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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys my ff will be based on kth story with a twist

mere kahani suru hote ha jab kashish sujal par shak kar ke akshat ke birthday party main sirio se neeche gir jate ha
s-kashishhhhhhhhhhhhhh
akshat-kashishhhhhhhhhhh
charu-diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
sujal akshat charu kashish ko hospital leke aate ha
s-dr plz dekheye kashish ko kya ho gaya
dr-nurse patient ko jaldi se ot main leke jayo
akshat-yeh sab kuch mere baja se huya ha
dr aate ha
s-dr kashish kaise ha
dr-mr gerewal hum ma ya bacche main se sirf ek ko he baccha sakte ha
s-dr plz dono ko bacchane ke koshish kijiyega
dr-i will try
mr sinha-hey bhagwan kasshish ke saath he aasa kun hota ha kun tu har bar kashish ke inteham leta ha
charu-papa plz aap fikar mat kijiye
mr sinha-kya karu main
s ka mobile bajta ha
s-hello mama
veena-kya huya s tum ro kun rahe ho
s-mama kashish sirio se gir gaye ha
v-kyaaaaaa ab kaise ha kashish
s-mama kashish ko dr ot main leke gaye ha
v-he bhagwan
nurse aate ha
nurse-hume yeh medicines abhi chaheye
s -mujhe dijiye
akshat bhi s ke saath jaata ha
kuch dar bad
dr aate ha
mr sinha-dr kashish kaise ha
dr-i am sorry mr sinha hum kashish ko baccha nahin paye
mr sinha-kashishhhhhh
charu-diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
s aur akshat medicines leke aata ha
mr sinha-kya ho gaa
charu-diiiiiiiiii
akshat-kya huya uncle
mr sinha-ro rahe ha
akshat-charu kashish kaise ha
charu-akshat di
akshat-ha bolo charu
charu-akshat di nahin rahe
s is shocked
sab log kashish ke body ko ghar leke aate ha
s is still shocked
veena s ko phone karta ha
s ka mobile baj raha ha par s phone nahin uthta raha ha
akshat-hello
v-hello s
akshat-aunty main akshat bol raha hu
v-aacha akshat kashish kaise ha
akshat-aunty kashish ke maut ho gaye ha
v-kyaaaaaaaaa
v ke haath se phone ka reciever gir jaata ha
cg-kya huya v
v-kashish
cg-kya huya kashish ko
v-kashish ke maut ho gaye ha
cg-kyaaaaaa
cg-lalit
lalit-kya huya cg
cg-lalit kashish maut ho gae
lalit-kya bol rahe ho tum cg
vasu-kya huya lalit
lait-vasundhara kashish ke maut ho gaye
vasu-kya
vasu, rishi ,mehek, varun, cg, v, sanjana sab sinha house aate ha
mr sinha-eh kya hoga
mehek-diiiiiiii
vasu-mr sinha humare pote ka ka hua
lalit-vasu
charu-baccha still born hua tha
vasu-humne humare piyush ke akhri neeshani ko bhi kho diya
lalit-samalo vasundhara
vau-kaise lalit how
pandit jee -abhi vidhi pure ho gaye ha hume inhe lee jaana hoga
mehek-nahin diiiiii
mr sinha-kashish
sab log kashish ke body ko burning ghat leke jaate ha
sab khatam karke sab log laut aate ha
s -kunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn kunnnnnnnnnnn kashish tum mujhe chor ke chale gaye kya kiya tha mainne plz kashish mere pass wapis aa jayo plz kashish
aase 2 months beethta ha
s ke haalat same ha
akshat-charu
charu-ha bolo akshat
akshat-tum college kun nahin jaate ho
charu-mujhe aacha nahin lagta akshat
akshat-yeh kya charu tum aapne zindage aasse khatam nahin kar sakte ho
charu hugs akshat
mr sinha see this
mr sinha-akshat
akshat-jee uncle
mr sinha-akshat tum charu se pyaar karte ho
akshat-ha uncle
mr sinha-toh beta main chahata hu ke tum charu se shaadi kar lo
akshat-par uncle abhi abhi toh kashish ke
mr sinha-main jaate hu par main chahata hu ke charu khush rahe
akshat-thik ha uncle main aaj he bhai aur mom se baat karunga
mr sinha-thik ha beta
akshat-mom bhai main charu se shaadi karna chahata hu
swayam-kya
akshat-ha bhai
reva-lekin beta charu
akshat-plz mom
reva-thik ha akshat
akshat-mom hum kal he court main shaadi karenge
reva-beta court main kun
akshat-plz mom
reva-ok
next day
morning
akshat reva swayam mr sinha ,mehek,varun,charu,kanan sab log court jaate ha
akshat aur charu ke shaadi ho jaate ha
akshat-uncle
mr sinha-beta charu ko hamesha khush rakkna
akshat-jee uncle
mr sinha aur kanan ghar wapis aate ha
mr sinha calls some1
mr sinha-hello main aa raha hu
mr sinha- beta tumne sab pack kar liya ha
kanan-jee papa
mr sinha-thik ha beta
mr sinha aur kanan hospital jaate ha
dr-mr sinha
mr sinha-dr
dr-yeh lijiye aapke pote
mr sinha-thanks dr
mr sinha ek baby ko kanan ke godh main dete ha
mr sinha aur kanan us bacche ko leke shimla chor ke chale jaate ha
if u like the concept then plz commen kijiyega

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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
very nice concept and very differnt...but it is so sad that in the first part u separtae Sk..........i cant see this happaning.....ple SK ka kuchkaro..........aur bahot hi achcha likha hai tumne....ple continue with it bcoz i am dia hard fan of SK......thanks for this lovely ff.............
