Once Upon A Christmastime - AY one shot

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Hey guys, first of all wanna wish each and everyone of you a Very Happy Christmas!!!🥳

I decided to flex my writing skills on the occasion as a lot of ppl requested ay one shots in their wish lists - so this is for all of them. 😳 I do hope i have done justice to AY and to the members who wanted a shot on them. But pls do forgive my terrible hindi - writing it does not come naturally to me and it's bound to not make sense 😕😆 So do forgive me that. Hope you all will enjoy it. 😳

A soft, haunting love song was playing in the hall. The dim lights swept across the room, casting the gently swaying couples on the dance floor in a rosy glow. Yuvi stood to the side, not really noticing the dancers though his eyes were on them. His mind was too preoccupied to pay attention to what was happening around him. Tonight is the most important night of my life, he was thinking; tonight I will open my heart to Ashi, there won't be any more secrets between us. He glanced down at the ring in the palm of his hand, and as the diamond caught the light and flashed a beam of dazzling light only one word filled his mind.

"Ashi," he whispered.

His lips curved into a dreamy smile and he brought the ring up to them, kissing it gently. It was the sign of all his hopes and dreams, a promise of eternal love.

Just then he lifted his eyes and the breath caught in his throat. Eyes widening in amazement he stared over at the staircase across the hall. There, descending from the bottom step, was his vision of beauty. With a thumping heart he swept his eyes over her, hardly daring to believe that she was real. She was so serene looking: dressed in a long, sweeping black dress, with her hair styled like a film star. He had never seen her look so elegant or ethereal and as he gazed at her he could think of nothing else but her.

Ashi hadn't seen him. She moved slowly through the crowd, flicking her eyes from left to right, telling herself that she was looking for her friends, although her heart knew who the true object of her search was. The hall was decorated with blue and silver lights, tinsel strung around the walls and a tall, white Christmas tree glowing at the back of the hall. There was an atmosphere of a winter wonderland and it truly felt magic was in the air. She took it all in, butterflies dancing in her stomach, feeling like she was somewhere she didn't belong.

Just then she glanced directly in front of her and her eyes met his. Her heart slammed in her chest and for a moment she ceased to breathe. He stood there, dressed in a black suit, hair slicked back in a dashing style, his eyes pinned on her. There was so much depth in those brown irises that she could not look into them without a shiver running down her spine. Suddenly her skin felt as if it were on fire and the butterflies in her stomach started to flutter with greater force. Time seemed to stand still as she gazed across at him, her emotions all in a flux. Wasn't this how she had dreamed it would be, she asked herself? It was true then, her dreams really were going to be realised. Her heart leapt and she spun round, nerves making her breath race.

"Ashi."

His voice came from behind her, caressing her ear. She closed her eyes for a second, savouring the sensation of excitement that only his voice could give her.

"Main tumhe intezaar kare hai the," he told her.

She took a deep, steadying breath and opened her eyes.

"Yuvi," she said, turning to face him. "You know I don't like cheesy lines."

"It's not a line," he told her. "Main saach keh rahe hoon."

As she looked into his eyes she saw the earnestness in them and she knew that he was being honest with her.

"I have waited all day to do this," he said.

"Do what?" she asked, frowning slightly.

Without saying a word he swept a rose from behind his back and held it towards her. She stared at its bright red petals, stunned by his gesture. Her heart was fluttering and she didn't dare to move lest she should wake up and discover she had been dreaming.

"Yuvi....?" she said searchingly, glancing up at him.

"Happy Christmas Ashi," he wished her.

Despite the confusion of her mind, she found her lips curving into a smile and reaching out she took the rose from him lifting it to inhale its sweet fragrance.

"It's beautiful Yuvi," she told him, and when she looked at him happiness shone in her eyes.

"I...I have something else for you," he told her.

Her brows knitted in a frown and as his heart leapt in anticipation he took one of her hands in his, looking deeply into her eyes.

"Ashi, I love you," he told her.

Her breath caught in her throat and her eyes flew wide with astonishment. Secretly joy filled her senses but she battled to stay in control, not trusting this wild, untameable emotion.

