New FF on RG! pt5/pg3

Hey everyone, this is my new FF, My first on GR & Radev. I actually wrote this a while back in January but I wanted to add it to my existing FF: KYPH, but then I thought there was quite a lot of characters already, so I decided to make a whole new FF for GR and Radev, later on I'll add AR [DMG] Im not such a good writer but I Hope you like it! Next update is GR!

Vrindhavan

Both the families are same as in the serial.

It starts with the sunrise. Radhika wakes up and does her pooja then leaves the house. She strolls around and chats with everyone then she goes and cleans the temple [as usual] helps nandu with the flowers and Prasad. Then she goes to the ghat with the laundry. There she meets her friends [she has friends in the FF. lolz] Riya [crazy, funny and blunt] and amber [scared, sweet and understanding]

R: ayiye Radz madam!

Ra: kitni bar kaha hai, mera naam radhika hai!

R: whatever, chal tera kaam karlein? Phir mele mein chaltein hain! Theekhe!

A: hmm, kitna bara mela hai, bohot maza ayega!

Ra: okay okay, chalo thodi help karo!

They start washing the clothes and gossiping, laughing, and making fun. They throw water at each other.

R: to radz Hitler kaisi hai? Phirse kuch kaha?

Ra: riya, ammaji agar mujhe bhala bura na kahein to unke halak se nivala nahin utarta tu to janti haina? [In this FF Radz bears a lot but she also answers back at times & shes not so fond of ammaji and everyone else in the gao likes her]

R: patanahi unka problem kiya hai, its really irritating!

Ra: lets not talk about this!

They go to the mela, they buy some things go on rides.

The scene shifts to a guy taking photos of everything, then its revealed its dev America returned. He's here for a week and wants to make the most of it as he loves the Indian stuff. He also enters the mela, while taking pics he spots radz sitting on a merry go round and laughing, he clicks few pics.

Then she vanishes, after a while he sees her at a bangles stall arguing about the price. He just keeps staring at her and smiling. Just then birju calls him and while he's telling him about his dream girl while she vanishes again.

Riya and amber drop radz outside her house and leave

R: good luck!

Ra: thanks!

Radikha goes in and ammaji starts insulting her and taunting her.

Ammaji: karam jali, kahan gayi thi? Itni der kyun lagi? Phirse apni lafangi doston ke saath ghumne chali gayi thin a??

Ra: ammaji, meri doston ko lafangi mat kahiye, aur hume bhi hak hai khush rehne ka, itna kaam karne ke baad agar hum thoda apni dostn ke saath ghum, fir lein to isme ghalat kya hai?

Am: mujhse zaban lada ti hai, karamjali!

Devki: ammaji, who sara kaam to karke gayi thi!

Am: tu chupkar, iss ladki ki wajah se ek din humein bezati sehni hogi! Dekhlena tu!

Just then vish enters and ammaji goes to her and starts asking her what she done. Radz just looks angrily and walks into her room.

That's Radhikas everyday life, she loves her maa, babuji and Vishaka but she cant be so nice and love ammaji after all that insult. She goes to her room and tells kanha about this, why he doesn't change ammaji? Then she tells him what she done all day!

Then they Vish acting like Aishwariya in devdas, and then she switches to dancing on madhuri's song.

Mardala, mardala,

R: vishaka, tu iss sabse thak ti nahi hai kya?

V: Radz Acting hi meri zindagi hai [acting emotional]

R: pagal hai tu! Anyways chal jaldi so ja warna ammaji kahengi:

R & V: Iss Karamjali ki wajah se meri vishaka ki neend aur chen kharab ho gaya. [they both laugh and go to sleep]

Usually radz sleeps on the floor because ammaji doesn't allow her to be with vish, she has a small corner in the room which is called radz room but vish always makes her sleep with her but as soon as dawn hits she gets up before ammaji knows it!

