Fanboy:Shaurya Preeta Karan Palki SS - Page 4

Wow So Shaurya Is Preeta 's Sister Son

And Her Nephew

That's Why His Attached To Her

What Happened To Preeta 's Sister?

She Died?

Fanboy Part 8

The credit for the edits goes to the unknown editors.

Past....

One day Prithvi came again and tried to molest Paakhi.To escape from him,Paakhi stabbed him.He fell down dead.Shaurya got scared.Paakhi saw him and went hear him.

Paakhi:Shaurya beta...don't be scared.I just killed someone.It is a game.

Suddenly Paakhi started laughing in an abnormal way.Shaurya got scared.

Paakhi was behaving like that as she lost her mental balance due to the sudden shock caused by molestation and murder.

(In Part 2,when Preeta and Shaurya went to the restaurant...

One boy asked:Can I touch you?

Suddenly Shaurya remembered some incident from the past and he got mentally disturbed.

Friends....When that boy tried to touch Preeta,Shaurya got reminded of Prithvi trying to molest Paakhi and that's why he got mentally disturbed).

Present...(Flash back).

Preeta cried:My sister suffered this much.

Rajveer:Yes.Paakhi was not sent to the jail as it was for self defense that she killed Prithvi.But she had become completely mad and violent.So she was sent to the mental asylum.Shaurya was taken to the orphanage.He missed his mother every moment.He was not told that his mother was in the mental asylum.He came to see you on TV with a surprise.You had sung the remix version of the song Maine Paayal Hai Chhankayi you and Paakhi sang during teenage days.Right?Hearing that song,Shaurya felt that you are his lost mother he was searching since childhood.He thought that Paakhi changed her name to Preeta to hide your identity and escape from the police as she murdered someone in his childhood.But he did'nt want to reveal that he is your son and ruin your image of an unmarried lady.That's why he decided to contact you as your most sincere fan.He was obsessed with you as he wanted all the motherly love he missed through out his life.He does'nt want you to marry Karan Luthra,because he thinks that when you get settled down in his life,you will ignore him completely and he will lose his mother again.

(In chapter1 Preeta had sung the remix version of the song Maine paayal for Shaurya as per his request).

Karan:Preeta...you remember that Shaurya told you that he wants to lie down on your lap and listen to your song?That time itself I had a doubt whether Shaurya is considering you as a mother and not as his lover.That's why I enquired about his background.

Preeta became emotional.

Preeta:When a fanboy wanted to touch me,Shaurya felt that he was trying to touch me in a dirty way,That's because he thought that like Prithvi tried to molest Paakhi,that boy will molest me also.He must have thought that his mother was going to get molested again.So like you said,Shaurya was trying to protect me.I misunderstood Shaurya so much.I tortured him so much.Not even once he said that he is my son.

Rajveer:Shaurya lost his mother once.Now again if he loses his mother,he may commit suicide.He himself told me that he will kill himself.

Preeta was shocked:No!

Karan:Don't be scared Preeta.Before that we will unite him with his real mother.

Preeta:My Paakhi...where is she now?

Rajveer:She was in the mental asylum till recent times.Recently she got cured.But nobody was there to collect her from there as she is all alone.So they put her in an old age home.

Preeta became upset:She is not alone.I am there for her.Now she will unite with her son also.

Preeta met Paakhi in the old age home.Paakhi could not believe her eyes.

Paakhi:Preeta!

Preeta:Paakhi!

They hugged each other tearfully.

Preeta:I am sorry that I was not there with you during your bad times.

Paakhi was silent.

Preeta:Your son....

Paakhi burst into tears:I don't even know where he is.

Preeta:But I know.

Paakhi was surprised:You know where he is?

Preeta:Yes.

Preeta told her everything.Paakhi was shocked.

Preeta:I am sorry Paakhi for misunderstanding Shaurya and hurting him.I really did'nt know anything.

Paakhi:Preeta...I want my son back.

Paakhi was crying.

Preeta and Karan took Paakhi to the prison.

Present....

Shaurya tried to shoot himself. Suddenly Paakhi came and slapped him hard.

Thus the gun fell down.

“How dare you try to kill yourself?You have no right to kill yourself.Only God has that right to do”.

Shaurya looked at that person.

His eyes became wet.

Shaurya:Preetaji!

Paakhi:I am not your Preetaji.Don't call me 'Preetaji'.I am your mother Paakhi.

Shaurya smiled emotionally.

