansion

I won't go too much into detail with the party.

At Night they have an awesome party, when ganga cuts the cake she feels really bad for hurting jai all the time, somewhere she could see how much he loved her, but the hatred in her heart always overshadowed his love. She argues with jai over her clothes and the way she insults people smaller then her in status.

The next day,

Jai walia speaks on the phone with someone and goes to Ganga.

"Morning ganga" Jai greets her entering her room.

"Dad?" she thinks in her mind "morning dad" she says surprisingly seeing him in her room so early in the morning. "ganga tumhari university se call aaya tha, America se"

"aha" she says looking surprised.

"Well ganga they said that you have failed"

"Okay" hardly bothered.

"ganga, maine tumhe US kyun bheja tha?"

"Oh not again, not another lecture dad!"

"Answer me ganga" he says angrily.

"like daa dad, of course parne ke liye dad"

"To tum fail kaise ho gayi?"

"Big Deal dad! Many people pass, many fail whats the big deal? And Dad, aapke kehne pe maine do saal business management kiya aur usme paas hogayi, phir aapke kehne pe maine hotel management do saal kiya, agar main fail ho gayi to kya ab? It hardly matters!"

"It does Matter, it does matter ganga! I want you to be Independent, and tumhari teachers ne mujhe bataya ke last year tum hardly uni attend karti thi! Isliye maine faisla kiya hai ke tum hotel management ka second year [last year] yahan ki Uni mein khatam karogi"

"No way dad, you must be kidding, im not going through that torture again, waise bhi im not going to be working or something"

"Okay ganga heres the deal, agar tum pass nahi hoti then your pocket money is canceled forever and you have to work yourself"

"dad, you cant be serious" she says frustrated

"you are going to do it! Get that!" he leaves saying this

Ganga gets frustrated and starts throwing things around! "I HATE YOU DAD!!!!!!" she screams on the top of her voice.

Next day

Krishna, Vicky, vidya, sapna, varun and mansha decide to cheer ganga up a little and plan to go for pizza and ice cream to her favourite place. She enjoys the attention and gets ready and they all leave for the pizza hut.

At the pizza hut they enjoy a lot, and ganga gets to know more about her cousins, sister and brother. They tell her about there lifes and vice versa. After pizza they go for ice cream, the waiter comes to take the order;

G: chocolate ice cream with fudge.

Ganga gets up to go to the bathroom and collides with a waiter.

"you stupid idiot, dekh nahi sakhte" she shouts as hot coffee falls on her, its then that she notices the waiter was Rishi. "tum???" she says annoyed and shocked.

"oh no, phir se? aap dekh nahi sakhti thi? Aise koi table se bina dekhe khare hota hai?" he says irritated and sits down to pick up the broken pieces of glass.

She sees this ignorance and attitude and gets annoyed "Tum… tum… I'll kill you!" she says as she sits down and places her hands on his neck.

"aahhh, bachaaao…" he screams

"tumhe to maar daloongi, jaante ho yeh coffee kitni garam thi?? You idiot"

Just then all her siblings get up and stop her, they convince her to leave him and go clean herself. She goes to the bathroom giving rishi a murderous glance. She cleans up and removes her pink blouse and puts on her jacket. "uss waiter ki to main jaan le loongi, how dare he, ek to galati karta hai aur phir mujhe blame karta hai… uff pehle meri birthday bigari aura b mera itna accha din bigar diya… how I hate him" she talks to herself in the mirror.

Rishi on the other had had picked up the broken pieces, he brought another cup of coffee for the customer.

"kya yaar, customer ke saath koi thodi batamizi karta hai" his colleague tells him.

"rohit, woh ladki na, bohot nakchiri hai uski wajah se meri nokri gayi u know, waise bhi ab to next week college shuru ho rahi hai to yahan part time job kar raha hoon, uss ladki ko to sabak sikhana hi parega" he says angrily as he throws the tray on one side and dish cloth on the other.

