MG FF - For One Night - 12/03/2025 - chapter 12 updated Pg 24 - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

246

Views

8.8k

Users

25

Likes

466

Frequent Posters

nushhkiee thumbnail
Posted: 8 months ago
#61

Originally posted by: muskanp

What a beautifully intense update! You’ve captured Geet’s inner turmoil so vividly that I could almost feel the storm within her. The description of the vast, cold halls perfectly mirrors her feelings of isolation and the weight she carries due to her father’s debt. The way you’ve built up Maan’s character is incredible—his gaze, his commanding voice, and his steady, deliberate movements make him both intriguing and formidable. The tension between Geet and Maan is palpable, and the slow, careful pacing adds to the suspense. This update truly leaves me on the edge, eager for what happens next. Well done! Waiting

Thank you so much Muskan...Reviews like this really make my day smiley31

nushhkiee thumbnail
Posted: 8 months ago
#62

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

Wow wow geet was shocked to know maan knew about each and everything and geet s dad wanna give him money waiting for next update 💝

Thanks dear 🌸

Will update soon.

nushhkiee thumbnail
Posted: 8 months ago
#63

Originally posted by: Floweebee

Maan knew her family from starting. He trapped her very well. Geet is right now high on emotions after knowing the truth. I just feel that Maan is in love with her or he is planning something big.

Stay tuned smiley2 to know what really Maan feels.

Thank you for commenting...I appreciate it smiley31

swapna.p thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 months ago
#64

Nice update..

Maan told geet that she is not the first one to ask for help, her father also asked for his help..

Geet came to know it was not for one night but it is game for power..

Waiting for next update..

khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 8 months ago
#65

Thanks for updating....

love your writing style


Chapter 2

Dynamic update... brilliantly written

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

she is a tough situation

great that she is aware of Maan's intentions

but she cannot turn back

sad that she has no choice in the matter

of cos Maan was waiting for her

well she has made her decision

as expected she was there to fulfill her part of the bargain

at least Maan was honest with Geet

so he revealed that he knows her for a while

Geet's reaction was justified

oh no her dad owes Maan a large sum of money

Geet's was indeed shocked....

finally Maan revealed everything

oh her dad was unable to repay Maan with interest

hmm she puts the pieces together and realised what happened

Gosh she already signed the contract and is now Maan's mine

Geet's anger was understandable

now she knows what Maan did!

her inner turmoil well portrayed

hate that Maan tried to justify his actions

not surprised that it was all Maan's cold and calculative plan

innocent and helpless Geet fell into it

blissfully unaware of reality

Maan played his cards well

however its too late for her to change her decision

Maan is clearly ruthless

Geet now understands what she got herself into

one night is just the beginning!!!

what has Geet gotten herself into!!

wonder what Maan's real motive is?


update asap! smiley42

Edited by khwaishfan - 8 months ago
Athuathulya thumbnail
Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 months ago
#66

Amazing update...

Maan know geet and her family for a while and her father owes maan large amount of money... Maan is calculative and cunning but I feel he have a soft corner for geet.... Or is there any alternative motive behind his one night agreement with geet? What is maan planning using geet?

Very curious to know what happened next..

Update soon

Edited by Athuathulya - 8 months ago
nushhkiee thumbnail
Posted: 8 months ago
#67

Originally posted by: swapna.p

Nice update..

Maan told geet that she is not the first one to ask for help, her father also asked for his help..

Geet came to know it was not for one night but it is game for power..

Waiting for next update..

Thank you 💕

Will update soon

nushhkiee thumbnail
Posted: 8 months ago
#68

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Thanks for updating....

love your writing style


Chapter 2

Dynamic update... brilliantly written

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

she is a tough situation

great that she is aware of Maan's intentions

but she cannot turn back

sad that she has no choice in the matter

of cos Maan was waiting for her

well she has made her decision

as expected she was there to fulfill her part of the bargain

at least Maan was honest with Geet

so he revealed that he knows her for a while

Geet's reaction was justified

oh no her dad owes Maan a large sum of money

Geet's was indeed shocked....

finally Maan revealed everything

oh her dad was unable to repay Maan with interest

hmm she puts the pieces together and realised what happened

Gosh she already signed the contract and is now Maan's mine

Geet's anger was understandable

now she knows what Maan did!

her inner turmoil well portrayed

hate that Maan tried to justify his actions

not surprised that it was all Maan's cold and calculative plan

innocent and helpless Geet fell into it

blissfully unaware of reality

Maan played his cards well

however its too late for her to change her decision

Maan is clearly ruthless

Geet now understands what she got herself into

one night is just the beginning!!!

what has Geet gotten herself into!!

wonder what Maan's real motive is?


update asap! smiley42

My god thank you soo much for the wonderful comment 🫶💕

Yes will update soon 🤍

nushhkiee thumbnail
Posted: 8 months ago
#69

Originally posted by: Athuathulya

Amazing update...

Maan know geet and her family for a while and her father owes maan large amount of money... Maan is calculative and cunning but I feel he have a soft corner for geet.... Or is there any alternative motive behind his one night agreement with geet? What is maan planning using geet?

Very curious to know what happened next..

Update soon

Thank youuuu 🌸

Will update soon...till then, keep thinking smiley36smiley2

MA1970 thumbnail
Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 months ago
#70

Interesting update. This is what happens when things are hidden from the family. Geet father has taken Loan from Maan and unable to pay and Maan knew everything including her family and that is why he came to her place of work and gave his card. Geet to save her family meets him not knowing what will be the outcome. Why is Maan such a cold man.

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07 Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07

Chapter 52 Sameera watched as Maan arrived at her house. He hadn’t visited for a couple of days and Aavya had started asking when her new friend...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

The Devil in the Dark Thread 2||Chapter 70 pg 24 Updated 26/01

As mentioned in the notes in the other FF threads that I had created the other ID at a time when I wanted to be anonymous and avoid raising...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

Dheere Dheere Se - Update chapter 31 Pg 118 July 26 Dheere Dheere Se - Update chapter 31 Pg 118 July 26

Dheere Dheere Se https://tellymeanu.wordpress.com/2023/02/23/dheere-dheere-se-part-1/ Monday Morning 7 am, sunlight hit the bedroom and broke...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

1 years ago

Maaneet FF- Love Echoes Beyond Dimensions -Chapter 2 Pg 10 Jun 25

Dear All, No, no no... No idea of starting it in near future. Just wanted to book this title as I have an overall idea of the story. These days...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF - The Burnt - Updated chapter 21 - Pg 86 Jun 24

Okay... Again this will start after Saathiya ends. This is the mix of concept requested by @babelicious and @TinaSwiss. Earlier I was not able...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".