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Part Fifteen B

"Love is pretty…"

It was a late summer night when she walked along the shoreline. The stars glittering like diamonds above her, a cool gentle breeze played in the air, yet every now then she caught flashes of lightening light up the sky. It would rain tonight; she mused and wondered whether it would be a heavy downpour or just a light one. But she certainly hoped it would rain. The sight of the rolling snake like hills, as the rain fell against it was simply spectacular. Yes, even at night. And she loved that. She loved the monsoon season, since it made her appreciate the true beauty of nature.

With her arms wrapped together in a simple shawl, she sighed wearily, as she gazed out at the shoreline. For a couple of seconds, she debated briefly whether to place her feet in the cool water, it would feel wonderful with the water tickling her legs, but then her pants would be a little wet. Does it really matter? She asked her self. And without any further thought she impulsively placed her feet in the water.

"Kripa?"

Her face lit up with a smile. Angad.

She spun around facing him; standing up on her toes she kissed him lightly. He surprised her when he pulled her closer, deepening the kiss and she could only sigh resting her head by his heart as she listened to his heart beat.

"We need to talk."

He said a few moments later, as they walked along the shoreline arm in arm with her sandals dangling from one hand, while his arm casually looped around her waist.

She pulled back looking at his face. "Do we have to?" She was grinning, as she bit her lower lip in apprehension hoping he would refuse.

"Yes." He gave her an assuring smile, "But it won't be so bad, Kripa."

She looked away and continued walking, "I sure do hope so."

"It's about time we spoke about a few things. About your dad…about…"

She turned around to face him, "It doesn't matter anymore, Angad."

"We need to sort out things, Kripa." He paused stilling for time, but his tone tense especially when he caught traces of fear flickering in her eyes, "I don't want any misunderstandings in the future. Do you understand?"

She nodded asking him to continue.

He held his breath, "Did you know that Mahen & lizy were involved in bringing us together?"

She was frowning, "Did they now?"

"Yes." He said finally releasing his breath half surprised that she wasn't angry, "I just learnt about it this morning."

"Their behavior was quite odd, actually, but I never would have imagined…" she trailed off, "So, Arin was never kidnapped?"

"No. It was all their plan to bring us together."

She sank on her feet in the sand, her face paling, "You cannot be serious…." She looked away.

He rubbed her frozen palms. "I haven't spoken to them, Kripa, ever since I found out. I could not believe it myself. They shouldn't have played with your feelings like that."

She shook her head her color returning, "What they did was wrong. And they shouldn't have taken Arin like that." She told him, "But, I suppose they had best intentions at heart. I'm not going to hold this against them, Angad."

He was surprised with her words and so was she. He could tell.

"Are you certain? How could you forget everything they put you through?"

"It's over, Angad. It's all over." She told him calmly, "And everyone makes mistakes, Angad, we can't just hold this against them for life and never talk to them. They matter more to us, than their mistake, Angad. Besides if it weren't for them - I really don't believe we would together today."

He smiled then, "Yes. I suppose you are right. They were compelled to take matters in their own hands, since I was an idiot!" he mumbled tartly, as he held his breath, "You were always, in front of me, yet it took me ages to figure the feelings I had for you."

"Hey!" she said chuckling, as she slapped his arm, "Stop calling the handsome man I love an idiot! But, yes you were being an ass." She looped her arms around his neck grinning, "That I cannot deny." resting her forehead against his, "It took you three long years" The memories of everything in the past flashed back in her mind. Bitter Sweet.

"And I admire your patience, Sharma." He told her seriously, "There is another matter I've to inform you about. I spoke to Lucas this afternoon and I'm joining back."

"You are?" She asked in surprise. But, then it was his profession and she always knew he would get back to it. He was good at it too. The best. He was the best cop in town.

"There is something I would like to mention as well." She said looking away, "I spoke to daddy this afternoon."

Angad stood still for a second she noticed, "You did?"

