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Pyaar Ka Pehla Vachan...Ghar Jamai(The first vow of love...Resident son-in-law)Part 4

Palki requested Karan:Please dad...please tell mom to give me the consent to marry Shaurya.

Karan became upset.

Karan:Preeta...please agree for Shaurya and Palki's marriage.

Preeta:I will agree.But I have 2 demands.

Palki:What are the demands?

Karan:Just say and finish it off Preeta.

Preeta:It should be a simple wedding.And he should stay here as a ghar Jamai.

Palki and Karan were shocked.

Karan:What?Preeta:I meant what I said.

Preeta walked away.

Palki was in tears.

Palki:If Shaurya does'nt agree to mom's demands I will lose him.

Karan patted her shoulder to console her.




Palki told everything to Shaurya.

Shaurya:I have no family now.So I am willing to live in your house with your family.

Palki was surprised:Really Shaurya?

Shaurya:Yes.

Palki was so happy that she pecked his cheek.

Shaurya and Palki got married.

Preeta did their grah pravesh.

Preeta:Shaurya...if you don't satisfy me as a good ghar jamai,I will break this marriage.I will get Palki divorced from you.That's why I conducted a simple wedding though I am rich enough to conduct a grand wedding for my only daughter.

Shaurya and Palki became dull.

Shaurya:That will never happen Mother India.You can never separate us.

Preeta became dull.

Shaurya held Palki's hand and walked away.

Shaurya and Palki sat on the decorated bed.The room was decorated with flowers.

Palki was sad:I am really scared Shaurya.It's difficult to impress my mom.If my mom won't accept you,our marriage may break.I can't imagine it.Why are you calling my mom as Mother India.

Shaurya:I can't respect your mother who does not respect me.I don't care whether your mom will accept me or not.But I can't change my ways.You also accepted me after knowing me properly.Right?

Palki became dull.

Shaurya :But don't worry Palki.I will not let our marriage break.Your mom can do nothing.

Palki was relieved.



The next morning...

Preeta told Shaurya:Come for the puja.

Shaurya:But I don't believe in it.

Preeta:Whether you believe in it or not,when you stay here you will have to follow the rules of this house.If you can't follow the rules you will be evicted from this house.

Shaurya was irritated.

Palki:Shaurya...please just attend the puja for me.You just have to simply stand in the puja room.

Shaurya:Okay.

Shaurya entered the puja room with others without removing the slippers.

Karan's mother Rakhi said:Shaurya beta...what are you doing?You are entering the puja room without removing your sandals.

Don't wear slippers inside the puja room.Leave them outside.

Shaurya:Hey oldie...don't try to control me.I always wear sandals inside the house too.

Mahesh:How can you talk to her like this?

Shaurya:The old man has come to support his wife.

Mahesh:You don't know to respect elders.

Karan and Palki became sad.

Preeta:Shaurya...if you were not my son in law,I would have slapped you.

Shaurya:Good that I am not your son,but your son in law mother India.

Palki raised her voice to make Shaurya stop from arguing with Preeta:Shaurya!

But Shaurya did not look at her.

Preeta:You are ridiculing me by calling me mother India. But I don't care.Because I am proud to be known as an India and Mother India is one of my favorite movies.But again if you disrespect the elders of this house I will not hesitate even for a moment to slap you.

Shaurya was shocked.

Palki whispered:Shaurya...please for heaven sake don't talk to my grandparents like this.I love them and I don't want my husband to make them upset.And don't make my mom angry.She had slapped even the servants for not cooking properly for my grand parents and not treating them well.If you make her angry she might slap you too.

Shaurya imagined Preeta beating him with a cane and then slapping him.

He felt embarrassed.

Shaurya thought:If this lady's beating is so hard in the dream,how hard it will be in real life?

Shaurya:I am sorry dadi and dadaji.

Everyone smiled.

Rakhi:You understood your mistake.That's enough for us.

Shaurya was silent.

Preeta thought:A boy like Shaurya can't change easily.

