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Fanboy Part 5

Palki went near Shaurya.

Palki:What is this Shaurya?Your craze for Preeta Arora has crossed all the limits.

Shaurya:What I have for Preetaji is not a craze which a mad fan has for his idol.What I feel for her is pure love,it's platonic.

Palki became emotional hearing the word 'platonic'.

Palki:But now the police considers you as a stalker.They even tried to arrest you.So stop all this Shaurya.There should be a limit for adoring a celebrity.Otherwise you will land up in problems.

Shaurya smiled:But nothing happened to me Palki.I am safe.I am standing in front of you.The police cannot even touch me.

Palki became dull.

Palki:Shaurya,you are not trying to understand what I am saying.

Shaurya:Relax Palki.I am safe and that's what matters the most.Right?

Giving her a smile,Shaurya walked away.



Karan returned to India.Preeta and Karan were very happy to each other after a break.

Preeta:I can't tell you how happy I am to see you Karan.

Karan:Me too Preeta.

Karan held her closer romantically.

They went for a party and danced together.

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Mujhko itna bataye koi
Kaise tujhse dil na lagaye koi

Rabba ne tujhko banane mein
Kardi hai husn ki khaali tijoriyan
Kajal ki siyahi se likhi
Hai tune jaane
Kitno ki love storiyan

Kesariya tera ishq hai piya
Rang jaaun jo main hath lagaun
Din beete saara teri fikr mein
Rain saari teri khair manaun
Kesariya tera ishq hai piya
Rang jaaun jo main hath lagaun
Din beete saara teri fikr mein
Rain saari teri khair manaun



Patjhad ke mausam mein bhi
Rangi chanaron jaisi
Jhanke sannnaton mein tu
Veena ke taaron jaisi
Hmm, sadiyon se bhi lambi yeh
Mann ki amavasein hain
Aur tu phuljhadiyon wale tyoharon jaisi

Chanda bhi deewana hai tera
Jalti hai tujhse
Saari chhakoriyan
Kajal ki siyahi se likhi
Hai tune jaane
Kitno ki love storiyan

Kesariya tera ishq hai piya
Rang jaaun jo main hath lagaun
Din beete saara teri fikr mein
Rain saari teri khair manaun
Kesariya tera ishq hai piya
Rang jaaun jo main hath lagaun
Din beete saara teri fikr mein
Rain saari teri khair manaun

Kesariya tera ishq hai piya
Ishq hai piya
Kesariya tera ishq hai piya
Ishq hai piya
Piya ishq hai piya
Ishq hai piya
Kesariya tera ishq hai piya
Rang jaaun jo main hath lagaun
(Ishq hai piya, Ishq hai piya)
(Ishq hai piya, Ishq hai piya)
(Ishq hai piya, Ishq hai piya)(
Brahmāstra).

Shaurya who was stalking Preeta, saw her with Karan and got angry.

Shaurya went near Karan and Preeta.Preeta was boiling with anger seeing Shaurya.

Preeta:He is that Shaurya.

Karan looked at him in shock.

Shaurya remembered seeing Preeta and Karan's engagement photograph in the internet.

(The credit for the edit goes to the unknown editor).

Shaurya:You are Preetaji's fiance Karan Luthra.Right?

Karan nodded.

Shaurya:Just stay away from Preetaji.

Preeta and Karan were shocked by his threatening tone.

Karan:Why are you talking like this to me?

Shaurya:Because you are stealing Preetaji from me.I don't want to share Preetaji with you.I don't like Preetaji spending time with anyone other than me.

Preeta and Karan were shocked.

Preeta:You are disgusting Shaurya. I am not your lover.I am a middle aged woman.Yoy should not forget that.

Shaurya:When did I tell you that you are my lover?You are a goddess in my heart.My love for you is not lust like you think.I worship you.I want to lie down on your lap and listen to your songs.I don't want Karan Luthra to get that chance.It's only my right.

Preeta passed a sarcastic smile and said:O really?Not even in your dreams it will happen.

Shaurya walked away angrily.

Preeta:This guy is mad.

Karan was disturbed by his dialogues.

He thought:His each and every dialogue has a deep meaning.He is really mysterious. His background has to be checked.

