MG FF - For One Night - 12/03/2025 - chapter 12 updated Pg 24 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Chapter 3 of For One Night is here. Happy reading lovely peoplesmiley9

Please do like and comment if you find it worth readingsmiley10


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Posted: 8 months ago
#82

Hi Anushka

thanks for updating


Chapter 3

Majestic update... excellently written

Maan may have everything but his house is cold and empty

curious about Maan and his family

the silence indeed feels heavier

of cos she knows that everything is just a business transaction

so Geet keeps on visiting Maan's mansion

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

well that one night has yet to come

Geet's nervousness was justified

Maan's question was anticipated

well she was waiting for Maan

she was clearly hurt when Maan told her she can leave

but she knows what she is there for

great that he was upfront with Geet

Maan's comments and questions were expected

appreciate her response

pleased that Maan was direct with Geet what he thinks about her

hmm he is intrigued by Geet

glad that he was further honest with Geet

ahh he is afraid of letting his feeling for her grow deeper

Geet was certainly relieved and at the same time heartbroken

however she has no expectations from Maan

oh she is there for him and what is between them and not for the money

not surprised that she has some hope that he may feel something for her


update soon

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Posted: 8 months ago
#83

Such a beautifully written update ! The emotions are so raw and relatable, especially the tension and underlying care between maaneet. The way you’ve captured their inner struggles and conflicting feelings is truly commendable. The dialogue feels so natural, pulling me right into their world and making every interaction meaningful. Your writing style brings the characters to life, making it impossible not to connect with them. Can’t wait to see how their journey unfolds—it’s absolutely captivating!

Edited by muskanp - 8 months ago
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Posted: 8 months ago
#84

Unsaid words between them making their relationship take a turn towards something which they don't even know

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Posted: 8 months ago
#85

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Anushka

thanks for updating


Chapter 3

Majestic update... excellently written

Maan may have everything but his house is cold and empty

curious about Maan and his family

the silence indeed feels heavier

of cos she knows that everything is just a business transaction

so Geet keeps on visiting Maan's mansion

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

well that one night has yet to come

Geet's nervousness was justified

Maan's question was anticipated

well she was waiting for Maan

she was clearly hurt when Maan told her she can leave

but she knows what she is there for

great that he was upfront with Geet

Maan's comments and questions were expected

appreciate her response

pleased that Maan was direct with Geet what he thinks about her

hmm he is intrigued by Geet

glad that he was further honest with Geet

ahh he is afraid of letting his feeling for her grow deeper

Geet was certainly relieved and at the same time heartbroken

however she has no expectations from Maan

oh she is there for him and what is between them and not for the money

not surprised that she has some hope that he may feel something for her


update soon

Thank you so much for your detailed and kind feedback! I’m glad you enjoyed the update.

Maan’s cold, empty house and his complicated feelings were definitely something I wanted to highlight, and it’s great to see you pick up on that.

Geet’s mix of nervousness, understanding, and quiet hope is really at the heart of this story, so I’m happy it resonated with you!

I’ll update soon... thanks again for your lovely words! 💕

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Posted: 8 months ago
#86

Originally posted by: muskanp

Such a beautifully written update ! The emotions are so raw and relatable, especially the tension and underlying care between maaneet. The way you’ve captured their inner struggles and conflicting feelings is truly commendable. The dialogue feels so natural, pulling me right into their world and making every interaction meaningful. Your writing style brings the characters to life, making it impossible not to connect with them. Can’t wait to see how their journey unfolds—it’s absolutely captivating!

Thanks muskan...will update soon smiley9

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Posted: 8 months ago
#87

Originally posted by: Floweebee

Unsaid words between them making their relationship take a turn towards something which they don't even know

For me, it’s always exciting to explore how these unspoken feelings evolve.

Thanks for reading and commenting! 💕

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Posted: 8 months ago
#88

Interesting update. Maan finds Geet different and intriguing.

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Posted: 8 months ago
#89

Originally posted by: MA1970

Interesting update. Maan finds Geet different and intriguing.

Thanks MA1970 smiley9

Glad you liked it

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Posted: 8 months ago
#90

Nice update..

Maan feels geet is different from others..

Geet is hurt when Maan asked to leave the room..

Both are feeling for each other..

Waiting for next update..

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