love
kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing start
sounds really intresting
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pls cont its different. would love to read it
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Posted: 17 years ago
#5
guys
after 20 years
r&g house
v-raghu jaldi se breakfast laga do
raghu-jee
mehek-good morning aunty
v-aare beta aao baithto
varun-mehek
mehek-ha aate hu
mehek-kya huya varun
varun-mehek mere file kaha ha
mehek-varun eh rahe tumhare file
varun-mera wallet
mehek-varun yeh rahe tumhare wallet aur tumhare watch ab jayu main
varun-ek min
mehek-ab kya
varun-ek kiss
mehek-varun tum bhi na choro mujhe aunty akeli neeche kam kar rahe ha
varun-ok
varun aur mehek neeche aate ha
v-aao varun
varun-good morning every1
cg-good morning beta
v-mehek roshan uth gaya
mehek-roshan jaldi se neeche aake breakfast karo
roshan -a very handsome guy who loves his family very much .he is now n college
roshan-mom mujhe bohot dar ho rahe ha
mehek-beta kuch toh kha le
roshan-mom plz
mehek-off yeh larka bhi
varun-bye aunty bye mehek
cg-v sujal kaha ha
v-aap toh jaante he ha sujal 20 saal ho gaye na humse koi baat karta ha na he humare saath waqt beethta ha
cg-aasa kaise chalega veena 20 saal ho gaye s ko ab bhulna na hoga
sujal ab na kisi se baat karta ha na kisi se milta ha .log bhi s ko pasand nahin karte .ab sirf akshat he ha jo s ka dost ha
varun-sujal bhaiya
s-aao varun
varun-s bhaiya woh meheta group ke saath humare meeting ha
s-hmm
s aur varun meeting main jate ha
after meeting
s bar main jata ha
n the evening
mehek-varun tumhare meeting kaise huye
varun-thik ha
mehek-varun sujal bhaiya tumhare saath nahin aaye
varun-mere saath are baithte honge kisi bar main
mehek-aasa mat bolo varun sujal bhaiya ne humare shaadi karae the
varun-plz mehek is ghar main roshan ha joti ha un pe kya aasar hota ha jab woh log sujal bhaiya ko is haalat main dekhte ha
mehek-choro varun tum fresh up ho jayo hum diner karte ha
sab dinner kar rahe ha
roshan-dad aap ne jo cheque de the deposit karne ke liye woh mainne kar de
varun-good beta
s tun hoke ghar aata ha akshat ke saath
v-s thanks akshat
vasu-roz he toh s aase he ghar aata ha tun hoke v
v akshat ke saath s ko room main leke jate ha
v-pata nahin akshat mere bete ko kab is sab bhar aayega
akshat-aunty main chalta hu
v-thik ha beta hey bhagwan kahin na kahin koi toh hoga
now we see a beautiful house where a girl is working in the kitchen
the girl comes with a cup of coffee
girl-dadu aap ke coffee
mr sinha-are beta tu uth gaye
girl-ha dadu
girl-masi aapke coffee
kanan-thanks naina
girl turns
that is naina
mr sinha-naina beta priya aaye ha
naina-ha priya chal
naina-dadu mujhe ahirbad dijiye aaj mere result out honebale ha
mr sinha-tu zarur pass hoge
naina aur priya jaate ha
mr sinha-kanan dekhte dekhte naina kitne bare ho gaye ha na
kanan-ha papa
kanan -papa main office jate hu
mr sinha-thik ha beta
kanan jate ha
n the evening
naina-daduuuu
mr sinha-are are kya hua
naina-dadu main first aaye hu
mr sinha-jeete raho
naina-kya dadu mere present
mr sinha-sorry beta mainne toh koi present nahin le ha
naina-thik ha dadu toh mujhe aap permission dijiye
mr sinha-kis baat ke beta
naina-dadu priya shimla university jaa rahe ha mba karne mujhe bhi mba karna ha
mr sinha-kya shimla university nahin tum kahin nahin jayoge
naina-par kun dadu
mr sinha-kunki main bol raha hu
naina-plz dadu
mr sinha-kaha na nahin
naina rote rote room main chale jate ha
kanan-naina kya hua beta
naina-masi main shimla university se mba karna chahate hu par dadu mujhe jaane nahin de rahe ha
kanan-hmm tu ro mat
