Fichain #4: [Start date 18 July 2023] - Page 4

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Index

Segment #1: oh_nakhrewaali: 18-07-23

Segment #2: Satrangi_Curls: 19-07-23

Segment #3: NoeticLife: 20-07-23

Segment #4: oh_nakhrewaali: 20-07-23

Segment #5: Satrangi_Curls:

Segment #6: NoeticLife:

Check the summary and characters and lemme know if I missed anything🙈

"I'll ask my hormones and brain and get back to you"

This is gold! 🤣 imma use it in daily life now lol

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Characters so far (note that not all characters have to be a part of the story, some are written just for work building, so you can be flexible with who you write about, expect Darshan and Ishaan. It's thier story and hence you have to push thier character forward the max)

Darshan Rathore: A private detective in his early to mid thirties. He is gay and a resident of Mumbai, though originally from Chandigarh where his mom lives. Has known his sexual preference since for about fifteen years now

Ishaan Kesrani: He is in his early to mid thirties, a cop by profession. Is into men and women. Has a strained relationship with his parents after coming out to them two years ago.

Nushrat Sheikh: Owner of the PI firm where Darshan works.

Fiza Sheikh: Above 21 years of age, is Nushrat's daughter. Works in a corporate firm

Sikandar: Ishaan thinks Darshan works for him, but Darshan clears it out.

Ayesha: Ishaan is keeping an eye on her, who speaks of Simba

Gaurav: Another cop who isn't undercover

Afshan: Someone in Fiza's life whose existence has affected her relationship with her mother

@bold- Sikandar nahi, Simba hai naam.

Also, I like Fiza. She's relatable

Please don't pull a Tia and kill her off as a Simba side effect 👀

Also, character list mein Sikandar daala hai. Usko Simba karo.

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Join us to thicken it. Marmalade, jam, chesse, butter, srikand sab leke AA jaao😅

Itna sab kuch nahi hai mere ghar mein 🤣

Aap log plot thickening karo, main 5 rs ka lays leke aungi when I see an opening 😆

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

@bold- Sikandar nahi, Simba hai naam.

Yaar lion King ka circle of life mein dimaag mein shuru ho jaata hai🤣

Updated the character list

Originally posted by: Bee222

Itna sab kuch nahi hai mere ghar mein 🤣

Aap log plot thickening karo, main 5 rs ka lays leke aungi when I see an opening 😆

Jo bhi hai, woh leke aao 😅

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Yaar lion King ka circle of life mein dimaag mein shuru ho jaata hai🤣

Updated the character list

Segment #5

Ishaan noticed a familiar mop of curly hair. So, you decided to pursue this case? Wrong choice buddy. he sighed. Should he tell Darshan to stay out of this mess?

-

Darshan walked up to Gaurav and shook his hands, the other man smiled warmly, in acknowledgement.

"I want to help you with this case." Darshan whispered.

Gaurav looked at him for a minute, he knew Darshan's keen eye and the ability to detect lies. He would be an asset. Gaurav noted. "But you won't get paid for it. Acknowledgement, maybe."

"I know. But I want to do this, please?"

"Alright. Make sure you don't mess anything up, this is your one and only chance. I will not be answering your family if anything goes wrong."

"They don't need to know anything, trust me." Darshan answered with a hint of sadness in his voice.

Another policeman came up to Gaurav, "Sir, ye CCTV footage hai. Jyada clear nahi hai."

"Jo hai ussise kaam chalao."

-

Later that night, Ishaan walked into Gaurav's house disguised as a plumber.

"You shouldn't let Darshan into this case." Gaurav came to the point.

"He is useful. I know him better than you do. Tell me, who were those people?"

"Simba ke chuze hai, kuch jyada kaam ke nahi hai. I'm trying to contact ek medium machhli."

"Kitna time lagega?"

"Do teen din. Ek rave party organise kar raha hu. Jaan bichha diya hai, machhli ka intezaar hai."

"Darshan ko sath rakhna, backup mein."

"Nope. I can't risk my cover like that. I don't even know him."

Gaurav sighed. "Tujhe pata nahi hai ki wo kitne kaam ka banda hai. Trust me."

"Ye mera mission hai and I get to decide things, not you."

"Ishaan. You need to learn how to trust others. Not blindly but properly."

"Last time I trusted someone, I had to lose my best friend. I am not doing it again."

"Toh kya zindagi mein kabhi kisi par bharosa nahi karoge, bewakoof?" Gaurav was irritated.

