FF-'Unforgettable Love'---Chapter 7 added

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Author's note: This is my first trying of writing a fan-fiction so please bear with me and read this piece of fan-fic into that light. Pardon me for my spelling, grammar or concept mistakes. If this fan-fic matches with any person, character, story unintentionally then I am really sorry for that as it's strongly a fictional writing and is meant to entertain readers not to harm anyone's feelings.

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Chapter: 1 (Introduction)



It's a bright sunny morning as sun is shining brilliantly, birds are murmuring and flowers are blooming outside after a long hard rain the other day. The alarm clock started to ring interrupting the deep sleep of the girl. She just do not want to wake up as she knew this day has nothing to offer to her and it will be another plain boring day the way all days are for her. So she tried to avoid the alarm clock by stopping it and going back to her sleep. Then suddenly, someone gave a big hit on her door. Without understanding anything she jumped from the bed and went to open it as the hit was getting harder and harder'

Geet'what is this? It's already 7.30 am'.don't you want to go to school?? Says Geet's mom.


Geet's mom, who is known by LJ, is a very loving, caring mother as Geet is the only child and the apple of her eyes. But when it comes to studies, she listens to no excuse. She wants her daughter to have good grades as the final year of her school is approaching, she wants Geet to be a doctor while Geet wants to establish in singing career.


Mom'what is this let me sleep, please

No Geet, today is your final day before class test, you should attend the class.

Mom...

(Stopping Geet) No I don't want to hear any excuses'I want you downstairs...

Mom

Within 10 mins'.you got me (nearly shouted)


Geet looking helpless had to listen to her mom as she is a very obedient daughter of her parents. She is 18 years old, studying at 10 grades and her favorite subject is music and least favorite is biology. She is very beautiful, sweet and charming; she doesn't have any boyfriend though many of the boys in her school are already fida for her. But she doesn't give a damn to them as she feels its still not the right time for love, affair etc.


She went to the bathroom and brushed her teeth, then took shower and put a nice pink dress. She has to take trouble drying her hair as she has very long, attractive black hairs. Thanks to her dryer for helping her out. As she was doing the hair she rushed to the dinning room where she finds her parents sitting and waiting for her to join in the breakfast.


Good morning Geet, said her dad SB

Yea bad morning (Geet replied quietly)

Did you say anything honey? Said SB

No dad, I said good morning'

SB, Geet's dad is a businessman, he is a very rich man who loves two things in his life, one-Geet'two-money'he just don't like to see any sorrow or sadness in his daughter's face as she is the daddy's little girl.

Ok Geet I will drop you at school, said SB

Thanks dad but I can mange

No sweetie, I will drop you

Geet says bye to her mom as she leaves with her dad for the school.


As she reached her school, she is welcomed by Tania. Tania is her best friend, they are the close friend since class 1 and they share everything, never hides anything from each other.

Hey Geet what's up?

Nothing

Do you know Geet today we will have a new biology teacher

Ahhh...who cares whether we have a new or the old one both will be the same fish of the same pond.

You know what Geet I heard this new biology teacher is a sir

So..??

He is very good, handsome, stylish, hot and...

(Geet stopped Tania and said)'he can be Hrithik roshan or Aamir khan'I just DON'T CARE'you got me, I don't care of him or about biology..

Geet he is also unmarried..

Ohhhh'I can see you have done a whole research on him by the night'huh??? If you're so interested why don't you do the class as I am surely not going to do it?

Geet it's up to you but I am really excited. Are you sure you won't do it??

Yes'

100%??

1000%

He is very handsome (Tania tries to teases her)

Good bye'and geet run away to join the music class.

To be continued

Please feel free to post your feedbacks, concerns, suggestions as it will obviously help me to continue with this story. Please criticism is always appreciated'and I will try to post the next chapter soon.



2009- This fan-fiction is written by Sara and it belongs to her only. Please do not try to copy, redistribute this elsewhere or do not claim this as yours. All rights reserved.









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Chapter: 2 (Accident)


Geet went to her music class instead of attending her biology class and she sat infront, took her violin from a corner and started to play the violin as instructed by her music teacher, Geet is very good at violins and her fellow classmates also praise her for this skill that she has. As her teacher starts the music everyone begins to sing the song, so as Geet.

