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Posted: 3 years ago
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When will our favourite couple land into this kind of normalcy.

Loved it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

This is so beautiful. I love the open ending too.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so so so good!!! My heart ached for them. Everything was so beautifully constructed. Their friendship, their fears, their vulnerabilities. And despite the undercurrent of longing, I felt excited for the possibilities of a happy future for them.


Maybe someday in the future, he would turn around to look at her.


And maybe that day she would tell him not to leave.


❤️


Now that you've blown us away, I trust there is more coming?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wonderful OS, beautifully written. The angst in the story was so satisfying, you hit all the right notes and ended with hope.....maybe just maybe they will be together one day! 👏👏👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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SM this is gorgeous oh my gosh, so beautiful and it cuts right through the core of both of their characters. I hope you will write more of them!


Also "Pick a struggle Mr. ABP" I cackled. Truly though, TRULY pick a struggle sir.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ouch... The joint vehicle part 💘


Imlie - shopping - normal..... 🤪 silliest combination.... Try something in the lines of busting a drug racket or BS (kidnap) rescue mission, etc 🤣


Calling his bs out.... I like it imlie.... Improvising.. I love it ❤️


“Well then my lifestyle is me taking responsibility of my life. If I don’t do the things that I do, normal or not, I will go crazy. And you know that!”


woops.... Why did this hurt so much? The words or the matter of fact tone 😭😭


Aww... I love the house-help wala talk... So sensitive and imlie being friends with them... Well not surprising just totally endearing ❤️


Ooo....llaaaaa, I'd be thrown off balance by that get married... Not ASR though 😂😂😂

Very cute indeed.



Ooohhh.... Their conversation has my heart!!!


My god.... It was so so them and all that they make us feel.... All those possibilities about their own normal.... The worldly normal doesn't apply to them because what they share can't be bound in words, can only be felt.




PS: another scar lover are ya 😂😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

So beautiful, I hope you write a second part to this where they overcome their fears to come together 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnnyTion

Painfully Beautiful!! I just don't have words...😭😭😭😭..Keep doing such good works.


Thank you so much! Yes, I hope to write some more for them! <3



Originally posted by: captain_waffle

Poor babies don't deserve this misery 🥺

Do keep writing more ❤️


Hahaha..the path of happily ever after never ran easy. They are on their way to it. They will reach there soon.
Thank you for the comment! <3


Originally posted by: SundariP

just read first few lines.... fueled my imagination smiley36

i don't what i'll do if my normal isn't your normal smiley37

the note.... yeah that will one unforgettable memory in my arylie addiction journey for years to come smiley22



Ummm..I don't get the joke but I'm glad you had fun? 😆


Originally posted by: Madhu_Sharma123

This was soooo Amazing. U wrote wonderful😘😘.

Plz do continue writings so that I also get to read some awful stories😍.

Thank you and All the best.


Thank you so much! Yes, I hope to write something new for them!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Damn the gentleness and anguish in this story hit hard. This was wonderful. 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Gurrrrl!! Where you been!!?? Your story took my breath away. It is long but what a long meandering path with gentle curves along the way that I absolutely wanted to keep walking on, hoping it would not end!! I hope you plan on continuing this writing, my knees are week reading into their gentle, teasing familiarity with each other, until Narmada's get married to her son, I totally was like, they are already married, the author is doing a good job concealing it 😃 Thats the sukoon in their conversations!


I love your characterization of both of them. She has matured so much, reflected and pondered over her failed relationship with Aditya. Absolutely loved this mature Imlie.

Aryan toh in any way, shape or form has my heart. But this Aryan who is comfortable being in his own skin around her is adorable. That final physical connection - forehead to forehead, fingers interlaced - my breath caught - how sweet was that.

You are so very humble....but know this, you are outstanding!! 👏👏👏

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