"just chill yaar… waise tune wahan saaf kiya kya?" rohit asks worried.

"oh shi* I completely forgot" he says as he runs out of the kitchen to go and clean the floor with a mop. But he was too late, ganga was already there, she was talking to her cousins and laughing.

"nahi, don't step on it…" he thinks to him self as she flips from here to there laughing and talking. "oh god please phirse nahi!!!!!!!!!" he prays to himself.

They finish talking and all of them leave as ganga leaves the money in the bill, she turns to leave and…

Rishi reaches there in time and catches her, she was in his arms… she gave him piercing looks and he felt something happen inside him, his stomach made flip flops and the tingly feeling was strange, he couldn't understand what it was. She gave him one murderous look as she freed herself from his hold and turned to leave as her hair touched his face again something happened. What was it? Why didn't he return her murderous glances to her?

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Radhika had made her decision, she had to choose her destiny and it was to leave the shastri family, her destiny was to be an orphan! she sneaks out of the house and goes to amber and riyas house, she peeps in from the window and doesn't see anyone, everyone was asleep it was midnight. She goes to amber and riyas room window and whispers "Amber… Riya… amber… riya… utho"

Amber opens her eyes and sees radhika and is shocked "radhika?? Iss waqt?... "Riya…Riya" she pushes her sister to wake her up, and finally riya also wakes up "KYA hai"

"woh dekh" she says pointing at the window, riya sees radhika and immediately gets up.

"radhika?? Iss waqt?" they both go outside.

"kya hua radhika?" riya asks seeing radhika's tensed figure.

"riya… amber mujhe tum dono se baat karni hai" she tells them and they all go and sit by the riverside as radhika tells them her decision.

"radhika, are you sure, tujhe ye karma hai?" amber asks her.

"sahi faisla liya hai tune radz, apni zindagi jeene ka faisla" amber says happily.

"haan riya tu sahi keh rahi hai, lekin maine yeh faisla apne liye nahi maa aur babuji ke liye liya hai… amber shayad mere kadam sachem manhoos hain, meri wajah se vish ka rista toot gaya, maine kabhi maa babuji ko koi khooshi nahi di hai, main ab unse bohot door jaan chahti hoon" she says as she breaks down at the thought of going far away from her family.

Riya and amber support her and help her out with her decision. The next day riya arranges her ticket for delhi and gives her the contact number and address for her cousin living in delhi, she calls her cousin and informs her about radz arrival so that she can pick her up from the bus stop. They book a ticket for midnight and decide to leave at 12am for the bus stop as it leaves at 1am from the bus stop at the edge of vrindhavan, it was twenty minutes away by bicycle.

Radhika is grateful to them and also very sad about leaving, but she decided to work and help her family out financially.

The whole day radhika makes sure she spends with her family, she does arti in the temple. Vishaka was sitting at home getting bored when radhika comes to her and tells her that riya, amber and she wanted to do a play and Vishaka will be the main lead. Vishaka gets overwhelmed and they do a play on laila majnu, purab plays majnu. They have a great time together while doing the play.

She gets back home and helped devki in the chores, making food, washing dishes.

Radhika loved sewing stuff and making things, so she made a white scarf embroided with radha and Krishna idols and sends it anonymously to ammaji, who gets overwhelmed and loves the scarf more then anything. Further more radhika helps vishaka with her rehearsal that she was going to give day after tomorrow with some director from delhi, that purab had arranged a meeting with.

After the days work and vishaka's over acting sessions that she had to applaud for no reason, radhika decides to make her babuji's favourite halwa. As soon as brij mohan gets home and smells the halwa, he forgets all the tiredness.

"aapke liye halwa banaya hai babuji" she says handing him a glass of water and a bowl of halwa.

"arre who to hum ghuste hi samaj gaye the" he says smiling and taking the halwa from her hand. "bohot zyada accha bana hai radhika beta, maza agayi" he says with his mouth full.