Preeta was very angry.

Preeta:How dare that Shaurya threaten you to stay away from me?You file a complaint against him Karan.

Karan:What is the need of it Preeta?He did'nt attack me.He just said some nonsense.

Preeta:Don't take it lightly Karan.If you can't do it,I will complain against Shaurya.I want him inside the jail.I can't tolerate him anymore.

Karan became dull.

(Please ignore his bandage in the picture)

Karan met Rajveer.

Karan:Did you do Shaurya's background checking?

Rajveer:Our investigation is going on.

Karan:Good.I am also with you in that mission.My full support will there with you all.

Rajveer:Thank you Mr.Karan Luthra.

Karan smiled.

The same time Preeta reached there.Karan was stunned to see her.Preeta was also surprised to see Karan.

Preeta:Karan...

Karan:I came here to tell ACP Rajveer to enquire about Shaurya's family background.

Preeta:What is the need of knowing his history?

Karan:Because I find every word of his mysterious.

Preeta:But I consider him as a nightmare.So I came here to file a complaint against him.

Preeta looked at Rajveer:Shaurya threatened Karan to stay away from me.I fear whether he will try to stop our wedding.So I want him to be in the prison atleast till our wedding gets over.

Rajveer was stunned.

Karan:Preeta.. is that needed?

Preeta:Yes Karan.Why are you so hesitant even after Shaurya's misbehaviour?

Karan:Because I feel that his behaviour is not that of a typical mad fan's.There is something more into it.Some other reason is making Shaurya come behind you.That's why I want to know his background.

Preeta:You do whatever you want Karan.But I want Shaurya to be arrested this time.

Rajveer:We will arrest him Preetaji.I also feel that Shaurya can be dangerous enough to cause havoc at the wedding.So it's better to arrest him.

Karan became dull.




Rajveer arrested Shaurya forcefully.

Shaurya:You can't take me with you.

Rajveer:Who are you to say that?

Rajveer pushed him to the police jeep.



The police station....

Rajveer asked Shaurya:Who are you?Tell me about your parents. Who are your parents?




Edited by jasminerahul - 1 months ago
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Part 5

Gripping update.... finely written


update soon

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Posted: 1 months ago
#23

Are Preeta And Karan Shaurya 's Parents??

No Right??

Iam Curious To Find Out Who Shaurya 's Parents Are

Update Soon

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Posted: 1 months ago
#24

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Fanboy Part 6

The police station....

Rajveer:Who are you?Tell me about your parents. Who are your parents?

Shaurya:You know that I am Shaurya.I don't have parents.

Rajveer was shocked.

Rajveer:How come you are so rich?What's your profession?

Shaurya:Gambling.

Rajveer was shocked.

Rajveer:How did you get into gambling?

Shaurya:Since I was an orphan I was used by some people for gambling.Nobody was there to guide me too.So at a very young age I got into gambling.

Shaurya:Later gambling became a passion.I got addicted to it and continued doing it.I made a lot of money too.

Rajveer:Did you threaten Mr.Karan Luthra to stay away from Preetaji?How dare you threaten him?Are you planning to stop their wedding?

Shaurya:I have no intention to stop their wedding.Let Preetaji live happily with Karan Luthra.But she should give equal attention to me also.If she ignores me to be with Karan I won't tolerate it.I will kill him.

Rajveer lost his control and beat him.

Rajveer:You will kill Karan Luthra?How dare you?And why should Preetaji give you equal attention?What relationship does you have with her?You are just a silly fan of hers.But Mr.Karan Luthra is her life partner.Shamelesly you want to be treated the same way Mr.Karan Luthra is treated by Preetaji?Are you not ashamed to lust a woman who is double your age?

Shaurya:You are looking at us with your dirty eyes.That's why you see only lust in my eyes for Preetaji.What I have for Preetaji is pure love.I worship her.

Rajveer:Idiot!

Rajveer pushed him inside the prison cell and locked it.

Rajveer:This is the best place for you.

Shaurya was irritated.

Shaurya:Let me go.

Rajveer:You should never even look at Preetaji.

