FF:~KASHISH~(updt prt 25/pg27)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey every body this is my first fan fiction hope u guys n'joy it............



KASHISH(An attraction of love)



*~*~*part 1*~*~*

At shergill house in morning

A voice: premlatah jaldi se inder ko nasthey ke liye bulao'''.

Premlatha: haan parvathi bhabhi aatey hi honge'..

Parvathi:raamu kaka news paper kahan hai???

Ramu kaka: jii bahu jii who toh om saab ke paas hai''.

(Om,parvathi, premlatha,&inder are at the break fast table''.)

Om:bacche kahan hai????

Inder : haan subah se dekhe nahi kahin'''

Parvathi: wohhhhhhhhh

Prem latha: woo'hh

Inder& om : raat main party se late aaye honge naa''

Parvathi& premlatha: nahi who bas 1:00 baje aaye''.

Om& inder: bas 1:00???????? Tum dono ke hi ladd pyaar ne bigaad rakha hai dono ko'''

Premlatha: (li'l tensed) array bhabhi bhool gayi''..

Parvathi:kya hua premlatha tum kya bhool gayi???

Premlatha: yahi ki aaj dono bacchon ka result hai'''

Parvathi: hey bhagwaan in bacchon ka result accha ho

Premlatha&parvathi: chalo hum unhe utrha detey hai''

Parvathi in one room:chalo beta jaldi utho

A guy: nahi badimaa abhi do minute''

Prem latha in another room:areey kya halat bana di hai kamre ki'''.arrey tum abhi nahi uthi jaldi uth jao''

A girl:chachi plzzz do minute

Parvathi:tum bhool gaye aaj tumhara result hai'

Guy: oh! No'..

Premlatha:tum bhool gayii beta aaj tumhara result hai

Girl:oh no chachi main bhool gayi

Girl: who uth gaya hai kya???

Guy : badi maa who uth gayii hai kya??

Parvathi : nahi beta abhi kahan

Premlatha: nahi beta'.

Guy: baniiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Girl: neeevvvvvvvvvvvv

Both bani & neev get up.& get ready'''

Parvathi : jaldi se neeche aa jao'..

Premlatha: jaldi se neeche aa jao'..

Both bani & neev comes to the hall'..

Touch their parents feet'

Neev:bade papa yeh bani ne hi kal raat dair kit hi''

Bani: nahi chachu yeh neev hi busy tha unn lad(neev shut bani 's mouth)

Om: bani neev tumhara bada bhai hai'..

Inder :nahi bhaiyya kitna bada bas 1 ghantey ka toh fark hai dono ke beech''

(Om& parvathi are bani's parents but they love neev more than bani

Inder& premlatha are neev's parents but they love bani more than neev)

Parvathi:accha chalo inn dono ka jhgda toh roz chalta rahega ab nashta karlo'..

Nevv &bani: nahi pehle hum college jayenge result maloom karenge tabhi kuch khayenge''.

And they both leave for college

At the college'''.

Neev : hey ranoo kya hua itni tensed kyun ho??

Rano: kuch nahi neev bas mujhe acche marks nahi aaye

Bani:kya hua fail ho gayi kya??

Rano: nahi bani bas 85% hi mila hai

Neev& bani:watttttt???

Bani:rano 85% kam hai kya? Mujhe toh 50% bhi bahut hai'..

Neev: haan rano sach main bhi agar sirf pass bhi ho gaya toh bahut hai mujhe pass bhi papa ke liye hona hai''

Bani: rano tum kal party main kyun nahi aaye??

Rano: bani result ka tension than a yaar'..waise tum logon ka result kya hai?

Neev & bani:laugh ''J

Neev& bani: abhi humne humara result dekha hi nahi

Rano: phir bhi tum dono ko koi tension nahi hai??

Neev&bani:tension aur humey''.no wayyy

Neev:give me a break babes..

Bani: result ke liye bhi koi tension leta hai kay ..pass hue toh pass hue warna aur fail hue toh fail''.wats the big deal??

Rano:accha jao abhi result toh dekh kar aao'.

Neev&bani:haan chalo jaatey hai'..

On the bullitein board

Bani:neev congrats tum pass ho gaye''.

Neev:bani congrats tum bhi pass ho gayi'.

Bani: neev tumhe pata hai 1 kaun aya hai''.

Neev:kaun hoga koi book worm''..

Bani:nahi tumhari PRACHI

Neev:bani teri toh''

Bani runs &neev runs after her''.

They stop'..



hope u all lyk it

plzz do comment

Edited by baanisings - 16 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey baanisings.......
good ff yaar par yahn toh jai ka intro hi nahi hua hai........hope next part main jai ka intro ho jaaye........ waiting for ur next update,...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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KASHISH(An attraction of love)



~*part 2*~





Bani:neev woh dekho tumhari prachi aa rahi hai….chalo hum ussey congrats kartey hai..
Neev:bani agar tumhe karna hai toh tum jao main nahi aaonga…….
At home…
Parvathi: hay bhagwaan bacchon ka result accha ho…..
Premlatha:aur bacchon ne abhi tak kuch khaya bhi nahi….