Next day same routine, while she's rushing to the ghat [as she ran late and she has to get back before lunch time for the pooja otherwise babuji will get very angry] after washing the clothes she runs back home, on her way she bumps into dev and all the clothes fall down.

R: aap dekh ke nahin chal sakte??

He keeps staring at her while she shouts at him.

R: aapki wajah se ab mere sare kapde mele ho gaye, goonge hein aap? Baat nahin karsakte? Boliye ab! Kuch bolna nahi hai to zara uthane mei madad kardijiye!

Dev just stares at her and smiles

R: [angry] huh, aap muskura rahe ho? Pehle to mere kapde gira dete ho, phir muskurate ho, ho kaun aap? Pehle kabhi dekha nahi!

D: im im very sorry! Actually mujhe nahin pata tha ke aap jaldi mein dekhe bager bhag rahi ho! Im sorry [he grins as its her fault]

R: haan haan theekhe ab meri madad kijiye! [she says feeling embarassed]

They both bend down to pick up the clothes and there heads bump they both sit and laugh, then he helps her she puts all the clothes back in one big cloth and ties it.

R: thanks! [she starts walking away]

D: excuse me [she turns] Im Dev [he sticks his hand in front]

R: she looks at his hand and just smiles; Bye dev! She says running away.

He smirks at her.

D: Man I think I love her!

Dev goes home and thinks of radhika whole day!

Radhika goes home and gets shouting from babuji and ammaji. She was late for the pooja and the clothes were unwashed so ammaji said she went laufing around instead of attending the pooja on time.

Ra: maa, woh?. Humne kapde dohe the, raaste mein kisi se takra gaye aur sare kapde gir gaye, isliya mele ho gaye!

Devki: main jaanti hoon, chal ab jaldi pooja ke liye aa jaa!

In vishaka's room.

R: vishaka, ab tum kya karne waali ho?

V: radz baby, aaj mera ek bohot bare director se meeting hain, purab mujhe uthane ayega theekh saath baje! To? [rolling her eyes]

R: hmmm, phirse jhoot bolna hoga?

V: thanks radz!

R: maine haan kab bola?

V: I know tum haan hi bologi! Kehdena khake so gayi! Theekhe!

R: okay, par tumhe pata hai na tumhe kya karna hai?

V: Haan baba, tumhari kitaabein leke aaoongi! Theekhe [they hear a motorbike] okay bye! [she hugs her and runs away]

Thanks to ammaji radhika is not allowed to study, so from small radz helps vish in her problems and vish helps her study. When they were small radhika would wash clothes quickly and go to the school and learn hiding behind the tree. Then as they grew she would tell vish to bring the books home for her and read them at night. Then one of the days vish would cover for her and she would give her exams every year! Radhika was very clever at studies and always passed but never let anyone know! So they relaion was give and take but radhika always gave more, she would get hit for her, shouting for her but it was worth it!

Next day is holi. They all go out to play, radz is enjoying with riya and amber. Then everyone starts dancing, vish dances opposite purab and she pulls radz in soon dev joins in and dances with radz. They dance together and he throws colour on her. He's dadi sees this and gets happy as she likes dev's choice.

Later on that day, dadi sees radz at the temple, she goes to talk to her.

D: namaste!

R: namaste, aapne Prasad liya?

D: haan, Beta, waise tum kiski beti ho? Tumhare pitaji kaun he?

R: Iss mandir ke pandit Brijmohan shastriji!

D: acha, aur tumhara naam kya hai?

Just then nandu comes: didi babuji bula rahe hain, jaldi chaliye! [she runs away]

Dev's dadi just smiles and goes away.

[Radhika is allowed in the temple and usually does the arti and gives out Prasad]

She continues giving Prasad and dev also comes and stands there and she gives him, and he grins at her, she just smiles and moves on.

Dadi goes to brijmohan and asks for his daughters hand for dev. They fix the marriage. But same confusion brij thinks it's for vish and dadi doest know he has two daughters so she doesn't clarify! Same as what happens in the serial, vish is upset and not at all ready for the marriage. But she can't refuse her father. Dev goes to the ghat everyday to meet radz and they chat and he flirts with her all the time. She hasn't got any feelings for him more then a friend.

