Red is my favorite color - A #MAAN OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: DJ_3

This was sweet, liked the details on the dialogues and the continuations of the mushiness.😳

For first time writing, this was really nice. Maybe some additional to their apartment settings would help the reader visualize but not necessary. 👍🏼

Thanks a lot for the feedback!!❤❤

Will definitely take care next time!

Sweet n cute romantic scene

Kitty

This is lovely. Bahut high level talent hai forum me....Kudos to Maan..sab bahar aa raha hai.

You write beautifulty yaar. Would love read more from You.

Pls continue writing. Good job.

This is so cute and romantic one!! Loved it😍❤ har chiz 3 baar karne se normal ho jaati h kya anuj🤣

Originally posted by: grace2021

Kitty

This is lovely. Bahut high level talent hai forum me....Kudos to Maan..sab bahar aa raha hai.

You write beautifulty yaar. Would love read more from You.

Pls continue writing. Good job.

Thank you so muchhh❤❤

Will try and write something else soon.!!

Originally posted by: Kp26

This is so cute and romantic one!! Loved it😍❤ har chiz 3 baar karne se normal ho jaati h kya anuj🤣

Haan Anuj se hi pucho 😂

Thank you❤

This is such a cute one❤️