Waqt ne kiya kya haseen sitam-Anugun SS Chap 36 updated - Page 18

Posted: 1 years ago

2 reason i changed a story line is because

1. The success GG was having she was bound sooner or later have a kill later on 

2. the story needed a spicing up a bit so had to change the track 

Sorry if i have disappointed you. 

Posted: 1 years ago

Ok fine šŸ™‚ but don't end the character of ridz and gunhun's bua plz ,kyunki ridz ki wajah se aapki stories mujhe boht achi lagti hainšŸ˜™šŸ˜

Posted: 1 years ago

I'm sure they will be back again according to mystery stories....

Posted: 1 years ago

well definitely there is a twist so lets see 

Posted: 1 years ago

Where is next update suhani? I am so missing your storiesšŸ˜ŠšŸ˜Š plz update soon

Posted: 1 years ago

Chapter 35: Delhi Trip

Anu: tickets???

Priya: yes, but why will she send to to me?

Annu: Good luck, tumhe uski sabse zyada zarurat hone wali hai and leaves from there.

Yug and GC follows him and stops him

GC: Annu ruk.

Yug: Tu kuch janta hai iske baare mein.

Annu: Nahi, aur na hi mujhe jaana hai.

GC: Dekh tera Priya se shaadi karna hume pata hai aur samjte hai

Flashback:

GC: Tu Priya se shaadi kar raha hai?

Yug: Kyun?

Ankit: Anubhav saaf saaf batiye ho kya raha hai? Aap use shaadi karne wale hai jiski wajah

Anu: Mujhe koi shauq nahi hai Priya se lekin Priya is upto something

GC: Phir yeh shaadi kyun?

Annu: Chachu agar ghar mein raheji toh uspe nazar rakhna aasan ho jaata hai aur aap sab agar uspe nazar rakhege toh mein Bhatnagar Mansion mein rehkar kuch investigate kar paauga . Isse uski wish K

fam mein rehne ki puri ho jaayegi aur mein is ghar mein nahi reh sakta toh it works out for me too.

Yug: Chal theek hai yeh bhi maan liya lekin GG ko toh bata de plan ke baare mein who toh yahi sochegi

ki yeh sab tu reality mein kar raha hai.

Annu: No bhai, yeh mera badla hai I dnt want her to be involved aur waise bhi usne Priya ki wajah se pura parivaar khoya hai who Delhi mein safe raheji.

Flashback Ends

Annu leaves from there and while in the car he thinks: GG ne Priya ko waha kyun bulaya, Ab tumhare dimag mein kya chal raha hai Gungun? Please be safe,Bhagwan please help her in the revenge.

Anubhav dials GG number.

Anubhav: Tumne Priya ko waha bulaya.

GG: wellā€¦. Wellā€¦. Na Hi na Hello seedha sawaal I must say badi fikar ho rahi hai apni Wife ki?

Anubhav: uski nahi tumhari ho rahi hai.

GG: Meri fikar karne ke liya thank you but tumhe nahi lagta ki mein revenge business mein tumse aur tumhari wife se thoda aage hu toh luck toh tumhe aur tumhari wife ko chahiye mujhe nahi so Good luck

let the revenge game begin

Anu: Gungunā€¦..

GG: Bhatnagar mansion mein reh rahe ho kyun?

Anu: woh mera ghar hai meri aachi aur buri yaadein hai us ghar mein toh aache baatein ko yaad karne aur bura yaadein ke saath Jeene ke liye waha reh raha hu.

GG: Whatever I am not interested but I am interested in one thing thou?

Anu: whats that?

GG: Agar revenge game mein Champ ko kuch hua toh tumhari wife ka Murder karne se koi nahi rok paayega get it.

Anu: I promise on that.

GG: Good well then dobara mera number ko find karne ka zyada kasht mat karna dnt worry I will message you when I ned to talk to you. Yeh number ab off hojaayege toh koi problem hi nahi hogi.