Then he doesn't meet her for a week since the engagement is fixed. After a week on the engagement day:

Dev is eagerly waiting to see radhika and he sees her walking down with Vishaka, even though vishaka is wearing a more decorated outfit, he's eyes are fixed on Radz and doesn't notice whats happening.

Amma: devki maine kaha tha na, iss karam jali ko door rakhna! Dekhna ab kuch bura hoga! Radhe Krishna radhe Krishna!

Radz is shocked to see that vish is getting married to dev but shes happy as she knows hes a good guy. she makes vish sit next to him and dev gets a shock. Dadi also gets shocked and dev bluntly gets up.

Br: kya hua beta? Sab theek to hai na?

D: uncle kuch bhi theek nahin hain, main radhika se pyar karta hoon aur usi se shaadi karna chahta tha!

Everyone gets shocked, radhika is damn shocked.

R: yeh aap kya keh rahe hain?

D: haan radhika, main tumse pyar karta hoon!

Dadi: ji haan brijmohanji, main radhika ka haath mangne aayi thi, lekin tab uska naam nahin janti thi, aur yeh bhi nahin janti thi ki aapki do betiyan hain!

Radz is still shocked, vish is excited, babuji is embarrassed.

Amma: [angry] yeh karam jali mere brij ki beti nahi hai, isse to koi mandir ke sirion pe chod gaya tha mere brij ne sirf isse pala hai!

Dadi: humein maaf kardijiye iss galat femi keliye!

They ask for forgiveness and if they would continue the engagement with radhika.

Brij hesitates abit but then decides that instead of getting insulted they rather get one daughter engaged, then none! But ammaji as always does all she can to insult radhika and radhika runs away to her room crying.

R: Kyun kanha, kyun? Main dev se pyar nahi karti! Main abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti! Lekin sirf babuji ki izzat keliye mujhe yeh karna hoga! Kyun aapne pehle yeh confusion hone se nahi roka? Ab main kya karoon?

Just then someone knocks on the door.

Devki: radhika, darwaza khol

Radz opens the door: Maa, main yeh shaadi nahin karna chahti! Please maa!

Devki: radhika, kya tu chahti hai, itne logon ke samne tere babuji ki bezati hojaye?

R: nahin lekin?

D: to chal jaldi aansoo poch aur chal! Dev bohot acha ladka hain, itna acha rishta phir kabhi nahin ayega!

She goes out, and ammaji keeps swearing inside and goes in the house. Vish is very happy for radz and so is the whole village, brij also gets over it and they exchange rings. Radhika is not happy! And dev notices this.

That's it for now, please tell me if you liked it or not, and if I should continue it or not! Please comment/criticize!

Nadz

The engagement ceremony is over, Devs mother gifts radz there Khandani kara, everyone goes home.

Dev is sitting on the terrace looking at the moon and thinking of radhika, he looks at his ring and smiles, but then he starts thinking of radhikas reaction when he told her that he loves her and when he put the ring in her finger.

D: kya woh iss shaadi se khush nahi hai? Does she love someone else? I have to know!

The scene shifts to radhika whos sitting by the river side and throwing rocks in the water, she looks at her ring and a tear drops on her finger.

R: [she looks at the moon] main kya karoon? Main dev se shaadi nahin karna chahti! Please meri madad karo! Main babuji se kaise kahoon? Main dev se shaadi nahin karsakti!

Just then dev appears, hes shocked hearing this and very upset also. He goes upto her, she gets worried, tears are still rolling down her eyes.

D: [he holds her shoulders and makes her get up] Kyun nahi karsakti tum mujhse shaadi? Kyun? kya baat hai radhika?