Shaurya:I knew that you were my Paakhi Maa.That's why I was after you.Atlast you recognized your son.

Paakhi:Like you think Preeta is not your mother.She is your maasi;my twin sister.

Preeta,Karan and Rajveer came from behind.Shaurya could not believe his eyes seeing Preeta near Paakhi.

Paakhi:Shaurya beta...this is your maasi Preeta.I am your Paakhi Maa.

Shaurya looked at Paakhi emotionally.

Paakhi caressed his face emotionally.Shaurya got reminded of his childhood moments with Paakhi.

Shaurya:Maa!

Paakhi remembered little Shaurya calling her 'Maa'.

Her eyes became wet.

Paakhi:Shaurya!Why did you try to end your life beta?

Shaurya shed tears.

Shaurya:I am sorry Maa.I thought I lost you again.That's why I tried to .....

Paakhi:Please don't repeat it beta.I want you beta.

Shaurya:I promise that I will not do that again.Now I have you with me.Then why should I do that?

Paakhi became so emotional that she hugged him.

Karan and Preeta smiled seeing the mother son reunion.

Shaurya looked at Karan and Preeta.

Shaurya:Preeta Maasi...I mistook you for Maa and troubled you a lot.Please forgive me.Karanji...I am really sorry for threatening you.

Preeta:I should apologize to you.I troubled my nephew a lot.You can't be blamed for considering me as your mother.And Maasi is like mother.So I am also your mother.

They hugged each other.

Karan smiled emotionally.

Shaurya lay on Paakhi's lap.Paakhi sang lullaby for him.

Shaurya:Maa...I really longed for this moment.

(Reference to Part5:

Shaurya:When did I tell you that you are my lover?You are a goddess in my heart.My love for you is not lust like you think.I worship you.I want to lie down on your lap and listen to your songs.I don't want Karan Luthra to get that chance.It's only my right.)

Paakhi held him closer and said:Now I will give you all the love you deserve.

Shaurya became emotional.

Palki who reached there was stunned to see them closer.She became dull.

Shaurya smiled seeing her:Palki!

Palki:Shaurya...you came back from the prison and you did'nt inform me.

Shaurya:Sorry Palki.When I got my mother back I forgot everything else.

Palki was surprised:You got your mother?

Shaurya held Paakhi's hand holding her closer.

Shaurya:She is my mother.

Palki was shocked.

Palki:Preetaji is your mother?

Shaurya:She is not Preetaji.She is my mother Paakhi.

Palki was confused:What?

Shaurya told her everything,Palki was relieved and happy.

Palki thought:Oh no...Shaurya considered Preetaji as his mother.But I misunderstood their relationship.

Palki:I am so happy for you Shaurya.

Shaurya:Maa...this is my only friend Palki.

Paakhi:Thank you so much Palki for being with my Shaurya when he was alone.

Palki smiled.She touched Paakhi's feet and Paakhi blessed her making her happy.

Like Shaurya wished Paakhi fed him food like she used to do in childhood.

Karan and Preeta danced at the Sangeet function.

Mann yeh saahib ji
Jaane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji
Dekhe hain sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare
Mann yeh saahib ji haan karta bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ishaare
(na samjhe ishaare)

Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere, bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere, laage re Saibo

Surkhhiyaan hain hawaaon mein
Do dilon ke milne ki
Ho.. arziyaan hain nazaaron mein
Lamha yeh tham jaane ki

O kaisi huzoori ji yeh lab dikhlaaye
Chuppi laga ke bhi ghazab hai yeh dhaaye
Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere, bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere, laage re Saibo

Saibo… Saibo…
Dheere Dheere… Dheere Dheere…(Shor in the city).

Karan-Preeta got married.

They had a romantic night.

Palki visited Shaurya.His face blossomed seeing Shaurya.Palki's face also bloomed seeing Shaurya.They smiled at each other romantically.

Pee loon tere neelay neelay nainon se shabnam
Pee loon tere geelay geelay hoto ki sargam
Pee loon hai peenay ka mausam

Tere sang ishq taari hai
Tere sang ik khumari hai
Tere sang chain bhi mu jh ko
Tere sang bekraari hai

Shaurya:I really missed you Palki.

Palki felt happy hearing it.

Palki:Me too Shaurya.

Shaurya:You also missed me?

Palki:Yes.

