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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
it was a great part......i hope sujal gets to know that she is kashish's daughter.............but i dont know if i could be able to read this story withour kashish..........but the part was great........ple continue soon........thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
guys
n aur priya class main jaate ha
prof mehera-yes
n-sir my name is naina sinha
prof mehera-and u
priya-sir priya deol
a guy-sunny deol ke behen
every 1 starts laughing
prof mehera-stop class
prof mehera-ok aaj hum log philosophy ke ch 1 read karenge naina u read the ch
naina-ok sir
after class
naina-priya chal library main chalte ha
priya-naina bohot bhook lage ha
naina-ok canteen main chalte ha
naina aur priya canteen main jaate ha
every 1 dekho 2 champu aa gaye
guy -hi naina
naina-hi
guy-tum kaha se aaye ho
naina-pangare se
guy-kaha se
naina-tumhe sayed nahin pata kunki tum sayed is college se bhar kabhi gaye nahin
naina-chal priya
vikas-aaj paheli bar mujhe kisi ne bow nahin de main dekhte hu tumhe naina
n the evening
naina aur priya ghar aate ha
priya-aunty
priya-naina kitne bhook lage ha aunt kaha ha
naina-sayed bahar gaye ha
naina-tu baith main dadu ko phone karke aate hu
priya-thik ha
naina calls dadu
naina-hello dadu
mr sinha-naina kaise ha beta
naina-main thik hu dadu aap aur masi kaise ha
mr sinha-hum bhi thik ha beta tere college kaise ha
naina-aache ha dadu
mr sinha-aacha
naina-dadu main rakte hu
mr sinha-thik ha beta
priya-naina raat ke 11 baj gaye aunty abhi tak nahin aaye
naina-chal so jate ha
aase kuch din beethta ha ghar main mrs kapur aur college main vikas naina ko disturbed karte ha
ek din
vikas-hi kal mere saath date par chaloge naina
naina-date par woh bhi tumhare saath no way vikas
vikas-tum lucky ho ke tumhe mainne date ke li kaha
naina-aacha tum kya samajhte ho aapne aap ko vikas ke larki tum par marte ha nahin woh sirf tumhare paise par maarte ha tumhare pass aapna kuch bhi nahin ha
naina jaate ha
sam-he vikas naina ne tujhe maana kar diya
vikas-naina now u r in big trouble
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
mind blowing part
i liked the way naina stood up 2 vikas and also rejected his offer of a date
poor girls didnt even get dinner
cant wait till sujal finds out naina is kashishs daughter
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part.........i hate vikas what he think of himself..........i like the strengh of naina just like her mom to stand up against someone.......i hope sujal find out about kashish's daughter soon....ple continue soon....thanks

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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
that sounds cool
plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