R: dev, [she starts crying] humein maaf kardo, hum aapse pyar nahin karte aur naahi iss waqt shaadi karna chahte hain, I've always wanted to get married to someone I love not love him after marriage, I've always dreamt of my dream man and him sweeping me off my feet but that picture is certainly not you dev! Tumse milna, baatein karna acha lagta hai, sirf ek dost ki tarhan, main tumhare bare mein waise soch hi nahin sakti, im sorry! Humein maaf kardo! Hum yeh shaadi nahi karna chahte! [tears rolling down with a scared expression, she looks down]

D: bas itni si baat [with a fake smile]

D: [he puts her chin up so that she looks into his eyes] Radhika agar Main tumse pyar karta hoon, iska matlab yeh nahi hai ke tum bhi mujhse pyar karo! Agar tum iss rishte se khush nahi ho, main kal hi jaa ke yeh rishta tod doonga!

Radhika smiles a little but still hesitant.

D: dekho radhika, darr ne ki koi baat nahi hai, hum aaj bhi dost hain! Theekhe!

She looks up at him and smiles.

R: par dev, tum kaho ge kya?

D: hmm, yeh to maine socha hi nahi! Main nahi chahta ke tumhare babuji ki bezati ho, lekin kuch to karna hoga! Chalo dono behet ke sochte hain!

R: [smiling] okay!

They both sit and think of silly ideas and then cancel them.

D: ek cheez ho sakti hai!

R: kya?? Jaldi batao!

D: chill, do dino mein main Mumbai jaa raha hoon, aur I'll be there for two to three months, so tab tak baat tal sakti hai aur phir sochenge kya karna hai!

R: wow, great! Par phir?

D: phir badme sochlenge! Okay!

R: [she looks at him with admiration] Thank you dev! Tum bohot ache ho!

D: your welcome!

Suddenly the thunder strikes and radz get scared and hugs dev tightly. Dev gets a strange feeling in his stomach when she touches him. He also puts his arms around her to asure her.

D: daro mat, main hoon na!

Radhika comes back to her senses even if shes so scared she moves away and they start walking to her house. And it starts raining

D: arey chalo jaldi he pulls her to the shade but she goes back out and plays in the rain, she goes and pulls dev out aswell. He loves her naughty smile.

D: radz, bimar ho jaogi, chalo!

R: tum jaante ho dev, kitne time baad main itni khush hoon, kitne time baad main barish mein bheegh rahi hoon, woh bhi raat ko, ek handsome ladke ke saath [she winks at him]

D: hmm, kyun?

R: ammaji ke hote hue radhika kabhi khush nahi ho sakti.

D: haan maine dekha engagement mein woh kya kehte hain "vighan dalne ki koshish kar rahi thi"

They both laugh. Then dev starts sneezing.

R: oh god, meri wajah se tumhe to sardi hogayi!

D: don't worry radz 'aaanchoooooooo'

R: chalo jaldi!

D: par kahan?

R: ghar, chupke chupke!

They go to radz house and she sneakily takes him to the room and to her luck vish was not there, she left a letter that she'll be back before dawn. Radz quickly locks the door and gets a towel for dev and gives it to him, she takes one for her self and starts drying her her, he keeps staring at her as she looks so beautiful. She sees that he's staring at her.

R: dev jaldi karo koi uth jayega!

He just smiles at her and suddenly starts sneezing! She runs and starts drying his hair, they have they first eyelock.

R: dev mujhe lagta hai tumhe ab jaana chahiye [her heart is beating very fast but the reason is unknown to her]

D: okay, bye! He jumps out of the window and goes home.

He thinks of her all night, he feels bad because she wants to break the engagement but he just wants her happiness, but he promises himself that he'll make her love him one day! He knows one day he's true love will find its way!

Radhika feels bad about what happened today, she hugged him, and had a eyelock why? She refused him for marriage but she's still making him fall more for her why?; Im sorry dev! Im really sorry! [she takes of the ring and puts it in her purse] we are just not meant to be!

The scene shifts to Mumbai where our new entries are introduced.

