FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6)

First Previous

Page

107

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Riya

@Riya.pk

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Aw wow I loved it, it was amazing, ❤️
I just wished that the creatives had such awesome ideas like you, lol my most favorite part was "preet beats him"😃 hehe lol I'd lvoe to see that really happen eheh. Good job hun 👍🏼

Quote

Anusha

@-Anusha-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: riyapk
Aw wow I loved it, it was amazing, ❤️
I just wished that the creatives had such awesome ideas like you, lol my most favorite part was "preet beats him"😃 hehe lol I'd lvoe to see that really happen eheh. Good job hun 👍🏼

thank q
i too loved the scene when i was writing
i want to extend it more but i concentrated only on premeer
RR must be beaten by prem and preet

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Riya

@Riya.pk

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: anushka10

thank q
i too loved the scene when i was writing
i want to extend it more but i concentrated only on premeer
RR must be beaten by prem and preet

lol I agree 😊 he needs a good beating hehe
and keep writing hun you're doing a great job!

Quote

herakhan

@herakhan

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Awesomee!!.....srsly...u r toooo good!!..

i just hope this is what happens!!.....but, well, i rather not expect too much!!

Quote

Anusha

@-Anusha-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: herakhan
Awesomee!!.....srsly...u r toooo good!!..

i just hope this is what happens!!.....but, well, i rather not expect too much!!

thank q
i reaally hope something like this happens ,
hey dont feel we are not expecting too much
this is the thing for which we are waiting for long time
but creatives are ruining the show
we are right at our own places for expecting this from PREMEER

Quote

Anusha

@-Anusha-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: halima006
wow its great, 👏

thankq for ur comments
i have updated someinformation please check it and leave ur comments

Quote

Anusha

@-Anusha-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

PART 2 - HEER'S LOVE

Then prem slowly puts his hand on heer's face and kiss her on forehead making her feel comfort. Tears are coming out from her eyes . He kisses her both eyes with a lot of passion. . Then slowly move towards to her lips which he wanted to kiss them from long time. Then he fulfilled his desire of kissing those lips . There is a long passionate kiss of premeer. PREMEER FIRST KISS. They are lost in their own world .Coming out from their world , heer feels shy and bends her head down and hugs prem

Prem in return hugs heer by placing on hand around her waist and other hand on her head carenessing her hair for consoling her.

Prem takes a tear coming out from her eyes and says " TUM NAHI JAANTE HEER YEH AASOON MERE LIYE KITNA MAAINE RAKTHE HAIN. MAIN HAMESHA CHAHTHA THA KI TUMHE KOI TAKLEEF NA HOO. LEKIN AAJ.......... AAJ MAIN KHUD TUMARE AASOON KA KARAN BAN GAYA HOON. ISS GALTHI KE LIYE MAIN KHUD KHO KABHI MAAF NAHI KAR PAUNGA (heer holds prem face with both her hands trying to console him) . HOO SAKE THO MUJHE MAAF........"

Heer interupts prem inbetween with placing her hand on his lips and continues " MAIN KABHI NAHI CHAHTE PREM KI TUM MUJHE MAAFI MAANGOGE. USS GALTI KE LIYE JO TUMHNE KABHI KIYA HE NAHI. PYAAR ME MAAFI AUR THANK YOU KI KOI JAGAH NAHI HOTE HAI"

In the Hall

Preet is hardly beating RR for betraying his sister and insulting his lovely bhabhi. RR tries to beat him back , but Harman joins him and both beat him hardly. RR try to defend himself buts he falls on the floor . Blood is coming out from his head.

Preet again tries to beat him. But lallu interupts him by saying " ISKHO AUR MAARA THO YEH MAAR JAYAGA BETA. CHOOD DHO UNKHO. AUR ISKHO MAARKAR TUMHARE HAATH KYON GANDHE KAR RAHE HOO"

By saying this he stops preet and harman. preet calls RR driver and tells him to take away. driver follow preet instructions and takes RR away.

veera cries by sitting on the sofa and asks sorry to heer for not believing her. Gayathri consoles her. lallu tells preet to go upstairs and bring heer down. but gayathri interupts him by saying " prem is there to console her. let them come down by their own". after listening to gayathri words lallu thinks she is correct and sits hopelessly on sofa. all are tired and wait for prem and heer to come down

UPSTAIRS (premeer)

Prem : "i will promise you heer from onwards not even a single tear will come out from your beautiful eyes"
he then puts his hand (wound hand) on heer's hand . unknowingly heer presses his hand

prem : "oouch......"
heer : "kya hua"
prem : "kuch nahi "

heer then sees his hand which she pressed unknowingly was bleeding badly and blood is falling on the floor

Heer again starts crying by feeling prem's pain and says sorry for prem
prem says "u only said that in love there is no place for sorry and thank you and u are only breaking the rule". by saying this prem smiles a little bit to make heer feel better

Heer is not in a mood to respond to prem jokes and makes prem to sit on the bed and leaves from there to bring first aid box and a cloth to clean the wound. prem continuesly says " " its ok heer no need of any first aid. my hand is perfectly alright". heer comes and sits besides prem and sweetly takes prem's hand and cleans the wound with a wet cloth and puts a bandage on it.heer is crying while doing this things, prem sweetly sees her and just thinks how much she loves him and is lost in her beautiful eyes.

coming to the reality heer asks him how the wound happened on his hand. then prem remembers after knowing the truth he came upstairs to see heer and dont know what happened in this short period of time. then prem tells " WOO SAB MAIN TUMHE BAAD ME BATAUNGA AB THO HAMME NEECHE JANA PADEGA . WAHA SAB LOG HAMARA INTEZAAR KARTE HOONGE" . by saying this prem and heer come to the hall.

Prem is shocked to see all his family members are hopelessly sitting on the sofa crying. all of them notices both prem and heer coming down. Veera rushes to heer and touches heer feet with both her hands and asks for fogiveness. heer is shocked by her behaviour and moves backwards not letting veera to touch her feet. Prem has tears in his eyes by seeing veera crying.

Heer makes veera to stand up and takes her face in her hands and wipes her tears asking her not to cry.heer give a sweet hug to veera consoling her and says "TUM KYUN ROORAHI HOO VEERA . ROONA THO USSE CHAHIYE JISNE TUMARE SAATH ITNA GATIYA HARKATH KIYA HAI" saying this she hugs her tightly in arms as a caring and loving sister.

PRECAP: veera apolozises prem and prem hug veera to console her. Just then phone rings lallu lifts the phone and is shocked to hear something.

hope u all like it

Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago