FunFiction -- Exchange Offer -- Baby ke badle Pati Update pg2

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Trigger warning - This post maybe offensive for AbhiMaan/Abhira/Chuhi fans. Be wary!!

Please note -- I wrote this before Chuhi dreamt about it... DKP mujhe recognition chahiye ab!!

So, I really don't know how many of you have seen a movie called Judaai? How about Chori Chori Chupke Chupke?

This one is going to be Khichdi of all time ..

Since no one really care about this show or about the track this is just lousy and lame writing without lot of detailing like typical Fanfic should have...

The due date was almost near for Chuhi... She called in Abhira to inform her that she cannot deliver her baby. Abhira is left confused as she looks on and begs her to not do that to her...

Chuhi wipes her tears, and tells her that she has been lost and lonely now for months! But all she and her nalla husband cared was for her baby, but who will look after her once this kiddo is out of her tummy? AbhiMaan will just leave her and go...

Abhira asks her to trust her but she brings back her old same rona of how her mother was responsible for her miserable childhood ... Abhira asks her if she can do anything to make her feel comfortable and less lonely.

Loha garam tha, Abhira desperate thi aur Chuhi lusty thi as she smirked and asked, if she can give her Armaan. If only she can get Armaan, Abhira can not only get one child, but two of them - Daksh and Pukey!!! She confirms that she cannot handle her own child, heck they don't even have doctor's number and everything was basically always handled by Armaan and Abhira... So, she would just have Armaan for herself and not have any kabab mein haddis...

Abhira is shocked and does not how to react. She does feel how she was always mistreated without child and she desperately needs baby of her own and also how she took in Daksh as her own BSP. She recalls all her moments with Baby Daksh and handling Pukey wala tummy... She realises how desperately she wants her own baby, and also if she can get Daksh, it will be cherry.... Armaan, uske saath jitna enjoy karna tha kar liya and face the truth iske baad toh woh khud usse baby kabhi nai arrange karwa pata... But she was unable to deny staying by him was her maa ka aakhri sapna... But what about her sapna of having her own blood wala baby?

Abhira jots out of her shock, stands up, wipes her tears and replies......

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It can either go Judai way :

So, let's set a scenario, in Judai, we had Sridevi's character (Kajal) desperately wanting money and rich lifestyle but she ended up marrying useless engineer, Anil Kapoor's character (ML, jiska naam mein bhul gayi), who absolutely couldn't provide her with anything, except two kids. A woman, Urmila's character (Janvi), falls for this engineer and offers Kajal huge amount to "Share" her husband. And guess what? Kajal agreed! She divorced ML, got him married to Janvi, as per Hindu marriage act (she had to divorce since this marriage act only allows one marriage). And both women were seemingly happy, and ML wasn't (Lallu lagega, but...) and towards end blah blah Kajal realises her mistake... Asks forgiveness and still suggests Janvi for threesome and she will behave blah blah blah..smiley36

Or it can go Chori Chori Chupke Chupke way ... Where Rani ka character is seen facing the deal of Preity ka character will either give her baby in exchange of her pati and her family or she will not give up the child... Of course since movie was to conclude Rani chose to give up baby and Preity realized how wrong she was bcoz you know blah blah blah of doctor asking Rani they can only save one maa or baby and she chose to save Maa despite knowing how twisted maa was...

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Also more people for FunFiction who can suffer

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Chuhiya can keep Armaan sa. And Abhira can raise Daksh and Pookie and fulfil her bacha dreams. Sab khush.

Edited by janecastle - 3 months ago
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Posted: 3 months ago
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Originally posted by: janecastle

Chuhiya can keep Armaan sa. And Abhira can raise Daksh and Pookie and fulfil her bacha dreams. Sab khush.

This actually makes sense smiley36

two men standing next to each other with the words baat toh sahi hai

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Posted: 3 months ago
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As an Abhimaan fan I don't find this offensive smiley36 full marks to you for creativity, aapne khoob dimag chalaya hai to pen this . Armaan in exchange for daksh and pookie? smiley13 please update the story. Interesting hai 😁

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Silly girl finds this maha wrong

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Originally posted by: janecastle

Chuhiya can keep Armaan sa. And Abhira can raise Daksh and Pookie and fulfil her bacha dreams. Sab khush.

Egjackly my point! Sab ke suhane sapne pure honge, except for Armaan ... Jaise Judai mein Anil was initially dukhi but later became sukhi... Armaan will too... While both women will regret bargaining...

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Yeh kaha triggering hai? Beautiful humour smiley36

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Best hai. Arman sa ko ruhi ko do. Abhira ko bacha do ..dkp ko trp do ..fans ko ddp do..sab khush.

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Originally posted by: nutmeg7

Yeh kaha triggering hai? Beautiful humour smiley36

Exchanging kids and trauma linked to making such deals should be triggering but actually this show has surpassed all the crap to even bother about it...smiley36

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