FanFic - Shubh meets his love

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey friends.. i was thinking of this for a while. well for a week now.. where shubh left.. and came up with this story.. i would liek the girl be priyamvada who were shubhs co star in meri doli tere angana..

here u ahve a pic og her .. and oen with shubh


and my story starts from were shubh enters the plain...

ENJOY

Shubh sitting on his seat.. Priya is fighting with the airhostess

coz she is not getting the seat she has booked

she ran away from home.. she is wearing black .. tunica and jeans..

shubh looking at the place where he hear the noises

but can't see the girl

and he tries the best.. but no.. chance

the airhostess tell her there is a seat .. just there

and its beside Shubh

:she turn to it.. shubh keep starring.. but sees her coming he moves his eyes

she sits there Shubh look out at the window..

Priya: hi

no response. from shubh..

priya: (thinks) AKROO

priya :.. hi.. i said...

shubh : hi..

she says.. aap Singapore ja rehey ho.. (if it the place they were going in sataan)

shubh:.. nahin main raste mein jump mar kar Uttar jaoon gha

priya: very fnny..

:

priya (think)..yeh akroo bhi na

the safar is going on.. priya.. is sleeping.. but shubh cannot coz of what he is doing.. and all stuff

priya .. slowly falls asleep and lied her head on shubhs right shoulder..

shubh.. tries to remove it..

but he cant .. coz it keep falling down on his shoulder

he let it be on his shoulder.. and he also fall asleep..

and at the morning before the landing.. priya wakes up.. so do shubh..

priya shubh looks at each other..

they r close..

:she moves away.

Shubh: sorry..

Priya:.. yeah u can say that.. couldn't u remove my head from ur shoulder..

Shubh: i (was about to shout.. he slowly says) me ur head keep falling.. nto my fault..

Priya: .. uff i dotn even want to talk..

she show him her back..

shubh think what a akroo girl she is

ok at the air port..

both are collection their bags.. shubh has his bag with the stuff in his hands..

and Shubh sees some police men..

while looking at them.. he and priya bump into each other..

Priya : uff cant u see..

shubhs bag falls down..

priya sees the stuff falling down..

she pick it up..

and loks at shubh..

priya: yeh .. durgs..

shubh puts his hand on her mouth to make her shut up..

and hids with her.. (just like sagar did with vidya in dulhan in banaras) acually he puts his hands on her mouths and hids from the policemen

she was trying to.. remove his hand.. but coudlnt

the police left.. and shubh .. lows (thanx god)

and removes his hand from.. priyas mouth..

sh was about to fall.. when he holds her in his arms

shubhs bag fall out of his hand.. he is just holding priya..

he tries to wake her up.. by giving her small claps on her cheeks..

but no response..

he lift her up.. and goes for help..

the police.. sees it.. shubh says i need help.. she fainted.. plzz help..

they calls the doc..

shubh still there.. and thinking if anything happens to her i would never forgive my self.. i hope everything is fine..

the doc comes out and tells him.. she is fine now.. actually she has asthma attack.. while not breathing thats why this happened

plz take good care of ur wife

shubh: (shocked).. : she is not my wife..

'doc: well girl friend..

shubh.. was about to say soemthing.. but didnt

Shubh come into the room she is laying..

Priya:.. u should be grateful i didn't tell them u had drugs with u.. and thats why u should be thanks ful to me

Shubh: thankful !!it due to u i was about to be caught... agar tum abhi yahaan kuch ho jataa .. i would have been finished..

Priya .finished..

Shubh:.. and btw how would i have known.. U had asthma...

Priya: ... uff... u r too much...

Shubh: Even u r too much I m leaving... bye

Priya: to roka kisne hai..

shubh: bye

priya: uh bye.. for ever..

Shubh leaves..

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That all

Is se ziyada aur nahin aa reha dimaag mein

When ever I think of more I will write more of Shubh's story..

Edited by Nausheenfan - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow this is really good! plz continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg ur too good San...itna achha..waw mindblowing yaar....kaash shub saat aisa hi ho..

Really loved every part u wrote..its really funny when priya asks shub if hes going to singapore loved his answer there..😆😆 really nice..kaash aap serials ke creatives hote...to kya baat hota...we would be able to see such nice and romantic scenes...like the one priya sleeping on shub shoulder..waw that would be so cute on tv aur wo bhi Gaurav aur Priyamvada wo scene mein...ufff excellent...while reading i could imagine each part...its so great yaar...i hope u ll think more and write more about shub ki lovestory..i really enjoyed reading this part twice....😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx naz.. relaly loved ur comments.. thanx u soooooooooooo much..

i will try ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow 👏 👏 👏 , really good, do keep it going.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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San,It's just too good... 😉
Cute love story...The way they argue with each other.. 😆
It's just so romantic to me... 😳
Please continue to write.... 😛
Well Done!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx hadah thnk u very much

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