At the college
Bani drags neev and goes to prachi
Bani:hai prachi congrats
Prachi:thanxx bani
Bani give sign to neev to congratulate prachi
Neev:congrats prachi
Prachi:thanxx (smiling)
Prachi :bani tumhara result kaisa raha
Bani:main pass ho gayi……
Prachi:aur nee...v…v.v. ka result??
Bani:who bhi pass ho gaya hai……aur tum aaj humari party main aa rahi ho……
Prachi:par.
Bani:no par war…….mujhe pata nahi tum zaroor aa rahi ho….see u at the party…..byeee…….
Neev:byee
Prachi:byee neev?(smiling)
And they both leave..
Neev:thank god bani mujhe toh lag raha tha ki tumhara udhar se nikal ne ka irada nahi tha……aur tumne uss book worm ko party main kyun bulaya woh party main bhi book lekar aayegi…
Bani:enough neev……..tum meri bhabhi ke baarey main aisa nahi keh sakte and runs…..
Neev runs after bani
Neev: stop bani……..bani baniiiiiiiii
Bani crashes wid someone….
Bani:oh! Gawd…….
Bani:dekh kar nahi chal sakte batta mizz
The guy:srry miss par main nahi tum bhagg rahi thi……..
Bani: par tum toh dekh rahey they naa
Just then neev comes&apologise for bani….
Bani:tum kyun maafi maang rahe ho maafi toh inhe maangni chahiye…
The guy:hey look
Just then prachi comes
Prachi:arrey jai bhaiyya aap…….yahan kaise?
Jai:haan prachi aaj tumhara result tha na toh aa gaya…..
Prachi:bhaiyya main first ayi hoon…
Jai:oh gr8 mujhe pata tha mere behan acche marks layege……
Bani interrupts……
Bani:prachi yeh tumhara bhai hai????itna batta mizz…….HUH
Jai:prachi tum is ladki ko jaanti ho??
Prachi:haan bhaiyya yeh meri frnd hai…….bani
Bani:Bani shergill
Prachi :aur yeh uska bhai hai neev
Neev:Neev shergill
Prachi:aur yeh hai mere bhaiyya
Jai:Jai walia
Neev:helloo Mr.walia nice to meet u……
Bani (murmurs):haan haan walia…….woh walia hua toh kya main bhi shregill hoon BANI SHERGILL…….
Jai: prachi ghar chale…? maasi wait kar rahi hogi….
Prachi: haan bhaiyya chale…….ok bye neev byee bani..
Bani: see u at party……..
And jai & prachi leaves…….





Hope everyone lyks it
Plzz do comment ……..







Edited by baanisings - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hiiii tanu
1st part really nice
so neev and bani are bro and sis
nice ff
do cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 ... omg. that was hilarious hun.. continue soon.. NB are sooo funny.. soo are JB.. but i have a feeling at the party neev will fall in love with prachi.. lol.. great part hun.. continue soon.. loved it.
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KASHISH(An attraction of love)



