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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: its me tan

muaah for your secen, its great, will think and write mine😃

i hope u like it and try to introduced romentic scene in funraiser as the producer and director of RA hate love
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
i ahev great love makinsg in mind only with aaryyan and oh well, will tell you later, right nwo i am busy with the contest
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

My scene: scene 1:

Aaryyan gently stroked Gauris hair as she looked up to him, with those large, deep and passionate eyes. She was gentle and sweet, sometimes she showed flashes of a strong woman and only then he remembered Bhairavi. But he has learnt to live with it. Bhairavi was in his heart, may be deep down there is always a space for her, but that's past, a painful past and he has put that behind. Gauri can help him heal the wounds; help him live a new life. So he said: yes I will marry you. Let's fix a date!"

He bent his head gently down; she lifted her eager lips up. …………………….

A happy Gauri runs off to give the village leaders the news that yes their Strong savior has agreed to stay here for ever, to be her, for ever.

Aaryyan was deeply reflecting. Even to this day, it's a big mystery for him. Why did Bhairavi do that to me, betraying him, leaving him to die like a hapless animal, and run into the arms of that one man, who wanted to finish him, destroy him in every possible way?

Yes and may be Ban was successful, he had destroyed his heart. No longer does Aaryyan feels any warmth when he helps others, its just a insipid duty to him. He felt it every time he wanted to respond to Gauri. He himself felt how he turned colder and colder whenever she became warmer and warmer.

Some day, someday, if he gets to see Bhairavi just once more in any lok of this ever puzzling tilisma, he will ask her this one question: why? Why Bhairavi? Why? Why ruin my life, my hopes, my expectations, and my duty to my countrymen? Why leave me here, in this tilismi world for ever? Why after vowing to be with me, by me you chose to betray me, demolishing all my hope, my life and my promise, why did you convert me into a failure like this?

This is just a beginning, I am also planning to post it as a full fledged FF, I will continue if you like.

So comments plz.

Edited by its me tan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
waho tan too good lovely scene but plsssssssssss dont make bhairvi vamp i love her character a lot and dont seprate aryan and bhairvi 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
are Bhairavi is the subject of circumstances, she is not a vamp 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: its me tan

are Bhairavi is the subject of circumstances, she is not a vamp 😉

u know i want them together
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
they will be 😉
ab time hai kahani main twist ka
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: its me tan

they will be 😉
ab time hai kahani main twist ka

luv u for that hehe cant wait to read romentic story of aaryaan and bhairvi😍

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