Anu cuts the call and takes out Ridz and Champā€™s pic. He looks at them and cries because he is helpless but he knows he needs to be strong for the revenge on priya.He quickly wipes his tears and gets out of the car and goes to his room in bhatnagar mansion.

 

Priya is in the office waiting room when a person ask her to follow her and they go to the meeting room. GG walks in and looks at Priya.

GG: Oh hello Mrs Kulshrehth how are you?

Priya: I am fine. Bigger Question is why am I here?

GG: Geez relax sit down, coffee ya tea?

Priya: huhhh???

GG: Would you like coffee or tea? Formaity naam ki bhi cheez hoti hai and I am just doing that.

Priya: Not interested.

GG: well then business then. I know you ate interested in knowing who brought your work place and technically I would have love to but unfortunately I didnā€™t and I am kind of liking this new layer in town but a company whose loss is as bad as your company I wouldnā€™t even buy it.

Priya: well then if you didnā€™t buy it then good luck because someone else in in your territory now what will you do?

GG: dnt worry about it I will handle it with care.

Priya leaves and GG looks worried, Raashi sees her and ask

Raashi: you worried about something?

GG: yes , apparently new player is in town who buys small business like I do and I dnt like competition. When I am on a mission to destroy Anubhav and Priya a new player addition is not what I need to concentrate on. Find me the player.

Raashi: Okay I will get on it.

GG: Also Stop giving my number to Anubhav to contact me.

GG calls GC.

GC: GG tum theek toh ho na?

GG: Mein theek hu chachu. I am missing you, Bhaiya and Ankit a lot.

GC: hum sab theek hai par abhi thodi der pehle kuch hua tha.

Flashback: Priya enters the house in Angry mode.

BP: Priya kya hua?

Priya: BP woh mein aaj Delhi gayi thi.

Suddenly there is a pin drop silence.

BP: Delhi kyun?

Priya: Ms Bhatanagar se milne.

BM: Gungun bitiya se kya kaam tha, uska parivaar toh tumne khatam kar diya ab kya karne gayi thi.

Priya: BM please dnt start this again mujhe na hi koi interest hai uske parivaar mein aur na usme mujhe joh chahaiye who mujhe mil gaya hai.

BM: Acha hai lekin joh mila hai jiske liye itni badi kimmat chukai hai woh toh is ghar mein hi nahi hai.

Sargam: Jiji sab chodo na ab ek saal ho gaya hai.

Gc: Aage kya hua?

Priya: turns out usne meri company nahi kharidi hai abmujhe us insaan ko dhundna hoga jisne meri job mujhse cheen li.

GC: Toh is baat ka gussa hai ki tumhe nayi job searchkarni padegi ya is baat ka ki GG ne tumhari company nahi kharidi aur now you must start your search again?

Priya: Dono baat ka.

GC: toh karo usme ghar pe shanti bhang karne ki aur khana na khaani ki kya zid kar rahi ho. Faltu ka time pass hai mein toh bahar jaaraha hu.

Flashback ends.

GG: chachu is she a small girl to throw such tantrum, please itna zid toh Ridz bhi nahi karti thi.

They go silent.

GC: I am sorry uski bahut yaad hoti hogi na tujhe.

GG: Aati hai aur uski yaad ne hi mera revenge ka.

GC: Tune Chaamp ko phone kiya?

GG: Nahi, abhi karugi

GC: Thodi der baad karna Abhi Annu uske saath hai isliye.

GG: Champ Chant Chashmish se baat karne laga?

GC: Nahi, aur Annu abhi tak sorry keh raha hai use. Waise GG tune uski Company nahi kharidi toh kisne kharidi?

Other side in Flashback:

Anubhav Assistant brings him a file.

Aman: Sir, yeh who company ki file.

Anubhav: Thank you

Aman: Sir, if you dnt mind me asking why are you buying the company who is in loss and where Priya Madam Works?

