Fanboy:Shaurya Preeta Karan Palki SS - Page 2

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Posted: 2 months ago
#11

It's not that she does not mind it.She feels that she could have handled him politely instead of violence.

Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

This Preeta is getting weirder and weirder. How can a woman not mind being touched by a man!!!

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Posted: 2 months ago
#12

Silverbell

Heavenlybliss

GOLDIEABROL

khwaishfan


Thank u very much for the lovely comments



Fanboy Part 3

Preeta started avoiding Shaurya's calls.

Shaurya was frustrated.

When Karan called Preeta,she told him everything.Karan was shocked.

Karan:But you should not have ignored his calls Preeta.You should have listened to what he wants to say.

Preeta:I realized that Shaurya is dangerous.I really got scared seeing his violent face Karan. I don't want to keep any contact with him.He spoiled my peace of mind.

Karan:Preeta.. you are right on your place.But I can't blame Shaurya here.Even I did not like that boy wanting to touch you.

Preeta:But he didn't touch me Karan. I would not have let him touch me.

Karan:I know.But I don't like any fan of yours even wanting to touch you.Shaurya actually protected you from him.He just lost his control.So forgive him Preeta.

Preeta:Okay.But I want to keep a distance with Shaurya.

Karan:That's your wish.But end everything on a good note.

Preeta:Yes.

Shaurya kept ringing up Preeta.Preeta picked up the call.

Shaurya:Thank God Preetaji... you picked up my call.I was really sad.

Preeta:Shaurya...I really couldn't digest what happened at the restaurant.

Shaurya:I know Preetaji.I am really ashamed of my behaviour. But please don't hate me.I can't bear it.

Preeta:I don't hate you Shaurya.

Shaurya was relieved.

Shaurya:Thank you very much.I am going back to my hometown.Before that I want to meet you.Please...

Preeta:Okay...we will meet.

Shaurya became very happy.

Shaurya:I can't tell you how happy I am Preetaji.

Preeta smiled slightly.



Shaurya's apartment...

Palki got really angry with Shaurya.

Palki:You are always visiting Preeta.But you are not spending time with me.

Shaurya:Why are you complaining as if you are my possessive girlfriend?

Palki felt sad.

Palki:I am not your girl friend.But I am your friend.But who is Preeta for you?

Shaurya:She is my everything.

Palki was shattered.

Palki:You dont even know her properly.Still you say that Preeta is everything for you.Are you mad?

Shaurya:Whatever I know about Preetaji is enough for me to love her.Yes...I am mad for her.

Palki was heart broken.Shaurya walked to the bathroom to take shower.

Palki entered his bedroom.He saw Preeta's wall papers stuck all over the wall.

Palki thought:Preeta is a middle aged lady.Then why Shaurya is loving her?

Palki burst into tears and ran out.



Preeta was singing and dancing for a stage show.


Dil ye bechain ve, raste pe nain ve
Dil ye bechain ve, raste pe nain ve
Zindari behaal hai, sur hai na taal hai
Aajaa saanvariyaa, aa, aa, aa, aa
Taal se taal milaa, ho taal se taal milaa

Saavan ne aaj to mujh ko bhigo diyaa
Haay meri laaj ne, mujh ko dubo diyaa
Saavan ne aaj to mujh ko bhigo diyaa
Haay meri laaj ne, mujh ko dubo diyaa
Aisi lagi chadhi sochun mai ye khadi
Kuchh main ne kho diyaa,
Kyaa main ne kho diyaa
Chup kyo hai bol tu, sag mere dol tu
Meri chaal se chaal milaa,
Taal se taal milaa
O, taal se taal milaa


To her shock Shaurya joined her on the stage by singing and dancing.But Preeta just smiled.


Maanaa ajaan hai tu mere vaaste
Maanaa ajaan hun main tere vaaste
Maanaa ajaan hai tu mere vaaste
Maanaa ajaan hun main tere vaaste
Mai tujh ko jaan lun, tu mujh ko jaan le
Aa dil ke paas aa, is dil ke raaste
Jo teraa haal hai, vo meraa haal hai
Is haal se haal milaa,
O taal se taal milaa
O, taal se taal milaa

Preeta continued singing and dancing ignoring Shaurya.


Dil ye bechain ve, raste pe nain ve
Jindari behaal hai, soor hai na taal hai
Aajaa saanvariyaa, aa, aa, aa
Taal se taal milaa, ho taal se taal milaa
Taal se taal milaa, ho taal se taal milaa
Taal se taal milaa, ho taal se taal milaa.(Taal)


After the show got over Shaurya gave her a paper.

Shaurya:This is my small painting Preetaji.I made this specially for you.

Preeta smiled:Thank you.

Shaurya:Bye!

Preeta:Bye!

After Shaurya left,Preeta looked at the painting.

It was the picture of a heart.She sensed strange smell from the painting.Suddenly she realized one thing with a shock.