Preeta said strictly:Shaurya...leave your sandals outsiders and come.

Shaurya left his sandals outside and entered the puja room.

He was bored of the bhajans.But he tolerated everything.



Shaurya was drinking beer.Preeta got angry seeing it.

Preeta:How dare you drink in our house?

Shaurya:Why not?

Preeta:In our family nobody drinks.This house is considered as pure.

Shaurya:What the hell!I can't even drink peacefully.

Preeta:You are talking as if I restricted you from drinking a soft drink.Alcohol is not good for your health.It can even change your behaviour. I saw you misbehaving with some people on the road after drinking.

Shaurya felt embarrassed.

Preeta:I don't want my daughter to have a drunkard husband.

Shaurya became dull.

Palki who overheard it came there and said:Shaurya is only an occasional drinker mom.He used to drink regularly earlier.But now doesn't do that.

Preeta:Even occasional drinking can make him an addict if he doesn't control it.

Preeta walked away.

Palki:Shaurya...did you start drinking again?

Shaurya:No Palki.After you advised me I stopped drinking and focused on my work.You also know that.

Palki:Yes.

Shaurya:I was simply drinking for fun now.

Palki:Don't do that Shaurya. It's against our rules.I don't want you to leave a bad impression on my family members.

Shaurya:Okay.. I am not drinking here.

Palki was relieved.

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 days ago
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Posted: 12 days ago
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Nice Chapter Shaurya Needs To Change His Ways Now His Married To Palki

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Posted: 11 days ago
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Shaurya calling Preeta as mother India was so funny. I remembered Raman who used to call Ishita as that. Shaurya is very disrespectful. Lol, Shaurya imagining Preeta beating him was so funny. Shaurya should stop drinking completely. Perfect pics. Waiting for next

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Posted: 11 days ago
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Thanks a lot.Even Prem used to call Prerna as Mother India in KZK.


Originally posted by: salley145

Shaurya calling Preeta as mother India was so funny. I remembered Raman who used to call Ishita as that. Shaurya is very disrespectful. Lol, Shaurya imagining Preeta beating him was so funny. Shaurya should stop drinking completely. Perfect pics. Waiting for next

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Part 4

Outstanding update.... finely written


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Pyaar Ka Pehla Vachan...Ghar Jamai(The first vow of love...Resident son-in-law)Part 5

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Shaurya was buying food from outside daily.Preeta objected it.

Preeta:Don't eat outside food daily.

Shaurya:Mother India,don't decide what I should eat.I love hotel food.

Preeta:But junk food is not healthy.You can eat at home and have fast food once in a while.You have to obey me when you are staying in my house.Otherwise you are free to leave this house.

Shaurya was really irritated.

Shaurya:I can't even eat what i like.

Preeta:You can tell us what you like.The food will be prepared here.

Shaurya:I don't want to trouble Palki by forcing her to cook.She has her job pressure too.

Preeta:There are good maids in our house.They will cook your favourite food.So that you don't need to eat from outside daily.

Shaurya thought:I will see how the food tastes.If I don't like it,I will disobey mother India and eat whatever I like from India.



Shaurya ate the food which the maids cooked for him.

Preeta:Jamai Raja...how is the food?

Surprisingly Shaurya replied with a smile:It's good.From now onwards I don't mind having home cooked food.

Preeta smiled.

Everyone else too smiled and Palki was relieved.

Palki thought:I am glad.If Shaurya hadn't liked the food he would have opposed mom and mom would have fought with him.Luckily that didn't happen.

Preeta told Shaurya:As you know tomorrow is Karwachauth.Palki is fasting for your long life.

You should also fast.

Shaurya was shocked:What?I can't fast.I can't starve.

Preeta:You don't want your wife to have a long life?

Shaurya:Of course yes.I want Palki to have a long life.But i don't believe that such rituals will increase anybody's life time.So I won't fast.

Preeta:Whether you believe it or not you have to fast.Because husbands fasting for their wives on karwachauth is our family tradition.

