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Posted: 2 days ago
#11

Yay finally Maan and Geet ki entrysmiley42

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Posted: a day ago
#12

Interesting start.

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Posted: a day ago
#13

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter one

a hundred years have passed

but the mansion still stood unchanged

of cos the villagers still whisper about the curse

now the curse is determined to remind everyone about its presence

oh Riya Khurana died

who was she married to?

sad that the curse continue and another bride met her fate

Maan's thoughts were reasonable

glad that he determined to uncover the truth

Geet Handa is bold and confident

her anger with justified

as expected she decided to go meet Maan

Maan was clearly awake

he does want answers

Gosh she saw pointing towards the east wing and him

and then she vanished

his fears were justified

will he find Meera's diary?

Geet and Maan were fated to meet

will they put an end to the curse


Thanks a lot for your detailed comment on the chapter. Let’s see how the response of the story goes, will continue depending on it…as I am still working on it.
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Posted: a day ago
#14

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

Yay finally Maan and Geet ki entrysmiley42

Yes, finally entry ho gai…Thanks a lot for your reply.
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Posted: a day ago
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Thanks a lot.
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Posted: a day ago
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Posted: a day ago
#17

Chapter 1

Interesting Chapter

Geet Handa seems like a person full of life and yet someone

that does not like injustice

so seems like she will fight this corporate company

(maybe it's Maan Khurana's company)

so Maan has seen the ghost or the lady in black veil

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Posted: a day ago
#18

Will read chapter 2 soon

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Posted: a day ago
#19

Chapter 2

Curious Chapter

Geet must have been at the mansion or it could be that somehow

she truly dreamed about the Mansion and all the dead brides

while Maan is not a person whom will go after ghost stories but he too

had seen the veiled woman and now he wants to know about all the dying

Khurana brides

waiting now to see what will happen next especially to Geet

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Posted: a day ago
#20

Nice update. So Geet seems to be related with the past.

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