Preeta:It's blood.He made this heart with his blood.


Preeta told this to Karan. Karan was shocked.

Preeta:I can't tolerate this anymore Karan.I can't tolerate Shaurya anymore.

Karan:I understand Preeta.But you are reacting as if he killed someone.He is just a crazy fan who used his own blood to make a heart..I mean a painting for you.Many crazy fans write letters with their blood.Right?

Preeta:Yes.But I don't encourage such fans.They are obsessed psychos.

Karan:Like that you discourage Shaurya too.

Preeta:Okay.I will do as you say.

Preeta rang up Shaurya and asked:What nonsense is this Shaurya?You harmed yourself to make a heart's painting for me?Are you mad?

Shaurya:I am mad for you Preetaji.I just hinted that I can even shed my own blood to protect you.The painting which I made with my blood does not have any other meaning.

Preeta became dull.

Preeta:I don't like it Shaurya.Don't harm yourself.

Shaurya:But I like it Preetaji.I can kill myself for you.

Preeta got irritated.

Preeta:Stop it Shaurya.Don't try to be my bodyguard.Don't even come near me again.

She cut the call.After that she never picked up Shaurya's call.Shaurya became upset.



Preeta went out with her bodyguards.Shaurya came there.

Shaurya:Preetaji!

Preeta turned off her face.

Preeta:I told you that I don't want to see your face.

Shaurya became dull.

Shaurya:Preetaji..don't say like that.To see you only I came back from my home town.

Preeta got irritated:Get lost.

Shaurya was not going away from Preeta.

Shaurya:Please Preetaji...

Preeta's bodyguards became so angry that they pushed him.Still Shaurya went after Preeta.So the bodyguards started hitting him.

Shaurya cried:Please Preetaji...tell your bodyguards not to hit me.I feel pain.

Preeta felt sad.

Preeta:Please stop hitting him.

They stopped hitting him.

Shaurya:Thank you Preetaji for saving me from them.You have a big heart.

Preeta's heart pricked.

Preeta got inside the car with her bodyguards and left the place.


Preeta arranged police cops to stand at the gate of the place where she was going to perform as she did'nt want Shaurya to attend her show.

When Shaurya came to watch her show,the police cops did'nt allow him to get inside.They hit and sent him away.

Preeta who was applying make up for her show got a call.

She looked at the number.

Preeta:Whose number is this?

She picked up the call.

Preeta:Hello!

"It's me... Shaurya".

Preeta was shocked.

Preeta:But the number....

Shaurya:I called from a different number as I knew that if you knew that it was my call,you would cut it.

Preeta:What do you want now?

Shaurya:The police is not allowing me to attend your show.Please tell them not to do it.I feel restless without seeing you.

Preeta said with a smirk:I only told them not to allow you to come inside.Because you are a nuisance to me.If you feel restless without seeing me,you look at my pictures on google.Don't disturb me.

She blocked the number.Shaurya was shattered.He was going crazy.


After that incident also Preeta was followed by Shaurya.

Preeta got angry:I told you not to come after me.Why are you coming after me again and again?

Shaurya:Sorry Preetaji.I can never stop coming after you.Because I can't stay without seeing you.

Preeta was shocked.

Preeta:You can't understand my request or order. Then I will complain to the police.

Shaurya:Even if you complain to the police,I can't stop following you Preetaji.

Preeta got irritated.

Preeta:I will show you what I can do.

Preeta walked away angrily.



Preeta informed Karan:I have decided to complain to the police Karan.I am fed up of Shaurya.

Karan:If you find Shaurya a nuisance,you do as you wish Preeta.

Preeta:Thank you for the support Karan.

Karan:I will always support you Preeta.

Preeta smiled.



Preeta went to the police station.

The inspector:ACP Rajveer here.

Preeta:I am Preeta Arora.

Rajveer smiled:Who doesn't know you Preetaji?I love your songs.I am your great fan.

Preeta:Thank you.I have come here with a complaint.I want to file a complaint against Shaurya Bajaj.

Rajveer:Who is he?What's the matter?

Preeta explained everything to him.

Rajveer:You don't worry Preetaji. There are many psychos who trouble celebrities like this.Our department has handled many of such fans.We will handle him too.We will arrest Shaurya.

Preeta:Thank you so much.

Rajveer smiled.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#13

reserved for part 3 comment

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Posted: 2 months ago
#14


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Posted: 2 months ago
#15

Part 3

Intense update... finely written

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 2 months ago
#16

I Knew It Shaurya Became Crazy For Preeta

But Palki Likes Him

So He Should Be With Her Not Preeta

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Posted: 1 months ago
#17

Silverbell

GOLDIEABROL

khwaishfan


Thank u very much for the lovely comments



Fanboy Part 4

Rajveer enquired about Shaurya and realized that Palki is Shaurya's neighbour and friend.

Rajveer met Palki.

