Once Upon A Christmastime - AY one shot - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Anu,

Awesome fic👏👏👏loved how u described Yuvi waiting for Ashi wid that ring😳it somehow reminded me of Ashi's budday morning when he gifts her a ring👏👏👏
hope u don't mind me saying this, but i wasn't quite comfortable wid rose thing, i mean frm my limited knowledge of AY i can safely say that i never saw him gifting flowers to Ashi😆
its lovely esp the last scene👏👏👏loved how u desribed it👏
Natalie.
P.S:-can u tell me who made ur Shweta sigg?😳actually someone very special made a sigg for me on my budday and ur sigg is exactly same to that one, so i was just curious.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: xXMissSmariXx

WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW

Diiii i feel lyk i have just been in a wonderfull dreammm.... tht one shot was choo chweet😳😳 Feels lyk its been forever tht i read an AY shot/ficcy... it was soo ncie to read one again tht too at christmas timee😊😊
It was relli FANTABULOUS... ROMANTICC...FANTASTIC...MARVELOUS...SPECTACULAR... CUTE... SWEET n most importantly i could relli see AY in this situation👏... aww i wish it wud happen in real hehe
Diii i lovee yoouu for writing this, it wass such an adorable shot... n i dont think any other fic or one shot has been about xmas time...well the ones iv read havent been so WELL DONE👏👏👏.... its a relli unique idea n i guess tht christmass brings out the best in EVRY1 hehe😉 Buhh dii i hav one complaint... at the end of it i wanted to keep reading buh tehr was no more to read😭😭😭 not fairr.... please write one more partt... pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee😃
Lovee Smarika x

Thanks Smari sweety for reading it and for leaving such a lovely comment. 😳😳 Am soooo happy that you enjoyed my one shot. I love writing n when i saw so many ppl asking for one shots in their secret santa lists i thought i should try to pen something on AY n keeping an xmas theme in mind. I always think xmas is a real romantic time and with AY thought i might be able to make it even more so. 😳 Am really touched by your sweet words Smari 😳🤗 with all the encouragement i've received after this one piece i will def try to write another soon. 😳
Anu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_huda

Hey Anu,

Awesome fic👏👏👏loved how u described Yuvi waiting for Ashi wid that ring😳it somehow reminded me of Ashi's budday morning when he gifts her a ring👏👏👏
hope u don't mind me saying this, but i wasn't quite comfortable wid rose thing, i mean frm my limited knowledge of AY i can safely say that i never saw him gifting flowers to Ashi😆
its lovely esp the last scene👏👏👏loved how u desribed it👏
Natalie.
P.S:-can u tell me who made ur Shweta sigg?😳actually someone very special made a sigg for me on my budday and ur sigg is exactly same to that one, so i was just curious.

Thank you Natalie for reading my one shot and for leaving a comment for me, that was real sweet of you. 😳 I'm glad that you enjoyed it and felt it was well written. I wanted to try and create something special for xmas time.
Oh no i don't mind at all that you didn't feel the rose scene was something yuvi wld do, everyone has their own vision of how AY are and i did write this in a bit of a rush and i guess if i had taken time to write it with more care n had edited it i might even have changed that scene. Yuvi did give Ashi a rose once tho, during the bet scenes just after they returned to maurya after his fight with Aditya when he was pretending to have amnesia 😆😳 But yes, it was a one off n all part of his plan to win the bet 😆 Here's the link to the scene if you want to see it:
The shweta sig was something sushi sent to me...she said she had made it for everyone for xmas...i'm sorry, i didn't know it was like one of ur bday sigs. 😕 dw, i will be changing it soon as i just got some new sigs, as u probs already saw coz u requested from ash too 😆
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