Tere bin jee nahi lagda, tere bin jee nahi sakda
Tujhpe hai haare maine vaare do jahan,
kurbaan, meharbaan, ke main toh kurbaan
Sun le zara, tera kurbaan

Hosh mein rahun kyun aaj main
Tu meri baahon mein simti hai,
Mujh mein samayi hai yun
Jis tarah ki koi ho nadi,
Tu mere seenay mein chupti hai
sagar tumhara main hoon

They smiled at each other.

Pee loon teri dheemi dheemi lehron ki cham cham
Pee loon teri saundi saundi saanson ko har dum
Pee loon hai peenay ka mausam

Tere sang ishq taari hai
Tere sang ik khumari hai
Tere sang chain bhi mujhko
Tere sang bekraari hai

Palki:But why did you miss me Shaurya?

Shaurya:I feel like seeing you always.

Palki blushed.

Shaam ko milun jo main tujhe
Toh bura subah na jaane kyun
Kuch maan jaati hai yeh

Har lamha, har ghadi har pehar
Hi teri yaadon se tadpa
ke mujhko jalati hai yeh

Palki:Why?

Shaurya was silent.

Palki:Shaurya...I always considered you more than a friend.

Pee loon main dheere dheere jalne ka yeh gumm
Pee loon inn gore gore haanthon se hum dum
Pee loon hai peenay ka mausam

Shaurya:I know that Palki.

Palki was stunned:You knew it?

Shaurya:Yes.But I ignored it as love had no place in my life.I just wanted my mother back.But now I have my mother.I have peace of mind and happiness.So love has taken place in my heart.I realized that I also love you Palki.

Palki became very happy.

Tere sang ishq taari hai
Tere sang ik khumari hai
Tere sang chain bhi mujhko
Tere sang bekraari hai

Palki and Shaurya shared a romantic eye lock.

Tere bin jee nahi lagda, tere bin jee nahi sakda
Tujhpe hai haare maine vaare do jahan,
kurbaan, meharbaan, ke main toh kurbaan
Sun le zara, tera kurbaan(Once upon a time in Mumbai).

Paakhi,Karan and Preeta who were watching them secretly smiled.

Karan:We should get them married.What say Preeta and Paakhi?

Shaurya and Palki got embarrassed realizing that they were watching them.

Paakhi:Yes sure.Very soon we will get them married.

Shaurya and Palki became shy.

Shaurya and Palki got married with Paakhi and Preeta's blessings.

After some years...

Karan-Preeta are living happily with their twin daughters Anika and Kanika.

Shaurya is living happily with Paakhi,Palki and their daughter Shalki.

The end

Thank you everyone for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,favourite jodi,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

Last Part

Wonderful update.... splendidly written

great end

My Favorite Scene Was Scene Was The Last Scene With Shaurya And His Paakhi

And Karan And Preeta Marriage

And Shaurya And Palki 's Wedding

Nice Happy Ending

Part 1

Preeta being a singer is surprising. Preeran's aquarium and beach scenes are cute. Karan and Preeta's conversation about her special fan was nice. I am surprised that Shaurya sends her gifts every festival. Preeta and Shaurya's meeting was interesting as Shaurya exclaimed. Surprising that Preeta invited Shaurya to her house. Palki warning Shaurya was very realistic. Preeta singing Shaurya's favorite song is very nice. Shocking that Preeta fainted.

Part 2

Glad that Preeta just had a low BP. Shaurya taking care of Preeta was very nice. So Preeta is a middle aged woman. Glad that Karan is not behaving like other boyfriends who get insecure of other men talking to his girlfriend but he genuinely feels to thank him. Looks like Palki is in love with Shaurya but his attention is always on Preeta. Hope he understand her love for her. I am shocked that during fan interactions, a guy asked to touch her and Shaurya got violent remembering some incident. I wonder what is the incident. Shaurya looks very obsessed. Glad that Preeta handled the situation well and stopped him. Preeta is very kind.

Part 3

Nice episode. Shaurya is very much obsessed with Preeta that Preeta started finding him as nuisance. I am shocked that Shaurya gave her a painting of a heart where he used his blood as color. It's very creepy. Sad that Palki is heartbroken because of Shaurya's ignorant feelings towards her. Preeta dealt with Shaurya very gracefully in the dance event and also in the another event where she kept police to block Shaurya. Surprising that Shaurya even said that he won't stop following her even if she complained him to the police. Glad that Preeta had filed a complaint. Surprised to see Rajveer here as the ACP.

