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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part twelve.


The next morning at 9 am

Jasmin almost fell from her bed after Shelly's frantic call

Read the newspaper. Nehmat on the front page.


Instantly, she ran towards the porch of her residence to collect the local press distributed by the community.


To her horror, Nehmat was praised heavily by the home minister for rescuing fire victims in a nearby village. She became the local hero. Some even tagged her a superwoman.

Praises for Advait Kapoor and his family for having such a wonderful wife and a daughter in law.

The political parties suggested Nehmat to take a stand on behalf of Kapoor family.

Nehmat advait Kapoor became the talk of town in her heroic act


He almost choked over a glass of water as he picked up the press from the dining table. He woke early as he couldn't sleep the previous night. His wife made the headlines.


So Nehmat was out yesterday doing all this. I thought she was upset with jasmine 's statement This woman is unpredictable.


Somehow he was glad that she received the honor and appreciation for her bravery. He felt as the proud husband. His name was attached to hers indirectly gaining the credit for himself as well

Nehmat Advait Kapoor.


Shamsher was still fast asleep The fact that his useless younger son was selected by Jasmin took a toll on his emotions that he stayed awake late.

Nikhil will definitely ruin everything. He was hopeless


Advait rushed to his father's room and alerted him . Shamsher couldn't believe his eyes. Nehmat took the pie. The parties suggested her name for the next election. The home minister complimented her efforts. His daughter in law saved his family's reputation.


He enquired for Nehmat and the maid explained she left early around 7am stating she would be back late. The father and son exchanged glances.

She went to the nearby village again


The happy Mrs Shamsher praised her DIL and made suji halwa for breakfast.

Numerous calls came in congratulating the family.


He tried ringing her but her phone was switched off. Perhaps she was busy. There were seventy victims who lost their homes in the fire breakout. She is working hard. Shall i go help her?

But shamsher held him back stating lots of things pending still for the campaign.


Placing fire victims to new homes was a tedious task. Seventy was a huge number. She managed to get all settled with the help of some residenta who were with her in the temple the previous day.


A flashback.


After she left the house in rhe early hours, she went straight to the gurdwara to seek peace and solace. The fact that she was not blood related to Sandhus was unbearable. The pain was deep. She needed to be all alone.


She helped to cook in the kitchen area and served the devotees. She kept herself busy so she could get away from her sorrows. At 1 pm a devotee alerted the rest about a fire breakout in rhe neighbouring village and many rushed to the scene. Nehmat tagged along.


She rescued the most number of victims risking her own life despite there were firemen at rhe scene and became the superwoman of the town. After all she was Tejo's daughter and carried her mother's selfless traits Her acts were captured in videos taken by local residents and few passer bys and viralled all over the social media with the news releasing in the press the very next day


She still wasn't aware of the news as she left early again. There were still a few victims to be placed in new temporary homes.


At noon , she received a frantic call from her grandma. The whole family is down with cold. After the pag fera, they took off to the Golden temple, Amritsar and ended up getting ill on their way back home. The winters were harsh this time.

Sati required help. She couldn't take care of everyone all alone. Shelly was hopeless.


The Randawas were annoyed with Nehmat 's news coverage and was determined for a revenge. She should not be spared. Ekam already started working on his new plan to separate his ex and Advait.


Throughout the day, he thought about her. Maybe she was a blessing in disguise for me. First, she released me from the accusations of the fake abortion and now in getting back my stand in the elections. He was pretty sure she will never agree to participate in the campaign and would pass the honor to him instead. Indirectly, he won the battle.


An hour later,

It was past lunch time and finally he received a text from her which confused him like hell that he freaked out


MAIKA!!


To be continued

Edited by Aniash - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part 7

I really loved Nehmat's smart move to save Advait. She definitely seems to have more than attraction and consent towards him.😉

Part 8

Loved the way Nehmat trapped Ekam. The last part was the best👍🏼,

It was hilarious to see Advait irked with the very fact Nehmat slept with Ekam to get him released.🤣

Part 9

Gosh the way Advait bet Ekam and made a chutney of him. He really seems to put off with the thought that Nehmat slept with Ekam.🤣

Loved how Advait confessed that he only used Mallika and never loved her, wished he does the same in the show.

I really laughed hard when I read Naaz was beaten black and blue. Really hate that b**ch. That was good punishment that she got.

Rama is really smart in your FF.

Part 10

Lol, loved the way Jasmine's plan got backfired like in the show. That was the most amazing part.

Although, I'm not really a fan of Niknaaz, I loved their scene in this part.

Lastly, one side Ekam he has won the love trophy but in reality, I feel he has already lost it.

Part 11

Loved how Advait took Nehmat for an outing and scared her that he is going to murder her.😆

Whoa, Nikhil didn't turn up to pick up Naaz, something very unexpected.

Really loved how Advait disobeyed Jasmine's orders, wish he does the same even in the show.

Part 12

Loved how Nehmat took the whole limelight and was suggested to stand in the elections. That whole part was amazing.

But I didn't understand the last part like Advait,😆

What did the word Maika mean there?