Anubhav: long story but make sure no one knows about this especially Priya.

Aman: Okay sir.

Anubhav: Ab Game mein Mazaa Aayega. Mrs Priya Kulshreshth agar if I dnt make you spin in this revenge game then I will surely change my name.

Flashback ends.

GG: Joh bhi hai Chachu game interesting hote jaa raha hai.Anyways bye chachu I will call champ.

Screen freezes.

 

Posted: 1 years ago

Very well written story lots of suspense interesting & curious also what's going on next partšŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘

Posted: 1 years ago

Chapter: 36 And they Meet Againā€¦..

GG calls Champ up as Anubhav is about to leave the phone rings and Champs sees the caller ID and gets excited.

Champ: Beautifulā€¦ā€¦ā€¦ā€¦ with a wide smile.

Anubhav stops hearing her name but leaves the room to give champ privacy coz he knows Champ will not talk if he is present there so he hides behind the door outside.

GG: Hey Champ, How are you?

Champ:  mein theek hu.

GG: Good aur padai theek se kar rahe ho na?

Champ: Ha bahut aache se pata hai Papa ne mujhe homework mein help ki aur mujhe full marks aaye.

GG: Thatā€™s good, Very good so isi Khushi mein gift mein kyachahiye?

Champ: Chocolates.

GG: Done. Champ aapse ek sawaal puchu?

Champ nods his head and Anubhav gets intrigued.

GG: Aap Chachu se nazar kyun ho?

Champ: Kyunki uski wajah se aap aur ridz aaj yaha nahi haiaur usne aur aunty se shaadi kar li. Aap kyun nahi hai uske saath usne aapko chod diya.

Anubahv feels bad that Champ hatred is because of his revenge and he had promised Gungun that he will not get hurt but he is hurting and I cant comfort him. He leaves from there.

Next day in office GG is also feeling bad that she is also a reason that cham is hurting when RV and Raashi enters, they look at each other before calling out GG

RV: Any problems.

GG: Nth, just spoke to champ yesterday and was worried but nth more anyways what about you guy. What brings you guys here on a Sunday morning when you should be with your beloved ones.

Raashi: pata tha you will forgot, its Sunday Breakfast time we decided to do today forgetting all the worries for few hours.

GG: Oh yes, cmon lets do this and some place who serves mimosa with breakfast please.

Raashi: Got it lets  go.

All 3 of them have fun over breakfast talking, laughing and for once GG felt good leaving the worries behind and being that GG what she was when her Father was alive and trust me that was the best smile she might have had since that day.

In Bhatnagar Mansion.

Anubhav wakes up feeling good, he doesnā€™t know why but he is feeling good today, its being long since he got this feeling and as usual like every Sunday he goes to K house for breakfast. One rule that BP set is that even if he stays away every Sunday he is to have breakfast here.

Priya: Wow, someone is in a good mood.

Anubhav: Abhi tak tha phir tum aayi aur ā€¦ā€¦ā€¦ you know the rest.

Priya: Why are you in good mood?

Anu: Why are you in bad mood?

Priya: Because I am Angry.

Anu: good chalo koi toh hai joh tumhara mood kharab kar sake. I am happy that you sad.

Priya gives a fake smile and go away.

On the dining Table Anubhav looks at BP and says

Annu: BP, I am going out of town for few days.

BP: Seher se bhahar kaha?

Flashback: After Brunch GG and gang is in the office when RV gets a call, he looks a bit tense and looks at GG and Raashi

GG: Kya hua?

RV: The person who brought the company where Priya Kulshreshth was working was none other then Anubhav Kulshreshth.

GG and Raashi: kya????

GG: this doesnā€™t make sense why would Anubhav buy the company?

RV: Apparently no idea but he did and he did it very cleverly.

GG: Yeah, uska talent hai yeh and pehli baar sahi jagah use kiya hai.

Raashi: Tum shocked nahi ho, na gussa ho kyun?

GG: Pata nahi joh cheeze sense nahi banati uspe gussa karke kya fayda?

RV: Ek aur cheeze the guy who helped in hiring the mystery man he is in Mumbai.

GG: what you looking at book my ticket Raashi and RV getme the information.

Wherelse in lucknow Aman gives the same information.

GG and Anubhav: Mumbai here I comeā€¦ā€¦ā€¦

Flashback ends.

Anubhav in present: Mumbai

BP and all goes silent again. Priya looks confused and then Sargam speaks.

Sargam: toh aacha hai na tum Priya ko bhi leke jaana tumhare saath.

Chandru: sargam kya tum bhul gayi kiā€¦

Priya: Kya bhul gayi papa?

GC: Annu Mumbai kisi ko apne saath nahi leke jaata.

Priya: Aisa Kyun?

Annu: None of your concern aur Maa aap kaisi bhul sakte ho Mumbai mein kisi ko nahi leke jaata no abhi aur na 7 saaath se. Mumbai aur GG ki memories hai. Kisi Aire Gaire ko waha leke jaane ke baare mein toh soch hi nahi sakta.

Sargam: Annu, woh teri Patni hai.

Annu: Nahi, woh meri kuch nahi hai, yeh maine Akriti ke waqt bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi keh raha hu, Aur Maa aap jitna jaldi is baat ko accept karle hum sab ke liye aacha hoga.

Anubhav gets up from the table without completing his brunch and was about to leave when BP stops him.

BP: Anu ruk.

Anubhav stops and turns towards BP

BP: Kab nikal raha hai.

Anu: Abhi thodi der mein

Yug: Chal mein tujhe chod deta hu, Papa aate waqt Khushi keGhar bhi jaake aauga toh thodi der ho aayegi aur Choti Chachi Chavi ke liyekuch bhejna ho toh de dejiye mein aate waqt uske hostel bhi dete aauga.

GC: ruk mein bhi aata hu.

They all leave and in the car.

GC: Annu Mumbai mein tu kaha rukega.

Anu: Flat pe.

Yug: Bhai, tu theek toh hai na.

Annu: ha bhaiya mein theek hu.

Delhi:

Raashi: you sure about Mumbai right.

GG: yeah, absolutely donā€™t worry.

Raashi: where will you stay

GG: Flat pe.

GG hugs RV and Raashi on the airport and leave for Mumbai.

Mumbai: Both Land on the airport and Prakash Bhaiya and is wife are both waiting outside in tension because both know that they are coming to Mumbai, but Anu and GG donā€™t know that they have come to pick both of them up together.

Anu and GG see PB from different Direction and they both reach there and look at each other.

Anu and GG: Tum???

Both are shocked, both are having emotions in their eyes and PB and his wife looks scared as to what will happen now.

Screen Freezes.

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Chapter 37. Mumbai 3.0

GG: tum?

Anu: tum?

GG: tum yaha kya kar raha ho?

Anu: Tumse matlab

GG: Matlab kuch nahi hai mujhe tumse toh bilkul bhi nahi.

Anu: oh hello, mujhe koi matlab nahi hai tumse.

GG: youā€¦.. snapping her finger at him.

Anu: mein kyaā€¦.. ha bolo na aage.

PB: Didi aur bhaiya please shant ho jaaye, dekho sab aapko dekh rahe hai please hum yeh car mein bhi kar lete hai. Theek hai?

GG and Anu: Sorry PB and they all sit in the car.

 GG to herself: yeh yaha kya kar raha hai kahi mera plan na ulta pad jaaye.

Anu to himself: this is not a good option how can I find out about the shadow guy if GG is here.

PB: Kaha jaana hai.

GG and Anu: Flat pe and they look at each other.

PB looks confused and looks at GG through the mirror and shejust nod her head into no and Anubhav saw it but didnā€™t understand anything. PB dropped them into the flat and left.

