normal. || AryLie OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

This is just hauntingly beautiful ! I don't have any other words to describe how incredible this piece of work was and how much it tugged at my heartstrings ❤️ How can something be absolutely heart wrenching and heartwarming at the same time, I have no idea but you made it possible. The way you fleshed out the characters, graphed their growth while retaining their original essence and core traits- ouff, just mind blowing man. And honestly, without that Author's note, I would have never even imagined or believed that you didn't write for a long time because this is even better than what seasoned writers could up with. I have been stalking this forum and grabbing each chance to read any piece I could about Arylie to satisfy my cravings for this new duo but you are the first one that made me compelled to write down how I felt because of your sheer brilliance. Can't possibly be more in love with how you have portrayed their future- it's nothing short of genius to show how broken they are, but together as well. They are healing with each new day and look forward to more days with hope. Seriously, thank you for gifting us with this OS and if possible, turn it into a FF or write more shots, just anything at all ! Please. Till then, this will remain as my favorite piece of fiction on IF. Will re-read again, and again.

Lots of Appreciation

Lisa

oh wow...oh WOW..OH WOW THE WAY THIS MADE MY ENTIRE WEEK 😭😭

There's no bigger reward for the writer than to get comments that are not just appreciative but are an expression of the reader's feelings and reactions towards the piece of the writing. Which is what this comment is! I have read it over and over again and I know I'll keep coming back to it multiple times through the day because I had not expected to be welcomed by this much kindness after being away from the writing space for so long. So..really..thank you!! You have no idea what your comment means to me!

I hope to write more for them..maybe in this universe or maybe a whole new story for them. Hope to see you then again <3

Originally posted by: Krissy_07

This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, I was captivated throughout the OS. I loved Aryan, Imlie and their normal.

Do keep writing more!

That means so much! thank you!! <3

Originally posted by: Casper13

Speechless!! Your words left me with feeling of wanting more of your readings. You have written incredibly. It didn't feel that you are writing after a long time. It was one of the best OS of Arylie! Something different yet beautiful.

Thank you thank you thank you! I hope to write some more for these two as well. Appreciate the feedback! <3

Originally posted by: Priti1610

Hats off to your writing dear... It was long but when you start i was like i am there watching them as if i am leaving with this two peolple only each n every word was so so beautiful and there relationship had grown so good n they knew that what are they upto but being normal as what society will say or whatever the reason may be i loved it.. I appreciate your hardowrk hear plse don't stop writing here only loved to see more os like this plse do pen down again it will be pleasure to read your fanfiction... Thank you for this wonderful os 👏👏

thank you so much for this very kind feedback. yeah..it was a bit long, eh? I think I wrote around 4k+ words which is..a lot! but like I said..these characters took me by the hand and I just followed them wherever they led me. I am just glad it has resonated with all those who read it <3

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

When will our favourite couple land into this kind of normalcy.

Loved it.

hahaha..if not in the show then definitely in our writings they will!
Thank you <3

Originally posted by: Anukrissh

This is so beautiful. I love the open ending too.

Thank you!

Originally posted by: egle

This is so so so good!!! My heart ached for them. Everything was so beautifully constructed. Their friendship, their fears, their vulnerabilities. And despite the undercurrent of longing, I felt excited for the possibilities of a happy future for them.

Maybe someday in the future, he would turn around to look at her.

And maybe that day she would tell him not to leave.

Now that you've blown us away, I trust there is more coming?

Since AryLie for me are more about the journey than the destination..it felt natural for me to to have them come in my head like this when they are midway through their journey. Hopefully I'll get to write them again..maybe not in this setting but a happier (or sadder one cuz let's be real I can't do happy very well xD) one. Hopefully I'll see you there when I do! Thank you so much for your kind words <3

Originally posted by: hurrom

Wow......Amazing..... 😊

Thank you :D

Originally posted by: nikipuki

Wonderful OS, beautifully written. The angst in the story was so satisfying, you hit all the right notes and ended with hope.....maybe just maybe they will be together one day! 👏👏👏

Thank you so much for your kind words. And yesss...nothing gets me moving like angst does so I am glad it moved you too!

Originally posted by: chotoranii

SM this is gorgeous oh my gosh, so beautiful and it cuts right through the core of both of their characters. I hope you will write more of them!

Also "Pick a struggle Mr. ABP" I cackled. Truly though, TRULY pick a struggle sir.