Edited by Aleyamma47 - 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

Part 7

I really loved Nehmat's smart move to save Advait. She definitely seems to have more than attraction and consent towards him.😉

Part 8

Loved the way Nehmat trapped Ekam. The last part was the best👍🏼,

It was hilarious to see Advait irked with the very fact Nehmat slept with Ekam to get him released.🤣

Part 9

Gosh the way Advait bet Ekam and made a chutney of him. He really seems to put off with the thought that Nehmat slept with Ekam.🤣

Loved how Advait confessed that he only used Mallika and never loved her, wished he does the same in the show.

I really laughed hard when I read Naaz was beaten black and blue. Really hate that b**ch. That was good punishment that she got.

Rama is really smart in your FF.

Part 10

Lol, loved the way Jasmine's plan got backfired like in the show. That was the most amazing part.

Although, I'm not really a fan of Niknaaz, I loved their scene in this part.

Lastly, one side Ekam he has won the love trophy but in reality, I feel he has already lost it.

Part 11

Loved how Advait took Nehmat for an outing and scared her that he is going to murder her.😆

Whoa, Nikhil didn't turn up to pick up Naaz, something very unexpected.

Really loved how Advait disobeyed Jasmine's orders, wish he does the same even in the show.

Part 12

Loved how Nehmat took the whole limelight and was suggested to stand in the elections. That whole part was amazing.

But I didn't understand the last part like Advait,😆

What did the word Maika mean there?


Maika is the turning point of the story.

I am writing it now

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Posted: 2 years ago
#34

Part thirteen


At Kapoor's residence

The puzzled husband thought real hatd

Maika!!.

She's gone to Sandhus?? But why out of sudden?

Then he recalled Rupi 's words to Nehmat during the marriage.

If u feel suffocated with the burden of the forced marriage, u can always return.


Oh my God! She took a big step without informing anyone. He rushed towards his bedroom. Her clothes were still in the closet


No, she can't ruin things for me now. She is the ticket to my political career. I need her.

He decided to meet her at Sandhus and find out


The furious Jasmin decided to try new ways to stop Nehmat from joining the election campaign and decided to expose her reality in public. Using fake identity she leaked Nehmat 's bkg to a reporter.


At Sandhus residence.


Sandhus welcomed their son in law warmly. Sati then requested for nehmat to be around a while to help her with the house chores and taking care of the family. Literally, all were ill from the short trip to Amritsar.

He gave his consent instantly stating keep her as long as u want little realising his words were gonna land him in a huge mess in near future.


On the way back to Kapoors , he received a call from Malika.

She seemed very nervous.

" Advait, pls mujhey bechalo" ( pls save me)

Shocked he questioned her.

" Kya hua, Malika. Itni ghebrayi hui kyun ho".

( What happened? Why are u so afraid).

She replied in a shaky voice

" Yahan market ke pass kuch ledke mere piche padgeye".

( A few guys are after me in the market)

Line disconnected.

" Hello! Hello!.

She didn't answer


He tracked her location through his phone and managed to reach on time to save her from the notorious guys


She hugged him tightly

(Picture clicked) .

He tried to release himself but she pretended to fall in his arms and pulled him closer

( Picture clicked).


Advait on the verge to save Malika didn't realize he was trapped and the person who took the snaps was none other than Ekam.


He sent Malika home and proceeded for a business meeting.


Naaz and Nikhil small fights started over his laziness and not taking responsibility like his older brother. The former began realising she married the wrong guy


Shamsher didn't like the idea of Nehmat putting up with Sandhus now that she had garnered fame through her heroic acts.


The next day

Media gathered in front of Kapoor's residence demanding for answers. The local press released two headlines.

One of Nehmat being an orphan. Not related to Sandhus and Virks. Belonging to a criminal father.

From a broken family.


The other of Advait Malika extra marrital affair. The pictures of them hugging and in close proximity.


The furious Shamsher slammed that the information was false. Opposition parties are just tarnishing Kapoor's image


The reporters retaliated stating the marriage was forced. Malika disappeared on wedding day


The puzzled politician to himself

How they know so much?

Is jasmin behind all this??


Advait finally realized he was trapped and suspected his wife's ex lover behind the misdeed.

He cursed his own foolishness.


Seeing Malika and Advait's pictures , the furious Rupi decided to break Advait and Nehmat 's marriage. He couldn't save Tejo but will not repeat the same for her daughter


If Advait loved Malika he better just be with her. Nehmat should move on single. She has a good opportunity now in politics.

And who the hell leaked Nehmat 's background ??

Is jasmin in Moga??


Rupi was determined to get Nehmat 's life straight.

She had gone through a lot.


The next day , he met up with Shamsher at Kapoor's declaring there was nothing left between Nehmat and Advait. He demanded for her stuff.

The Kapoor's tried consoling him but he remained adamant .

Nehmat was their ticket to the campaign and they couldn't afford to lose her

Her marriage with Advait hasn't been legally registered and that gave her grandpa more opportunities to separate the duo.

Thanks to all rhe recent happenings that they forgotten to register their sons' marriages.


Naaz took the advantage to ditch Nikhil and marry Advait

On the other hand, Malika was in the same boat. Marry Advait and take revenge against his family.


