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Posted: 2 years ago
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My first story on Gitya!



It was morning, Aditya woke up and automatically look at the right side of the bed to see Ginni! But she was not there, Adi thaught she woke up early and left to do the morning chores at the kitchen!

He was quick to go to the washroom to freshen up before Ginni coming and lecturing him being lazy and still at bed!

He got freshen up and got ready! She did not come yet lecturing him! Lil surprised he came out of their room calling his wife!

"Ginni! Ginni! Kaha ho tum? "

That's when he met with Akash who was looking at him confused!

" kiya hua? Ginni kaha hai?"

Akash kept on looking!

"Oye hello! Tujhe ho kiya gaya?

" Apko kiya hua? Why are you looking for angel didi?"

" Areh yaar, I have some work with her, I could not find her from morning!"

" Then you have to go to Angel didi's dhabbe! Because last night she left!"

That's when it hit him! Yesterday Darji got back from his yatra and then they told everything about their relationship that they don't want this marriage and convince him that they should go their own ways! After a lot of struggle Darji accepted their appeal and gave Ginni permission to leave and then Ginni left! Adi left her at the dhabbe and returned home and he dont know why he was not feeling well, was felling restless and with a heavy heart fall asleep and when he woke up this morning he almost forgot about Ginni leaving the mansion, leaving him!


Akash left a lost in thought Adi and then Adi slowly returned to his room, yes, it was now him room not their room! He didnt know when it became their room from his room! He was not happy when it slowly became their room And now that it again became his room he was not at peace either. Something was missing, some void! Its very suffocating! He could not bear it!

He stormed out from his room and started his car to go to the dhabba! He did not know why but he knew he had to meet Ginni at that moment! He did not know whats changed, all he knew that whether they wanted that forced marriage or not, Ginni became a part of his daily life and he did not want to change that! So, he wanted to start his day after seeing her only!




That's it! I still dont know if I will continue or not! Lets see!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: FariaJuthi

My first story on Gitya!



It was morning, Aditya woke up and automatically look at the right side of the bed to see Ginni! But she was not there, Adi thaught she woke up early and left to do the morning chores at the kitchen!

He was quick to go to the washroom to freshen up before Ginni coming and lecturing him being lazy and still at bed!

He got freshen up and got ready! She did not come yet lecturing him! Lil surprised he came out of their room calling his wife!

"Ginni! Ginni! Kaha ho tum? "

That's when he met with Akash who was looking at him confused!

" kiya hua? Ginni kaha hai?"

Akash kept on looking!

"Oye hello! Tujhe ho kiya gaya?

" Apko kiya hua? Why are you looking for angel didi?"

" Areh yaar, I have some work with her, I could not find her from morning!"

" Then you have to go to Angel didi's dhabbe! Because last night she left!"

That's when it hit him! Yesterday Darji got back from his yatra and then they told everything about their relationship that they don't want this marriage and convince him that they should go their own ways! After a lot of struggle Darji accepted their appeal and gave Ginni permission to leave and then Ginni left! Adi left her at the dhabbe and returned home and he dont know why he was not feeling well, was felling restless and with a heavy heart fall asleep and when he woke up this morning he almost forgot about Ginni leaving the mansion, leaving him!


Akash left a lost in thought Adi and then Adi slowly returned to his room, yes, it was now him room not their room! He didnt know when it became their room from his room! He was not happy when it slowly became their room And now that it again became his room he was not at peace either. Something was missing, some void! Its very suffocating! He could not bear it!

He stormed out from his room and started his car to go to the dhabba! He did not know why but he knew he had to meet Ginni at that moment! He did not know whats changed, all he knew that whether they wanted that forced marriage or not, Ginni became a part of his daily life and he did not want to change that! So, he wanted to start his day after seeing her only!




That's it! I still dont know if I will continue or not! Lets see!


Just continue. It's good 👍

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: FariaJuthi




That's it! I still dont know if I will continue or not! Lets see!

You may not know but I know that you should continue 😉😆

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part Two!



Ginni woke up and it took her sometime to understand where she was, it was little unfamiliar yet familiar! Then she realized it was her room in her house onoy but she was not here for the last one month and she finally came back yesterday night!

Aditya gave her a lift and dropped her home! She was feeling really weird when Aditya was leaving! And Aditya looked sad too, may be it was her illussion because he never wanted her as his wife, never wanted her around him!

Ginni left the bed, got freshen up and openned the dhabba and started peparing for the customer, it was time customer start coming!

While she was working in the kitchen a lot of memories from last one month popped up in her mind which all includes that one person - Aditya Raj Singh!

They were never wanted this marriage, they always wanted to live their separate life but waited for Darji to return and thats how they ended up living together for one month!

They were sharing the room, sometimes the bed also but they were nnot husband wife!

She thought when they would go their separate ways then their life will be like before the marriage fiasco happened!

But what she did not considered the effect he has on her! He became a part of her life! She got used to the life where he was almost always around her - fighting, lecturing, saving her from slipping and all! Now as a new day started she could not be at peace because after this long and eventful one month today is the first time when she could not see him after waking up! It made her restless! She could not concentrate on kitchen work! She wanted to meet him but deep down she knew its not possible, they decided to go on their separate ways! She was feeling sad! And was lost in thought and thats when there was a knock on the kitchen door, she came out of her thought and looked in the direction of the door only to see Aditya Raj Singh standing there with a little smile and akwardness!




I am not a good writer, not a fluent one! I have stories on my mind but cant pen it down!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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its good ❤️ keep writing 👍🏼

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hello Friend, this is really good. Loving the story. Please update soon and pls do pm me.


Love,

Mickey

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Last night I wrote the next part and then accidentally press the back button! 😪😪 have to write it again! As hindi is not my langguage and though I I understand hindi its tough for me to write conversation in hindi and in English all emotion can not be exoressed fully! So though I have story in my mind, I am unable to put it in words!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Yaara it happens. Language is not that important aur hum school mein bhi nahi. No one is there to judge our writing skills. What ever is there in our mind you just write. Trust me it will definitely turn awesome..


Waiting for your next one...


By the way may I know your name

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Posted: 2 years ago
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I will try to update ASAP! And my name is Juthi!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hello..


I am Mickey.. nice to meet you 😊

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