Thank you soooooo much! Hahahah...what would ASR even be if not struggling when it comes to Imlie? xD

Originally posted by: nmurali

So beautiful, I hope you write a second part to this where they overcome their fears to come together 😳

Thank you! I dont think i'll write a continuation of this..it is a one-shot for a reason. But I hope to write more about these two in some other setting :D

Originally posted by: SundariP

Ouch... The joint vehicle part 💘

Imlie - shopping - normal..... silliest combination.... Try something in the lines of busting a drug racket or BS (kidnap) rescue mission, etc

Calling his bs out.... I like it imlie.... Improvising.. I love it ❤️

woops.... Why did this hurt so much? The words or the matter of fact tone 😭😭

Aww... I love the house-help wala talk... So sensitive and imlie being friends with them... Well not surprising just totally endearing ❤️

Ooo....llaaaaa, I'd be thrown off balance by that get married... Not ASR though 😂😂😂

Very cute indeed.

Ooohhh.... Their conversation has my heart!!!

My god.... It was so so them and all that they make us feel.... All those possibilities about their own normal.... The worldly normal doesn't apply to them because what they share can't be bound in words, can only be felt.

PS: another scar lover are ya 😂😂😂

Thank you so much for this live-reaction type of comment! they are always so enjoyable to read! And yes..they are all about the emotions that they feel but don't want to name. Truly my favorite kind.

Also, who doesn't love that sexy scar? ;)

This was such a beautiful crafted and soothing read!!!

I can only wish to see this sequence on screen... It will be fire for sure!!!

Originally posted by: chat_3

Damn the gentleness and anguish in this story hit hard. This was wonderful. 👏

Thank you so much! <3

Originally posted by: mltr16

Gurrrrl!! Where you been!!?? Your story took my breath away. It is long but what a long meandering path with gentle curves along the way that I absolutely wanted to keep walking on, hoping it would not end!! I hope you plan on continuing this writing, my knees are week reading into their gentle, teasing familiarity with each other, until Narmada's get married to her son, I totally was like, they are already married, the author is doing a good job concealing it Thats the sukoon in their conversations!

I love your characterization of both of them. She has matured so much, reflected and pondered over her failed relationship with Aditya. Absolutely loved this mature Imlie.

Aryan toh in any way, shape or form has my heart. But this Aryan who is comfortable being in his own skin around her is adorable. That final physical connection - forehead to forehead, fingers interlaced - my breath caught - how sweet was that.

You are so very humble....but know this, you are outstanding!!

"until Narmada's get married to her son, I totally was like, they are already married, the author is doing a good job concealing it "

I kid you not by the middle I had thought I would put a surprise twist reveal that oh, they are already married! but that just didn't seem natural. I was like, "why bound them by normal relationship like this when what they share is so special and unique just to them?"

An Imlie that has actually introspected on her toxic relationship she shared with not just AKT but the entire Tripathi parivaar and her overcoming it all is my DREAM Imlie. At this point it's impossible to get that in the show so I vented it all out here. I guess the whole crux of the tale is for me to get Imlie to get to terms with the fact that what she has gone through was not okay but that doesn't not mean there's no way forward. Specially when she has the Rathores in her life. Hence the ordinary-ness of the scenario but not the emotions?

Thank you so much for your kind words and generous feedback! it means a lot! <3

Originally posted by: MuUzz

This was such a beautiful crafted and soothing read!!!

I can only wish to see this sequence on screen... It will be fire for sure!!!

CVs have alll my permission to adapt this story for the screen 😂 thank you so much! <3

This was serenely beautiful os

Their thoughts, their comfort around each other especially their growth as two beings on this path.

After battling with emotions all this while this is their normal where they are trying to adjust being normal after being beaten up by fate. Now I don't think hav any energy left to fight anythingelse they are adjust to this where there is no problem which kinda seem weird to them .

Aru still wants her to lead a normal life ,open up .she wants the same for him. Unknown to each other they are the support and want of each other.

Ab atebaar ko dil chahta hai

Dekhe thay jo gehre badal

Ab barsana chahte hai

Qaid thay jo ehsaas

Ab azaad hona chahte hai

Dil ab taskeen chahta hai

This is beyond beautiful. This is how you show progress of a relationship. This is exactly how we want this relationship to grow. The confort, those hidden wishes, those somedays.Really loved each and every word of this os.

Please write more, we really need all amazing writers like you to create something thoughtful. Real writers have other issues as C's and T's to sort.