MG OS Soch raha hoon...kisse se puchhu ?

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Heard this song now, and remembered this story. Posting it to relive all the fond memories of writing and creating something special. 😊







Soch raha hoon..kis se puchun uss ladki ka naam..



He looked at his watch once again to check the time..wondering if he was early. No he was on time..then? He looked around the park once and then settled on one of the benches..where from he can get a clear view of the entrance of the park! He again checked the time. He was getting restless with each passing second. After few minutes he felt something and looked up to confirm it! And what he saw..made his heart to skip a beat!



Jiske aane se rangon me doob gai hai shaam..
Jiske aane se rangon me doob gai hai shaam..
Soch raha hoon kis se punchu uss ladki ka naam..
Soch raha hoon kis se punchun uss ladki ka naam..
Ae he..aha.. aa ha..



There she was! Dressed in a nevi-blue patiyala suit, looking ever so beautiful. He felt that all the restlessness, he was feeling till now was gone just by seeing her. He just couldnt stop looking at her. There is something in her..something which he couldnt understand, which seems to pull him towards her, from the very begining!
It all has started a week before..when he has saw her for the first time!



Rang hai sona, roop hai chaandi, aankhein hai nilam..
Hont hai kaliyan, daant hai moti, zulfein hai resham..
Jaise gazal hai, jaise kanwal hai, jaise shalkata jaam..
Soch raha hoon kis se punchu uss ladki ka naam..



Last week, on that sunday evening, maan was with his friends..they were just roaming around and has come to the park which was close to his house! They were chatting..when suddenly a ball came & hit maan's leg. He looked around to see who's ball it was..he saw a little boy running in their direction..the boy looked hesitant & stood at a little distance from maan's group. Maan gestured him to come close...picking up the ball & gave him. "sorry bhaiya"..the boy apologies cutely. "its ok"..maan smiled ruffling his hair. "Aayu, ball mili kya?"..someone shouted from behind.. "haan"..that boy yelled in reply. "thank u bhaiya...bye!"..said that boy..aayu..running away. "Bye.."..maan wished him back smiling! Maan looked at the direction where aayu has ran..& thats when he saw her!
Everything stoped around him! He kept looking at her..didnt know for how long. Yes she was beautiful..very beautiful! But that was not the only thing which has attracted him towards her. There was something special in her which words cant describe. The way she was smiling..laughing & playing with that kid, aayu.. It was the most beautiful sight for his eyes! She was teasing aayu..not letting him to touch the ball..keeping it high in the air. When aayu got irritated..he pushed her slightly..causing her to stumble a little..& started running. She too ran behind him..& soon caught him. She picked him up from behind & twirled him around...making him laugh loudly & she too laughed with him.. And seeing them.. unknowingly, a smile came to maans lips too!


When she put aayu down on his feet..both panted.. catching their breaths. Then aayu teased her showing his tongue..and again their tom & jerry chase started!
Maan was totally lost in her & her masti..when his friends called him as they were going back. He made a excuse and stayed a little longer to see her antics. And when he noticed that she & aayu were leaving as it was getting dark..he too went back home!



Palkon ki chhav, saans ki khushboo, bahon ka sanndal..
Mathe ka suraj, tan ke ujaale, chal ki ye hulchul...
Jism sunehra, chand sa chehra, dil ke liye aaram..
Soch raha hoon kis se punchu uss ladki ka naam




Maan wanted to see her again..& thats why he has came to the park next day also..on the same time. It was silly..he didnt even knew if she will come or not. But his heart was saying that she will come..wo aayegi!
And she came!



From that day, it has become his daily routine to come here..in the evening & watch her playing with aayu!
Now also she was teasing aayu! They both were sitting on sea-saw..and obviously her side was heavy compare to aayu! So she was casually sitting at one side..giving a teasing smirk to aayu.. while aayu was hung in the mid air! He was shouting at her to put him down...and she was laughing at him..saying a "no"..!
Maan too chuckled..seeing her naughtiness!


Finally she let aayu come down & ran as aayu was ready to pounce on her. Maan shook his head at her childishness.. But it was that childish behaviour & care free nature of her... that has attracted him to her! He just love to see her naughtiness!



Husnn ki malika, roop ki rani, khawabon ki shehzadi..
Jab se mili hai dil me hui hai khawabon ki aabadi..
Jiske liye main iss duniya me lelun her ilzaam..
Soch raha hoon kis se punchu uss ladki ka naam...



He kept turning & twisting in his bed..trying to catch some sleep..but how was sleep suppose to come when his heart & mind were busy thinking about her! It has been like this from the day he has seen her..her thoughts will not let him sleep..and if by chance sleep will come..it will be filled with dreams of her's!


He couldnt stop thinking about her. Her smile, her laughter, her naughtiness, that mischief glint in her eyes, her cute gestures..everything about her was beautiful & special..just like her! He wanted to talk to her for once! He has heard her sweet laughter..and was sure that her voice too will be sweet like honey. He wondered that how it will feel to hear his name in her honey sweet voice. NAME..!!! That reminds him that he still didnt know her name!
He pouted cutely at the thought.. He knew her from almost a week now. He knew that she is fun-loving, naughty & full of life.. But still he didnt knew her name? Thats not done..na?


But then how he was suppose to know her name?? He certainly cant go & asked her that what was her name? She will think him as a mad person & would never talked to him in future! "No..he cant let anything like that happen.."..his heart screamed immediately!



Jiske aane se rangon me doob gai hai shaam..
Jiske aane se rangon me doob gai hai shaam..
Soch raha hoon kis se punchu uss ladki ka naam..



He will know her name..for sure..didnt know how..but he will! Deciding that he went to sleep with a sweet smile playing on his lips!



Soch raha hoon kis se punchu uss ladki ka naam...

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Very sweet os. Liked it. Waiting for next part.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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After long time ,you posting on forum again


Beautiful and Mischievous OS


Wow Maan has fallen for the naughtiness of Geet

hopefully soon he finds out her name

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Hi Shona

great seeing you here

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Beautiful OS... splendidly written

well Maan has fallen for Geet...

of cos he waits eagerly to see her

so that's the first time he saw her

he was clearly mesmerised with her beauty and naughtiness

as expected he cannot stop thinking about her

oh he does not know her name

will he get to know this?


continue soon

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Sweet os

Maan going park daily to see her

Interesting

Wait8ng for next

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Posted: 1 years ago
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beautiful n sweet story

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