Mismatch/ Identity - THE END! (pg 93)

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sweetaddiction

@sweetaddiction

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#661

Hey !!
i came across ur story and started reading it-- finished MISMATCH-- i really liked it-- i liked the fact that it was short but yet had a good flowing story and also it wasnt too wound up-- also sumtimes its nice just to have a short story so u dont end up getting bored waiting for sumthing to happen and then giving up !!_- gr8 stuff !!_- 👏
hope u'll write more of these stories-- and also like this hope its a short one-- every1 else writes really long one so this is a niceee change !!
excited to read IDENTITY !!
😃

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sweetaddiction

@sweetaddiction

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#662

Hey (again)
just finished reading IDENTITY --
i liked it-- not as much as MISMATCH tho-- but it was nice--
hope to see more FFs from u :D
oh and dont take this the wrong way-- i mean it in a nice friendly way-- but goin back and forth and then skipping parts here and there-- makes things a bit confusing-- i mean its ok once in a while coz it makes it more interesting but sumtimes it can get frustrating -- plus, one of the things i liked bout MISMATCH was that the way it flowed not too fast, but yet not too slow and it was straightforward and simple yet not boring-- IDENTITY i felt got a bit too complicating--
anyway-- thats just how i felt-- altho i still loved BOTH stories !!-- keep up the gr8 work !!! :D

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kriti mehera

@Love''sAngel

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#663

cute ending...
just loved it...
will b waitng 4 ur next fick...

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storm

@lovestorm

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#664

awww 😳
i loved your ff sooo much. Everything about it was so cute. mahen aaliya and lizy are so naughty 😆 Arin such a cute boy n i loovve how he talks 😆 so cute 👏