"Yes." She trembled, "It will take some time for us to get close, but I think we will get there, Angad." She sounded nervous.

He brought her close and kissed her temple, "I'm proud of you, Kripa" he said meeting her eyes, "I'm glad you spoke to your dad."

"Thanks. I'm glad I did too." She leaned back smiling, "So, officer, how did you figure things out anyway?"

"That I was madly in love you?"

Her heart did a triple flip flop at those words and she simply couldn't say anything except nod.

"Lizy" he replied, pulling her closer, "Stay" he said when she began to move and locked her again firmly in the circle of his arms, "Aaliyah, Mahen, Lizy ganged up on the night Aditya came"

She could imagine that, especially Aaliyah and Mahen. They were always on her side, especially Ali. She'd noticed Ali hardly ever interacted with her older brother and she felt partly responsible for that. It was mainly due to her, they both hardly ever spoke, otherwise prior to that night in Vegas, brother and sister had always gotten along so well. She made a mental note to get them back together, "That must have been awful. I am sorry that happened."

"Well, I am not"

"You aren't? Didn't they give you hard time?"

"Yes, they did, but I'm not sorry for that." He smiled at her, "Like you said earlier they brought us together and that's what matters the most more than anything."


"So, what happened then?"

"I felt like one of those organisms studied under a microscope. Not to mention the knowing smiles on each of their faces, as if they had just noticed something, which I hadn't. Never in my life had I been tortured with such silent treatment and when I brought you up, Mahen sighed resting a hand on his heart."

She chuckled lightly looking amused, "What did you do then?"

"I threw a pillow at him and stormed out of the room thinking it was the most ridiculous thing I'd ever heard, but then I saw you on the other side of the room. There you were standing in a sweatshirt and jeans feeding Arin. You turned around and smiled at me. That's when I knew it."

She couldn't help, but chuckle louder this time, "Are you serious?" she asked, unable to believe his words, "I'd tomato soup smudged all over my face. I was looking awful, plus on top grinning at you like an idiot and you are telling me now that's when you knew it?"

"Don't be silly, Kripa. You looked like a million bucks." He grinned a second later, "Correction, you always look like a million bucks."

"Flattery. Flattery. Flattery." She said rolling her eyes pulling his neck, "Tomorrow you just might announce to the whole world you have the most beautiful woman."

"Except for the nose."

She playfully teased him, "Hey! You don't have a great nose either, mister" with a toothy grin.

"But, at least mine is better than yours!"

"Is not!"

"Is!"

"Not!"

They both burst out laughing.

"I do owe you an apology, Angad." She finally told him, "I'm sorry for not believing you earlier, but I just find that so hard to believe. Of all the times you could figure it out, you chose the one where I'd tomato sauce all over my place?"

She sounded amused. He realized, as he pulled her closer and kissed her lightly, "Stop acting like a typical beauty conscious female"

"Excuse me?"

"Yes." He said, as he mimicked, "oohhh I want to look pretty when realizes he is in love with me"

"Of course not!" She mumbled smacking his arm lightly, "I never meant it like that!" She looked at him with a smile, "But, you know you seriously could have chosen a better time."

"Sure. Sure" He said chuckling, as he pulled her down in his arms to steal another kiss.

The End.

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Thank you so much for your patience! 🤗
The leap track was stolen from the original show (KYPH). I loved the whole fire sequence when Angad learns that Pratik is his son! Writing that out would ruin the beauty of the scene, hence I made a few changes. Hope you guyz enjoyed the last part! Please do leave any questions, concerns, any feedback would be amazing
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Edited by Sonali06 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww its finished!
its a perfect ending! too cute and too sweet!!
loved their jodi and i think i will always doo!!! 😃
great job!!! 👏 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great ending to a great story.
It was very cute how they were teasing each other.
Hopefully you wrote another ff you write really well.
Take care 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
loved the ending...gonna miss this ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww u ended it i fimd it so simple and short sorry none the less loved it amazing job unique concept

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