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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
that was so nice
but it isnt look odd Sujal with Kashish's Daughter
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22

wonderful story..........................buhat bura laga jab kashish is story mein nai rahi............................lekin keep going.........................i think naina sujal ko badal dey gi..........................con't soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
guys
aase kuch din beethta ha
sujal bhi ab thora normal hone laga ha
cg-veena tumne notice kiya sujal ab pahele jaisa ho raha ha
veena-ha
sujal-good morning
joti-mama dekho na bhaiya mujhe tang kar rahe ha
mahek-kun roshan
roshan-main kaha taang kar raha hu
mahek-acha thik ha tum dono ab breakfast karo aur college jao
roshan-mama aaj sunday ha
mahek-oh sorry beta
kaka-aaye
kaka-sujal sahab aap se koi milne aaya ha
sujal-kon ha kaka
kaka-aaye
sujal-tum
naina-ha sir woh mujhe is file main kuch samajh main nahin aa rahe ha
s-offf n tumko kuch bhi samajh main kun nahin aata
n-sorry sir
s-thik ha baithto
veena-aacha toh yeh baat ha
n -mam ek glass pani mil sakta ha
v-ha kn nahin beta
s -tum baithto main zara dusre file leke aata hu
n drinks water
veena-tumhara naam kya ha beta
n-jee naina
v-tum kaha rahete ho beta
n-jee chawl main
v-ohhhhhh tumhare ma baap
n-jee mere ma papa is duniya main nahin ha
v-ohhhhhhhhh
n-main mere dadu aur masi ke saath rahete the yahaan mumbai main main aapne ek friend ke saath rahete hu
v-ohhhhhhhh
s-n eh lo
n-jee
n-ok sir main chalte hu
v-bye beta
next day
morning
n college jaate ha
p-n woh dekh vikas
n-toh
vikas-n
n-kya ha
vikas-mujhe tumse baat karne ha
n-par mujhe tumhare koi bhi baat nahin sunne ha
vikas-plz n
n aur p dono clas room jaate ha
after college
vikas-n plz mere baat suno
n-mainne kaha na vikas mujhe tumhare koi bhi baat nahin sunne ha
n aur p dono ghar aate ha
kuch dar bad
ek admi aata ha
n-jee boliye
man-n kon ha
n-jee main hu boliye
man-yehj aap ke liye
p-wow such a nice bookey
n-kon beja ha
n-ohhhhhhh no vikas ne
n throws the booke in the dustbin
aase vikas n ko har din bookey ,card bejta ha par n sab kuch dustbin main phek dete ha
vena-sujal
s-are mama aap aae
veena-sujal tujhe naina kaise lagte ha
s is shocked
s-mama naina matlab
veena-s 20 saal ke bad main tujhe haste hue dekha ha aur main jaante hu yeh sab kuch n ke baje se hua ha
s-mama yeh aap kya bol rahe ha
veena-s main tujhe bohot aache se jaante hu tere zindage sirf naina he sudhar sakte ha
s-mama aap bhi na naina mujhe kareeb 20 saal chotte ha
veena-beta zindage chalene ke lie pyaar ka hona zaruri hota ha
vena jaate ha
s-nahin aasa nahin ho sakte kashish he mere zindage ha par kya main n se pyaar karne laga hu
s aapne akhen bad karta ha
tab s ko naina ka face dekhae deta ha
next day
morning
s-mama aap thik kahe rahe the main n se pyaar karte hu
veena-toh beta dar mat kar aaj he n ko baata de ke usse pyaar karta ha aur ha yeh ring le
s-jee mama
s office jaata ha
n-good morning sir
s-good morning naina
s aapne cabin main jaata ha
s calls at hotel blue diamond
s-hello
rec-yes sir how can i help u
s-main sjal gerewal bol raha hu mjhe aaj shayam ke lie aapke restrurent book karna chahata hu with full decoration
rec-ok sir
s-rosa n ko bej do
rosa-n tumhe s sir cabin main bla rahe ha
n-ma i come n sir
s-yes come n naina
s-naina aaj shayam ko tum mere saath chalo dinner ke lie
n-sir dinner ke liye
s-ha kun koi problem ha
n ka mobile bajta ha
n-excuse me sir
n-hello
p-naina tu jaldi se college ke peeche pahare par chale aa
n-kun kya baat ha p
p-naina vikas pagal ho gaya ha woh pahare se kudne ja raha ha
n-what
n-ohhhhhhhhh no
n-mujhe jaana hoga
s-kya hua n
n-sir woh woh
n rone lagte ha
s-n plz bolo kya hua ha
n-sir mjhe abhi college jaane hoge
s-ok ok chalo
s aur n car baithte ha
s-naina bolo kya baat ha
n-sir
n college jaate ha
n-p vikas kaha ha
p-woha
n-vikasssssssssssssssss
sujal bhi n ke peeche jaate ha
n-vikasssssssssssssssssssssss plz ruk jao
vikas-nahin n
n-vikas yeh kya pagalpan ha
vikas-ha n eh mera pagalpan ha main tumse pyaar karte hu
s is shocked uske toh jaise duniya he ruk gae
n-vikas plz woha se chale aao
vikas-pahele tum bolo ke that also love me
n-vikas plz stop it
vikas-no n first say
n-ok ok vikas i love u
vikas-heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
vikas comes to n
n-yeh sab kya ha
vikas- n i love u
vikas hugs n
s se eh sab seh nahin hota
s waha se chala jaata ha
raat ke kareeb 3 baj s ghar aata ha
veena-sujal yeh
vasu-ha bohot badal gaya tumhara sjal
veena-vasu
lalit-bhabhi aap s ko room main leke jae
veena-jeee
veena sjal ko room main leke jaate ha
veena-sujal
s-mama mere saath he aasa kun hota ha
veena-ka hua sjal
s-mama n mujhse nahin vikas se pyaar karte ha
veena-kya
s-mama pahele kashish aur ab naina bhi mujhe chor ke kunnnnnnnnnnnnnn mama kunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn boliye mama
veena-sujal
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
hey nice part.....................likin yeh kia sujal naina se pyaar kartha hai......................aur naina tu kashish ki beti hai....................kia story hai.............................superb......................aur sujal ko sharam nai athi hai woh apni se choti larki se pyaar kartha hai....................

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