Nehmat broke down real bad. Two heartaches in a row. First Ekam then Advait.

She was glad to be released from the forced marriage though.

Swored never to return to Kapoor's.


She ignored Advait's calls


In his bedroom.


He gulped two glasses of red wine to soothe his frustrations.

How to convince her he was trapped.

The time when he needed her the most, that was the time he was losing her

The determination in him grew with every passing of the minutes.

He had to get Nehmat back into his life by hook or by crook .


To be continued

Edited by Aniash - 2 years ago
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Part fourteen


Ekam remained in the delusion that he would win Nehmat this time. Advait will lose .

And for that Malika had to be pushed towards the latter to keep him away from his ex.


The Kapoor's were shocked with Malika's statement in the public that Advait ruined her life.

He loved her but betrayed her at the same time.

After marrying Nehmat, he still kept his relationship with her( Malika) .

The women 's NGOs supported Malika.

Advait was totally removed from the campaign. Jasmine felt relieved hearing the great news


Advait was forced to accept Malika as a wife if he intended to get his path cleared

Kapoor's had no choice but to accept her

Malika gained tremendous public sympathy. Shamsher decided to use that as his strength to get his son back into track as before.


Advait was not happy with his father's decision. He wanted Nehmat instead. Malika irked him to the core. Nehmat was the actual ticket to his victory plus she was Ekam's gf

So kill two birds with a stone.

Remarry Nehmat and get selected in the election campaign . At the same time keep her away from her ex


Advait made his own plans without anyone's knowledge. First he had to woo Rupi in order to get Nehmat back into his life . And it had to be in a twisted way

He planned to create fake docs to become a paying guest at Sandhus with a different personality and identity

A sardar from London who came down to Moga to invest in small businesses and help them grow.

A selfless deed that will impress Rupi.


It was a hard decision to pretend to be good as he wasn't that sort of an individual but in order to accomplish his goals, the turnaround was required. He wanted Nehmat by hook or by crook .


Meanwhile Naaz joined hands with her mother. They plotted to kill Nikhil in an accident so her path would be cleared. She could then pursue Advait . Kidnap Malika and sit at her place in the mandap


Ekam felt relieved that Advait has been removed from his path to pursue Nehmat.

He would visit Sandhus and try to impress them to get Nehmat back into his life

After all they knew, the girl loved him dearly.


Since Nehmat was no longer attached to the Kapoor's, Rupi intended to register her to participate for the coming elections on behalf of Sandhus. She will take his place.



Everyone had their own plans. But destiny decides the end results


The end

Edited by Aniash - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Note.


Onscreen is pathetic. So i lose the inspiration to write more

Not sure what they are planning but it's all a mess

It would have been a treat to see nehvait journey but all they show is nehkam and advait behaving like an id***

For those who have followed tq for reading.

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Originally posted by: Aniash

Note.


Onscreen is pathetic. So i lose the inspiration to write more

Not sure what they are planning but it's all a mess

It would have been a treat to see nehvait journey but all they show is nehkam and advait behaving like an id***

For those who have followed tq for reading.

Honestly, even I lost interest to continue my story because I have a very dreadful feeling that Nehvait are not going to be the endgame.

It's all about Nehkam.

But you should finish this story dear.

How many more parts are there?

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Honestly, even I lost interest to continue my story because I have a very dreadful feeling that Nehvait are not going to be the endgame.

It's all about Nehkam.

But you should finish this story dear.

How many more parts are there?


That's why i am not keen as well.

They are promoting nehkam more

I didn't plan the parts.

It's just that Advait plays a double personality.

One of a paying guest in Sandhus where he will get closer to Nehmat. She doesn't know who he actually is. He uses a turban and beard with black contact lens. Rupi will be amused with him and decided to get Nehmat hitched to him little knowing that he is Advait

Ekam also will try his luck

Advait will be missing on his marriage day with malika. Instead he will be at another mandap as the sardar with nehmat

No one knows he is Advait

He will trick everyone and marries Nehmat once again

Ekam will meet with an accident and won't be able to reach on time.

Malika will be stranded.

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Originally posted by: Aniash


That's why i am not keen as well.

They are promoting nehkam more

I didn't plan the parts.

It's just that Advait plays a double personality.

One of a paying guest in Sandhus where he will get closer to Nehmat. She doesn't know who he actually is. He uses a turban and beard with black contact lens. Rupi will be amused with him and decided to get Nehmat hitched to him little knowing that he is Advait

Ekam also will try his luck

Advait will be missing on his marriage day with malika. Instead he will be at another mandap as the sardar with nehmat

No one knows he is Advait

He will trick everyone and marries Nehmat once again

Ekam will meet with an accident and won't be able to reach on time.

Malika will be stranded.


I dont have enough words to praise your writing dear ❤️

All i can say is that I soo wish you were the writer for UD

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Posted: 2 years ago
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off topic guys

but there is pakistani drama tere bin starting soon, starring yumna zaidi and wahaj ali

it has all the elements we wanted with Nehvait, two strong personalities clashing, tashan, bharam etc

please check out the OST

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