Shaurya got irritated.

Shaurya:This family is full of rituals and traditions.I am fed up.

Preeta:If you want to continue here as my daughter's husband you have to do it.

Shaurya:Palki will not leave me.So stop threatening me.

Preeta smirked.

Preeta:If I do emotional blackmailing she will choose me over you.

Shaurya became dull.

Preeta went away with a smirk on her face.

Shaurya thought:Shaurya.. you can fast.Just think that you are dieting.





Palki:I am so excited about my first karwachauth.

Shaurya:Why?You don't need to fast for me Palki.I don't believe in such superstitions.

Palki became dull.

Palki:But I want to fast for your long life Shaurya.

Shaurya:Palki...you appeared to be a brat like me before marriage.But now you are behaving like a TV serial heroine.

Palki:Because dadi and Mom advised me to change and be a good dutiful wife after marriage.

Shaurya:But I like that brat Palki.

Palki:I am still a brat inside.

They both giggled.




The Karwachauth night...

Karan broke Preeta's karwachauth vrat by feeding her.Preeta too broke his vrat by feeding him.

Palki viewed Shaurya's face through the sieve.

Shaurya fed her water and morsel.

Shaurya:Palki.. please feed me fast.I am dying out of hunger.

Palki was surprised:You fasted for me?

Shaurya nodded.

Palki:I am so lucky to have such a loving husband.

Palki embraced him.

Shaurya thought:Good that sasuma forced me to take vrat. Because of that I could make Palki happy.That's enough for me.

Palki fed him food.Shaurya was very happy.





Preeta told Shaurya:I want to go to my office.The driver didn't come today.So drop me there before you go to the office.

Shaurya nodded with irritation.

Shaurya:But don't treat me like your driver.I am not your driver.

Preeta was silent.

Shaurya walked away.

Karan asked Preeta:Preeta....why did you lie that the driver didn't come today?He had come.But you sent him away purposefully so that you can make Shaurya your driver.What's the need of making him your driver today?

Preeta:Because I want to teach him to help elders by doing small things for them.

Karan smiled.




Preeta got inside Shaurya's car.

Shaurya was driving it fast.

Preeta was feeling discomfort.

Preeta:Drive slowly.

Shaurya:Mother India...I drive like this always.

Preeta:Fast driving maybe enjoyed by the youth like you.But when there are elders in your car you should make sure that they are comfortable with your driving.Elderly people are not comfortable with fast driving.And accidents also occur.

Shaurya:Please stop giving me lecture.

Shaurya increased the speed purposefully to irritate Preeta.

Preeta:Shaurya.. please stop it.

Shaurya smirked.

But suddenly Shaurya noticed a car coming that way.He could not change the direction of his car fast as the speed was high.But somehow in a second he changed the direction and the car hit the tree.

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All mothers are mostly like Preeta. So Preeta is an emotional blackmailer too? Lol. Palki is a brat because she is Nidhi’s biological daughter. The Karwachauth scene was lovely. Slowly Shaurya is realising that whatever Preeta does is good. Shaurya didn't get good values because of Nidhi and if Preeta does that, it's fine, she's his biological mother after all without both of them knowing. Sadly the car hit the tree because of Shaurya's carelessness. Perfect pics, waiting for next.

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

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Pyaar Ka Pehla Vachan...Ghar Jamai(The first vow of love...Resident son-in-law)Part 5

The credit for the edits goes to the unknown editors.

Shaurya was buying food from outside daily.Preeta objected it.

Preeta:Don't eat outside food daily.

Shaurya:Mother India,don't decide what I should eat.I love hotel food.

Preeta:But junk food is not healthy.You can eat at home and have fast food once in a while.You have to obey me when you are staying in my house.Otherwise you are free to leave this house.

Shaurya was really irritated.

Shaurya:I can't even eat what i like.

Preeta:You can tell us what you like.The food will be prepared here.

Shaurya:I don't want to trouble Palki by forcing her to cook.She has her job pressure too.

