RaviKsha OS: RAVI RANDHAWA'S FLOPPED SURPRISE: A GREEK TRAGEDY

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Ravi, Pratiksha and their cute banters ft. Adi, enjoy!


The all-in-all famous Ravi Randhawa was on cloud nine that day, hence the explicit hyper was all over the place. You know, he had always been a lovable, extra-extra sweet boss, however, the graph of sugariness went off limits today.

"What happened to you, bro?" Aditya was primarily worried for his brother who was apparently talking to himself when he spotted himself, even though it was nothing new. Yet the dear older brother manages to make him worry on a daily scale.

"Adiiii..." Ravi almost shrieked seeing his brother before charging at him with an attack, Adi thanked dear creator that he was left alive.

"Okay, okay. Stop behaving like a hormonal teenage girl, bro. What's cooking?" Adi asked with his bunny smile before his expression changed into a hysteric smirk.

"Does this have anything to do with Pratiksha bhabhi?"

"Adi, my brother." Ravi stirred, punching lightly at his brother's chest. "Yes, it does."

To a curious Aditya, Ravi became an agitated version of dumbledore to share his side of the catastrophe. "You know, Pratiksha loves me a lot, right?"

"Yeah, she does." Aditya nodded his head like a lost puppy, feeling confused.

"It feels good, to be honest," Ravi said with a content smile, hopelessly imagining his wife and her beautiful smile as he continued. "But it feels like a competition, you know?"

"Why?" Aditya felt like he was bound to be bewildered till his last breath in the war zone.

"I want to love her more," Ravi almost nagged as a shocked Adi widened his eyes.

"WHAT ARE YOU GONNA DO TO MY DEAR BHABHI NOW?"

"Adi, you need to be a bit more innocent."

"Alright, but what are you gonna do?"

"Let's go, I'll tell you in detail. But don't you dare to expose this to your bhabhi you brat, hmm?"

...

Pratiksha was exhausted by the time her classes had been done at the school. Although she never shows how exhausted she is. She pressed her temples as she took her phone out. Unlocking it, a smile made its way to her lips.

Her picture with Ravi was the reason for it, evidently. The way he was back hugging her with a winning smile to the cameraman (definitely her favorite devar ji) and she was looking back at him with a wide smile herself.

A wide smile similar to the one she has now on her face.

And to exceed the happiness, there was her patidev, calling her on her phone as if he had seen her smiling from where he is.

"Hello, Mr. husband. What do you want?"

"I want you." Ravi's reply almost made her choke on her saliva until she heard him laughing contagiously on the other side. She narrowed her eyes.

"Okay okay, PP. Don't murder me in your head now." Ravi said with a peal of evident laughter in his voice that made her giggle.

"Are you back at home? This early?"

"Seems like it." Ravi can already the way Pratiksha would've rolled her eyes at his response. "I wanted to spend time with my supposedly busy wife."

"Yeah, so what?"

"So what? Come back!"

"Yeah, I'll be back by 5'o clock as usual."

"Nope, I want you back right now biwi, right now." It was as if a 5-year-old was demanding as Pratiksha face-palmed. What did she sign up for, dear lord? She has legit married a kid.

"You heard me, hello!!" An almost scream broke her from her thought process. "If you don't heed me, then who else will."

"But Ravi-"

"No buts and ifs, if you don't come by, you're gonna commit a crime. Then you'll become Paapi Pratiksha, PP. Change your name."

And Pratiksha almost lost.

"Paapi Pratiksha, seriously? Out of all the names in the world, you called me this?"

"Yes I did and I will, what are you gonna do? You should've seen through it when you booked me for seven births." Ravi was doing all the hand signs while arguing with his wife.

"Good then, let me fulfill my patni dharam by staying true to your words, dearest husband. I'm not coming."

"That's cheating, I have- HELLO? HELLO?!" Ravi sulked realizing that Pratiksha had hung up. He looked at the halfway arrangement that he had done on the balcony.

"Who cares? I'm not gonna do this all. In fact, I'm not gonna talk to her at all." Ravi announced his war looking at the setting sun.

...

Ravi was jerked awake by a familiar touch. As he opened his eyes, he saw a smiling Pratiksha in her changed outfit, a simple salwar. Ravi would've kissed the hell out of her but then he remembered that he was supposed to be angry with her, so nope, no chances at all.

She seemed a bit apologetic.

Good for her.

"You slept right here, huh?" Pratiksha asked softly as she sat beside him. Ravi yawned and looked away from her.

"Are you angry with me?"

"Nope, not at all." He replied sarcastically as he heard her mesmerizing giggles.

Control Ravi, control.

"Yeah, laugh at me all your life. You are not doing your biwi dharam right."

Pratiksha held his chin and turned his head to her. "What if I said, I did."

"How?"

"I reached here by 5." She casually replied, showing her palms. An amused smile came to Ravi's lips as she continued.

"But then you were sleeping, so how were you supposed to do your surprise right?"

"Oh yeah, I got tired and slept right here after getting half-done with my- Wait, how come you know about the surprise now?"

Pratiksha held her ears and replied simply. "Adi..."

"I will kill him!" Ravi got up as Pratiksha held him back.

"What? He ruined my surprise for my wife. I had told him not to expose my plan at all." Ravi blabbered as Pratiksha controlled her laughter at any cost. Who's gonna tell him that he looks adorable while doing that?

"How come actually?" She playfully changed her tone now. "Who called me and then started an argument out of nowhere? It was not Adi, don't blame him now."

Ravi gave a look of betrayal to her. "I ruined my own plan? SERIOUSLY?"

"Yes." Pratiksha answered sternly.

"Yeah, go away then. I will laugh at my tragic destiny alone, but I'm not gonna talk to you.I'm-"

Ravi was stopped midway as he felt Pratiksha's lips on his cheeks. She giggled at his shocked face and open mouth. But soon, Ravi also started to smile.

"You're such a kid, Mr. Husband. Do you know that?"

At that, Ravi casually pulled Pratiksha by her waist and nuzzled her neck. "Maybe, but I'm capable to make a kid myself, do you know that?"

"Cheeee." Pratiksha taunted him as Ravi smiled. But then his sulky self was back.

"But my surprise..."

Pratiksha stopped the toofan mail by her hands.

"Look Ravi, this might sound all cliche but I'm happy. I'm happy that you did all this effort for me, it makes me feel special."

"Because you are special." He stated, holding by her locks. "The most special person to me. And all this I'm doing, it still is not enough."

"It's more than enough." Pratiksha opposed him, almost hugging him. "More than enough that you love me with all you can, that you're my life partner, understand?"

"Yes, biwi."

And with a slow and passionate kiss on the lips, along with their giggles, Ravi's flopped plan was just beginning under the moonlight.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow chandni.. it's amazing.. loved the trio Ravi adi and pratiksha..


Please keep writing

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This was sweet. Ravi and Pratiksha happily in love. Loved how you wrote their interactions... It's just the way one would expect from these two characters.

Thank you for sharing it with us ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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light, Beautifully writtenand nice thing both happily married and in love enjoying their life. and adi to support both.

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