Rajveer:People have seen you with Shaurya.Other than that they have no idea about Shaurya.They say that he does'nt even talk to anyone else other than you.Why?

Palki:Who are you to ask me that?

Rajveer showed his ID card to her:ACP Rajveer Tandon.

Palki became nervous.

Palki:Sorry Sir.

Rajveer:It's okay.Tell me why Shaurya is close only to you?

Palki:Long ago Shaurya met with an accident.I only took him to the hospital.After that Shaurya started talking to me.

Rajveer:Who are you exactly to Shaurya?Lover?

Palki:I am just his friend.Nothing else.

Rajveer:Did Shaurya tell anything about his native place,his family and relatives?

Palki:No.Whenever i ask him that he avoids answering it.He says that he has no family.So he doesnt want to talk about his home town.

Rajveer:This guy is so mysterious.

Palki:Why Sir?Why are you asking me about Shaurya?

Rajveer:Will talk to you later.

Rajveer just walked away.Palki became dull.



When Shaurya returned Palki questioned to him:What's happening in your life Shaurya?Why is the Police after you?

Shaurya:Police is after me?What are you saying Palki?

Palki:Police had come here and asked me about you.

Shaurya was shocked. Palki told him everything.

Shaurya thought:Guess Preetaji filed a complaint against me.

Palki:Tell me Shaurya. What's the matter?I feel scared.What is the problem?

Shaurya:All I can say is there is nothing to worry Palki.You go home and rest.Bye!

Shaurya walked away leaving Palki in tension.



Rajveer met Preeta.

Rajveer:What job Shaurya is doing?Did he tell you that?

Preeta:He told me that he is a business man.

Rajveer:I enquired about Shaurya.According to the information I got Shaurya has no job.He doesn't have a proper address too.He keeps changing his residence.One year back only he came to Mumbai.He has no friends or relatives here except his neighbour Palki.Palki has no idea about Shaurya's background.

Preeta:Such crazy people have no proper address or job.They are wanderers.

Rajveer:But another shocking thing is that he is a very rich person.He has many accounts in various banks.I doubt whether he is making money through smuggling.He can be a big invisible criminal.

Preeta was shocked:What?

Rajveer:Yes.Anyways be careful.You don't have to worry much.Because we will arrest him soon.

Preeta was relieved.



Rajveer went to arrest Shaurya with the police constables.

Rajveer:You are under arrest for stalking the famous singer Preeta Arora.

Suddenly somebody come from behind.

He:I am Shaurya's lawyer.Shaurya already got bail.These are his bail papers.

He gave him some papers.Rajveer was shocked.

Rajveer:How is it possible?

Shaurya smirked.

Shaurya:Just like that.It's not easy to catch me ACP Sir.

Rajveer got irritated.

Shaurya said in his mind:Thankfully Palki told me about ACP Rajveer enquiring about me.That time itself I expected an arrest warrant for me.That's why I applied for bail immediately.

Preeta got angry knowing that Shaurya didn't get arrested.

Preeta:I was promised that Shaurya will be arrested.But nobody could arrest him.

Rajveer felt embarrassed.

Rajveer:Sorry Preetaji.

Preeta:I don't want any 'sorry'.I want Shaurya's arrest.

Rajveer:Very soon I will find a solution Preetaji.

Preeta:Then find it soon.



Preeta got a phone call from Shaurya.Preeta picked up the phone.

Shaurya:After a long time you attended my call.Did you miss me?

Preeta:I picked up the call to tell you not to feel victorious just because you didn't get arrested.

Shaurya just smiled.

Preeta:We will put an end to your madness.

Shaurya:My madness for you will never end Preetaji.

Preeta got irritated.

Preeta:Disgusting.

She cut the call.



Preeta told everything to Karan.

Karan:Relax Preeta.Shaurya will not win always.You will get justice.

Preeta:I am fed up Karan.I just want to escape from Shaurya.Please come back soon.

Karan:But my project is not over yet.

Preeta:Take 2 weeks leave and come here.Let us get married.Don't for the project to get over to marry me.

Karan was surprised:What?

Preeta:I am serious Karan.After marriage take me with you to London.That's the only way to escape from Shaurya.

Karan was shocked:Then your career?

Preeta:I don't care about my career now.All I want is to escape from Shaurya.

Karan:But I don't want to end your flourishing career.You are the nightingale of our country.The whole country will cry if you stop singing.You can't ruin your career just because of a horrible fan.

Preeta:But Karan...I am fed up of living here.

Karan:Don't worry.I will come there soon.

We will get married soon.We will find a solution to end Shaurya's chapter instead of leaving your career and go to London.

Preeta was relieved though she was still mentally disturbed.


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Posted: 1 months ago
#18

Part 4

Dynamic update.... excellently written

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 1 months ago
#19

Hopefully Shaurya 's Madness For Preeta Will End Soon

And Karan Will Get To Married Preeta

ACP Rajveer Will Arrest Shaurya

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Posted: 1 months ago
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