"I know that I have made mistakes, that I have hurt you," he continued. "But I have changed. You have made me a better person Ashi. You taught me to follow my heart, to always do what felt right no matter what others thought. Ashi, you are the reason I am here today. If it hadn't been for you I would have been another puppet of my father's. You are my strength, my hope, my happiness. Ashi, please, marry me."

He held the ring out to her, his eyes filled with supplication. Reeling from all he had said to her, the sight of the ring made her panic. Yes, this is exactly what she had dreamed, she thought, but how could she trust it? It could be another dream, or worse, another bet Yuvi had made with Sid. This feeling of happiness that his words brought, how could she place any faith on it? No one had ever wanted her for herself. They only ever saw her as the daughter of Sonia Rey. No, she thought with increasing panic, all that was happening was an illusion. She had to break out of it before she was hurt.

"Yuvi!" she cried breathlessly, breaking from his hold and turning her back to him. "Please, don't joke with me."

"Ashi, yeh mazaq nahin hai," he protested, confused by her response. "I love you Ashi. I want to be with you forever."

"No!" she cried, tears welling up in her eyes. "It's just words! Yuvi, how can you do this? You know how much I hate these jokes!"

Unable to control the violent emotions inside her anymore she started to pace across the hall, bowing her head so no one would see her tortured expression. Not to be deterred, Yuvi hurried after her, finally catching up with her and grabbing her arms. He spun her to face him but she deliberately would not meet his gaze, turning her face to the side, battling back the tears that filled her eyes.

"Ashi, please, meri baat sunno" Yuvi pleaded. "I am opening my heart to you, why can't you understand?"

"No, you are making a fool of me," she sobbed.

"Ashi, look at me. Please, look at me."

He placed his hands on her face and made her look into his eyes. Hers were filled with tears, tearing his soul apart. He wanted to take each tear away and fill those eyes with happiness.

"Haan, I agree, I have lied to you in the past," he said. "Lekin iss baar main saach keh rahe hoon. You are my life Ashi. You are the only one I can share my heart with. Please, sirf ek baar, say that you love me. Please."

He leaned his forehead against hers and she felt the depth of his love sweeping over her, filling her senses until she could not fight against it. How could she resist? She loved him so deeply she could not imagine herself without him being there. He was her best friend, her soul mate and the only one she ever wanted to be with. She could feel herself melting into him and she knew then that dream or not she could not deny her feelings any longer.

Before she could speak, however, she heard Vrinda's voice calling out merrily,

"Hey, you two are under the mistletoe!"

They both lifted their eyes to the ceiling and sure enough there was the mistletoe branch. Yuvi's lips split into a wide grin and he arched his eye brows at Ashi as she turned amazed eyes to him.

"Well?" he asked her.

"Hey Bhaggu!" she exclaimed. "You know na, I don't follow traditions."

He chuckled and shook his head.

"But," she added with a devilish grin. "This is one tradition I do like."

When he looked at her with a baffled frown she felt a delighted laugh rise up in her throat and linking her arms about his neck she leaned her forehead against his.

"Matlab?" he asked her.

"Matlab ke Yuvi, I love you and yes, I will marry you," she told him.

His heart leapt at her confession and with a delighted laugh her placed the ring on her finger. They both looked down at it, joy animating their faces as all their dreams finally came true.

"Now what about this other tradition?" she asked, glancing impishly up at him.

He grinned at her and pulling her towards him they melted into one another while above them little flakes of cosmetic snow floated down from the ceiling.

Merry Xmas once again to one and all!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rihanna89

Fairyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.....................i lubbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu for thissssssssssssssssssss🤗...🤗🤗🤗...such a lovely suprise😳.... this was awesome...........spectacular........amazing........... marvelous..............⭐️ i love this shot...☺️☺️☺️....🤗..so simple yet so lovely.😍😍...☺️☺️☺️.....outstandingggggggg😛 love u fairy........☺️..........i m so happyyyyyyyyyyyyyy today u made my dayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy🤗 n guys humein ek aur bakri mil gayi.....🤣....🤣.... loony ko thoda aaram karne........do 🤣fairy ke peeche pado🤣................pls write one more 🤗🤗btw new year is cominggggggggggggggg babyyyyy😉 love uuuuuuuuuuuuu fairyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Awwwww rimms hun thank you 🤗 am delighted that you liked it. I wrote it with u in mind so it's great to know that you liked it enough to post such a sweet comment. 😳 I will try to write another one if i get time 😆😉
Anu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Haiiiiiiiiiiiii Anu meriiiiiiiiiiiiiii jaaaaaaaaan... As i toldddddddddddddddddddd u I read it yesterdayyyyyyyyyy and I couldn't stop thinking about it whole day! ☺️☺️☺️ It ij sooooooooo romantically awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Anuuuuuuuuuuu! Getting goosessssssssss all over meeeeeeeeee... I loveeeeeeeee this shott sooo muchhhhhhh...Okie now I 100% believe that u are an amazing writer... I knew that when I read KiKo but now I have 100000000000000% suree!! Haiiiiiiiiiii😍 haiiiiiiiiiii haiiiiiiiiiii haiiiiiiii😍😍 I seriouslyyyyyyy cannot stop thinking about it Anu...and frankly speaking I didn't knew about that mistle toe tradition...but after reading this i went googling...and then when I read it...haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii I just can't stop imagining AY under it and this wholeeeee fic☺️☺️ I am even blushing right while typing this☺️☺️☺️
You have noo idea how many times I read it☺️ My most fav. part has got be this...

"He leaned his forehead against hers and she felt the depth of his love sweeping over her, filling her senses until she could not fight against it. How could she resist? She loved him so deeply she could not imagine herself without him being there. He was her best friend, her soul mate and the only one she ever wanted to be with. She could feel herself melting into him and she knew then that dream or not she could not deny her feelings any longer."
I can soo imagine it☺️☺️ One emotional, romantic and full of feelings ka moment! ☺️ And last nightt...I almost had its dream too!☺️😳 Its awesomee shotttttttt Anuuu!!☺️☺️ LOVEEEEEEEEEEE IT!! to the ZZZZZZZZZZZ!!☺️😳☺️ And I love how u put to ashi...u know naa I hate traditions...but I love this one! ☺️ I can soo imagine thatttttttttttt☺️ and loved the way u ended it!☺️ with long...everlasting kiss!☺️ And the best thing is the setting...snowwwwwwwww😍 tell u...snow is soo meant for them that anything that is with snow and AY... I am bound to love and get gooses☺️
Its amazingggggggggg Anuuuuuuuu! Pleaseeeeeeeeeee write another oneeeeeeeeeee...as romantic☺️ I would be waitingggggggg☺️☺️
And yeeeeeeeees rims...lets torture anuuuuuuu TOOOOOO!! Why give loons break...lets keep continuing torturing loons...and now torture ANU TOO!😉 wat say?😉
But seriously Anuuuuuuuu...write another one toooooooooo☺️☺️ pleejjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj...pleejjjjjjjjjj...pleejjjjjjjjjj☺️☺️ me waitinggggggggggggg☺️
Edited by *nitz_rocks* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *nitz_rocks*

Haiiiiiiiiiiiii Anu meriiiiiiiiiiiiiii jaaaaaaaaan... As i toldddddddddddddddddddd u I read it yesterdayyyyyyyyyy and I couldn't stop thinking about it whole day! ☺️☺️☺️ It ij sooooooooo romantically awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Anuuuuuuuuuuu! Getting goosessssssssss all over meeeeeeeeee... I loveeeeeeeee this shott sooo muchhhhhhh...Okie now I 100% believe that u are an amazing writer... I knew that when I read KiKo but now I have 100000000000000% suree!! Haiiiiiiiiiii😍 haiiiiiiiiiii haiiiiiiiiiii haiiiiiiii😍😍 I seriouslyyyyyyy cannot stop thinking about it Anu...and frankly speaking I didn't knew about that mistle toe tradition...but after reading this i went googling...and then when I read it...haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii I just can't stop imagining AY under it and this wholeeeee fic☺️☺️ I am even blushing right while typing this☺️☺️☺️

You have noo idea how many times I read it☺️ My most fav. part has got be this...

