FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6)

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweta2005
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

i will update it by today afternoon
i hae just stuck with some work

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Anusha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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PART 4- PREMEER DANCE

Three days later

In Juneja's Mansion , all are trying to forget the incident which had happened recently to their sister. In this short time, Veera and Nihaal almost became friends. Veera is polite to all the family members. But she cannot mingle up with dheer because she has a feeling that Dheer is not a nice guy (i too have same feeling, i will throw him out so soon). All the family members have gathered in the hall except veera ,Harman and Meher. They both are busy in studying for a competitive exam.

Prem is still worried abt veera and expresses his worry infront of family members . Then Preet gives prem an idea of taking veera out for sometime. Heer feels it is right to make veera feel happy. Prem then tells today we all will go out for dinner to a restaurent .Preet and Ash agrees to it. Prem tells dont tell veera abt this matter, we will give her a surprise. Just then Gayathri comes and reminds that day-after-tommorow is Ganesh Chavithi. Every Year we make this pooja grand but this year... Preet cuts her and says that this year also we will celebrate it grand. Prem also assures her and tells that tommorrow we will start all the arrangements and hug his mom.

Veera arrives and they all go for prayer. Aarti is done. All have settled down on the dining table for breakfast. After breakfast Prem , preet, lallu leaves for office. Prem comes to heer and tells " veera kho dinner ke bare me kuch mat batana. main shaam jo jalde ghar avunga". . By saying this he gives a blushing smile to heer. Preet coughs ,prem and heer feels shy. Then Prem leaves for Hotel.

In The Evening

Prem, Preet and Lallu return home. Prem tells heer to get ready soon and also asks veera to get ready . Veera asks where, but Preet tells we are going out thatsall and no more questions. Veera goes to her room without arguing with preet as she knows Preet will not tell anything. Prem is wearing a black suit (he wore it on awards function, he looks damn cute in that). Prem, Preet and Nihaal are ready and waiting in the hall for the three beautiful ladies. (Prem had already asked Nihaal to come with them in the hotel itself.

Nihaal could not refuse his proposal and agrees). Veera enters first and Nihaal could not take off his eyes because she is looking beautiful in Black Anarkali. Prem enquires about Heer and Ash.Just then they both enter . Heer is wearing a Pink Anarkali . Ash is also wearing a nice outfit. They both are looking like Angels. Prem is totally lost in Heer's beauty. He could not take his eyes from her.Preet goes to Ash .

Preet: Pata hai aaj mujhe lag raha ki chaand aasmaan ko chood kar Darti par aagayi hai (Ash is blushing)
Ash : Tum saach kahe rahe hoo preet. (feeling happy)
Preet goes around ash and starts flirting her more . All the family members are watching them. Prem-Heer are blushing
Preet: Dil chatha hai ki tumhe abhi apne bahoon me leluu ( saying this he goes very closer to ash)
Ash : yeh tum kya kar rahe hoo preet. sab log dekh rahe hain hame
Preet : Mujhe logoon ki parvaah nahi hai , mein tho sirf apne chaand kho dekh raha hoon.
Preet comes so close to Ash as their noses are about to touch. Ash closes her eyes in fear.
Preet : A beautiful rose for my beautiful lady. I LOVE YOU

Ash is about to take it and forwards her hands. She is then shocked to see preet giving rose to Heer. Preet sits on his knees infront of Heer and gives a beautiful red rose to Heer inorder to make Ash angry. Prem and all the family members are shocked and bursts out into laughter. Ash is angry on Preet. Ash says "main tumhe nahi choodungi " and runs after preet to beat him. Veera also laughs whole heartedly by seeing Ash chasing preet. Preet stands behind prem and asks him to save him

. Prem says to Ash "chood dona ashlesha, maaf karde isse"
Ash : "yeh tum keh rahe ho prem . isne tumare samne heer ko propose kiya"
Prem : "aacha , too hum dono milkar isse marenge"

Preet is shocked and runs around hall. Veera cannot control her laugh. Heer is just blushing. Preet goes behind heer and asks her to save him. Ash and prem stand infront of heer. Heer slowly catches Preet's ear and makes him come front.