Meanwhile in the other room, everyone is sitting on their seats as their new biology teacher is about to arrive. It's already half past 9 but there is no sign of their teacher. Tania was thinking herself whether he will arrive or whether their old boring madam will continue. Tania was also missing Geet because she can't share her feelings with anyone else the way she does with Geet.


At the same time the door opens and they found their old biology teacher, principal enters the room. Tania thought maybe he won't arrive today, damn it, I should have joined Geet instead of getting rotten her by this boring old people.

In Geet's music class, all have just finished their songs as they have more half an hour to go till the bell rang but her teacher has another news for them as she will have to call off the class for some emergency.

After her class ends early, she saw she still has more hours before her next literature class. She obviously doesn't want to participate in her ongoing biology class so she decided to spend the time doing something else instead. 🥱

Geet then went to her computer laboratory to pass the time but she found no internet connection, then she went to the field so she can walk and spend the time but the field was full of mud and dirt and she remembered her mom told her not to make her clothes dirty as it is not a good sign! Now geet is missing her buddy Tania and she thought that it's better if she sit in the boring biology class instead of feeling all lonely outside.

Back in the biology class, every stood up as the principal entered the room.

Hello students

Good morning sir

Student, I am delighted to introduce to you, your new biology sir who is a true gem of our country. He has got masters in Biology and Genetics and has got renowned publications on this field, I am sure he will meet the need to fulfill all your education demands and our school will produce good grades in biology in this upcoming SSC exams.

Oh God, he is so boring man (Tania thinking)

So students without further a due let me welcome your new biology sir, Mr. 👏👏

Bang!! Bang!!

Oh no, Geet?? (Tania shouted) 😲😲 😕

As the new sir was entering the room, Geet out of no where run and was about to fall (as her shoes were all wet and slippery) and she hit the new biology sir as her shoe slipped off and she thought that she has fallen down so her eyes were all closed and her face became pale with fear.

But as soon as she hit him, he quickly managed to save her from falling on the floor by grabbing her with his hand.

Everyone, along with principal and students were all silent, surprised and shocked as their mouth was all wide open 😲

TO BE CONTINUED



Please feel free to post your feedbacks, concerns, suggestions as it will obviously help me to continue with this story. Please criticism is always appreciated and I will try to post the next chapter soon.

2009- This fan-fiction is written by Sara and it belongs to her only. Please do not try to copy, redistribute this elsewhere or do not claim this as yours. All rights reserved.


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Chapter: 3 (Surprised)



All the students, principal and old bio madam are shocked, surprised 😕 as they witnesses this unexpected collision between Geet and the new bio sir. The whole atmosphere is pin drop silent as for a moment the air became still. Geet realizing the consequences of what just happened she kept her eyes closed and then tried to stand aside by herself freeing from the sir's hand.


After then she looked on the floor and kept her head down as she can't look at anyone else's face at this moment. Her whole face became pale as she knew a very bad punishment is awaiting for her today. She kept blaming herself of why she decided to come here at the first place. Even when she could think of whether to sit inside or run outside, the principal told her to take a seat. Geet did sense the hidden anger in the voice. Without thinking anything she sat in a seat beside Tania. Her face is still facing downwards as the principal continued'

*Coughing*

Ok students'please say good morning to your new biology sir Mr. Kulwant Singh

Every one claps 👏

Thank you student for the warm welcome, said Kulwant sir.

Tania smirks 😉 and so as the other students.

Tania was murmuring quietly, just as I thought he is very good looking man but Geet looks really upset as her face is still facing downwards.🤢



Kulwant sir continues; I am glad to join this school and under the kind leadership of principal sir and support from all you nice students I hope I will have a very nice experience from this school.

Kulwant handshakes with the principal as the principal leave the room. Then Kulwant went to introduce himself.

Well students you already know my name, I am Kulwant but some of you might find this a bit long so you can feel free to call me Kul sir.


Everyone says: "Hello Kul sir"



He continues; I have done my biology masters from XYZ University and have already taught many schools before. I am really delighted to join your school. My hobby is reading, fishing, cycling, watching movies etc. 😃

As Kulwant is saying this he noticed a girl is sitting at the corner seat facing downwards, he realizes that this is the girl with whom he got stumbled upon as he was entering the room. Realizing she still must have feeling embarrassed and guilty he went on.