Stubborn, naughty, spoilt brat! She's the first daughter of the business tycoon Jai walia and Bani walia, but due to an accident when ganga was six years old her mother Bani died. Ganga and her four year old brother and sister lost there mother [Krishna and Vicky]. Since this accident ganga changed completely, losing her mother affected her internally and she started doing things that people didn't want her to do, jigyasa always told her that all this was jai's plan and he wanted to kill her mother, that's why he threw her in the asylum but she doesn't know they done this because of her masi pia who was being bossy, [later pia went away to America with pushkar]. Ganga grew up believing this and hating jai walia.

She moved to America for studies and to stay away from jai walia, now shes back after four years with her two best [spoilt] friends Riddhima and sonia.

Riddhima Gupta(shilpa anand):

Riddhima is a spoilt brat, equally rich as ganga, her father is a multi millionaire, she's lived all her life in America, her mother is a white and lives in America. Jai walia and anirudh gupta are best friends and business partners, so ganga and ridzi have been meeting since they were children and were spoilt from childhood. Then ganga went to America for further studies and was living with Pia and studying with ridzi for four years. Ridzi is the only child of Anirudh and Bella Gupta. Her father owns few hospitals so she decided to become a doctor, not like she wants to save lives or work just so she has something to do. Her father decided to shift back to India and live with his first wife [ridzi's father married twice and he still meets his first wife and his three children] Ridzi hates her badi maa and step brothers and sister because her mother had to stay alone for 15 years, her father would only come to meet them once in three months and sometimes bring Ridzi to India for holidays. Her mother told her to stay here with her father and complete her internship as she knows that ridzi feels bad for not having a father so she wanted her to spend sometime with him and maybe understand why he left them, she came to India last week and already hates it! [I'll introduce her badi maa and step siblings a little later on]

Tomorrow is ganga's 21^st birthday and she kept a party as usual with all her spoilt school friends and told them to bring along there friends so she can make friends. Ganga is in her room with Ridhima and sonya. She's choosing what to wear from a whole new stock of clothes that just arrived from New York

Sonia (shweta gulati) is just a random character we wont be showing much of her.

Please let me know what you think about it! then will update next part, Next part will introduce rishi and GR meeting!

WOW!NAdz, awseome!! Anther RG FF, and Radhika and Dev.... reallly gud!!! ]

-Love Esha

Next day, a new character is introduced.

Kanhaiya: (puneet he was kanhaiya in vivah and harsh in BMTD) he is very mean, cheap, goonda, and he loves radhika madly. He calls her radhe rani.

K: arre radhe rani, kahan chali [he holds her hand]

R: kanhaiya, humara haath chordo!

K: humne to tumhe bahut yaad kiya, par tum bhool gayi hmm! mangni karli aur humein bataya bhi naahi? Hum kuch din gaon se bahar kya gaye tumne kisi aur ko phasaliya?

R: humne kisiko nahi phasaya, humein chordo!

K: arre jaldi kaa hai radhe rani, humme kya kami thi? Hum bhi times pagalon ki tarhan prem kartein hain, to phir kaahe uss sehri se mangni ki? [he says twisting her arm]

R: aaah, humein dhukh raha hai, chordo!

K: dard ho raha hai? Humein bhi bahut dard hua, jab tumhare riste ki baat suni, bohut dard hua! Kyun kiya aisa humre saath?

R: kanhaiya chorho humein, tum jaante ho humne kabhi aapko haan nahi kahi hai, hum aapko pasand nahi karte!

K: acha, [he leaves her hand] Hum dono ka bandhan kanha ne jora hai, jahan radhe wahan kanha! Yane kanhaiya! Hum jaanat hain ke tum humi se prem karti ho! To keh kyun nahi deti?? [he holds her hand again]

Radhika gets very angry and she slaps him and walks away.