Shaurya:That's impossible. Without seeing her I can't live.If I lose her, I will die.I will end myself.

Rajveer was shocked.

Rajveer thought:This guy has suicide tendency also?




Preeta told Karan happily:I am so happy Karan that finally Shaurya is arrested.He won't be there to disturb us at all.

Karan became dull.

Karan thought:Why do I feel that something is not right here?

Palki visited Shaurya in the prison.She was very upset.

Palki:Shaurya,I told you not to go behind Preeta Arora. But you were over confident that you will never get arrested by the police.But see what happened.You should have listened to me Shaurya.I find it hard to see you in pain.

Shaurya:Palki...staying in the jail is not a pain for me.So you don't have to worry about me.I don't mind staying here.So I don't regret going after Preetaji.Shaurya is incomplete without Preetaji.

Palki was shocked.

Palki:Still you are not willing to correct yourself.

Shaurya:If I have not done any mistake why should I correct myself?

Palki:Why don't you understand your mistakes Shaurya?

Shaurya:Palki...this place is not good for a girl like you.So you better leave fast.

Palki became sad.

Palki:But Shaurya...

Shaurya held her hand and said:Please obey me Palki.Please leave.The more you stay here the more pain I will have.

Palki nodded painfully and left from there tearfully.

Preeta came to see Shaurya.

Shaurya was excited to see her.

Shaurya:Preetaji...I am so happy that you came here.I knew that you will come here to see me.Because you also love me like I love you.Right?

Preeta got angry:Love?My foot!I don't love you.Infact I hate you.

Shaurya was shattered.

Shaurya:Please don't say like that Preetaji.Even if the whole world hates me I am alright with me.But if you hate me,I can't bear that pain.I will die.

Preeta:Then you die and go to hell.Then also I won't love you.

Shaurya felt upset.

Shaurya:I won't believe it.If you don't love me,why did you come here to see me?

Preeta:I came here to see you,not because I love you.I came here to see you suffer in the jail.It gives me pleasure.You just rot in the jail.

Shaurya was heart broken.

Preeta smirked and walked away.Shaurya started crying.



When the constable entered the cell,Shaurya asked him:Did Preeta Arora get married?

Constable:Maybe.How does it matter to you?

Shaurya got depressed.

Shaurya:She got married.She will only Karan Luthra.She won’t love me at all.

Shaurya got so frustrated that she snatched the gun from the constable’s pocket.

The constable got shocked.

He said angrily:Give me the gun back.

Shaurya:I won’t give it to you.

Constable:Are you going to murder us?Your plan won’t succeed.

Shaurya:I have no intention to murder anyone.But I will murder myself.

The constable was shocked.

Shaurya:I had a loveless childhood.When I saw Preetaji,I felt that finally I will get the love I craved for.But Preetaji does’nt want me.She does not love me.Now I have become an orphan again.Now why should I live?I don’t want to live.

Shaurya started weeping.The constable got scared.

Shaurya pointed the gun at his own head.

Constable:Hey…don’t do that.

He tried to snatch the gun from Shaurya.

Shaurya shouted:Stay away from me.

Shaurya tried to shoot himself.Suddenly somebody came and slapped him hard.

Thus the gun fell down.

“How dare you try to kill yourself?You have no right to kill yourself.Only God has that right to do”.

Shaurya looked at that person.

His eyes became wet.

Shaurya:Preetaji!


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Posted: 1 months ago
#25

Ok Preeta Is Behaving Weird Here

First She Tells Shaurya To Die And She Doesn't Love Him

Because His A Fan

Now She Slapped Him When He Tried To Kill Himself

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Part 6

Dynamic update... eloquently written


update soon

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Posted: 1 months ago
#28

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GOLDIEABROL

khwaishfan


Thank u very much for the lovely comments.



Fanboy Part 7

When the constable entered the cell,Shaurya asked him:Did Preeta Arora get married?

Constable:Maybe.How does it matter to you?

Shaurya got depressed.

Shaurya:She got married.She will only love Karan Luthra.She won’t love me at all.

Shaurya got so frustrated that he snatched the gun from the constable’s pocket.

The constable got shocked.

He said angrily:Give me the gun back.