guys

n aur priya college jaate
n the evening
n aur priya ghar aate ha
mrs kapur-aa gaye tum dono
n /priya chup chap khare ha
mrs kapur-kaha se aa rahe ha aap dono
n-anty college se
mrs kapur-college se ya kisi boyfriend ke ghar se
n-aunty boy friend
mrs kapur-wah tumhe toh pata he nahin
n-aunty hume kuch samajh main nahin aa rahe ha
mrs kapur-aacha abhi batate hu
mrs kapur a box late ha jis main sharab ke bottles ha
mrs kapur-yeh kya ha
n-aunty yeh humara nahin ha
mrs kapur-wah tum log nahin jaante
priya-sach main aunty hum nahin jaante
mrs kapur-mujhe kuch nahin sune ha ab se tum dono yahaan nahin rahe sakte
n-aunty plz aasa mat boliye
priya-hum itne raat main kaha jayenge
mrs kapur-mujhe nahin pata chalo jayo yahaan se
n/priya-aunty plz aaj ke rat hume yahaan rukne dijiye
mrs kapur-thik ha sirf aaj ke raat tum log yahaan rahe sakte ho par kal subhe tum log yahaan se chale jaoge
n-thik ha aunty
next day
morning
n aur priya chale jate ha
priya-n hum kaha jayenge
n-priya tu jinta mat kar main kuch karte hu
autobala-bahen jee aap logo ko ghar chaheye
n-ha bhaisahab
autobala-thik ha aap chaleye
autobala n aur priya ko chawl main leke aate ha
autobala-bahen jee yeh rahe aapke ghar
n-bhaisahab hum kitna bara dena hoga
autobala-hey mai yeh dono chori ghar chaheye tu bol kitna bara lege
mai-tum dono rahege
n-ha
mai-rs 200 har month
n-thik ha
mai-aur ha advance bhi dena hoga
n-kitna
mai-rs 4000
priya-rs 4000
mai-ha
n-thik ha yeh lijiye
mai-chottu chori ko room ke key dede
n aur priya room main aate ha
priya-n ab kya karenge sab paise toh de diye
n-hume job karne hoge
priya-hmm
n aur priya job dhunne jaate ha
n-mam main interview ke li aaye hu
rec-wait there
kuch dar bad
rec-miss naina aap ander jaaye
n-thank u
n -may i come n
a man-yes
n-sir
man-baithteye
n-thank u sir
man turns
n-sir aap
sujal-ha main kun
n-sir us din ke lie sorry
sujal-aapko yeh job chaheye kun
n-sir job toh insan independent hone ke liye karte ha
sujal-aacha aap mujhe baata sakte ha is room ka color blue kun ha
n-sir blue color represents sky so agar hum aapne room ko blue color karte ha toh hum aapne mind ko bhi broad kar sakte ha aasman ke tara
sujal-i am impressed u can join from tomorrow
n-thank u sir
sujal-ek min aapka naam
n-naina sinha
sujal-naina sinha
n-jee sir
sujal-hmm
sujal-aaj bhi kun aasa lagta ha ke tum mere pass ho kun tumhare ehsas har pal mujhe mahesus hote ha
sujal kashish ke photo ko samne bolta ha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
very nice part............ple continue.............thanks for this wonderful part
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kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
very nice
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
guys
n the college
n aur priya bate kar rahe ha
kajal-he vikas that chipkali
vikas-hey u
priya-n hume bula raha ha
n-tu udher dekh mat
vikas-hey u naina
naina-kya ha
vikas-main jaanta hu tum logo ko bohot takleef ho rahe ha but vikas se jo panga leta ha uska haal aasa he hota ha agar tum mujhse maffe mag lo then i can forgive u
n-maaffee woh bhi tumse ikas tum jaante ho tumhare problem kya ha tum aapne aapko bohot smart samajhte ho aur tum yeh kabhi nahin sochte ke bake log tumhare bare main kya sochte ha
vikas-what do u mean
n-log tumhe nahin tumhare paise ko pasand karte ha jis din tumhare pass yeh paise nahin honge us din tum dekhna tumhare pass tumhare yeh dost bhi nahin honge
n-chal priya
jay-hey chor usse vikas
vikas ghar jaate ha
vikas aapne room main jaate ha
kaka-vikas baba
vikas-ha kaka
kaka-aapka khana
vikas-kaka mom ka phone aaya tha
kaka-nahin baba
vikas-hmm
vikas ke mann main n ke kahe huye baat ghum rahe the
vikas-ka n sach bol rahe the kya mere dost mujhe nahin mere paiso se pyaar karte ha
priya-n tujhe vikas se darr nahin lagta
n-kun darr kun lagega priya usne jo humare saath kiye
n office jaate ha
n the evening
n aapne cabin main kam kar rahe ha
s n ke cabin main aata ha
s n ke haath ke uper se mouse ko press karta ha
n -sirrrrrr
n khare ho jaate ha
s-kya hua
n-sir main us type ke larke nahin hu
s ko bohot gussa aa jaata ha
s n ko wall main block karta ha
the scene which happened in past between sujal and kashish
n -sir mujhe jaane dijiye
s-how dare u?
n-sir
s-main tum jaise larke ke sath never think like that
s chala jata ha
n-ohhhhhhh god main bhi na sir ke bare main kya soch rahe the
next day
morning
n office jaate ha
n-sir
s-come n
n-sir i am sorry for tomorrow
s-hmm
vikas college jaata ha
vikas-guys kun na hum aaj disc chale
guys-ok vikas
vikas-lekin is bar u have to pay the bill
1 gu-sorry vikass aaj main nahin aa sakta mere bahen ke birthda ha
girl-vikas mujhe class ke lie dar ho rahe ha
now vikas understand that his friends only love his money not him
n the evening
n-sir
s-hmm
n-aap mere saath coffee pene chalenge
s-coffee
n-plz sir
s-hmm
s aur n coffee pene jaate ha
s ghar aata ha
vena-are s tu aa gaya
s-mama mujhe bohot bhook lage ha khana dijiye
v-abhi dete hu
v ke akhon main assu a jaate ha
cg-kya hua veena
v-aaj kitne saalo bad s ne baat ke
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
amazing part
finally sujal spoke after ages
poor vikas finally has realised that his friends only want his money and not his friendship
the scene between sujal and naina was really good

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