Heer : "maafi maango Ash se"
Preet : "lekin kyon"
Prem : "bhabhi ko flirt kartha hai, Yeh mere hone wale patni hai aur isse tum propose kar rahe hoon"
Preet : "propose ..... no maine isse propose kab kiya"
Ash : "tumne heer ko I LOVE YOU kaha"
Preet : " maine ......... shayad apne suna nahi main I LIKE YOU BHABHIIIII kaha hai"
Ash : tumne I LIKE YOU nahi kaha
Preet : Llekin maine kaha hai aap sab ne suna nahi . kyon bhabhi maine kaha na" (asking Heer to confirm)

Heer makes a stunned look and blushes. Ash and preet argument is over. Prem sees veera laughing after so many days and comes to veera and says "hamesha aise hai haste rehna" Veera says "aap sab loggon ka saath hai tho main hamesha aise hai rahunge bhaiyya" . By saying this she hugs Prem. Gayathri and all family members feel happy. Preet interupts and says we have to go now. All the six members leave .

In The Restaurent

Veera enters the restaurent and asks Preet " so this is the surprise , abt which u are talking"

Preet : " ya, we want to take you out for sometime to change your mood"

Veera feels happy . Prem asks the manager about the table which they have reserved. Manager shows them the table. The table is decorated with candles and flowers are spread on it. Veera thinks wat a pleasent place and they all take their respective seats. Then the manager comes on the dance floor and announces that all the couples who are interested may dance . Then the manager comes to Prem's table and ask the couples to dance. Prem shyly sees Heer's face who is blushing .

Preet : lets have a dance (pointing to Ash)
Ash : (she is still angry on Preet) i dont want to dance with you
Preet : (understood her intension) Its ur wish, I will dance with my Heer bhabhi
Ash : (Ash is fuming in anger) what?
Preet : (to Heer)May i have a dance with you?

He puts his hand forward . Heer is about to put her hand in Preet's hand. Prem quickly grabs her hand and says to Preet "Heer will dance with me" . Then Preet says " its ur wish".

Ash : " Preet " (Preet looks at Ash)
Ash : "Lets dance "
Preet : "u said that u will not dance with me" (he teases her)
Ash : "please preet i am sorry i want to dance with you"
Preet : "i have no mood to dance with u " (he smiles)

Ash pleads him and Preet finaaly agrees. Then the two couples stand up to go on the dance floor. Veera and Nihaal smiles at them . Preet insists Nihaal to dance with Veera. Nihaal and Veera stare at each other. Prem says to veera " Y dont u both come and join us". Veera replies " i have no mood to dance bro". Preet signs Nihaal to ask veera's hand for dance. Nihaal agrees and forwards his hand infront of veera and asks "would u like to dance with me ". Veera stares at Nihaal and smiles "yes". Prem and preet are happy . they all leave to the dance floor. then the song "Tumhi Meri Saason Mein" from KISMAT KONNECTION plays in background.

All the three couples are on the dance floor. Prem catches Heer's hand with one hand and places his other hand on heer's waist. then the song plays

Tumhi Meri Saason Mein..., Tumhi Jasbaathon Mein...
Tumhi Lamhaaton Mein..., Tumhi Din Raathon Mein...

Prem is completely lost in Heer's eyes. He feels that the whole world is in Heer's eyes. Heer is also completely lost in Prem's eyes. The other two couples are enjoying the dance.

Bakhuda Tumhi Ho, Har Jagah Tumhi Ho
Haan Mein Dekhoon Jahaan Jab Us Jagaah Tumhi Ho
Yeh Jahaan Tumhi Ho, Woh Jahaan Tumhi Ho
Is Zameen Se Falak Ke Darmiya Tumhi Ho
Tumhi Ho Beshubaa Tumhi Ho
Tumhi Ho Mujh Mein Haan Tumhi Ho..Tumhi Ho..Oooooo

Prem could not turn off his eyes from Heer, She is looking absolutely gorgoeus in Pink Anarkali. Prem has totally lost in heer's beauty. Heer is feeling shy to see directly into Prem's eyes. She shyly looking down . Nihaal is feeling something when dancing with Veera. He is feeling that he is on cloud NINE. He dont know what he is exactly feeling. Ash and Preet are in their own world.

