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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 3 - CHANGE IN VEERA

The scene continues from Heer consoling Veera who is crying very badly by hugging heer. All the family members are crying by seeing Veera in that condition. Heer wipes Veera's tears and make her to sit on sofa and try to console her.

Veera continues to say " MUJHE MAAF KARDEJIYE BHABHI MAINE ...... MAINE AAPKO GALAT SAMJHA HAI. AAP NE KITNE BAAR USS INSAAN KI SACHAYE BATANE KI KHOSHISH KIYA HAI LEKIN MAINE AAPKO NAHI SAMJA, KITNA INSULT KIYA HAI BHABHI AAPKO (remembering those incidents when she insulted heer) AAPNE NE MUJHE BAR BAR YE BATANE KI KHOSHISH KIYA HE KI RISHABH SAHI INSAAN NAHI HAI . LEKIN MAI AAPKI BAATO PAR KABHI YAKEEN NAHI KIYA. MAINE AAPKO KITNA BURA KAHA LEKIN AAP PHIR BHI AAP SIRF MERE BALAYE CHAHA HAI ". By saying this she takes both heer hands and asks her to beat her.

Heer consoles her and says "Tum mere chothi beheen hoo. main tumare zindagi kaise barbaad hone dethi". (she hugs veera).

(it is just a coincidence i wrote veera's dialogues on 31 aug , some of the dialogues came true, but these are routine dialogues)

Veera stands up and straightly goes to meher and asks forgiveness for her behaviour towards her and cries by hugging her . Meher is very sad by seeing veera in such a state. Meher consoles her, then veera comes to prem and hugs him and ask him forgiveness for hurting him on Raksha Bandhan. Prem hugs her in return and consoles her. All are very happy for a change in veera's behaviour. Veera then comes to Nihaal (how can we forget him afterall he is veera's brother-in-law ie heer's bro) and puts her two hands together and apolozises him for her rude behaviour towards him. Nihaal forgives her and sweetly to her "Iske koi jarurrat nahi hai veera". Nihaal felt very happy for veera's change in behaviour and gives a shyly smile (KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI).

All are seated in sofa . Preet tells heer and prem about RR's punishment. Just then phone rings. Lallu goes to pick the phone and is shocked to hear someone's voice and says in a begging manner "Aap aisa nahi kar sakthe hai, mere beti ki zindagi karaab ho jayegi". Prem and all the family members are shocked to hear Lallu talking with somone in the begging voice. Lallu puts the phone and tells everybody that phone call came from Vilas father. He said that he is cancelling the marriage and also says that he thinks we have betrayed him by keeping veera's love matter as a secret. All are shocked to hear this from lallu's mouth. Lallu sits hopelessly on sofa. Prem is crying.

Just then heer says we have to talk once to them and clear their misunderstandings. Prem thinks it is correct. Prem, heer and lallu are about to leave to talk with them . Preet and Harman says we will come with u but Prem says u both just take care of maa and veera. Saying this three of them leave.

In Vilas house
Prem and lallu are trying to convince them but vilas 's father is not in a mood to hear anything and finally declares that this marriage will not happen and we dont want to a bring a characterless girl to our house. By hearing this prem gets angry and catches his collar and says " meri beheen ke baare me aur eik shabd kaha tho main tumhe jaan se mar dalonga" .Heer controls him and puts her hands together and sits on the knees infront of Vilas's Father asks him to agree for their marriage and dont spoil a girl's life (our heer is tears queen she can do anything to keep the family members happy)

Lallu makes her get up and says to Vilas's father " abb tak mein chup raha kyunki yeh meri beti ki zindagi hai. Lekin abb meri beti tumare ghar ki bahu kabhi nahi hogi. jis ghar me log rishte ki maine nahi samajpathe us ghar me meri beti kabhi nahi ayegi". prem has a proudly look on his face.they all leave from there leaving Vilas and his father in a shock state.