"Mera ek simple Funda hai life mein, zindagi mein ek galti ek hi baar karo, dusri baar nayi galti karo."

Gaurav smacked Ishaan's head. "Nayi galti karni hai na, toh, go do him." He winked.

"Ayy!" Ishaan blushed. "I don't do strangers."

"Then go on a date first. It's not rocket science."

"Tumhe bada pata hai ye sab?" Ishaan raised his brows, teasing his old friend.

"Mera chance nahi tha. But you have it. Jao, Ishaan jaao, jee lo apni zindagi."

Ishaan cringed at the dialogue.

Gaurav waited for a moment. "Keep Darshan with you during the mission, he will really help you. Trust me on this." He patted Ishaan's back.

"Kal batau, thoda soch kar?"

Gaurav nodded.

(⁠◕⁠ᴗ⁠◕⁠✿⁠)

Chuze - 🐤 (चूज़े) Murgi/chidiya ke chhote bachhe

(⁠人⁠*⁠´⁠∀⁠｀⁠)

Tagging new people, aake kuch likho

_------------

Summary : Darshan asks Gaurav to officially help with the case, he agrees.

Ishaan is reluctant to let Darshan in, finds it difficult to trust people.

Gaurav is good friend of both Ishaan and Darshan.

(Probably knows Ishaan from the time of training or something)

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

Segment #5

Ishaan noticed a familiar mop of curly hair. So, you decided to pursue this case? Wrong choice buddy. he sighed. Should he tell Darshan to stay out of this mess?

-

Darshan walked up to Gaurav and shook his hands, the other man smiled warmly, in acknowledgement.

"I want to help you with this case." Darshan whispered.

Gaurav looked at him for a minute, he knew Darshan's keen eye and the ability to detect lies. He would be an asset. Gaurav noted. "But you won't get paid for it. Acknowledgement, maybe."

"I know. But I want to do this, please?"

"Alright. Make sure you don't mess anything up, this is your one and only chance. I will not be answering your family if anything goes wrong."

"They don't need to know anything, trust me." Darshan answered with a hint of sadness in his voice.

Another policeman came up to Gaurav, "Sir, ye CCTV footage hai. Jyada clear nahi hai."

"Jo hai ussise kaam chalao."

-

Later that night, Ishaan walked into Gaurav's house disguised as a plumber.

"You shouldn't let Darshan into this case." Gaurav came to the point.

"He is useful. I know him better than you do. Tell me, who were those people?"

"Simba ke chuze hai, kuch jyada kaam ke nahi hai. I'm trying to contact ek medium machhli."

"Kitna time lagega?"

"Do teen din. Ek rave party organise kar raha hu. Jaan bichha diya hai, machhli ka intezaar hai."

"Darshan ko sath rakhna, backup mein."

"Nope. I can't risk my cover like that. I don't even know him."

Gaurav sighed. "Tujhe pata nahi hai ki wo kitne kaam ka banda hai. Trust me."

"Ye mera mission hai and I get to decide things, not you."

"Ishaan. You need to learn how to trust others. Not blindly but properly."

"Last time I trusted someone, I had to lose my best friend. I am not doing it again."

"Toh kya zindagi mein kabhi kisi par bharosa nahi karoge, bewakoof?" Gaurav was irritated.

"Mera ek simple Funda hai life mein, zindagi mein ek galti ek hi baar karo, dusri baar nayi galti karo."

Gaurav smacked Ishaan's head. "Nayi galti karni hai na, toh, go do him." He winked.

"Ayy!" Ishaan blushed. "I don't do strangers."

"Then go on a date first. It's not rocket science."

"Tumhe bada pata hai ye sab?" Ishaan raised his brows, teasing his old friend.

"Mera chance nahi tha. But you have it. Jao, Ishaan jaao, jee lo apni zindagi."

Ishaan cringed at the dialogue.

Gaurav waited for a moment. "Keep Darshan with you during the mission, he will really help you. Trust me on this." He patted Ishaan's back.

"Kal batau, thoda soch kar?"

Gaurav nodded.

(⁠◕⁠ᴗ⁠◕⁠✿⁠)

Chuze - 🐤 (चूज़े) Murgi/chidiya ke chhote bachhe

(⁠人⁠*⁠´⁠∀⁠｀⁠)

Tagging new people, aake kuch likho

_------------

Summary : Darshan asks Gaurav to officially help with the case, he agrees.

Ishaan is reluctant to let Darshan in, finds it difficult to trust people.

Gaurav is good friend of both Ishaan and Darshan.

(Probably knows Ishaan from the time of training or something)

In short cheek