Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-
This was serenely beautiful os
Their thoughts, their comfort around each other especially their growth as two beings on this path.
After battling with emotions all this while this is their normal where they are trying to adjust being normal after being beaten up by fate. Now I don't think hav any energy left to fight anythingelse they are adjust to this where there is no problem which kinda seem weird to them .
Aru still wants her to lead a normal life ,open up .she wants the same for him. Unknown to each other they are the support and want of each other.
Ab atebaar ko dil chahta hai
Dekhe thay jo gehre badal
Ab barsana chahte hai
Qaid thay jo ehsaas
Ab azaad hona chahte hai
Dil ab taskeen chahta hai
oh wow poetry to complement the story?! i am honored 😭
thank you so much for this very kind comment! yes..a point comes in life where all energies are utilized for gaining stability in our own lives and arylie in this story are doing just that. focusing on just their day to day life..getting it stable in hopes that a tomorrow will come where they can be completely happy and without any worries.
Originally posted by: Sheldon-Cooperr
This is beyond beautiful. This is how you show progress of a relationship. This is exactly how we want this relationship to grow. The confort, those hidden wishes, those somedays.Really loved each and every word of this os.
Please write more, we really need all amazing writers like you to create something thoughtful. Real writers have other issues as C's and T's to sort.
thank you so much!! uff..what I wouldn't give to have these two progress like this but alas, ITV. sigh..it's okay. fanfictions exist for a reason i.e. reject all stupid canon and give these characters a story they properly deserve!