Shaurya:I won’t give it to you.

Constable:Are you going to murder us?Your plan won’t succeed.

Shaurya:I have no intention to murder anyone.But I will murder myself.

The constable was shocked.

Shaurya:I had a loveless childhood.When I saw Preetaji,I felt that finally I will get the love I craved for.But Preetaji does’nt want me.She does not love me.Now I have become an orphan again.Now why should I live?I don’t want to live.

Shaurya started weeping.The constable got scared.

Shaurya pointed the gun at his own head.

Constable:Hey…don’t do that.

He tried to snatch the gun from Shaurya.

Shaurya shouted:Stay away from me.

Shaurya tried to shoot himself. Suddenly somebody came and slapped him hard.

Thus the gun fell down.

“How dare you try to kill yourself?You have no right to kill yourself.Only God has that right to do”.

Shaurya looked at that person.

His eyes became wet.

Shaurya:Preetaji!

“I am not your Preetaji.Don't call me 'Preetaji'”.



Flash back…

Karan went near Preeta.

Karan:Preeta,I did check Shaurya’s background.ACP Rajveer helped me.

Preeta:Every psycho will have a back story behind becoming a psycho.Shaurya will also be having such a back story.But I am not interested to know it.

Preeta smiled:I am relieved after a long time as that psycho Shaurya is suffering in the prison.

Karan became dull.

Karan:But you should listen to Shaurya’s back story.

Preeta:Karan,I told you that I am not interested in it.

Karan:Ok fine.But do you remember why you are doing late marriage?

Preeta looked at him emotionally.

Preeta:You know everything Karan.Then why are you reminding me of it?

Karan:Because your past is related to Shaurya.

Preeta was stunned:How?I was very close to my twin sister Paakhi.Paakhi and I learnt music together.Music was our passion.

Preeta remembered she and Paakhi singing and dancing together.


Flash back...

Tune Payal Jo Chhankai
Phir Kyun Aaya Na Harjai
O Ho Ho O Ho O Ho Ho O Ho

Tune Payal Jo Chhankai
Phir Kyun Aaya Na Harjai
O Ho Ho O Ho O Ho Ho O Ho

Maine.
Maine Payal Hai Chhankai
Ab To Aaja Tu Harjai
Maine Payal Hai Chhankai
Ab To Aaja Tu Harjai






Meri Saanson Mein Tu Hai Basa
O Sajna Aaja Na Ab Tarsa
O Sajna Aaja Na Ab Tarsa

Maine Payal Hai Chhankai
Ab To Aaja Tu Harjai
Meri Saanson Mein Tu Hai Basa
O Sajna Aaja Na Ab Tarsa
O Sajna Aaja Na Ab Tarsa

Chale Jab Yeh Purvaayi
Baje Dil Mein Shehnayi
Tu Hi Mere Sapnon Ka
O Sajna Aa

Chale Jab Yeh Purvaayi
Baje Dil Mein Shehnayi
Tu Hi Mere Sapnon Ka
O Sajna Aa

Maine
Maine Chunri Hai Lehraayi
Ab To Aaja Tu Harjai
Meri Saanson Mein Tu Hai Basa
O Sajna Aaja Na Ab Tarsa
O Sajna Aaja Na Ab Tarsa

Tune Chunri Jo Lehraayi
Phir Kyun Aaya Na Harjai
O Ho Ho O Ho O Ho Ho O Ho

Tune Chunri Jo Lehraayi
Phir Kyun Aaya Na Harjai
O Ho Ho O Ho O Ho Ho O Ho

Main Din Bhar Soch Mein Duboon
Main Raat Mein Jaag Mein Soyun
Tu Hi Dil Mein Rehta Hai
O Sajna Aa

Main Din Bhar Soch Mein Duboon
Main Raat Mein Jaag Mein Soyun
Tu Hi Dil Mein Rehta Hai
O Sajna Aa

Maine
Maine Choodi Hai Khankayi




Ab To Aaja Tu Harjai
Meri Saanson Mein Tu Hai Basa
O Sajna Aaja Na Ab Tarsa
O Sajna Aaja Na Ab Tarsa

Tune Choodi Jo Khankayi
Phir Kyu Aaya Na Harjai
O Ho Ho O Ho O Ho Ho O Ho

Tune Payal Jo Chhankai


Phir Kyun Aaya Na Harjai
O Ho Ho O Ho O Ho Ho O Ho

Tune Chunri Jo Lehraayi
Phir Kyun Aaya Na Harjai
O Ho Ho O Ho O Ho Ho O Ho(Falguni Pathak music album).


