FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6)

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Hello guys, i have decided to write a FF after seeing the response to my small prediction..All the charcters are same as in the show....Thanks for Naadia di (pisces26) for encouraging me to continue the prediction as a FF....



Siggy Credit Goes To Silpa Di.😃😃


Main Characters


MAIN LEAD - Harshad Chopda as Prem Juneja



LEAD ACTRESS - Additi Gupta as Heer Maan

(for part1 scroll down)



INDEX
(just click on the titles )

Part 1 - Premeer Kiss (1)

Part 2 - Heer's Love (3)

Part 3 - Change In Veera (5)

Part 4 - Premeer's Dance (7)

Part 5 - Prem's Anger (9)

Part 6 - Prem's Gift
(12)

Part 7 - PH Marriage Arrangements (14)

Part 8 - Premeer Mehendi (16)

Promo For Part 9 (18)

Part 9 - Premeer Cute Fight(21)

Part 10 - Premeer's Sangeet With SPA Members (24)

Promo For Part 11 (27)

Part 11 - Candle Lite Dinner (30)

Part 12 - Passionate Nite In Cottage (38)

Part 13 - Premeer Haldi & Bachelor's Party (45)

Marriage Promo
(49)

Part 14-
Preet's Proposal & Prem's Baraat (53)

Part 15 - Premeer's Marriage (56)

Part 16 - Premeer's Suhaag Raat (67)

Part 17 - Prem's Naughtiness (77)

Reception Promo (81)

Part 18 - Premeer Memories

18.1
- Reception Party (92)
18.2 - Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi
(94)

Special Promo (106)

Part 19 - Pehle Mulakaat (Thakraal) (115)

Promo for Part 20 (122)

Part 20 - Nihaal's Truth (125)

Part 21 - Surprises For Heer (135)

Part 22 - A Twist In Love Story (140)



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Posted: 16 years ago
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I hope you are one of the creatives. Its amazing....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PROLOGUE
: I am starting the scene from Heer showing the tape to Veera. Veera scolds Heer. Heer throws tape on the floor. Tape works. Veera is crying by hugging Heer. Veera asks Heer to give some time and leaves to the washroom


Part 1 - PREMEER KISS

Episode starts with Veera in the washing room , she thinks that " i cannot live without rishabh so how can i marry other person". So she takes the knife and cuts her hand and falls on the floor. Then Heer comes to Veera's room and sees Veera's hand bleeding and shouts Veera . She comes to Veera and tries to wake up her but she is unconsious.

She goes down crying and Prem asks her wat happened ? She tells abt Veera's suicide attempt. Then all listen to her and rush to Veera's room. Prem and all the family members break down and take her to the hospital soon. Doctors check her and tells them that it is difficult to save her , a lot of blood had gone , so donor should come forward. Then all the three brothers come forward and donate blood .

Then doctor tells that she is OUT OF DANGER. Then all take a deep breath. Suddenly Prem wonders why she has taken such a big step? and he falls on the floor and cries . Then heer comes to Prem and consoles him. Prem is uncontrollable ( he loves his sis very much). and again questions y she did like this?

Then Heer replies that she loves someone and he betrayed her. All are shocked by listening this. Prem says " what are u saying? " . Heer says " truth i have already told you that veera loves someone but you did not believe me, so i myself found out the truth of veera's love. i came to know that person is just using veera for his mission of destroying you" and she adds that he doesn't love veera. Prem gets up and questions who the person is? then Heer replies " Rishabh Rampal "

By hearing that name all are shocked and all the three brothers are in anger . Just then doctor comes and says veera is fine now and they can take her home. So all come to veera's room and cries but noone says a single word and takes her to home.


In Juneja's Mansion


Veera is taken to her room and she sleeps. All are gathered in the hall. Prem atlast breaks the silence and asks Heer what she said is true? Heer replies yes , but Prem asks her " when i asked you about the name of the person y did u not told me? " . Then heer replies " i thought Veera will tell you abt that person but veera did not tell you about her love.". Heer again replies " i went to meet him and ask about Veera but he told that he doesn't love veera and will not marry her ".

Just then Rishabh enters clapping and tells Heer that " what a beautiful lie". Heer is super shocked and all the others are shocked. Then rishabh continues that heer doesn't want Veera and me get married because she thinks that i am not good person and not suits veera .Prem quickly catches his collar and tells him to get out from here. But Rishabh continues his drama and tell them to call veera .But Preet comes and throws him on the floor and tell him to get out and adds that " dont u dare to spell veera's name " .

Then rishabh shouts Veera. By hearing Rishabh's voice Veera comes down and stands infront of Rishabh and scolds him for betraying her. Then rishabh makes a excuse that Heer is wrong , and tells Veera that when Heer came to my home i am not in my home so she did a mimicry on my voice and proved infront of everyone that i am wrong. Heer stood like a statue by hearing his words and all are looking to Heer. Heer comes to Veera and says that " dont believe his words he is traping you again " RR continues then ok check my appointments list and tell . He shows the appointments paper to Veera and our stupid Veera belives and scolds Heer again

Then Prem comes and tells Veera to stop . But veera says that because of her i almost died. She is trying to ruin my life. Prem says no heer cannot do this? Heer comes to Veera and asks that " how can i do this to you? u yourself heard the voice of RR . How could i play this cheap tricks? " .But Veera is not in the mood to listen. Heer remembers her mobile and tries to play the clip but no use. She sits on the floor and cries and Prem comes to her and hugs her and tells her that " I BELIEVE IN YOU, MY HEER CANNOT SAY LIE ". Saying this He hugs her more tightly...

