Sutapa’s 12 word stories 🎶🗣🎼

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Romcom Reigners

Posted: 2 years ago
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Drinking nectar from flowers, flying freely on colorful wings. Short, happy life.


Candles blown, cake cut. Explosion!. Birthday girl lifeless. Police interrogate step brother.



Crispy bite, spicy Paanipuri burst . He lovingly wipes her cheek….Sweet beginnings…

Feeds Kheer to hungry son. He turns, expecting mom. No one there…..

Homeless beggar offers stale bread. Heartbroken furry friend, abandoned by millionaire master.


Peheli rasoi. Atta spill. He wipes her, thrilling unexpected touch… eyelock…

Honey cold, clammy. He wept, hugging her. Dripping honey into honey’s mouth.



Pineapple upside down cake !…with Brown sugar, Rum. Tasted like mother’s hug


Cooking exams. New ingredients. Roasted instinctively , avoided frying, Tasting time, unexpected outcome …


Kids ate lollipop. Shopkeeper fines mother, she slaps kids. Child abuse charges.


Licking off each other, mouth melting cheesecake. Lovers melted , reached heavenly heights.

Relished dinner, Meatloaf, wine. Whispering sweet nothings, kissing, sleeping together under stars.

Relishing fish fries, crunchy coat, delicious buttery softness. Fishbone stuck. Choking, panicking.


She boiled a funny bone, and made laughing stock . It was Humerous.

Stealing Mangoes. Dogs chased, awakened gardener. Fall into ditch, broken limb. Nightmare.


Tasting pickled lemons. Tinkling anklets. Yearned for her....Met silence, darkness, eeriness.


Tiger bites off brains. Writing a Bite. Brainless bite despatched to contest.

Tortured, beaten, escaped luxurious farmhouse. Befriended loving beggar. Eating trash, wagging tail.



Baarish Ki boondein, Chai pakode. Unki badti aakhiri nishani. Aankhon mein paani.
Raindrops, tea n crispy snacks , caressing his last gift ,her unborn child , with teary eyes.

Mithayi mein chupake khilaya zeher, badi wafa se nibhayenge, tumhari yeh bewafaayi.

You fed me poison disguised as sweet, I will take revenge of your betrayal very patiently n lovingly .



Aaya gussa,Rasgulla thoosa. Gusaa gull, gaye pighal. Phaili mithaas, pyaar bindaas. (Translation: Very angry , stuffed rasgulla into mouth, anger melted away, lover melted , spread sweetness and shared loads of love.

Aayiye jaanejaan , nosh farmayiye kabab ka , chalkayiye meherbaani ka jaam hum par (Translation: Come sweetheart, relish kababs, sprinkle wine of kindness/ love over me.)

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sutapasima





Drinking nectar from flowers, flying freely on colorful wings. Short, happy life.


Candles blown, cake cut. Explosion!. Birthday girl lifeless. Police interrogate step brother.



Crispy bite, spicy Paanipuri burst . He lovingly wipes her cheek….Sweet beginnings…

Feeds Kheer to hungry son. He turns, expecting mom. No one there…..

Homeless beggar offers stale bread. Heartbroken furry friend, abandoned by millionaire master.


Peheli rasoi. Atta spill. He wipes her, thrilling unexpected touch… eyelock…

Honey cold, clammy. He wept, hugging her. Dripping honey into honey’s mouth.



Pineapple upside down cake !…with Brown sugar, Rum. Tasted like mother’s hug


Cooking exams. New ingredients. Roasted instinctively , avoided frying, Tasting time, unexpected outcome …


Kids ate lollipop. Shopkeeper fines mother, she slaps kids. Child abuse charges.


Licking off each other, mouth melting cheesecake. Lovers melted , reached heavenly heights.

Relished dinner, Meatloaf, wine. Whispering sweet nothings, kissing, sleeping together under stars.

Relishing fish fries, crunchy coat, delicious buttery softness. Fishbone stuck. Choking, panicking.


She boiled a funny bone, and made laughing stock . It was Humerous.

Stealing Mangoes. Dogs chased, awakened gardener. Fall into ditch, broken limb. Nightmare.


Tasting pickled lemons. Tinkling anklets. Yearned for her....Met silence, darkness, eeriness.


Tiger bites off brains. Writing a Bite. Brainless bite despatched to contest.

Tortured, beaten, escaped luxurious farmhouse. Befriended loving beggar. Eating trash, wagging tail.



Baarish Ki boondein, Chai pakode. Unki badti aakhiri nishani. Aankhon mein paani.


Mithayi mein chupake khilaya zeher, badi wafa se nibhayenge, tumhari yeh bewafaayi.



Aaya gussa,Rasgulla thoosa. Gusaa gull, gaye pighal. Phaili mithaas, pyaar bindaas. (Translation: Very angry , stuffed rasgulla into mouth, anger melted away, lover melted , spread sweetness and shared loads of love.

Aayiye jaanejaan , nosh farmayiye kabab ka , chalkayiye meherbaani ka jaam hum par (Translation: Come sweetheart, relish kababs, sprinkle wine of kindness/ love over me.)

Congratulations Suta for winning a few Awards.

Wonderful micro stories. ❤️

Edited by Viswasruti - 2 years ago
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Romcom Reigners

Posted: 2 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Congratulations Suta for winning a few Awards.

Wonderful micro stories. ❤️

Thank you Madhu

Here are some that were rejected .


Dainty hand turned clammy. He wept,hugging her. Dripping honey into honey’s mouth.


Lemons wafted fragrance, anklets tinkled. He rushed yearningly. Met silence, darkness, eeriness.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Congrats Congratulations GIF - Congrats Congratulations Congrats Gif GIFsSo Well Written Loretta Scott GIF - So Well Written Loretta Scott Kemushichan GIFsMulan Mushu GIF - Mulan Mushu Proud GIFs


From the bottom of my heart, I am so happy that you won for such beautiful entries. Keep it up! 👏

Hope to see more from you 🤗

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Romcom Reigners

Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Congrats Congratulations GIF - Congrats Congratulations Congrats Gif GIFsSo Well Written Loretta Scott GIF - So Well Written Loretta Scott Kemushichan GIFsMulan Mushu GIF - Mulan Mushu Proud GIFs


From the bottom of my heart, I am so happy that you won for such beautiful entries. Keep it up! 👏

Hope to see more from you 🤗

thank you for your sweet appreciation my dear Tannu 🤗



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Romcom Reigners

Posted: 2 years ago
#6

Another rejected 12 word bite

I thought mentioning food (fish/octopus) was enough but it was not so .. theme had to be eating food .


Scuba diving, admiring fish. Octopus grabs feet, struggle underwater. Oxygen low…. Panic ….

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago
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Ohhh, I didn't see this thread! Lovely entries!! mazaa aa gaya 🤗

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Romcom Reigners

Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Ohhh, I didn't see this thread! Lovely entries!! mazaa aa gaya 🤗

O I am thinking of composing more such ..on various theme not necessarily food .

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Sutapasima

O I am thinking of composing more such ..on various theme not necessarily food .

sounds amazing!! Waiting for more 🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This thread is like a chota packet of wholesome happiness

Loved it a lot

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