Jab Dil Churaye Koi (AK)LAST PART PG152 INDEXPG154 - Page 48

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

Awesome!!!!!!!!!1st 2 reply!!!!! Pm me when u update. Lol it was funny.

Fanks a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

awww awsm prt..
y do always hav to bug others...lol
jk


cont asap

Fanks a lot 😃 wel wwah i can i do i have 2 bug people wen it cms 2 ratz😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

Cute part sista, continue soon and wonder why kripa is avoiding angad😕

Fanks a lot Laiba😃 u will out in da nxt part
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Posted: 16 years ago
Fanks a lot😃 nxt prt in bout 1 hour or so
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 42

Tanz started screamin mre coz she so mre ratz

Imrans gang barged in da house wivout knockin

We c Imran nd his gang

Imran- Yo wahs ur prob? wer tryin 2 sleep all we can hear is ur screamin

Tanz- Do u no wah ders ratz ere eww i h8 em, hw da hell am i meant 2 sleep in ratz ahh!!!!!!!

Every1 started laughin

Aditi- Shurrup u gd 4 nuffin idiot der onli ratz der nt gna eat u or smefing, look hw small they r nd look hw big u r

Iqra/Raj- Ur such a baby

Imran- Dunno wah u doin in a gang if ur so scared

Prem/Kasturi/Priya/Nik- Yh fank god ur nt in our gang

Tanz- Shurrup orite wah da hell r u guyz doin ere do u have any manners ur supposed 2 knock den cm

Imran- Nah nt 4 u lot u guyz dnt deserve it

Tanz- Shurrup Imran

Imran- Y dnt u shurrup

Sujal- Ayt enough u lot can go b4 i lose ma patience, nd Tanz be quiet they wnt harm u

Imran- Yh if i ere her screamin again im gna throw her in da jungle ayt so mke sure u dun scream

Tanz- I dun fink so (Interuptted)

Sujal- Tanz enough

Imran nd his gang left

Tanz- Bro its nt ma fault im scared

Sujal- We no dat buh u makin urself weak infront dem u cnt do dat

Kripa- Yh u cnt let dem laugh at u goto relax ayt

Tanz- Ayt buh im nt sleepin on da floor

Lucky- Yo Tanz den wer ya gna sleep in da jungle (he laughed)

Tanz- Shurrup Lucky

Sujal- Rob get of da sofa lets Tanz sleep der

Rob- Ayt Bro

Sujal- Nw go sleep Tanz ayt

Tanz- Buh Bro wah if da rats climb da sofa eww no Bro im scared

Alisha- Tanz wer ere they wnt nw go sleep k gd gyal

Tanz- Ayt if u say so

Every1 went sleep Tanz lay dwn on da sofa was tryin 2 go sleep buh couldnt so she decided 2 stay awake, it was mornin every1 woke up besides Tanz she was asleep

Lucky- Yo Tanz get up

Alisha- Lucky let er sleep i dun fink she slept all nyte

Lucky- Ayt

Angad cme runnin insyde

Angad- Guyz guess wah da van aint outsyde

Gang- Wah!!!!!!

Angad- I just checked da van aint outsyde i fink sm1 took it hw r we gna go Stechford nw

Sujal- Its Madans gang der must of took it

Kripa- Yh it cnt be any1 else

Sam- Wah if Imrans gang took it

Rob- Nah they wouldnt do dat i fink we should go 2 da nxt house nd c

Sujal- I fink u rite lets go Lucky wake Tanz up

Lucky- Ayt Bro Tanz!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tanz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tanz- Go away let me sleep

Lucky- (Jokingly) OMG TANZ DERS A RAT ON DA SOFA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tanz woke up

Tanz- AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HELP LUCKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tanz gt up nd hugged Lucky

Lucky- Ayt I was jokin nw get off me

Tanz- Wah u lier im gna kill u Lucky

Lucky ran outsyde nd Tanz ran afta him

Alisha- Enough u 2 wer goin 2 Imrans house nw stop it da vans gne

Tanz- Wah im sure he must of stole it stupid idiot, nd by nw him nd his useless gang must have gne

Alisha- I doubt dat i fink its madans gang who did dat, so wer goin 2 da house 2 c if der still der

Tanz- Ayt

Da gang go 2 Imrans house nd all his gang wer der

Sujal- Yo u lot did ya tke our van

Imran- Wah y would we do dat 4 ma jeep missin i fought u lot took it

Nik- Yh if ya lot didnt tke it den it has 2 be Madans gang who took our jeep nd ur van

Sujal- Im nt gna spare Madan hes bck again nd dis tyme he will be finished

Aditi- Guyz i have a plan u no 4 da deal our gang nd ur gang Sujal should be 2geva nd by dis we can get da deal nd Madans gang can lose wah say

Nik- Aditi have ya gne mad no wayz

Imran- No Nik Aditi is rite by joinin hand we can get da deal, nd den we can half it nd den we can go our own wayz, so wah say Sujal, Kripa?

Kripa- Ayt I fink ur rite

Sujal- Ayt

Both gangs join hands

PREVIEW- JOURNEY 2 STECHFORD

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Posted: 16 years ago
yesss!!!!!!!!! 1st!!!!!!!! B4 u pmed me again!!!!!!!! Awesome!!!! uv i. Finally Imran's gang and Kripz's joined. Hope they become gud friendz. Thanx. Do pm me next time. LOL Harjot
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesom part
thnx for the PM
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

yesss!!!!!!!!! 1st!!!!!!!! B4 u pmed me again!!!!!!!! Awesome!!!! uv i. Finally Imran's gang and Kripz's joined. Hope they become gud friendz. Thanx. Do pm me next time. LOL Harjot

Fanks a lot 😃 I did PM u i guess it reached late 2 u anywayz nxt tyme i will mke sure it reaches on tyme 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

awesom part

thnx for the PM
continue soon

Fanks a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
great part
finally they joined the gangs cant wait 4 them to get along.
tanz scenes were really good

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