"He leaned his forehead against hers and she felt the depth of his love sweeping over her, filling her senses until she could not fight against it. How could she resist? She loved him so deeply she could not imagine herself without him being there. He was her best friend, her soul mate and the only one she ever wanted to be with. She could feel herself melting into him and she knew then that dream or not she could not deny her feelings any longer."
I can soo imagine it☺️☺️ One emotional, romantic and full of feelings ka moment! ☺️ And last nightt...I almost had its dream too!☺️😳 Its awesomee shotttttttt Anuuu!!☺️☺️ LOVEEEEEEEEEEE IT!! to the ZZZZZZZZZZZ!!☺️😳☺️ And I love how u put to ashi...u know naa I hate traditions...but I love this one! ☺️ I can soo imagine thatttttttttttt☺️ and loved the way u ended it!☺️ with long...everlasting kiss!☺️ And the best thing is the setting...snowwwwwwwww😍 tell u...snow is soo meant for them that anything that is with snow and AY... I am bound to love and get gooses☺️
Its amazingggggggggg Anuuuuuuuu! Pleaseeeeeeeeeee write another oneeeeeeeeeee...as romantic☺️ I would be waitingggggggg☺️☺️
And yeeeeeeeees rims...lets torture anuuuuuuu TOOOOOO!! Why give loons break...lets keep continuing torturing loons...and now torture ANU TOO!😉 wat say?😉
But seriously Anuuuuuuuu...write another one toooooooooo☺️☺️ pleejjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj...pleejjjjjjjjjj...pleejjjjjjjjjj☺️☺️ me waitinggggggggggggg☺️

yeah!..............mast idea nitzzzzz 😉🤣🤣 i m with you.........👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wooooooow....☺️
This definatly came as a surprise....☺️☺️...dunno yaar since the day i have known ashi yuvi xmas season and all the xmas decors the misteltoes the whole feel of feeling xmasish represents AY to me..☺️...infact i remember writing a special verse of their wedding on the xmas eve under the mistleltoes...☺️....so this surely surel touched my heaaaaaaart....coz the ambiance is like helllllllll ayishhhhhhhhh☺️.....loved the vission of ashi you created and when seen from his eyes she just looks flawlessssss heavenly so so very divineeee...and loved the part when her eyes were darting across the room searching for just One person,,,☺️☺️☺️....and again the vission of yuvi through her eyes was breath takinggggg☺️☺️...could seriously imagine her blush at the caress of his voiceeeeee...but what i loved most was the tinge of reality which u added to this...now that is what is called being Anvesha...she can never loose grasp of relity and her reaction to his words just touuuuuuched my soullllllll....i mean this is what she had waiting to here since forever since the day she had knonw love and for her love just had one menaing and that was him..yet the rstrain she showed was heartwrenching..and mind you here she wasn't throwing any tantrums...she was not being shy or coy or a china doll..all she was doing was safeguarding her soul all she was doing was preventing herself to brak down if it turned out htis was yet another dream of hers....and all that it took yuvi to make her believe in him was to look at her soul via his loved fielld eyes...just absolutely loooooooooooooved the momentttttt under the misteltoeeeeeeeeeee left me breathlessss☺️☺️...perhaps their moment of eternity when it downed on both of them that thi is what they were hoping for since timeless of time...and the playfulness in the end was like so ayishhhhhhhhhhh she loves teasing him like helllllllllllllllllll...and u add that side of them here too...and haye the kiss made me melt toooooooooo...☺️☺️☺️.....
trust me its beautyfullllllll and you have written it stupendously brilliant use of word and expressions..i always knew u are a damm good writer and you can really express feelings flawlessly....so so elated that you gave us a chance to visualize our eternal couple in your words....☺️...and that tooo on xmas eve...geee it owuld be special to us always...☺️...thank you for your endeavour to please us all by this gesture...to say that we loved it would be an understaement of all sorts..i would surely cherish it and remmeber it on every xmas season..☺️....you should write more often you have it in you to make the words appear to be real i mean trust me while i was reading i saw ashi yuvi standing right here infront of my eyes under the misteltoes exactly the way u described it allll..its helll beautyful yaar really keep it up..and would surely love to read much more from your brilliant pen...😃😳..the writer in me is so wanting to give u a hats off...👏👏
ps.......nappy shut up laat padegi tujhe rims ka idea is the best i love you rimssssssssssssssssss bilkul sahi idea diya hai lets all start grillinggggg and butcheringgggg anuuuuu....and hence loosen your strigns around my neck..waise bhi me grown old...isliye stop torturing moiiii...😆😆😉
pps...once again brilliant work hellllllllllllll....☺️☺️☺️..magical..😍
Edited by smritisashi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: smritisashi