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow what a great part.......i mean itne saal bit gaye sujal ke kashish ke bina..........i am so sad.......i wont be able to see that..........i mean sujal and kashish r always togather//////////muje bahot bura lag raha hai sujal ki itne saaloin tak aisi halat dekh ke.........ab to kashish ki beti bhi badi ho gayi hai lagta hai itihaas phir se doharaya jayega/////////nanina ko shimla wapas jana hai//////////ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hoga.........lekin i am feeling really sad ki yeh KTH ff kaise bana jab Kashish aur Sujal to ek saath rahe nahi.........but anyway great going.......ple continue////thanks
love
kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mind blowing part
it was really good
i fely really bad 4 sujal even in 20 years he hasnt forgotten anything and doesnt even meet anyone hope he gets back 2 normal
cant wait 2 no who naina is and if she will go 2 shimla or not
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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys
kanan- papa yeh ha aap jaante ha naina ro rahe ha
mr sinha-ha beta par main kya karu naina shimla jaana chahate ha ab tum he bolo beta main kaise naina ko shimla bej du
kanan-hum naina ko sare zindage yahaan toh nahin rak sakte
mr sinha-ha beta main jaanta hu par usse shimla kabhi bej nahin sakte shimla ne humse humare sab kuch le li ha pahele tumhare ma aur uske bad piush aur kashish ko ab main naina ko nahin kho sakte
kanan-papa naina ko hum nahin khoyenge plz aap naina ko shimla jaane dijiye
mr sinha-par
kanan-plz papa
mr sinha-hmm
2 din bad
n the evening
mr sinha-naina
naina-ha dadu
mr sinha-mujhse se gussa ha
naina-nahin dadu
mr sinha-beta tu priya ke saath shimla jaana chahate ha na
naina-ha dadu
mr sinha-thik ha beta tu shimla zarur jaayege
naina-thank u dadu
mr sinha-par beta agar koi problem ho toh mujhe inform zarur karege
naina-off course dadu
mr sinha-thik ha ab jaldi se packing kar le tere train raat ke 11 baje ke ha
naina packing karte ha
mr sinha aur kanan naina ko station chorne aate ha
naina aur priya shimla jaate ha
mr sinha aur kanan ghar aate ha
kanan-papa main sone jaa rahe hu
mr sinha-thik ha
mr sinha ek book se kashish ke picture nikalte ha
mr sinha-kashish beta aaj tere beti naina shimla gaye ha tu aapne beti ke saath hamesha rahena
next day
morning
naina-priya uth dekh station aata he hoga
priya-naina hum pahele bar ghar se itne dur aaye ha na
naina-ha
priya-tu kal raat soye nahin
naina-nahin priya mujhe dadu aur masi ke yaad aa rahe the
priya-oh
naina -lagta ha station aa gaye
naina aur priya shimla station main uthtarte ha
naina -bhaiya
taxi bala-ha
naina-hume is address par jaana ha
taxibala-thik ha
naina aur priya jaate ha
naina rings the bell
voice-kon ha
naina-hum ha
voice-hum
woman comes
naina-namaste mera naam naina ha aur yeh ha priya mr doel ne aapke liye eh letter beje ha mrs kapur
mrs kapur-suniye jee dekheye 2 larke aaye ha
mr kapur-kon ha
naina-namaste hume doel uncle ne
mr kapur-ha aao ander aao
mr kapur-samaljeet inka saman ander rak de
samaljeet-aaye jee
naina aur priya ander jaate ha
mrs kapur-yeh log yahaan rahenge
mr kapur-are bhaisahab ne kaha ha
mrs kapur-mujhe ek dam pasand nahin ha
naina -priya chal hum college jaate ha
naina aur priya college jate ha
naina- hum first year ke class ke liye aaye ha kya aap hume baata sakta ha
a guy comes
guy-new student
naina -ha
guy-naam kya ha tumhara
naina-jee naina
guy-ok naina yeh maala pahenno
naina stop for a while
guy-kya huya jaldi
naina akhen bad karke woh maala kisi ke gale main pahennate ha
ever1-ohh no yeh toh gae
naina opens her eyes
priya-yeh kon ha
girl-yeh sujal gerewal ha is college ke malik bohot strict ha aur bohot gussebala
naina-sorry sir woh main
guard-yeh kya ha
s-ek min its ok u can go
naina-thank u sir
naina aur sujal ke mulakat ho gaye aage dekhte ha kya hota ha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#9
pls cont its really interesting
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Posted: 17 years ago
#10
great part
finally naina and sujal meet
cant wait 2 read wat happens next

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