So students, enough of me now let me hear from you, please introduce yourself. I hate to forget people's name so I want to know whose name is what and what is your favorite subject, your future goal etc. So boy (the boy sitting at the front row) you start.. 😊

Hello sir, I am Tonmoy

Next student..

Good morning sir, I am Mamta

Next'..sir I am Faiz

Next'.I am Tania

Everyone went on introducing themselves as Kulwant sir walked towards Geet. Now its Geet's turn to introduce herself. But she is still unaware of what's going on around her; she even did not realize that the sir is standing in front of her. 🥱As she was sitting still, sir asked her to introduce herself but no reaction from her. Then sir coughed to grab her attention but nothing happened.


Geet stand up, Tania said silently. Geet'Geet stand up 😲

Sir noticed it then he stopped Tania and went on by himself.



You know, when I was a student like you all, I used to love playing football in the rain, said Kul sir. And every time my dresses used to get all cover with mud and my mom used to scold me for this but I was a very naughty child as you can realize.

One day I was about to fall upon my own sir as my boots were covered with mud and it was all slippery. Then I felt really bad thinking everyone will laugh at me and I thought I will never play on rain but then my teacher told me it is important that you do what you think is the best do not stop yourself because of what others say or think about you. I learned from then that it's important to listen to your heart not to what others are saying.



As sir was saying all this it caught Geet's attention, she realized how truthful and honest he really is saying. For the first time ever in her whole school life she actually felt like listening to him, not because of the words he was saying but also because of how attractive his voice was sounding to her ears. His voice sounded warm, deep, and strong to her. She actually got some confidence back and lifts her head and the moment she laid her eyes on him'she lost her mind again and only thought one thing:



Oh my God, he is so HANDSOME (Geet thought)



TO BE CONTINUED

Please feel free to post your feedbacks, concerns, suggestions as it will obviously help me to continue with this story. Please criticism is always appreciated and I will try to post the next chapter soon.

(c)2009- This fan-fiction is written by Sara and it belongs to her only. Please do not try to copy, redistribute this elsewhere or do not claim this as yours. All rights reserved.


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Chapter: 4 (Shocked)


As Kul sir was telling about his past experiences he suddenly noticed that the girl with whom he got bumped into and who was till now sitting quietly, has finally rose her face up and he noticed she is staring at him with wide open eyes, without closing her eyelids'her eyes are all locked on his face only. He for a second thought (what the hell??😲) then he went to finish his story.


Geet who is all along lost in her own little world thinking about the cuteness, hotness about the man who is standing in front of her. She actually forgot that she is in a class of the subject which she hates the most and the person on whom she is staring at like shameless is her own bio sir. Without giving attention to what he is saying or where she is sitting now she is just thinking about him.



"Oh my Lord, I have never seen such a beautiful man in my entire life, Geet thought, look at his cute eyes, I can get lost on them. His skin color is so bright that it can light my life forever. His smile is so sweet that I can get lost with mine. His'his'his'.," 😍 Geet is all lost in her deep thoughts that she is not even paying attention that the man is approaching towards her way.

Sir noticed that this young girl is again lost in her thoughts so he coughed and tried to catch her attention but nothing happened as Geet is staring at her all along. 😍Tania realizing it tried to wake her up by pushing her left elbow towards her way then suddenly Geet jumped up on her seat. Everyone laughed 😆😆and Geet felt embarrassed. 😳 Finding her sir standing infornt of her, she felt shyer 😳😳and her whole face became red. 😳




Kul seeing how her face color has suddenly changing couldn't stop himself and smirked quietly. 😊Then he said.

So young lady you are yet to introduce yourself to me? May I have the pleasure to know the name of this beautiful student?😊

Geet after hearing it started to shiver and her heart beat became faster and she realized her whole body is getting cold and though she wanted to respond but she realized that she lost her words now. 😕😕(Poor Geet)



Sir repeats his words but no nothing from the girl. Then understanding that he thought it won't be a good idea to force her but she might need some time after what happened today. So he went back to his chair and asked all to open their books.