Wooooooow....☺️

This definatly came as a surprise....☺️☺️...dunno yaar since the day i have known ashi yuvi xmas season and all the xmas decors the misteltoes the whole feel of feeling xmasish represents AY to me..☺️...infact i remember writing a special verse of their wedding on the xmas eve under the mistleltoes...☺️....so this surely surel touched my heaaaaaaart....coz the ambiance is like helllllllll ayishhhhhhhhh☺️.....loved the vission of ashi you created and when seen from his eyes she just looks flawlessssss heavenly so so very divineeee...and loved the part when her eyes were darting across the room searching for just One person,,,☺️☺️☺️....and again the vission of yuvi through her eyes was breath takinggggg☺️☺️...could seriously imagine her blush at the caress of his voiceeeeee...but what i loved most was the tinge of reality which u added to this...now that is what is called being Anvesha...she can never loose grasp of relity and her reaction to his words just touuuuuuched my soullllllll....i mean this is what she had waiting to here since forever since the day she had knonw love and for her love just had one menaing and that was him..yet the rstrain she showed was heartwrenching..and mind you here she wasn't throwing any tantrums...she was not being shy or coy or a china doll..all she was doing was safeguarding her soul all she was doing was preventing herself to brak down if it turned out htis was yet another dream of hers....and all that it took yuvi to make her believe in him was to look at her soul via his loved fielld eyes...just absolutely loooooooooooooved the momentttttt under the misteltoeeeeeeeeeee left me breathlessss☺️☺️...perhaps their moment of eternity when it downed on both of them that thi is what they were hoping for since timeless of time...and the playfulness in the end was like so ayishhhhhhhhhhh she loves teasing him like helllllllllllllllllll...and u add that side of them here too...and haye the kiss made me melt toooooooooo...☺️☺️☺️.....
trust me its beautyfullllllll and you have written it stupendously brilliant use of word and expressions..i always knew u are a damm good writer and you can really express feelings flawlessly....so so elated that you gave us a chance to visualize our eternal couple in your words....☺️...and that tooo on xmas eve...geee it owuld be special to us always...☺️...thank you for your endeavour to please us all by this gesture...to say that we loved it would be an understaement of all sorts..i would surely cherish it and remmeber it on every xmas season..☺️....you should write more often you have it in you to make the words appear to be real i mean trust me while i was reading i saw ashi yuvi standing right here infront of my eyes under the misteltoes exactly the way u described it allll..its helll beautyful yaar really keep it up..and would surely love to read much more from your brilliant pen...😃😳..the writer in me is so wanting to give u a hats off...👏👏
ps.......nappy shut up laat padegi tujhe rims ka idea is the best i love you rimssssssssssssssssss bilkul sahi idea diya hai lets all start grillinggggg and butcheringgggg anuuuuu....and hence loosen your strigns around my neck..waise bhi me grown old...isliye stop torturing moiiii...😆😆😉
pps...once again brilliant work hellllllllllllll....☺️☺️☺️..magical..😍

heheeeeeee loony..............i m with nitzzzzzzzzzz check my post🤣🤣 well i love you too......................🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *nitz_rocks*