Kaise Bathaayein Tumhe Aur Kis Tharaah Yeh Kithna Tumhe Hum Chaahathein Hai...
Saaye Bhi Tera Dekhe To Paas Jaake Us Mein Simat Hum Jaathe Hai...
Raastha Tumhi Ho Rehanmaan Tumhi Ho
Jiski Khwaish Hai Humko Woh Panha Tumhi Ho
Tumhi Ho Beshubaa Tumhi Ho...
Tumhi Ho Mujh Mein Haan Tumhi Ho...
[Bakhuda Tum Hi Ho Har Jagah Tum Hi Ho

Prem rotates Heer around with his hand . He brings Heer so close to him. Only one inch gap is there between them. Heer could not takeoff her eyes from Prem. Prem brings his face so close to Heer's face. Its looks like that they are about to kiss.

Tumhi Meri Saason Mein..., Tumhi Jasbaathon Mein...
Tumhi Lamhaaton Mein..., Tumhi Din Raathon Mein...

Kaise Bathaayein Tumhe Shab Mein Tumhare Khwab Haseen Jo Aathe Hai...
Kaise Bathaayein Tumhe Labz Woh Saare Jism Ko Jo Mehkaathe Hai...
Iftidaar Tumhi Ho, Inthehaan Tumhi Ho
Tumho Jeene Ka Maksadh Aur Wajaah Tumhi Ho

Now Prem rotates heer again. Heer's back is facing prem.His hands are now on Heer's stomach. Heer's one hand is in Prem's hair and other hand is on prem's hand. They are totaaly lost in their own world. Prem is enjoying each and every moment with Heer. Prem and Heer close their eyes and feeling like they are in Heaven. Preet , Ash, Nihaal and veera sees them and smiles by seeing them.

Bakhuda Tumhi Ho, Har Jagah Tumhi Ho
Haan Mein Dekhoon Jahaan Jab Us Jagaah Tumhi Ho
Yeh Jahaan Tumhi Ho, Woh Jahaan Tumhi Ho
Is Zameen Se Falak Ke Darmiya Tumhi Ho
Tumhi Ho Beshubaa Tumhi Ho...
Tumhi Ho Mujh Mein Haan Tumhi Ho..Tumhi Ho..Oooooo

Then the song comes to end. All are clapping. Prem and Heer are not in this world, They even could not hear the claps of the people. Preet sees them and goes to them and pats on Prem's shoulder . Prem and heer open their eyes and Prem looks at Preet . Preet shyly says " Gaana tho kabka katam hoo chuka hai bhaiyya". Prem and Heer feels shy and looks down. All are claaping for Prem-Heer excellent performance. All get down from the dance floor and slowly moves towards their table. All sit down in their respective seats. Preet says " i am hungry lets order something". Heer sweetly says Prem " Aap order kariye , main abhi aaye". Prem asks where. Heer says she will wash her hands. Prem says sweetly says "this time dont go anywhere without informing me" (i think u all have understood what prem wants to remind her). Heer replies ok and leaves from there. Heer is on the way to the washroom. A guy comes and stands infront of heer. Heer is shocked and feared to see him after a long time.

PRECAP : The guy talks some nonsense with Heer. Heer cries . He catches Heer's hand and try to misbehave with her. Someone comes and catches his hand . Heer stops crying and feels happy by seeing that person.
Guys guess who is that person???

HOPE U ALL ENJOYED IT. LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS

Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago

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Anusha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sweta2005
ok will be waitingggggggggggg

i have updated another part check it and leave ur comments

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tanya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

very nice its amazing do cont soon pls i cant wait now after thepreview

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Rani

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

That was really nice Anushka(hoping that it is ur name)..really nice try from brothers to cheer up Veera..and the scene at home and restaurant both were very good..now looking forward to what happens next!!

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Nadia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

very nice i think that person is PREM

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amana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

amazing update. loved the dance sequence

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swati

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part indeed waitinggggggggggg for next asap.

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silpa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#49

you rockdddd again with ur part dear....today preet teasing nature is simply superbbb...i imagined those all scenes...where preet proposed heer, ash anger face, when preet again asks heer for dance, prem holds her hand...🤣...really cute....and that person i hope he is manmeet(u said after long bak na)...that hand is i feel its prem/preets....

waiting for ur next update eagerlyyyyyyyyyyy

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Sheeba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#50

I just read the whole thing and its really good yaar............I thoroughly enjoed it..........great work and do continue soon waiting for the next part and yes it got to be Prem.................I'm sure.............😉😊

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