Geet is still standing like a statue then Tania pulled her down.





Sir said; Since today is our first day so we won't read anything seriously but I want to start off so that you can do some home tasks and we can proceed tomorrow. So first chapter is about "Human Cell" anyone know what it is? Yes tonmoy tell me what you know about cell?

Tonmoy replied

Good boy now Tania you tell me. Tania replied.

Then he went to ask Geet. Ok young lady beside Tania you tell me what you know about Cell.

Geet again lost in her own self replied without hearing the question properly; "Heart beats"

Whole class burst into laughter😆 and realizing how she again did some mistake she was about to cry but sir stopped everyone by saying; "At least I have heard your voice" 😊


Geet again became 😳😳

Then the bell rang'

Ok class, you write about what you know about Human cell and I will check it tomorrow. said sir. Have a nice day.

Good bye sir 👏

Good bye students



And sir leaves so as the students except Tania and Geet.

So how on earth did you land her? Tania teases😉😉

Ermm😕

Oh you were refusing to join me and you even didn't listen to me but now my best buddy is already lost thinking about my hot sir, huh? Huh? Tania laughs😆😆

Shut up Tania, its nothing like that, stop talking rubbish ok😡

Then she ran outside the class. But as soon as she went outside she found that she has a call from the principal's office.

She thought that something is bad waiting for her as a call from principal is never a call for anything good. She remembered that it would obviously be because she bumped on the new bio sir which principal obviously did not like it.😕😲



She went to the principal office.

May I come in sir? 😕😲

Yes come in, principal replied in deep angry voice

Geet is shivering🤢

Principal shouted; 😡do you know what you have done today??

Geet stand still there

You silly girl, do you know what that gentleman must have thought about our school? Principal screamed.😡😡

Geet's eyes filled up with tears then in a shaky voice she replied;

I am sorry sir but my shoes

SHUT UP; principal shouted by interrupting her, I don't like excuses and you'll have to bear punishment for it.😡

Sir but..😕

Shut up; don't talk when I am talking. You will stay after school today and will write "I am sorry sir" for 1000 times😡

Sir please sir I am sorry


You shameless girl, how dare you talk after me, you will write it for 4000 times and you will not leave without finishing it if you do you will be suspended from this school, YOU GOT ME??? Get out from here..😡

Sir please I am sorry😕

GET OUT😡



Geet left the room as her whole face is filled with tears; she broke into tears crying silently.😭

TO BE CONTINUED

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Chapter: 5 (Detention)

Geet left the room as her whole face is filled with tears; she broke into tears crying silently😭 behind a corridor then Tania came and tried to talk to calm her down.

Geet I have listened everything, now this principal is a son of a #####😡😡

Geet cries harder 😭

Geet sweetie please calm down, I am sure we will find a way.😊

Then Tania brings her in the play ground so that Geet can calm down in fresh air. Then Tania gave her some snacks but geet refuses to eat anything then Tania says…

Geet I will call Aunty (Geet's mom) and will tell her to talk to that ###😡

No Tania 😭please don't do that if principal knows about it he will give me harder punishment, you forgot what he did with Sana??

Oh geet there must a way.😊

There is no way, one thing that can be done is sit after class and write these ###

Only thing that I am worried about that I can't tell about this to my parents or else they will be heart broken nor do I have any reason for returning late at home today.😕😕

Geet I am still positive, I am sure I will find a way; please keep faith on me, there must be a way.😲😲



AFTER SCHOOL HOUR OVER

Geet goes back to principal's office where she meet with Laboni, principal's PA, or shall I say his chamcika!!! 😡Then Laboni gives her a bundle of paper and shows her a seat where she is told to sit and start immediately. She without thinking for a second starts as she is destined to return home as quickly as possible because she wants to avoid the questions that her parents will ask for being late.😲😲😲

It is already evening as the outside became dark but poor Geet, she is still not yet close to 500 sentences. She is feeling hungry, tired and exhausted as she is feeling that her energy level is going down but she can't stop writing until she is done with it.😕

Suddenly the light went off and the room emerged in deep darkness. Laboni miss went outside to get some candles. Geet is feeling scared as there is complete silence around her. She felt the absence of the existence of human beings. Then suddenly she heard the door opened, 😲😲she thought its Laboni miss but even in the darkness she figured out that the body is bigger than Laboni's. She felt scared, 😕😲worried and then she realized the figure is approaching towards her. She ran and hides herself behind a cupboard. Then at the same time she realized the person (or ghost?? whatever) has grabbed her hand. She screamed…😵


HELP!!! HELP!!! LET ME GO…LET ME GO!!!