K: kanhaiya ko thapad mara? Bohut mehenga pade ga radhe rani, bahut mehenge [he grins]

The two days pass very slow with her normal routine, but the guilt makes it longer as radhika cant sleep thinking of what she's doing, she sees dev several times but either he's on the terrace of the haveli, sad and lost or walking around vrindhavan and when he sees her he doesn't talk to her, she feels bad its all because of her.

The day had come when dev was leaving for Mumbai, so dev and family come to radz house to greet everyone!

Dev meets everyone then finally they leave the two alone for some time. Dev stands there quiet and lost.

R: dev, tum aisa kyun kar rahe ho? Kya hogaya hai tumhe?

D: radhika, main iss rishte ko tor raha hoon iska matlab yeh nahi ke main tumhe bhool jaoonga! Kehte hain pehla pyar bhulana bohot mushkil hota hai, shayad namumkin! Isliye main tumse milna nahi chahta, tumse baat nahi karna chahta, take main tumhe bhulasaku, mujhe laga tha yeh asaan hoga lekin uss din ke baad? [there is a long silence] Well Aaj hum akhri baar mil rahe hain, I hope you have a good Life Radhika! Bye! [he walks away leaving radz sad and guilty]

Dev goes away to Mumbai and radz life switches back to normal. Two months have passed since she last met dev, Kanhaiya makes a scene everyday and she just tries to get away. A rishta for vish comes and the parents agree, the guy is from delhi.

Kanhaiya is shown with his friends, holding something in his hand.

K: ab to radhe rani ko humara hona hi parega [he evily smiles]

The scene shifts back to Mumbai.

Walia mansion

Ganga finally selects a sexy, hot red dress. She tries it on.

R: wow, it looks awesome ganga!

S: its lovely and sensual [she says in a pouting style]

G: of course, anything looks good on Ganga walia! [over confident]

R: okay guys I'll see you tomorrow after all, I also have to look hot nah [she winks at them], and its quite late also! [in her American accent]

S: hmmm, Right, so drop me home also!

R: sure Girlfriend!

R & S kiss ganga in the air and leave [that's there habit they always kiss in the air. lolz]

Next morning: Walia mansion:

Ridz enters and meets everyone on the breakfast table (Vicky, varun, Krishna, vidya, sapna (anu walia's daughter from Hum ladkiyan) Mansha (rano's daughter from Vivah) Jigyasa, Rano, Rashi, Dadi, and ganga)

R: wow, Aloo ke parathe, main to taras gayi hoon yeh khan eke liye!

She quikly sits on the table and starts eating.

R: mmmmm, lovely, kisne banaye hain?

G: Obviosly masi ne!

R: aww, masi I wanna kiss your hands!

Just then dev enters walia mansion and Ganga runs and hugs him.

Dev and ganga were childhood friends, she would tell him everything and share all her problems with him and he would always give her the best advise, dev's father and aditya are brother's. but his mom chose to live with adi and there cousin Jai walia. Dev came to meet them as soon as he was back from america but since ganga came he didnt come home!

G: Dev, you idiot, mujhe milne kyun nahi aye? [she says hitting his shoulder]

D: im sorry, i was busy, par ab to aaya na? anyways Happy Birthday!

G: Thank you!, you know i missed you sooo much! [she hugs him again and he just smiles]

D: america mein the and we never met, isnt that strange?

G: yeah i know, thanks to you, MBA is a tough job, dont have time to travel sooo much! [she says mimicking him]

D: whatever, but we were chating everyday werent we?

G: yeah odawise you would be dead by now!

D: whatever!

He goes in and greets everyone. ganga introduces him to ridzi.

D: okay, everyone i need to go. kaam hai, will cya soon!

G: what soon, aaj meri Birthday hai and im having a party so you are coming tonight!

D: but ganga...

G: no but what, okay u are coming!

D: okay baba, cya tonyt!

Ganga goes upstairs while ridzi sits and chats with everyone, she loves chatting but in gupta mansion she just cant! She finds a bouquet and a Chain saying best friends, she gets excited dev left it there for her. after half an hour They hear ganga scream! They all run upstairs.