Preeta:There are good maids in our house.They will cook your favourite food.So that you don't need to eat from outside daily.

Shaurya thought:I will see how the food tastes.If I don't like it,I will disobey mother India and eat whatever I like from India.



Shaurya ate the food which the maids cooked for him.

Preeta:Jamai Raja...how is the food?

Surprisingly Shaurya replied with a smile:It's good.From now onwards I don't mind having home cooked food.

Preeta smiled.

Everyone else too smiled and Palki was relieved.

Palki thought:I am glad.If Shaurya hadn't liked the food he would have opposed mom and mom would have fought with him.Luckily that didn't happen.

Preeta told Shaurya:As you know tomorrow is Karwachauth.Palki is fasting for your long life.

You should also fast.

Shaurya was shocked:What?I can't fast.I can't starve.

Preeta:You don't want your wife to have a long life?

Shaurya:Of course yes.I want Palki to have a long life.But i don't believe that such rituals will increase anybody's life time.So I won't fast.

Preeta:Whether you believe it or not you have to fast.Because husbands fasting for their wives on karwachauth is our family tradition.

Shaurya got irritated.

Shaurya:This family is full of rituals and traditions.I am fed up.

Preeta:If you want to continue here as my daughter's husband you have to do it.

Shaurya:Palki will not leave me.So stop threatening me.

Preeta smirked.

Preeta:If I do emotional blackmailing she will choose me over you.

Shaurya became dull.

Preeta went away with a smirk on her face.

Shaurya thought:Shaurya.. you can fast.Just think that you are dieting.





Palki:I am so excited about my first karwachauth.

Shaurya:Why?You don't need to fast for me Palki.I don't believe in such superstitions.

Palki became dull.

Palki:But I want to fast for your long life Shaurya.

Shaurya:Palki...you appeared to be a brat like me before marriage.But now you are behaving like a TV serial heroine.

Palki:Because dadi and Mom advised me to change and be a good dutiful wife after marriage.

Shaurya:But I like that brat Palki.

Palki:I am still a brat inside.

They both giggled.




The Karwachauth night...

Karan broke Preeta's karwachauth vrat by feeding her.Preeta too broke his vrat by feeding him.

Palki viewed Shaurya's face through the sieve.

Shaurya fed her water and morsel.

Shaurya:Palki.. please feed me fast.I am dying out of hunger.

Palki was surprised:You fasted for me?

Shaurya nodded.

Palki:I am so lucky to have such a loving husband.

Palki embraced him.

Shaurya thought:Good that sasuma forced me to take vrat. Because of that I could make Palki happy.That's enough for me.

Palki fed him food.Shaurya was very happy.





Preeta told Shaurya:I want to go to my office.The driver didn't come today.So drop me there before you go to the office.

Shaurya nodded with irritation.

Shaurya:But don't treat me like your driver.I am not your driver.

Preeta was silent.

Shaurya walked away.

Karan asked Preeta:Preeta....why did you lie that the driver didn't come today?He had come.But you sent him away purposefully so that you can make Shaurya your driver.What's the need of making him your driver today?

Preeta:Because I want to teach him to help elders by doing small things for them.

Karan smiled.




Preeta got inside Shaurya's car.

Shaurya was driving it fast.

Preeta was feeling discomfort.

Preeta:Drive slowly.

Shaurya:Mother India...I drive like this always.

Preeta:Fast driving maybe enjoyed by the youth like you.But when there are elders in your car you should make sure that they are comfortable with your driving.Elderly people are not comfortable with fast driving.And accidents also occur.

Shaurya:Please stop giving me lecture.

Shaurya increased the speed purposefully to irritate Preeta.

Preeta:Shaurya.. please stop it.

Shaurya smirked.

But suddenly Shaurya noticed a car coming that way.He could not change the direction of his car fast as the speed was high.But somehow in a second he changed the direction and the car hit the tree.

Good Preeta Needs To Treat Shaurya Like This So He Changes Himself

Liked That He Fasted For Palki

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