Nigahen milano ko jee chahta hai

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chota sa najrana pesh e khidmat hai mere yaaron ki

R & K ki abhi wali nigahen ki kahani meri jubani

Harwaqt ek dusre ko dekhne se unko na hai fursat

Jal gayi sachhe pyaar ki aag me purani nafrat

Sare yaadein abhi lagti hai mithi na hai kuch karwa

Duniya jahan rasme logo ki unko keya hai parwah

Keya ho agar baat hontho se hoti nehi beyaan

Par samajhne wale samajh gaye nigahen ki jubaan

Ankho se likh diya aur ankho se hi par liya

Ek dil ki sari baten dusri dil ne jaise sun liya

Chahe lagale rokh yeah mohabbat ke dushman

Milke rahenge yun pyaar karne wale do man

Bichar bhi gaye dono to kahenge inke jiya

Maine tumse dil o jan se mohabbat hai kiya

Ladke karenge har muskilo ko yeah par

Kyunki unki mohabbat kabhi nehi sakti har

Likhna tha aur line e char

Par… abhi ke liye bas itna hi yaar

Hope u all read & Njoy 😊…………………..

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ranjnanarang thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very nice verse bonai. Tough I took a little time decifering it since it is hindi written in english but worht the effort keep it up.
chimuli thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice i liked keep it up
sami01 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very sweet indeed soumita loved it 😳loved it a lot
Edited by sami01 - 16 years ago
sasha722 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very sweet keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bona this is excellent stuff😳...u can really try out sher-o-shayari as your profession😛...I hv seen your earlier works also and trust me its always a treat to read your nazranas👏😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ranjana – Thanks for the time & effort u put to read my so called poetry. Thanks for the appreciation.

Tetuty – Thanks dear.

Sami – Glad u liked it. If u feel like add some pics later to glorify the post with ur magical photogenic touch.

Sasha – Thank u very much.

Jyoti – Thaaaaaaaaaaanks a lot, flattered 😳😳……till now this is the greatest compliment I have ever had in my short temporary poet carrier.

Thanks to everyone.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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bonai ....it was very nice ........very beautifully and sensibly written as alwayz!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Excellent work Bonai ...........👍🏼
Very apt for Raj & Kranti .........
Keep it up ........... 👏

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