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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 2

Priya opened her eyes, the constant beeping of the machine breaking through her unconsciousness. She blinked her eyes for a few seconds till she got used to the brightly lit room, and then she looked around. She was on a hospital couch. She looked at the bed, where the other Priya lay.

“I died?” she croaked out.

“You lied to me?” she asked the doppleganger who shook her head and pointed at the bedside table. Priya’s eyes fell on the calendar. July 2025.

“No. You are safe. But without your accident, your future is...simple put, uncertain.”

“So, to have a future, I must have a near-death experience orchestrated by my father? Did I at least set everything right with all that time-hopping?”

“You did. I cannot tell you what happened, but your every action in the last few hours is what brought me here. And about the accident, it was important because, without it, Ram wouldn’t find the courage to accept his feelings for me... for us.”

Priya scrunched her eyebrows in confusion.

“I know you won’t get it, at least not now. But when you understand, it will be one of the most beautiful moments of your life.”

“Can’t you just tell me what it is?” Priya whined. She was tired of whatever was going on and just wanted to either go back to sleep or wake up from this nightmare.

The other Priya smiled and moved aside. There was a crib on the other side of the bed.

“We couldn’t conceive naturally, so we chose IVF,” she shared.

Priya walked to the crib, but it was empty.

“The doctors have taken her for a checkup. Ram is with her.”

Tears of happiness brimmed in Priya’s eyes.

A girl! She could have a girl! There was a future that was tainted by Mr. Sood and his curses. But if she chose wisely, she will have a future where she is happy and has a child.

“And a husband who loves you so much.”

Priya looked at her doppelgänger in shock. Was she reading her mind?

“Mr. Kapoor loves me? But he said that there was no place for love in his life?”

“Priya, your biggest regret is that you never saw the love you had, and that you were feeling for Ram, until it was too late. You may not realize it, but at this moment, in your time, Ram knows that he is in love with you. And in the future, you will realize your feelings too. But don’t shut yourself from those feelings. We have suffered enough. You and Ram have seen enough pain. It’s time to heal now.”

“And about Vedika, you moved on from whatever feelings you had for Neeraj, so can’t your Mr. Kapoor do the same?” she smiled.

“I don’t understand,” Priya said, still scared and confused.

“You don’t need to. Just close your eyes.”

Priya tried not to, but her eyelids had gone heavy at her words, and she closed them.

“Priya, wake up, Priya!” Ram’s voice was distant, like someone had pushed him away from her.

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“Mr. Kapoor?” she whispered, and then there was noise of doctors and nurses, and Ram calling her name. She opened her eyes and looked up to see a blurry image of the man in white before Ram pushed him aside.

She was tired, so she closed her eyes again until tears rolled down her cheeks and moistened them. Did she really live? She thought she would never see Mr. Kapoor again.

“Is my face so horrible to look at that you started crying?” an emotional Ram said.

“It’s very bad,” Priya whispered. She heard Brinda taunt, but she couldn’t focus on what she said or what Ram replied.

This time, she was falling asleep to wake up to a better future, with no mistake from the past to haunt them.

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And with that, we end. A huge thank you to tournesol, who, as usual, is my life saviour. M tagging a few people who commented and said they wanted to read the end.

Edited by oye_nakhrewaali - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Yayy, update has arrived 😍 Although I had read this once before, I was still looking forward to reading it again.

I love the way you explore Priya's emotions in this story. The way Priya hops through time, only to realize at the end that all she wanted was to have her 'happy ending' with Ram, despite her denial.

Hope RaYa have a daughter in the show as well. 😳

P.S. And congratulations for sweeping multiple titles at the Readers' Choice Awards. So happy for you. 🥳🎉❤

Edited by tournesol - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

And with that, we end. A huge thank you to tournesol, who, as usual, is my life saviour.

Arey, Shibz, don't embarass me 🙈 In fact, thank you for writing the story and correcting the wrongs that happened in RaYa's life. ❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Hope for a better future with the man she loves❤️

Amazing part, loveddd it

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: tournesol

Yayy, update has arrived 😍 Although I had read this once before, I was still looking forward to reading it again.

I love the way you explore Priya's emotions in this story. The way Priya hops through time, only to realize at the end that all she wanted was to have her 'happy ending' with Ram, despite her denial.

Hope RaYa have a daughter in the show as well. 😳

P.S. And congratulations for sweeping multiple titles at the Readers' Choice Awards. So happy for you. 🥳🎉❤

Thank you☺️Without you, this wouldn't have been possible😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Yay! It ends on a beautiful self-aware Note


Meri Subah bana di tumne Shibani🤗



Loved this piece too❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Yay! It ends on a beautiful self-aware Note


Meri Subah bana di tumne Shibani🤗



Loved this piece too❤️

Glad you liked it🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

My favourite part-

“Priya, your biggest regret is that you never saw the love you had, and that you were feeling for Ram, until it was too late.”

Beautiful ending ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

This is sooooo beautiful 😍

Thank you for writing this! I hope to read more of such beautiful gems from you!!!!👏


Cheers!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Rani16

This is sooooo beautiful 😍

Thank you for writing this! I hope to read more of such beautiful gems from you!!!!👏


Cheers!

Glad you liked it🙈

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