Part 4

Surprising that Shaurya didn't reveal his identity to anyone. So Palki and Shaurya started talking only because Shaurya was saved by Palki. He is very strange. Surprising that he even have accounts in various banks. Shocking that Shaurya played the game well by arranging a bail beforehand and it made Rajveer shocked. Shaurya is slowly turning a nightmare for Preeta. Poor girl even wanted to leave her career to escape from Shaurya. Glad that Karan stood for her, supported her and made her understand her not to end her career. So the marriage will happen.

Part 5

Karan's comeback is nice. Preeta is finally happy. Though Shaurya's love is very platonic, he doesn't like Preeta being close with Karan. Palki still has hope. I am surprised that Karan found Shaurya's threatening words are indicating something different. So he wants to check on his background. Glad that Preeta filed a complaint on Shaurya for threatening Karan. Good that Rajveer had arrested Shaurya.

Part 6

I am surprised that Shaurya earned money from gambling. Shocking that people used him in his childhood days and got him into the world of gambling. Palki is such a nice girl who came to see even in his bad days. So, Shaurya is angry with Karan because he feels that if Preeta gets married, she will avoid him. But even now also she is only avoiding him. Preeta vented all her anger on him which fuelled Shaurya to end his own life. Glad that Preeta stopped it and slapped him hard.

Part 7

It's shocking that Shaurya is Preeta's nephew. Shocking that Preeta had a twin sister name Paakhi who is her look-alike and also a singer like her. Sad that Paakhi's father passed away after Paakhi ran away with Anshuman. Due to this, Preeta too lost her faith in love. Its' very tragic that Anshuman passed away in an accident. Shaurya's childhood was very traumatic as he had to witness his mother's struggles against Prithvi. Shocking that Paakhi stabbed Prithvi.

Part 8

Glad that the court didn't arrest Paakhi considering the self defense aspect. Shocking that Paakhi lost her mental balance due to the molestation and murder. Sad that Shaurya is separated from Paakhi. Shaurya's story is very sad and tragic. Glad that Karan did the right thing by investigating the background remembering the sentences. Poor Shaurya was misunderstood for his intentions towards Preeta though he considered her as his mother, which I expected to happen. Glad that Paakhi is alive and Preeta meeting her is very emotional. Glad that Paakhi united with Shaurya. Good that Shaurya reciprocated his feelings with Palki. Good to see Shaurya leading a happy life with his mom along with Preeran.

Favorite character - Karan because if he didn't investigate Shaurya's background, Shaurya must've killed himself out of despair.

Favorite couple - Preeran

Favorite scenes - Paakhi and Anshuman's past, Paakhi reunion with Shaurya, Paakhi and Preeta's reunion, Preeta and Karan's conversations and how Karan calms nervous Preeta

Low BP is very dangerous.It can lead to death.

Thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: Sshesha

Part 1

Preeta being a singer is surprising. Preeran's aquarium and beach scenes are cute. Karan and Preeta's conversation about her special fan was nice. I am surprised that Shaurya sends her gifts every festival. Preeta and Shaurya's meeting was interesting as Shaurya exclaimed. Surprising that Preeta invited Shaurya to her house. Palki warning Shaurya was very realistic. Preeta singing Shaurya's favorite song is very nice. Shocking that Preeta fainted.

Part 2

Glad that Preeta just had a low BP. Shaurya taking care of Preeta was very nice. So Preeta is a middle aged woman. Glad that Karan is not behaving like other boyfriends who get insecure of other men talking to his girlfriend but he genuinely feels to thank him. Looks like Palki is in love with Shaurya but his attention is always on Preeta. Hope he understand her love for her. I am shocked that during fan interactions, a guy asked to touch her and Shaurya got violent remembering some incident. I wonder what is the incident. Shaurya looks very obsessed. Glad that Preeta handled the situation well and stopped him. Preeta is very kind.

Part 3

Nice episode. Shaurya is very much obsessed with Preeta that Preeta started finding him as nuisance. I am shocked that Shaurya gave her a painting of a heart where he used his blood as color. It's very creepy. Sad that Palki is heartbroken because of Shaurya's ignorant feelings towards her. Preeta dealt with Shaurya very gracefully in the dance event and also in the another event where she kept police to block Shaurya. Surprising that Shaurya even said that he won't stop following her even if she complained him to the police. Glad that Preeta had filed a complaint. Surprised to see Rajveer here as the ACP.

After reading part 3 and 4, i am doubting on every cjaracter

Will read part 5 soon but Karan seems a bit fishy!