Haiiiiiiiiiiiii Anu meriiiiiiiiiiiiiii jaaaaaaaaan... As i toldddddddddddddddddddd u I read it yesterdayyyyyyyyyy and I couldn't stop thinking about it whole day! ☺️☺️☺️ It ij sooooooooo romantically awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Anuuuuuuuuuuu! Getting goosessssssssss all over meeeeeeeeee... I loveeeeeeeee this shott sooo muchhhhhhh...Okie now I 100% believe that u are an amazing writer... I knew that when I read KiKo but now I have 100000000000000% suree!! Haiiiiiiiiiii😍 haiiiiiiiiiii haiiiiiiiiiii haiiiiiiii😍😍 I seriouslyyyyyyy cannot stop thinking about it Anu...and frankly speaking I didn't knew about that mistle toe tradition...but after reading this i went googling...and then when I read it...haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii I just can't stop imagining AY under it and this wholeeeee fic☺️☺️ I am even blushing right while typing this☺️☺️☺️

You have noo idea how many times I read it☺️ My most fav. part has got be this...

"He leaned his forehead against hers and she felt the depth of his love sweeping over her, filling her senses until she could not fight against it. How could she resist? She loved him so deeply she could not imagine herself without him being there. He was her best friend, her soul mate and the only one she ever wanted to be with. She could feel herself melting into him and she knew then that dream or not she could not deny her feelings any longer."
I can soo imagine it☺️☺️ One emotional, romantic and full of feelings ka moment! ☺️ And last nightt...I almost had its dream too!☺️😳 Its awesomee shotttttttt Anuuu!!☺️☺️ LOVEEEEEEEEEEE IT!! to the ZZZZZZZZZZZ!!☺️😳☺️ And I love how u put to ashi...u know naa I hate traditions...but I love this one! ☺️ I can soo imagine thatttttttttttt☺️ and loved the way u ended it!☺️ with long...everlasting kiss!☺️ And the best thing is the setting...snowwwwwwwww😍 tell u...snow is soo meant for them that anything that is with snow and AY... I am bound to love and get gooses☺️
Its amazingggggggggg Anuuuuuuuu! Pleaseeeeeeeeeee write another oneeeeeeeeeee...as romantic☺️ I would be waitingggggggg☺️☺️
And yeeeeeeeees rims...lets torture anuuuuuuu TOOOOOO!! Why give loons break...lets keep continuing torturing loons...and now torture ANU TOO!😉 wat say?😉
But seriously Anuuuuuuuu...write another one toooooooooo☺️☺️ pleejjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj...pleejjjjjjjjjj...pleejjjjjjjjjj☺️☺️ me waitinggggggggggggg☺️

Thank uuuuuuuuuuu Nitz for such a sweet comment. 😳😳 Am glowing like the fairy on the xmas tree right now after reading this!! 😆😆😳 Am soooooooooooooooooooo happy ki u liked it. I wrote it in such a rush and that too not as well as i would have liked so was worried you wld be disappointed in it, coz i know how much you enjoyed the few pieces of KK i sent you (and yes i promise to get some done soon!!! 😆) You know something? The idea totally sprung into my head after watching RD vids!!!! 😆😳 I was watching the b'day vid where RD n MM are dancing, n I just thought ooooh AY n an xmas party wld have been soooooo heavenly 😍😆 N from that one random thought this shot was created in my mind. I totally forgot about our snow convo till after i had written it, but it surely must have been in my subconscious na when i wrote about it. 😉😆😳
Am so delighted Nitz hun that you liked it so much and for your sweet comment i will def try to write another shot soon. 😉😆
Thank you for appreciating my work so much jaan 🤗
Anu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: smritisashi