Anubhav and GG were alone in the room after a year again. They still had lingering emotions but what that was still to be revealed. They looked at each other

GG: What?

Anu: you look good.

GG: Sirf good, she says closing the distance between them.

Anubhav takes a step

Anu: No, I mean you look good back in the old avatar.

GG: I am looking sexier than your current wife, you can say that I will take it as a compliment.

Anu: You always looked Sexy

GG: Thank you but now answer my Question.

Anu: Mumbai mein kya kar rahe ho? Yahi puchna tha na

GG: Samajdaar bhi ho

Anu: Kaam se aaya ho.

GG to himself: Agar yeh yaha rahega toh mein badla kaisi lugi.

Anu: Snap out of it, what you are thinking about?

GG: nothing, sofa yaha hai go to sleep if you want or do whatever you want to do.

GG goes to the room and change onto a party wear and comes out. Anu looks at GG and is so mesmerized by her look.

Anu: we are going out?

GG: hum nahi mein aur mein club jaa rahi hu, toh lock the door and go to sleep, dnt wait up.

GG leaves and goes to the club where she meets up with a man who she had to meet in order to gain information and he slips her a paper which has the location and he leaves.

GG takes few shot and looks at a handsome guy looking at her she walks towards him and takes his hand and takes him aside and kisses him and takes the guy to her place, Here Anubhav is tensed and he is pacing in the house, GC calls him

Anu: Ha chachu, kya hua?

GC: tu Mumbai theek se paunch toh gaya hai na?

Anu: Ha chachu.

GC: aur tu hai kaha?

Anu: Flat par

GC, Yug and Ankit: Flat pe?

Anu: GG ka flat

While he is talking to GC, the door opens and its GG with some random guy, laughing and stops looking at Anu and intentionally she kisses the guy and Anu rolls his eyes and GG leads the guy inside.

GC: kya hua?

Anu: kuch nahi Chachu, I will talk to you soon and cuts the call.

HE looks at towards the door and tears forms in his eyes while imagining the worst and takes the pillow and sleeps on the sofa. In morning he hears the door opens and a guy walking out taking his blazer and gives a smile at Anu and leaves, after a while GG comes out and looks ta him and sit across him and Anu pushes the cup of coffee towards her.

Anu: coffee and Aspirin for your hangover.

GG: Thank you

Anu: Had fun last night.

GG: yup, its being long I had fun but thanks to you nor you would be here and I would be angry seeing your face and sleep with a Stanger and yes, before you ask me he was good in bed and takes the coffee and leaves from there.

She gets ready to go somewhere when she comes out she sees Anu also ready to go somewhere.

GG: Where you going?

Anu: why should I tell you?

GG: well good luck and leaves the door.

They both went separately but their destination was same.They entered the ball room where the party was held and was mingling along with everyone but unaware that they both are in the same places.  GG was feeling like someone was watching him but cant see the face since it was a masquerade party and when she left the room, the mysterious guy was following and she made her way to the emergency exit she immediately pushed him against the wall and put a knife near his neck.

She removed the mask and saw RV, she immediately moved back.

GG: what yu doing here?

RV: wow, I need to learn that move.

GG: 2 more sec I could have slit your neck

RV: I am following someone. After you left I got information that someone else was looking for him so I came here and saw you.

GG: who else?

RV: no idea but if we need to  find out we need to get to Mystery man roombut I dnt know which room he is staying in.

GG: 214

RV: how?

GG: my sources.

RV: you slept with the guy who booked the room didnā€™t you?

Flashback: The slip that was passed on in the club was the person name who booked the mystery guys room and the photo of him, so GG spotted him and well its the guy whom she brought home last night.

RV: Sneaky now lets go.

They reach the room floor and they about to enter when theyhear a voice

Voice: its of no use, he is not here.

RV and GG turn around and its shocked.

Screen Freezes. 




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