Radhika sits and chats with him and vish for a while and then helps devki for dinner. While ammaji is busy praising herself and the scarf she received, not knowing radhika send it, if she knew radhika made it would she praise it? Would she even keep it? Radhika thought as she saw her smiling all day without cursing radhika.

Radhika and devki serve dinner and after that radhika washes the dishes, sweeps the house and goes in devkis room to press her legs.

"radhika beta, tu meri kitni dihan rakhti hai, tu biha ke chaligayi to main kya karoongi… mujhe teri bohot yaad ayegi" devki tells her as radhika applies some ointment on her feet and presses it.

"maa, hum aapse door hojayenge to aapki bohot yaad ayegi" she says with tears in her eyes, devki also gets emotional and they have a sweet moment. "hum thodi na kabhi tose door honge, humesa tere dil mein rahenge, aur tu hamre dil mein" devki tells her as they hug.

"Humare bina hi?" brij mohan says as he enters and sees them.

"babuji.." radhika says stills tears dropping from her eyes as she runs to give him a tight hug, "she had always been under his shade of love and care, how will she live without them?" she thought.

"arre kya hua bitiya? Tu ro kahe rahi hai?" he asks her worried.

"bas aaplogon se door hone ke khayal se aankhein bhar aayi" she lies.

"arre pagali, itni jaldi thodi na tujhe vida karenge" he says lovingly kissing her forehead.

"chal ab jaa ke soja" he tells her.

"humein neend nahi aa rahi, thodi der aap ke saath baat kar sakte hain?"

"isme poochne ki kya baat hai"

"main bhi aayi" vishaka says.

They start looking at the old family album. They laugh, joke and chat about the photos then later Radhika lays on devki's lap and vish rests her head on brijs shoulder as they chat about radz and vish's childhood.

"maa bachpan ki tarhan humein lori sunao na" radhika says emotionally

"haan maa, please" vish adds on making her way to devki.

Devki makes both of them sleep on her lap and taps there head singing a lori. As she sings her eyes get moist.

"maa, kya hua?" radhika asks worried.

"bas soch rahi thi, ladkiyan itni jaldi kaise bari ho jaati hain? Unhe biha ke itni door behejna parta hai, main tum dono ke bina kaise rahoongi?" she says emotionally.

"maa… aap bhi na, main aapko chor ke kahin nahi jaa rahi, samjhi aap" vishaka explains as radhika gets emotional "maa agar hum aapse door hogaye to kaun humein lori suna ke sulayega? Agar hum kisi pareshani mein honge to kaun humari madad karega? Hum kiske per dabayenge, kiske saath pooja karenge? Maa… hum to bilkul akele par jayenge" she adds getting more emotional.

"betiyan to parayi hoti hain, unhe ek din jaana hi parta hai, aur ek din tum dono bhi chali jaogi, wahan tumhe doosri maa babuji milenge, phir tum unke per dabana theek hai" devki says light heartedly and both of them hug her and have a emotional moment.

Vishaka and radhika are sleeping, its 11pm. Radhika wakes up and starts writing a letter, she puts all her emotions in it, and leaves it on the table under a vase. She gets a small bag and throws in her five salwar suits (that she got after vish had worn them loads of times, she always got second hand stuff but she didn't mind) she puts in her kanha idol and then looks at the family picture on the wall (radhika hugging devki and vishaka resting her head on brij's shoulder) a tear falls from her eye as she remembers the times she spend with devki, brij and vishaka. She removes the picture and puts it in her bag, she closes the zip of the bag with a heavy heart and sneaks out of the house, glancing at her house the last time. She takes her bicycle and meets riya and amber near the mandir. (they could've taken the cycle auto but theres hardly any at this hour and they couldn't let anyone know about this) so they start there twenty minute ride after taking darshan.

Okay guys, I know it was short and boring but I hope you like it! Next update will be much better and more interesting!

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Nadz

Originally posted by: jeenal20

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