Wooooooow....☺️

This definatly came as a surprise....☺️☺️...dunno yaar since the day i have known ashi yuvi xmas season and all the xmas decors the misteltoes the whole feel of feeling xmasish represents AY to me..☺️...infact i remember writing a special verse of their wedding on the xmas eve under the mistleltoes...☺️....so this surely surel touched my heaaaaaaart....coz the ambiance is like helllllllll ayishhhhhhhhh☺️.....loved the vission of ashi you created and when seen from his eyes she just looks flawlessssss heavenly so so very divineeee...and loved the part when her eyes were darting across the room searching for just One person,,,☺️☺️☺️....and again the vission of yuvi through her eyes was breath takinggggg☺️☺️...could seriously imagine her blush at the caress of his voiceeeeee...but what i loved most was the tinge of reality which u added to this...now that is what is called being Anvesha...she can never loose grasp of relity and her reaction to his words just touuuuuuched my soullllllll....i mean this is what she had waiting to here since forever since the day she had knonw love and for her love just had one menaing and that was him..yet the rstrain she showed was heartwrenching..and mind you here she wasn't throwing any tantrums...she was not being shy or coy or a china doll..all she was doing was safeguarding her soul all she was doing was preventing herself to brak down if it turned out htis was yet another dream of hers....and all that it took yuvi to make her believe in him was to look at her soul via his loved fielld eyes...just absolutely loooooooooooooved the momentttttt under the misteltoeeeeeeeeeee left me breathlessss☺️☺️...perhaps their moment of eternity when it downed on both of them that thi is what they were hoping for since timeless of time...and the playfulness in the end was like so ayishhhhhhhhhhh she loves teasing him like helllllllllllllllllll...and u add that side of them here too...and haye the kiss made me melt toooooooooo...☺️☺️☺️.....
trust me its beautyfullllllll and you have written it stupendously brilliant use of word and expressions..i always knew u are a damm good writer and you can really express feelings flawlessly....so so elated that you gave us a chance to visualize our eternal couple in your words....☺️...and that tooo on xmas eve...geee it owuld be special to us always...☺️...thank you for your endeavour to please us all by this gesture...to say that we loved it would be an understaement of all sorts..i would surely cherish it and remmeber it on every xmas season..☺️....you should write more often you have it in you to make the words appear to be real i mean trust me while i was reading i saw ashi yuvi standing right here infront of my eyes under the misteltoes exactly the way u described it allll..its helll beautyful yaar really keep it up..and would surely love to read much more from your brilliant pen...😃😳..the writer in me is so wanting to give u a hats off...👏👏
ps.......nappy shut up laat padegi tujhe rims ka idea is the best i love you rimssssssssssssssssss bilkul sahi idea diya hai lets all start grillinggggg and butcheringgggg anuuuuu....and hence loosen your strigns around my neck..waise bhi me grown old...isliye stop torturing moiiii...😆😆😉
pps...once again brilliant work hellllllllllllll....☺️☺️☺️..magical..😍

Di thanks for taking the time out to read it. 😳🤗 And thanks sooooo much for your touching words, i'm really feeling honoured to hear such praise from you after having read ur great writing. 😳 I have to admit i was really worried about your opinion, coz if anyone knows AY inside-out then it's you, and i knew i hadn't been able to devote enough time and attention to it as i wld have liked and was worried you find it terribly flawed n even hate my vision of AY. I know that no one can understand Ashi or portray her better than you Di, so to know that you liked the way i put her accross really means a lot to me. 😳 I had written a small scene before this with just Ashi looking into her mirror, but i edited it out because it was too long, but it gave more insight into her feelings n i was a lil anxious that without it her feelings wouldn't be quite so obvious. N yes, xmas is def an AY-ish time - the fun and laughter in the air and the sense of love and warmth def suits them. I can imagine them giving presents to all their friends n when they are married having everyone over to their house for a big gathering n there being lots of masti - can even see them decorating the tree together. 😳😳
Thanks Di for liking this, it really does mean a lot to me. 😳🤗
Anu
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#10

WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW😍WOW

Diiii i feel lyk i have just been in a wonderfull dreammm.... tht one shot was choo chweet😳😳 Feels lyk its been forever tht i read an AY shot/ficcy... it was soo ncie to read one again tht too at christmas timee😊😊
It was relli FANTABULOUS... ROMANTICC...FANTASTIC...MARVELOUS...SPECTACULAR... CUTE... SWEET n most importantly i could relli see AY in this situation👏... aww i wish it wud happen in real hehe
Diii i lovee yoouu for writing this, it wass such an adorable shot... n i dont think any other fic or one shot has been about xmas time...well the ones iv read havent been so WELL DONE👏👏👏.... its a relli unique idea n i guess tht christmass brings out the best in EVRY1 hehe😉 Buhh dii i hav one complaint... at the end of it i wanted to keep reading buh tehr was no more to read😭😭😭 not fairr.... please write one more partt... pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee😃
Lovee Smarika x

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