~* part 3*~


Neev and bani go back to their home……
Parvathi asks about the result……
Bani:chachi ,mama hum dono pass ho gaye(wid full of excitement)……
Premlathaa&parvathi: yeh toh bahut khushi ki baat hai….
Parvathi:par tum dono ka percent kya raha……
Neev: badi maa hum dono paas ho gaye…abb aap papa aur bade papa ke tarah baat math ke jiye aur mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai…aap bhool gayii main bhooka hoon…
Bani:haan mujhe bhi bahut bhook lagi hai..
Premlatha:haan haan humey pata tha tum dono aate hi bhook bhook chilla ne lagoge
Bani:chachi aap mujhe khilaye naa….
Neev:haan badi maa aap hi mujhe khilaye.
Parvathi:haan main toh tumhe roz hi khilati hoon par tum dono ab bade ho gaye ho khud khana sikho..aur bani tumhari shaadi hone ke baad tumhe saarey ghar ka khayal rakhna hoga aur tum hi chote bacchon ki tarah behave kar rahi ho.
Neev:bani moti tum toh is ghar se chali jaoge main hi badimaa ke paas rahonga(nd throws a cusion on her)
Bani:chachi dekho na neev ko…?main chachi ko chod kar kahi nahi jaungi…aur agar jaana bhi hoga toh chachi ko lekar jaungi
Parvathi:haan haan le jaana apni chachi ko main toh le aaungi apni bahu ko…….
Bani: haan le aana apni bahu ko aapki bahu toh book worm hai prrrrraaa(neev shut bani's mouth and drags her to room)
Neev:bani tum pagal ho gayi ho kya badimaa aur mama ke samne yeh kya keh rahi thi
Bani:kya galat keh rahi thi??? Aur tum kyun itna possessive ho rahey ho prachi ka naam sunn kar…..kyun kyun bolo (nd runs)
Neev:bani moti rukk ……..
nd they start quarreling nd making the house hell throwing things here nd there…….
In the meanwhile parvathi comes nd they say that..inder&om are outside…neev&bani stops quarreling nd behaves lyk good bro&sis
Om&inder comes in nd see that bani& neev are silently having their food….
Om:bani ,neev tumhare result ka kya hua??
Bani:wohh papa…(nd shows thumbs down)
Neev:bade papa srry (nd makes a sad face)
Om:tum dono fail kaise ho gaye??neev tum toh aise nahi the
Inder:neev aur le jao bani ko late night parties tumhari wajah se bani fail ho gaye……..
Om:inder tum yeh kaise baatein kar rahey ho???bani ke saath reh kar neev fail ho gaya…………
(om is bani 's father & inder is neev's father)
Seeing this bani&neev are njoying & laughing..
Parvathi comes and asks inder& om why they r quarreling lyk small kids
Om: parvathi bani ke wajah se neev fail ho gaya aur inder hai ki neev ko daantey ja raha hai…..
Inder: nahi bhabhi neev hi bani ko parties le jaata hai…
Parvathi:yeh aap se kisne keh diya ki humare bacche fail ho gaye???
Om&inder looks towards bani&neev
Parvathi:neev , bani tum dono kabhi nahi sudaroge….
Parvathi:aap dono fresh ho jaiye main aap dono ke liye lunch rakh deti hoon…
Om&inder goes to their rooms…….
Neev:badimaa aap hume jhagda karne se mana karti ho aur yeh dekho bade papa aur papa hi jhagad ne lage
Nd bani& neev laughs parvathi comes &squeeze neev&bani's ears
Neeev:badimaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Bani:mammaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Hearing this premlatha comes running from the kitchen…
Premlatha:kya hua bani ???tum dono itna chilla kyun rahey ho…(seeing that she says)
Premlatha:bahut aacha kiya bhabhi in dono ki badmaashiyan bahut badd gayii thi….abhi kitchen main saari saamaan gira diye the….
Neev&bani:sorry (nd makes face lyk small kids)
Nd parvathi leaves them
Bani:array dhat teri ki bhool gayii neev hum mama aur sabko batana bhool gaye aaj sabko ghar par party ke liye invite kiya hai….
Parvathi&premlatha:hmmmm humey pehle se hi pata tha ki tum dono aaj party rakhoge kyunki rano ka call aaya tha
Bani:chalo chachi hum aaj ki party ke liye shopping karne jaatey hai
Neev:haan chalo badimaa shopping chalet hai
Parvathi:nahi beta hum nahi aa saktey party ke saarey tayari yan baaqi hai tum dono jao.,..
Bani:chal neev hum dono hi jaatey hai…
Parvathi:aur haan bani tum western dresses math lena
Premlatha:array bhabhi abhi toh bacchi hai….bani tum jo chahey lelena..
Bani:luvv u chachi….
Parvathi:haan haan aur bigaado……..
Neev:array chal na moti derr ho rahi hai…..
Bani:okay chal…..bye chachi,bye mamma
Neev:bani we r just going for shopping yaar..
(and start laughing…)
bani:neev bandar tu chup kar aur chal….zyada gyaani math bann samjha…
Neev&bani leaves for shopping….

At the walia mansion
Jai coming from the outside with prachi..
Jai:maasi maasiiiii…..
Maasi:haan munna aa rahi hoon……
Jai:maasi betu first aayi hai…..
Maasi:pata hai munna kitni baar kahega???tune mujhe ab tak 10 baar phonekar chukka hai yeh kehne ke liye ki humari prachi paas ho gayi..
Jai:betu bol tujhe kya chahiye??
Prachi:kuch nahi bhaiyya mujhe bas aapke aur maasi ke blessings chahiye..
Maasi:mera aashirwaad toh hamesha tere saath rahega beta
Jai:aise kaise kuch nahi chahiye???? Meri behan first aayi hai aur keh rahi hai kuch nahi chahiye…chal aaj main tujhe kuch dresses dilate hoon……….
Prachi:array bhaiyaa kaha na kuch nahin chahiye…
Jai:nahin nahin main yeh sab kuch nahin jaanta tum chal rahi ho bass…………
Prachi:theek hai chaliye…lekin ek shart par
Jai: kaisi sharth
Prachi:aapko apne liye bhi kuch lena hoga…
Jai:haan tik hai baba
Prachi:promise???
Jai:haan pakka promise betu..ab chalogi meri maa??
Prachi:haan chaliye
Jai:thik hai maasi hum shopping kar ke aatey hai..
Maasi:haan haan apna khayal rakhna..
Prachi:maasi byeeeee…..
Maasi:byeee beta…
Jai&prachi leaves for shopping……..

Hope u all lyk it
Plzz do comment ……



Edited by baanisings - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good start Dear. 😊

Please update soon.

What a way for JB to meet. 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hiiiii tannu
good FF yaar bani&neev are so sweet.......
bani goes to night parties???? koi bat nahi woh ganga jaise nahi hai.....everyone knows she goes to parties...
waiting for ur next update....
Posted: 17 years ago
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hey tannu. good ff yaar,.....

it's too intersting....

plzz con't soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great parts
i realy like neev and bani's relationship
👏

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