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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

This was serenely beautiful os

Their thoughts, their comfort around each other especially their growth as two beings on this path.

After battling with emotions all this while this is their normal where they are trying to adjust being normal after being beaten up by fate. Now I don't think hav any energy left to fight anythingelse they are adjust to this where there is no problem which kinda seem weird to them .

Aru still wants her to lead a normal life ,open up .she wants the same for him. Unknown to each other they are the support and want of each other.

Ab atebaar ko dil chahta hai

Dekhe thay jo gehre badal

Ab barsana chahte hai

Qaid thay jo ehsaas

Ab azaad hona chahte hai

Dil ab taskeen chahta hai


oh wow poetry to complement the story?! i am honored 😭

thank you so much for this very kind comment! yes..a point comes in life where all energies are utilized for gaining stability in our own lives and arylie in this story are doing just that. focusing on just their day to day life..getting it stable in hopes that a tomorrow will come where they can be completely happy and without any worries.


Originally posted by: Sheldon-Cooperr

This is beyond beautiful. This is how you show progress of a relationship. This is exactly how we want this relationship to grow. The confort, those hidden wishes, those somedays.Really loved each and every word of this os.

Please write more, we really need all amazing writers like you to create something thoughtful. Real writers have other issues as C's and T's to sort.


thank you so much!! uff..what I wouldn't give to have these two progress like this but alas, ITV. sigh..it's okay. fanfictions exist for a reason i.e. reject all stupid canon and give these characters a story they properly deserve!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

I don’t know how I missed this one. This was so good. Thank you for writing it. I loved your approach.

Edited by nehaahmad - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

You can picture the two in your mind of how far the two have come, each one can read the tail tells of what the other person is thinking and also are comfortable with each other to be open and say what is on there minds without feeling uncomfortable.

The flow of the story is outstanding because you do not go of the mark just let the story move forward.

The ability to write such a brilliant story is incredible so please take a bow and I take my 🎩 off to you

Thank You for writing in English

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Uffff my heart.

It's so beautiful 🤩❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

Wonderful, and most importantly soulful :) ❤️

It is amazing when we get a peep into the inner musings of our beloved characters. And I loved reading this bit. We are not given this pleasure by writers of the show, are we? So it's a pleasure to read and get an insight of our favourite characters, albeit with a personal touch. Thanks for this ♥️

Especially the last bit, where Imlie says the day he turns to look back at her, maybe they could create their own normal.

Loved it ✨❤️

Edited by missFiesty_69 - 3 years ago

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