Veera says " o stop it bhabhi ....u and ur drama ". Gayathri comes to Veera and slaps her (SHE DESERVES IT) and tells that she is insulting her bahu and she cannnot tolerate it. Heer gets up and leaves from that place and goes upstairs . prem is about to follow heer but he listens RR voice on mobile then he stops and all are shocked including VEERA . Prem comes to mobile and picks cell and listens to it . Then veera takes it . RR is shocked. Prem slowly move towards the dining table . Then he hears RR insulting Heer very badly. At the end of the clip Prem could not control his anger and breaks the glass table with his hand and blood is coming out from his hand. Gayathri is crying. Then veera says to RR " U said that Heer is doing mimicry on ur voice then y does Heer insult herself " and slaps him twice and Preet beats him.

Gayathri, lallu , Veera comes to prem and tries to console him. Veera says sorry to Prem but Prem gives a angry look to her. Veera is scared.

Prem runs to heer room . Heer is crying uncontrollably by standing near the window . Prem enters the room and comes to Heer . Heer notices that his hand is bleeding and gets a handkerchief and puts on his wound. Prem is crying and hugs her . He tells her " U ARE NOT WRONG HEER , U ARE ALWAYS RIGHT. U HAVE TOLD ME ABOUT VEERA BUT I DID NOT BELIEVE U , PLEASE EXCUSE ME" . By saying this he falls on floor infront of Heer. Then Heer sits infront of prem and wipes his tears with her hands. She slowly makes him get up. She tells him " I LOVE YOU PREM , I DONT WANT TO SEE A SINGLE TEAR IN YOUR EYES . I DID THIS FOR OUR FAMILY RESPECT " .Prem says Heer " I LOVE U A LOT HEER " . Prem hugs heer tightly to control his tears.(passionate hug).

Then Prem slowly puts his hand on Heer's face and sweetly kisses on forehead. Tears are coming out from her eyes . He slowly kisses her both eyes . Heer almost stopped crying. Then slowly move towards to her lips, which he wanted to kiss them from long time. Then he fulfilled his desire of kissing those Pink lips . There is a long passionate kiss of Premeer. PREMEER FIRST KISS. Heer is completely under the spell of Prem. She slowly puts her hand on Prem's hair and stroking them with her hand. They are completely lost in their own world. Prem slowly releases her from his magical spell. Heer feels shy and looks at Prem with her love filled eyes . She then cutely hugs Prem..

Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh that was very sweet....but smthg like this would happen in the show only if you are one of the creatives...The actual BT creatives dont like their audiences to be happy....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank q so much for ur valuable comments
me too expecting this to happen
but we all know creatives have gone completely mad
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i just hope something like this happens
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great 👏 I BELIEVE IN YOU, MY HEER CANNOT SAY LIE one of the best line
the prem runs to heer room . heer is crying uncontrollably by standing near the window . prem enters the room and comes to heer . heer sees his hand is bleeding and gets a handkerchief and puts on his wound. prem is crying and hugs her and tells her " U ARE NOT WRONG HEER , U ARE ALWAYS RIGHT. U HAVE TOLD ME ABOUT VEERA BUT I DID NOT BELIEVE U , PLEASE EXCUSE ME" by saying this he falls on floor infront of heer. then heer sits infront of prem and makes him get up. and tells him that" I LOVE YOU PREM , I DONT WANT TO SEE A SINGLE TEAR IN YOUR EYES . I DID THIS FOR OUR FAMILY RESPECT. " Prem says Heer thhat "I LOVE U A LOT HEER" prem hugs heer (passionate hug).

then prem slowly puts his hand on heer's face and kiss her on forehead. tears are coming out from her eyes . he kisses her both eyes . then slowly move towards to her lips which he wanted to kiss them from long time. then he fulfilled his desire of kissing those lips . there is a long passionate kiss of premeer. PREMEER FIRST KISS. they are lost in their own world. coming out from their world . heer feels shy and bends her head down and hugs prem
will never happen in drama but awesome i really like it why dont you write a ff . it is so beautiful do what i did make it a ff ........ like me now cont what happen next please dont stop i started when they met on station you start from here please a request . dont stop edit the topic and add ff start please 😳
Edited by pisces26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ummmmmmmah anuuuuuuuuuuuu from today on wards ur my sis!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aw that was great!
now only if that would happen
and premeer kissing...-shocked- hehe soooo cute! she shies away!
it was great!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank q so much to all my readers
and leaving excellent comments
i too wish only one thing
PREM CANNOT MISUNDERSTAND HEER

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