In Juneja's Mansion
Lallu tells everyone what had happened in Vilas's house and declares Veera will never marry Vilas. He adds that he will bring another nice person to veera. But veera tells that she need sometime to forget all things. Lallu agrees and all move to their respective rooms.Just then Heer calls Prem and takes him to her room (Guesssssss OMG i am blushing). Prem comes to Heer's room and asks wat is the matter. then heer replies that his wound is bleeding and wants to dress up it again. she tells him to sit on the bed and brings First Aid and starts dressing up (yeh ladki shaadi se pehle mera prem kaa itna khayal rakthe hai tho , shaadi ke baad kitna khayal rakeghi. just imagine guys). Prem has lost in her eyes

Prem : main tumse ek baat poochu
Heer : haan prem poocho
Prem : Tum itne aachi kyon hoo heer?
Heer : yeh kaise sawal hai prem

Prem : sach heer main tumhe yeh sawaal us din se poochna chahtha hoon jis din tumne Daljeet chachi ko maaf kiya hai. kaha se..... kaha se aathi heer tumhe itne patience . tumne us chachi ko maaaf kiya, jisne hamesha tumare bora chaha. Tumse nowkoroon ki tarah bardaaf kiya. Veera ne kabhi bhi tumare batoon par yakeen nahi kiya lekin tum phir bhi veera ki zindagi barbaad hone se bachane ke liye aapne puri takat laga diya hai. (by saying this he catches heer face with his both hands and tears are rolling from his eyes) Bolo heer tum itne aache kyon hoon?

Heer : (wiping his tears with her hands) main yeh sab tumse sekha hai prem
Prem : (keeps a shocked face ) Kya? Mujse?

Heer : Haan prem.(this time she catches his face with her hands) yaad hai prem tumne mujhe kitne baar manmeet ki sachaye batane ki khoshish kiya hai, Lekin maine tum par yakeen nahi kiya hai. Phir bhi tumne himmat nahi hari. Tumne meri Zindagi karaab hone se bachane ke liye poori duniya se ladhe. Tumare Pyaar ke saamne yeh kuch bhi nahi hai prem. Voh sab hamare aapne hai prem aur aapno se kya dushmani . Main tumare aakhon me ek aasoon bhi nahi dehna chahthi hoon prem. chahe mujhe uskiliye kuch bhi karna padega main tayaar hoon prem. Main tumse bahut pyaar karte hoon prem.
By saying this she hugs prem and prem hugs her and consoles her

PRECAP : prem , heer, veera, preet, nihaal and ash in restaurant. "Tumhe mere saason mein " song from kismat konnection plays in the background. prem-heer, preet-ash dance on that song. Nihaal asks veera's hand for dancing.



Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
its awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good waitingggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
hey it was really nice..hmm atleast the real show is going down the drain..but u guys come with such beautiful FF's that the real show is almost invisible..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
my sis you are great i am so happy i cannot tell you i just log in to tell you i really convince the right girl i am happy for you great updated dear sis . 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
balle ballee....
tu kamaal kardiyaa yaar....really superbbbb....muahhhhh.....
ur deserve this tonss.....👏
waiting for ur next part to watch premeer aur preetash dance.....
thoda....aur romantic gaane ladadonaa....😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
wow awesome
do cont soon...
can't wait for update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: ranrags

hey it was really nice..hmm atleast the real show is going down the drain..but u guys come with such beautiful FF's that the real show is almost invisible..



thank q so much for ur wonderful comments
really u all make my day
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: silparavindar

balle ballee....

tu kamaal kardiyaa yaar....really superbbbb....muahhhhh.....
ur deserve this tonss.....👏
waiting for ur next part to watch premeer aur preetash dance.....
thoda....aur romantic gaane ladadonaa....😊



thanx a lot
i will update it so soon.
i thought prem heer are somewat shy type so this song best suits
u tell me wat song u want to see. i will surely put it
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: pisces26

my sis you are great i am so happy i cannot tell you i just log in to tell you i really convince the right girl i am happy for you great updated dear sis . 🤗



thanks di. really iam not in mood to continue but ur encouraement helped me a lot
thank q sooooooooooooooooo much
🥳
😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40


thankq sooooo much 😃

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