Priya-Ram Two Shots: Mending Regrets (Completed on page 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Brilliant!! Love it!! ❤️


Always been intrigued by time travel. Remembered the time turner in HP..


Such an interesting premise..if given a chance what would you change. And what would be the domino effect of the change..transforming the entire landscape of events in the future without really knowing how they will intertwine with everything else!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Brilliant!! Love it!! ❤️


Always been intrigued by time travel. Remembered the time turner in HP..


Such an interesting premise..if given a chance what would you change. And what would be the domino effect of the change..transforming the entire landscape of events in the future without really knowing how they will intertwine with everything else!

Thank you😳 I wanted to explore if CVs hadn't created a few messy plotlines like Vedika in the first place, so what better way than time travel😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Whoa, that was wow... interestingg⭐️... waiting for the second part😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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OMG!

This is Absolutely Noteworthy


I really don't have words to describe how awesome this Time-Turner plot is. I wanted Priya to realise how bot every incident needs to be changed & was so glad to read that in the first instance itself with the MS reveal😳


Then come the other scenes & I can't wait to read the next part. Jaldi dedo please🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Very interesting fiction.

Looking forward to reading further

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shruti_0505

Very interesting fiction.

Looking forward to reading further

Thank you for commenting 🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONIA441

OMG!

This is Absolutely Noteworthy


I really don't have words to describe how awesome this Time-Turner plot is. I wanted Priya to realise how bot every incident needs to be changed & was so glad to read that in the first instance itself with the MS reveal😳


Then come the other scenes & I can't wait to read the next part. Jaldi dedo please🤗

When Sara said that Pri felt guilty about telling her mother MA's truth, I was so pissed at Pri, because she just did what a kid would do. But I was so happy when Pri acknowledged that she didn't care and felt that she taken a correct step.

Hope you like the next one too🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wonderful! You have put Priya's feelings about the major happenings in her life so eloquently! Really wished that the first date scene would have been as you've shown here! Looking forward to the next part!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oyeee hoyyyee! I love everything time travel! As a massive Doctor Who fan, I’m obsessed with all things timey wimey wibbly wobbly!


Loved it! Also it’s so great that your brought out the fact that these two could have just saved so much time with just being upfront in that first meeting. Much ado about the nothings wonly! Could have then spent time on classes for lipatna.


Waiting for the next Part…or is it the previous part? Or is it because I’ve said it now the past that was the future could already be the present?



PS : Future Priya sounds so bad ass!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: bones123

Oyeee hoyyyee! I love everything time travel! As a massive Doctor Who fan, I’m obsessed with all things timey wimey wibbly wobbly!


Loved it! Also it’s so great that your brought out the fact that these two could have just saved so much time with just being upfront in that first meeting. Much ado about the nothings wonly! Could have then spent time on classes for lipatna.


Waiting for the next Part…or is it the previous part? Or is it because I’ve said it now the past that was the future could already be the present?



PS : Future Priya sounds so bad ass!

Now even I am confused ki kaun sa part😳🤣

Agar pehli meeting mein dhang se baat ki hoti toh ab tak yeh log honeymoon pe gaye hote😭😭😭

I hope you like the next part too🙈

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