R: kya hua?

G: oh god! Ab main kya karoon??? Ramu, bhola, Birju! Jaldi aao!

They all come.

G: Birju, dekho mere kamre mein cockroach! Yeh kaise hua??? Kitni baar kaha hai, ke mujhe Spiders se nafrat hai, tum mera karma saaf nahi karsakte? How can they be a cockroach in gangas room?

J: ganga, beta relax, birju, bhola please make sure phirse aisa naa ho!

B: lekin memsaab!

J: [she pops her eyes out] jao!

J: ganga tum overact kar rahi ho, ek do Spiders to dhikhenge roz!

G: no way! And you know whats the worst part? Woh Spider mere dress par chal raha tha.

They all start laughing!

G: [irritated] aap sab has rahe ho? You are laughing?? Masi yeh dress abhi yahan se nikalo!

V: ganga tumhe nahin chahiye to main leloon?

G: are you crazy vidz? Tum jaanti ho spiders se kitni bimariyan ho sakti!

V: mujhe nahi suni, she quickly take the dress and runs away.

They all start laughing.

G: [gets very irritated] aap sab yahan se jaao!!!!

They all go away. And ganga starts bragging about what, what can happen with insects, she believes too much into medicines and doctors. Ridzi just holds her head. Now the tension is she has to choose another dress.

R [in her mind] God, phirse! Kyun!

Ganga just cant decide, the theme is black and red. Ridzi takes a plain black dress that has a flare from the west, then she takes a cute, simple bow from a red dress and puts it on it.

G: WOW! It looks gorgeous! Thanks Ridzi!

R: [smiling arrogantly] you are welcome! Ab chalein, its getting late!

G: kahan jaana hai?

R: don't tell me you forgot? We have to go see how its going in the club, don't we? You know these stupid caterers kuch na kuch to ghalat karenge hi!

G: you are right! Chalo!

They go to the club and are impressed with the way things are going.

The scene shifts to dev, dev is shown admiring radz pics that he stuck on his wall and cupboard. He talks to the pics and leaves for work?

The scene shifts back to vrindhavan

Radz is studying business management and communication [correspondence] (she saved all the money she ever got from anyone, Vish would get pocket money from which she had to share for her secrets that's how radz paid for her studies, and exams) the time has finally come when she has to give her examinations in the Neighbouring village's vidyala where one teacher from Mumbai will come to make sure they don't cheat.

V: good luck Radz "hug"

Riya and amber also come to wish her good luck and drop her by the bus stop.

There is twelve more boys and one more girl that are giving there exam. Radz prays her prayers and starts the exam, it goes well she was quite good in studies! She goes back home its already evening and devki, brij and ammaji are waiting for her.

Amm: agayi karam jali khandan ka naak katwake?

Radz confused "what the hell is she talking about now??"

Amm: ab mujhe aise kya dekh rahi hai? Roz roz der kahan hoti hai, sab pata chal gaya hai humein! Kaam ke bahane se gulchare ura ti hai?

R: baat kya hai?

Br: Radhika, humein tumse yeh umeed nahi thi! [he walks away to his room]

R: lekin babuji? Maa kya hua?

Devki just looks at her with tears in her eyes and goes in her room also. Ammaji looks at her disgusted and also walks away.

R: [confused] Vishaka kya hua?

V: radhika, [hesitates] Radhika woh?

R: kya hua vishaka?

V: radhika kanhaiya aaya tha!

R: [worried] kya? Kyun?

V: radhika [she hands her a pile of photos]

Radhika starts going through them and sees the pic where she was with kanhaiya, hugging him, a pic where he's kissing her, a pic where her scarf is on the floor and he's kissing her. [but her face is blur, obviously he forged them] radhika starts crying seeing pics like this.

I hope you liked it! Please let me know what you think about it! Please comment/criticize!

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Nadz

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 part nadz

plz cont soon