Present...(Past)

Preeta:But Paakhi fell in love with Anshuman.Our father opposed their relationship as Anshuman belonged to a poor family.But Paakhi chose to elope with Anshuman.She left our place itself.Our father disowned her.After that she never returned to us fearing our father.But our family’s reputation got ruined because of Paakhi’s decision to elope.So my father had heart attack and he passed away.I became alone.Paakhi’s love destroyed everything.Thus I lost my faith in love and decided not to fall in love and get married.But in late 40’s when I met you,I fell in love.You made me believe in love and I decided to get married to you.

Karan looked at her emotionally.

Preeta:But how is Shaurya related to my past?

Karan:After Paakhi eloped with Anshuman,you don’t know what happened to them.

Past…

Anshuman and Paakhi had a simple temple wedding.

Present…

Karan:They got married and had a son.They named him Shaurya.

Preeta was shocked:What?

Karan:Yes.Shaurya is Anshuman and Paakhi’s son.He is your nephew.

Preeta became emotional:What?Shaurya is my nephew?I am his Maasi?

Karan:Yes Preeta.

Preeta:But Shaurya told me that he is a orphan.Where are Paakhi and Anshuman?What happened to them?

Preeta became tensed.

Rajveer came there.

Rajveer:I will narrate you the rest of the story.

Preeta looked at him.

Rajveer:Anshuman died in an accident.

Preeta was shocked.

Past…

Anshuman and Paakhi were living happily with their son Shaurya.

Then came their wedding anniversary.

Anshuman caressed Paakhi’s face romantically and said:Paakhi…we got married in a hurry.We did’nt have a grand wedding,On our wedding anniversary I want to marry you properly.

Paakhi blushed.

Paakhi:Me too Anshuman.I could not dress up like a bride on our wedding.I want to dress up as your bride.

Anshuman smiled.

Anshuman and Paakhi had a nice wedding.For the first time they both dressed like a bride groom and a bride.

Shaurya was very happy to witness his parents’ wedding.

After that Anshuman went for a meeting.On the way he met with an accident and died on the spot.

Paakhi cried bitterly seeing Anshuman’s lifeless body.

She embraced his body while crying.

Paakhi started taking music classes for the kids for daily wages.

Paakhi was singing.

Tune Payal Jo Chhankai
Phir Kyun Aaya Na Harjai
O Ho Ho O Ho O Ho Ho O Ho

Tune Payal Jo Chhankai
Phir Kyun Aaya Na Harjai
O Ho Ho O Ho O Ho Ho O Ho
(Falguni Pathak music album).


Shaurya:Maa,this is my favourite song.

Paakhi smiled:This was the song which my sister and I used to sing together.This was my sister’s favourite song too.

Shaurya smiled.


Present...(Flash back)

Rajveer:But there was a man named Prithvi who was a student's father.He tried to misbehave with Paakhi


Past....

Paakhi slapped Prithvi.

Paakhi:Are you not ashamed to behave like this?What will your wife and son think about you if they come to know the truth?

Prithvi walked away silently in embarrassment.Shaurya watched it painfully.


Shaurya was mentally disturbed after that incident.Paakhi went near him.

Paakhi:What happened Shaurya beta?

Shaurya:Maa,is that uncle bad?Why did you slap him?

Paakhi became dull.

Paakhi held him closer and said:Beta...small children should not interfere in the matters of elders.So you don't think of it and worry.You just focus on your studies.When you grow up you will understand everything.

Shaurya nodded.


But one day Prithvi came again and tried to molest Paakhi.To escape from him,Paakhi stabbed him.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 months ago
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Posted: 1 months ago
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Beautiful update dear 🙂

Just loved it 🤗

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Part 7

Majestic update.... eloquently written


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