Red is my favorite color - A #MAAN OS

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello everyone.. I have been a silent reader on this forum for a few months.. and a huge maan fan.. I was never a fan of romance or ITV but then maan happened and I'm a gone case now.. Love all your fanfictions and OSs and drabbles.. tried writing a little something for the first time.. definitely not as good as you guys.. but please do give it a read..

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Scene : Maan are back from Udaipur, after all the mess at the shah house, Anu says:

Anu : "mein ghar jaa rahi hu, Anuj abhi abhi aaye honge, Kinju baby tu so jaana Rakhi ben ke paas mein kal subhe aa jaungi"

Anuj's apartment :

Anu rings the bell, Anuj opens the door, wearing a vest and pyjama, towelling his hair dry from the shower he took a few mins ago..

Anuj: "Anu tum toh shah house gayi thi na, yaha kaise, sab theek toh haina, tum theek ho".. and goes on and on

Anu steps in, closes the door, smiles at him and says, "are saans toh lijiye Mr. Anupama Joshi ji.."

Anuj: "haan anu saans toh le lunga main par pehle tum batao tum yaha kyu"

Anu : "woh mera kuch yaha reh gaya tha wahi lene aayi thi.. "

Anuj : "Kya?"

Anu: "Mera dil"

Anuj : "Ufff kya cheesy line maari hai Anu.. yeh line kam se kam 100 crore logo ne boli hogi aaj tak"

Anu pouts and turns away

Anuj slowly walks up to her and hugs her from behind

Anu is shocked and quickly turns around

Anuj : "are anu shock kyu ho rahi ho yeh toh ab humaara rozka haina.. matlab main tumhe hug toh kar sakta hu na"

Anu still pretending to be angry: "hmm"

Anuj walks closer and inches near her face, and huskily whispers: "ab kuch naya kare?"

Anu shivers at the proximity, his scent killing her, the view of his wet hair and biceps not helping at all.. she is unable to form a coherent response and says : "k..ka..kya...."

Anuj : "kya yaar anu.. ab tak toh bas p pe atakti thi.. ab k pe bhi.. anyways.. main keh raha tha.. ki ab kuch naya karte hain.. "

Anu: "kya.. "

Anuj: "boldu"

Anu : "haan"

Anuj moving to her ear, slightly grazing his lips on her ear.. "pakka boldu.."

Anu (breathes a yes)

Anuj suddenly pulls away.. holds her hand.. sits on the sofa and pulls her on his lap.. all in a jiffy.. and before she could understand what was happening.. he turns her to face him, holding her tight, inches dangerously close to her face, and says.." ab sirf bolunga nahi.. karke dikhaunga.."

Anu was not in her senses.. his promixity clouding her mind, could not make out what he meant..

He gently kissed her nose and..

Anuj : "jab tum gussa hoti ho na toh tumhara nose laal ho jaata hai.. aur tum bohot bohot bohot cute lagti ho" (imitating her bohot bohot)

And then kisses her cheek..
Anuj: "Aur jab tum aise blush karti ho amd tumhare cheeks laal hote haina.. tab aur bhi zyada sundar lagti ho"

"Aur..."

Anu.. trying hard to breathe but failing miserably whispers.. "aur..?"

Anuj kisses the parting in her hair..

Anuj : "Aur jab tumhari maang me mere naam ka laal sindoor hoga tab tum iss duniya ke sabse lucky pati ki wife hogi.. isiliye red mera favourite color hai.."

Pauses for a second.. then smirks and continues..

Anuj : " accha anu.. ab humne 3 baar hug karliya toh ye normal hogaya.. ab maine tumhe 3 baar kiss kiya toh ye bhi normal hogaya na.. ab main jab bhi mann kare tumhe kiss kar sakta hu na.."

Anu just blushes.. serving Anuj more of his favorite color, turning redder than ever as she makes a mental note to use red lipstick whenever with Anuj...

And lightly hitting his chest, says.. "bhapp.".
and their bhapp game continues.. them laughing like happy children.. with no care in their sweet little world..

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Wrote this in the middle of my exams.. the last one is still remaining.. but couldn't wait for 5 more days to post it..

It's a bit cheesy and I myself am surprised I could write cheesy stuff.. but Ig it's just Maan magic.. had thought of something else but this came out in the flow while imagining maan..

please do give it a read and leave some expert feedback...

And let me know if I should write something again sometime?

Thank you❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oh this is really sweet!

so it takes three times to normalise something !?

Noted 😉🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miniwatch

Oh this is really sweet!

so it takes three times to normalise something !?

Noted 😉🤣


Thank youu❤❤

Well Idk about normal people but maan hugged thrice and Idk if it's even normalised yet.. they took so long to normalise holding hands too🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This one is sooo beautiful ❤️❤️❤️… loved all the conversation between them and the new way to normalize everything 😉🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So sweeet as always anuj🥰🥰😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya212002

This one is sooo beautiful ❤️❤️❤️… loved all the conversation between them and the new way to normalize everything 😉🤣


Thank you❤❤

So glad you liked ittt!!!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyotikaur

So sweeet as always anuj🥰🥰😍


Thankss ❤

Yeah.. Anuj is THE BEST

Only complaint...he isn't real🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely read dear!! ❤️ Good luck with your exams🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was sweet, liked the details on the dialogues and the continuations of the mushiness.😳

For first time writing, this was really nice. Maybe some additional to their apartment settings would help the reader visualize but not necessary. 👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Lovely read dear!! ❤️ Good luck with your exams🤗


Thank youu!! ❤❤

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