Then the person stopped her

Hey calm down it is me😊

That person ignites a candle and then Geet became surprised and said;

Kulwant sir???😲

Yes, silly girl it is me, there is nothing to get scared😃

Geet felt as if she has got a fresh air, she wanted to hug him and wanted to thank him for coming her but she said;

I am sorry sir, I didn't realized it was you😳😳😳

No problem, why are you alone here?

Then Laboni miss entered the room with a candle.

Why are you shouting Geet? Said Laboni

Before geet could respond Kulwant stopped her and said to Laboni;

She is coming with me and there is no need to continue any writings here

But sir, you can't just take her like this, principal has given me order😕

I don't care, and if principal sir asks anything then tell him that what he did was completely wrong and this innocent girl shouldn't have been treated like this way. She hasn't done any sin for which she will have to face this insane punishment😡😡😡

Geet come with me then Kul grabbed her hand and left the room while Laboni watched it with her mouth open.😲




In the corridor

Sir please why are you doing this, principal sir will get really angry on me.😕

You don't need to worry because he will have to go through me if he tries to give you another nonsense punishment. I mean what have you done? Its insane!! I have never heard anyone to give such horrible punishment to a young girl like you for those lame reasons.😡

But sir you are risking your own job😕😲😲

I don't care; I am doing this what I feel right. Principal can meet me on court if he tries to fire my job.


Anyway its already late, do you think you can go home alone?😲

Yes sir, my house is nearby, I can manage. Thank you sir for everything that you've done for me.😳😊

I did what I felt was right. No need to thank me. Ok I will leave now; you take care and go home safely.😊

Thank you sir.😊



Outside the school

Geet is standing beside the road trying to find some taxi but she failed to get one and it looks like the weather is getting cold and rain can fall anytime soon.😲😕😲

Suddenly a car stopped in front of her and someone from inside said;

Come in, I will drop you.



As the rain started to fall, Geet felt relieved and ran quickly to enter inside the car without thinking whether it will be safe for her to ride in a stranger's car. After she went inside she looked the other side and she was stunned to find the person in the driver's seat.😲




TO BE CONTINUED

Please feel free to post your feedbacks, concerns, suggestions as it will obviously help me to continue with this story. Please criticism is always appreciated and I will try to post the next chapter soon.

(c) 2009- This fan-fiction is written by Sara and it belongs to her only. Please do not try to copy, redistribute this elsewhere or do not claim this as yours. All rights reserved.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏👏omg, stephh, gr8 job, i luv this chapter and
that thing kulwant did 4 geet
😉gettin her out of detention, i can 😉
😊picture that if it was an actual episode in mmdr😊
we really need u to join the mmdr creative team of
writers...i would cheer u on.. and visit u on the sets
😳😳so i can sneek a peek at kulwant 😳😳
Edited by geetaurkulwant - 16 years ago
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thanks Pooja for liking the chapter. Yes Kul for the rescue...haha

I would love to join the mmdr creative but before I need to fly to India and prove myself infront of them. I will let u sneak peek if I can get the job! I will do the same; 24hours glued with Kulwant...haha



ps all new chapters will be posted in this thread only instead of separate threads
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u gotta invite me over on the sets and call an ambulance on advance so if i faint they r on time and don't take 2 long, but, i wouldn't mind either maybe kulwant would give me cpr, the mouth 2 mouth, ok u take ur time and good a gr8 job on the next chapters i just can't wait for chapter 6... lol

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OMG Pooja sweetie, you are nuts...LOL mouth to mouth??? haha I gotcha....I however don't know whether I will be in a state to call u or not bcoz I might get faint myself before I can invite you...LOL
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well, yea u have a point i would faint then u would 2 lol
the mouth 2 mouth would be a dream
but hey atleast i can meet u and him if i
survive... the tragedy...

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